Amelia - A Doll Story

[Lunararc]

Hey guys,
today I'm posting my new sims I'm gonna upload them soon , this fancy story is about a woman called Margaret in vintage era her daughter passed away by epidemic disease " don't know which disease :) " so she created a doll not like her daughter and she named it Amelia " the name of her daughter " the woman believed that the doll is Amelia she prayed and cried hopping to get her back to life. one day after midnight a fairy saw her sleeping beside the doll,the fairy brought Amelia's spirit back but not in her body in the doll's body....to be continued. " sorry for all this long story but i wanna you to know the relation between them "

Here u are the two sims:Amilia the doll and her mother Margaret,I posted the doll before HERE (http://www.modthesims.info/showthread.php?t=451056) but after modifying i changed the whole story into this , Amelia is a child and Margret is an adult,

*I made only the glasses in Margaret
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/3/5/4/7/9/9/4/MTS_Lunararc-1245892-1.jpg

http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/3/5/4/7/9/9/4/MTS_Lunararc-1245893-2.jpg

* In Amelia , i made the contacts , blush , brows , lip stick , dress

http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/3/5/4/7/9/9/4/MTS_Lunararc-1245894-3.jpg

http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/3/5/4/7/9/9/4/MTS_Lunararc-1245897-6.jpg

http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/3/5/4/7/9/9/4/MTS_Lunararc-1245899-8.jpg

Thx guys,I really need your opinion about them. Enjoy :up:

[Volvenom]

I'm absolutely astonished. Great work! I was just wondering about her mouth. I guess you wanted her to look a bit grumpy? I'm not too sure about the color either. I don't know if anyone else can see it.

[Jasumi]

Very good work! Especially Margret...

[Redhead Creations]

Wow, the mother is fantastic! She looks like she'd make an excellent character! (Almost a little Dame Maggie Smith in her).

[Arisuka]

What a wonderful idea this is, very creative! I looove this!

Margaret looks brilliant, I'd only make the eye bags a bit more transparent, and then she'd be perfect. :)

Amelia's nose, eyes and cheekbones look really good, they don't need any more work, except maybe bring the eyes a bit more closer together. For the mouth, take a look at this picture:
http://www.modyourpanties.com/hosting/31493_1111031206512.jpg
That type of shape is a bit tricky to achieve with a child sim in particular, but it should be possible!

[Esmeralda]

I like this idea, I love the story and you've done all three sims very well! I especially like the facial sculpting on the mother, she looks very realistic and like she has a lot of character.

[monca533]

Hi!
First of all, I have to say that I love this project and to apologise for not have given some opinion before.
Margaret is FANTASTIC! :bunny:
I agree with Arisuka about the eye bags: I think it is the only thing you have to improve on her.
I can be wrong, but I think if you rotate up the outer corner of doll eyes a little bit (like the doll eyes of the picture that Arisuka posted), the expression of the face will look like more dolly, if it makes sense.

[Lunararc]

Hi!
First of all, I have to say that I love this project and to apologise for not have given some opinion before.
Margaret is FANTASTIC! :bunny:
I agree with Arisuka about the eye bags: I think it is the only thing you have to improve on her.
I can be wrong, but I think if you rotate up the outer corner of doll eyes a little bit (like the doll eyes of the picture that Arisuka posted), the expression of the face will look like more dolly, if it makes sense.

Thx , yeah it make sence u are right i fixed the eye bags like Arisuka told me of Margret and i will rotate the eyes of Amilia u are right they will look great :)

[Myshia]

Margaret is fantastic! Very aristocratic women.. love the high cheekbones ;)

[Lunararc]

What a wonderful idea this is, very creative! I looove this!

Margaret looks brilliant, I'd only make the eye bags a bit more transparent, and then she'd be perfect. :)

Amelia's nose, eyes and cheekbones look really good, they don't need any more work, except maybe bring the eyes a bit more closer together. For the mouth, take a look at this picture:
http://www.modyourpanties.com/hosting/31493_1111031206512.jpg
That type of shape is a bit tricky to achieve with a child sim in particular, but it should be possible!

Really thx Arisuka for your doll pic :) here they are the doll new pic with rotating , closing them together and Margaret with trans eye bags

http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/3/5/4/7/9/9/4/MTS_Lunararc-1247034-1.jpg
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/3/5/4/7/9/9/4/MTS_Lunararc-1247035-2.jpg

[Elexis]

I'm not a Sim making expert (it's not my "specialty"), but I can give you some advices :)

- The girl's lip corners can be a tad higher to make more relaxed mouth expression.
- The lower lip needs to be wider.
- The upper lip less wide.
- Also her eyes could be a bit closer to each other.

I can't say anything about the lady, because she looks right to me as she is now :)
Good job ;)

[Arisuka]

Elexis has great advice. :) In addition to those, I'd make the upper lip a lot bigger!

[FREEDOM_55]

-Margret is amazing. I don't see anything to change
- I haven't made a kid in a while so I have check some things before I suggest anything to you.I'll get back to you ;)
-The only thing i would change so far is the l; little girl's hi lights bad tips. I know you were going tfor the shiny look but just look white. Try changing to a dark grey or just go plain default black

...and that's it for now. I usually have lots to say .So that saying something:p great job :up: awesome creativity & innovation with the project overall