Vania " The Fairy " from Amilia the doll's story

[Lunararc]

[/header1]Hey guysThis the fairy that [/header1]I told u about before that get the spirit of Amilia back into the doll's body,her name is Vania comes from the fairy's land she decided to help Margret after her daughter died " only the dress and rhe wand by me " what do u think about Vania ?

http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/3/5/4/7/9/9/4/MTS_Lunararc-1247037-3.jpg
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/3/5/4/7/9/9/4/MTS_Lunararc-1247036-4.jpg
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/3/5/4/7/9/9/4/MTS_Lunararc-1247041-5.jpg

And I fixed the dress by the help of monca533 :)

http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/3/5/4/7/9/9/4/MTS_Lunararc-1247038-3.jpg
http://thumbs2.modthesims2.com/img/3/5/4/7/9/9/4/MTS_Lunararc-1247039-4.jpg

Enjoy and don't forget to tell me your opinion guys about this fairy :D

[moryrie]

I like the dress and wand. The dress has weird line running across the lower part of the corset that needs to be removed though.

[Elexis]

She looks very nice :)

However, as the face sculpt is most important, I will comment on it only (for now) :)
- The lip curve could be a bit straighter.
- Eyes smaller (unless you want them to look bigger).

I love her cheekbones and jaw, so I would suggest no changes there :)

[Dasila]

She is very pretty! But you should upload the dress by itself too!!

[jedi_waffle]

i'd make her mouth smaller and less curved.

[monca533]

Hi!
I don't think you have to decrease the mouth size; I agree with Jedi about the curve of the lips: I think that this detail will make the difference. I know you want a different colour for her lips, but I think you could try another lipstick: one which makes the center of upper lip will less shine maybe?

About the dress: I'm happy you managed fix the lines on the shoulders. I think you'll can fix easily the line wich Moryrie was mentioned. If you'll need any help, tell me, please, I'll be glad to help you (if I know). :luff:

[FREEDOM_55]

Hey Lunar:)
Suggestions:
-Its flatters her facial sculpt more when her hair up imo
-If the lipstick your using I think is newsea's , so you can't use it on mts. Subaxi's lipsticks are very similar though so you could try that
-her eyes are beautiful , what eyebags are you using?however, her pupils are too big for her eyes. try using smaller contacts. I would recommend using rose sims's contacts ( they have some pretty wicked fantasy inspired contacts)or lemon leaf's more anime styled contacts.
-I would recommend using daluved1's Glamour brows instead Hp's. They textures don't blend well with her face:/
- give her more chin height, make her chin come down more, slightly more pointy
-her nose is a little to shrunken right now. The problem is if you are going to have a wide bridge the base of the nose has to match. for now you could increase her nose tip slightly
- raise her mouth height

-you could just upload the dress with the upload including accessories.They all look fabulous!

Truly impressive work:)