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cari4003
13th May 2007, 04:03 AM
This is the second part of Naive Ambitions. I tried to write this as an individual story, filling in as much of the background information as possible from the first one. If you want to find out more background information please read the first story Naive Ambitions.
As always if you read this story, comments are appreciated and if you really
like it feel free to rate. Enjoy!

Chapter 1

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cari4003
13th May 2007, 04:05 AM
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Stormy_SC
13th May 2007, 08:14 AM
Hmm, I wonder if Kaitlyn's pregnant. And I also wonder if Gerome will come back somehow. Great update!!!

cari4003
13th May 2007, 03:20 PM
Stormy you changed your avatar. I like it.

Stormy_SC
13th May 2007, 05:08 PM
Thank you!

cari4003
14th May 2007, 01:52 AM
I'm going to update tonight because I'm not sure if I'll have time tomorrow.
Thanks for the comment.

Chapter 2

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Stormy_SC
14th May 2007, 02:21 AM
I knew she was pregnant! At least she has everything she needs to raise the baby. Oh yeah, is she going to have more than one baby? Because in the second to the last picture, you said, "She would raise her babies in a new home." Just wondering. Great update!

cari4003
14th May 2007, 01:13 PM
Not telling....screwed that up though didn't I. :D

Stormy_SC
14th May 2007, 04:21 PM
Lol it's ok.

romyhorse
14th May 2007, 08:08 PM
I liked your first story, this looks like it's going to be good too. :)

cari4003
15th May 2007, 01:15 PM
Thanks romyhorse. Hope to update sometime today.

cari4003
16th May 2007, 01:46 PM
Sorry this update took a little longer than planned. Enjoy!

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Stormy_SC
16th May 2007, 04:16 PM
Wow, I hope they find Jayna! Another great update!

cari4003
17th May 2007, 01:21 PM
Thanks for the comments everyone.

Chapter 4

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Stormy_SC
17th May 2007, 04:42 PM
Aww twins! Yay! I have to say you're a very creative writer! Keep it up!

cari4003
17th May 2007, 11:59 PM
Thanks Stormy appreciate it.

cari4003
19th May 2007, 06:34 PM
Chapter 5

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cari4003
27th May 2007, 02:54 PM
Hopefully updates this week. Been painting my home.

Jenna_Cide
28th May 2007, 08:41 AM
This is too good. Love the layout. I can't wait for an update! :D
::subscribes and rates a 5::

Stormy_SC
28th May 2007, 09:12 AM
Whoa the daughter of Gerome and Latasia? *Squels with excitement* I need another update asap! Awesome job!

cari4003
29th May 2007, 01:25 PM
Thanks for the rating and all the comments everyone. I plan on taking pics tonight so hopefully update tomorrow.

Loco
29th May 2007, 03:15 PM
Eeeee, I can't believe I only just noticed this! Yay, twins! Yay, Fantasia! Yay, this story rocks! :D Can't wait for more!

cari4003
29th May 2007, 03:46 PM
:howdy: Thanks Loco!

cari4003
31st May 2007, 03:15 PM
I have the lair created and can begin taking pictures. I've been working on update it's just taking longer than I thought. Lifes' interuptions. Thanks everyone for reading and commenting.

cari4003
1st Jun 2007, 07:00 PM
Here's an update....thanks everyone for being soooo patient.
Chapter 6

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Loco
1st Jun 2007, 08:01 PM
Oooh, love it! Go Fantasia (which is such an awesome name :D)! Great update, can't wait for more!

romyhorse
1st Jun 2007, 08:13 PM
An update! Great, can't wait to see how it turns out.

Stormy_SC
1st Jun 2007, 08:36 PM
Really, really nice update! I feel so bad for Fantasia.

cari4003
5th Jun 2007, 07:09 PM
Since both chapters are shorter..I doubled my update, chapters 7 and 8.
Oooooo poetic. Thanks for reading everyone.....don't forget to leave me a comment. I enjoy reading everyones' thoughts.



Chapter 7

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Chapter 8

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Loco
5th Jun 2007, 09:26 PM
Awww! That last line made me smile. It's all very tense... great update, it's great how things are progressing! :D

Stormy_SC
5th Jun 2007, 10:09 PM
Aww the two giggle worms! *Cries* I got a giggle worm inside of me, too. Great update!

Randomness_Meh
5th Jun 2007, 10:11 PM
Uber Cool Will Be Reading This, Your A Goos Writer ;)

Sora x

cari4003
5th Jun 2007, 10:12 PM
Thanks stormy and loco and randomness. I appreciate you all reading, we're almost done with this story. Update probably tomorrow.

romyhorse
6th Jun 2007, 12:28 AM
Looking forward to seeing how it all turns out. Great update :)

cari4003
6th Jun 2007, 02:53 AM
Thanks Romy!

cari4003
6th Jun 2007, 08:48 PM
Ok here's another update. Enjoy!

Chapter 9

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Stormy_SC
6th Jun 2007, 09:25 PM
*Gasp* She's going to take her babies from her?! Why? Did I miss something?! That's terrible! Omg update asap please!

Loco
7th Jun 2007, 12:25 PM
Oooh, scary... but it sounds like their plan's going to work. And yay, ickleuns! :D Update soon, that was awesome!

romyhorse
7th Jun 2007, 12:27 PM
Looking forward to see how it's all going to turn out :)

cari4003
7th Jun 2007, 07:51 PM
Chapter 10

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cari4003
7th Jun 2007, 07:54 PM
Chapter 11

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Loco
7th Jun 2007, 08:14 PM
EEEEE! YAY! But... Fantasia... :( Ah, well, Latasia's gone! ... I hope... Absolutely wonderful update! :D

cari4003
7th Jun 2007, 08:30 PM
Thanks Loco. Glad you liked it. A few twist and turns left, then it's over. Not sure if I'll add another book or not.

cari4003
11th Jun 2007, 01:10 PM
One more update and it's ended. Thanks everyone for reading.


Chapter 12

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Chapter 13

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Loco
11th Jun 2007, 04:05 PM
EEEEE! HE'S BACK! That actually made me grin so much. YAY! It's all okay again! :D Fantastic updates! :D

Stormy_SC
11th Jun 2007, 04:24 PM
Yay he's alive! *Runs around the room screaming "he's alive!"*

AWESOME updates!! I really enjoyed this story!

cari4003
11th Jun 2007, 05:07 PM
Thanks. I have two more chapters, probably be up tomorrow. I just couldn't leave Gerome dead. Not with the twins. :thumb:

cari4003
12th Jun 2007, 01:36 PM
Chapter 14

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Epilog

Thanks to all the creators who make the fabulous things for all of us to use.
Thank you to all the readers. This was fun and I learned so much.


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JoeSims
12th Jun 2007, 03:14 PM
I like your story. I have been reading for sometime. This story did sound interesting by the title, but this story is beyond interesting.

cari4003
12th Jun 2007, 04:12 PM
Thanks, it's always good to hear from people who are reading.

Loco
12th Jun 2007, 04:36 PM
YAY! Awww, they're all so cute! Love the names, that's so clever. ;) And eeee, Fantasia! Yay! Aww, it's such a shame that that's the end... but it was worth every minute of it. :D :D Thank you so much for sharing this lovely story with us!

cari4003
12th Jun 2007, 04:44 PM
You are more than welcome, thanks for reading.

Stormy_SC
12th Jun 2007, 05:27 PM
:popcorn:.....What? It's over? :blink:...It can't be over! I was enjoying this so much! Oh well. Awesome, awesome, awesome job, cari!!! :clap:

cari4003
12th Jun 2007, 05:57 PM
Thanks Stormy....waiting for your sequel.

romyhorse
12th Jun 2007, 08:43 PM
Ooh, I just got caught up! I was so happy when Gerome appeared :) Great story, I loved the ghost at the wedding.

cari4003
12th Jun 2007, 08:48 PM
Thanks Romy!