Feedback on some eyes?

[hayden-sim]

Okay well, I got a tutorial from someone whom replied to my last forum, and I think the eyes turned out well. WAY better than the last eyes.

They're (supposed to be) dark teal, and obvious lighter teal/white/light blue detail..

What do you guys think?

:new: New screenshots :D
:!: If anyone perhaps thinks it's good enough to submit, I'll probably add recolors :lol: I forgot about recolors, hehe

[ShineShine]

Hey hayden-sim!
I would appreciate if you would've post this in your old feedbackforum. It's the same content - eyes - same style and just the improvement of the first one.
They're quiet maxis-ly, is this what you're going for?
Tips:
- bigger pictures
- shadows
- hmm smaller irises?

Well more later...

[hayden-sim]

Hey hayden-sim!
I would appreciate if you would've post this in your old feedbackforum. It's the same content - eyes - same style and just the improvement of the first one.
They're quiet maxis-ly, is this what you're going for?
Tips:
- bigger pictures
- shadows
- hmm smaller irises?

Well more later...

Yeah, sorry for that, I wasn't planning on creating anymore eyes 'cause I didn't have such a great image editing software, but I've gotten one now..

Well, truth be told, it's not really allll that much of an improvement... it's actually quite different from the old one.. the old one was lightning bolt ones, haha. As for the maxis-ly eye-type-ish, I sorta was just going with the flow. I've been really, really obsessed with teal lately and I tried it out.
I failed at getting bigger pictures :/
I tried shadows, it kinda impared my creativity, I haven't an idea how XD
I, also, thought they were a bit big, as for that, I'll try and improve it

[ShineShine]

Great for getting a good image editing software! You will surely increase your image editing skills.
Sorry, I forgot about the lightning.
For the pictures... how do you make them? (Ingame-camera or with print-button?) Maybe I can help you with the size then.
Well ... then we wait with the shadows. But it would've been nice to see how they had look with shadows. It's surely just the way you made it, for example wrong places, too much, too dark shadow, don't know, I always think that shadows make eyes BETTER. :)
But I'm very happy about your decision to make the iris smaller. I'm pretty sure the eye will look more clear, realistic and nice. :)
And that clearness is especially important for such bright colors. It will underline them.

[hayden-sim]

Great for getting a good image editing software! You will surely increase your image editing skills.
Sorry, I forgot about the lightning.
For the pictures... how do you make them? (Ingame-camera or with print-button?) Maybe I can help you with the size then.
Well ... then we wait with the shadows. But it would've been nice to see how they had look with shadows. It's surely just the way you made it, for example wrong places, too much, too dark shadow, don't know, I always think that shadows make eyes BETTER. :)
But I'm very happy about your decision to make the iris smaller. I'm pretty sure the eye will look more clear, realistic and nice. :)
And that clearness is especially important for such bright colors. It will underline them.

Yep, hopefully it'll all get better :D
No problem, haha
In-game camera :] I got as close as I could but.. seems as if close enough wasn't to close XD
Yes yes, I'm going to completely re-do the eyes and add more shadow, as you suggested :)
Also, with re-doing the eyes, I'm going to try and get the irises smaller.
Yep. ^_^