View Full Version : Vania " The Fairy " from Amilia the doll's story
7th Nov 2011, 6:53 AM
[/header1]Hey guysThis the fairy that [/header1]I told u about before that get the spirit of Amilia back into the doll's body,her name is Vania comes from the fairy's land she decided to help Margret after her daughter died " only the dress and rhe wand by me " what do u think about Vania ?
And I fixed the dress by the help of monca533 :)
Enjoy and don't forget to tell me your opinion guys about this fairy :D
7th Nov 2011, 10:23 AM
I like the dress and wand. The dress has weird line running across the lower part of the corset that needs to be removed though.
7th Nov 2011, 11:43 AM
She looks very nice :)
However, as the face sculpt is most important, I will comment on it only (for now) :)
- The lip curve could be a bit straighter.
- Eyes smaller (unless you want them to look bigger).
I love her cheekbones and jaw, so I would suggest no changes there :)
7th Nov 2011, 2:36 PM
She is very pretty! But you should upload the dress by itself too!!
7th Nov 2011, 4:47 PM
i'd make her mouth smaller and less curved.
7th Nov 2011, 11:54 PM
I don't think you have to decrease the mouth size; I agree with Jedi about the curve of the lips: I think that this detail will make the difference. I know you want a different colour for her lips, but I think you could try another lipstick: one which makes the center of upper lip will less shine maybe?
About the dress: I'm happy you managed fix the lines on the shoulders. I think you'll can fix easily the line wich Moryrie was mentioned. If you'll need any help, tell me, please, I'll be glad to help you (if I know). :luff:
10th Nov 2011, 6:15 PM
-Its flatters her facial sculpt more when her hair up imo
-If the lipstick your using I think is newsea's , so you can't use it on mts. Subaxi's lipsticks are very similar though so you could try that
-her eyes are beautiful , what eyebags are you using?however, her pupils are too big for her eyes. try using smaller contacts. I would recommend using rose sims's contacts ( they have some pretty wicked fantasy inspired contacts)or lemon leaf's more anime styled contacts.
-I would recommend using daluved1's Glamour brows instead Hp's. They textures don't blend well with her face:/
- give her more chin height, make her chin come down more, slightly more pointy
-her nose is a little to shrunken right now. The problem is if you are going to have a wide bridge the base of the nose has to match. for now you could increase her nose tip slightly
- raise her mouth height
-you could just upload the dress with the upload including accessories.They all look fabulous!
Truly impressive work:)
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