Is she unique enough?

[donnabbailey]

I am working on a celebrity Sim but I had to step away for a few days because looking at him is making me cross-eyed, lol. Here is a female Sim I've been working on and I just wondered if anyone thinks she is pretty/unique enough to try to submit for upload. thx

http://i832.photobucket.com/albums/zz243/angeleyes91011/Screenshot-45.jpg http://i832.photobucket.com/albums/zz243/angeleyes91011/Screenshot-13-1.jpg

[MzzUnvrz]

She could use some improvement. To me, her eyes look extremely blank and is her shortcoming. I think you should play around with them, maybe change her eyelids to make the lower one higher. Also, her chin could do with some work. Either make it come further out, or make it narrower.

[ngluvjj]

In love with her nose *IwishIhaveonelikethat* but her eyes shape is nothing new.. you should try shaping it a bit, maybe almond shape, maybe big doe, or sharp eyes~ play around :D

[donnabbailey]

Hello friends, thank you for your comments, I will tweak her! :)

[Redhead Creations]

I agree with ngluvjj, I think she looks like she'd have a kind of 'tough girl' attitude. Her eyes should reflect that. Perhaps making them a bit squintier, or playing around with her brows some more will give her a bit more character.

And regarding MzzUnvrz's comment about the chin, I agree, it could also come down just a tad. It looks a little too short, for me.

[donnabbailey]

I agree with ngluvjj, I think she looks like she'd have a kind of 'tough girl' attitude. Her eyes should reflect that. Perhaps making them a bit squintier, or playing around with her brows some more will give her a bit more character.

And regarding MzzUnvrz's comment about the chin, I agree, it could also come down just a tad. It looks a little too short, for me.

Thanks for commenting, Redhead. Here's the new version. I incorporated all recommendations and made her eyes narrower (squintier), raised and arched her brows, make her chin have more projection, and lowered it just a little bit. I also narrowed her jaw. I also made her mouth a bit narrower and make her skintone just a little darker. Better? Worse?
http://i832.photobucket.com/albums/zz243/angeleyes91011/katecomparison1.jpg
http://i832.photobucket.com/albums/zz243/angeleyes91011/Screenshot-9.jpg
http://i832.photobucket.com/albums/zz243/angeleyes91011/Screenshot-8-1.jpg

[DonSebastian]

The first set of eyes looked natural and gives her an unique look, an intense look. The only change I'd make is the gap between her eyes and the tip of her nose, slightly shorter. The second set of eyes makes her look sad and are too small for her face. First look is of a grown up, second look is of a teenager. The second one doesn't look unique at all.

[whiterider]

I'd lose the bottom eyeliner, too. It makes her eyes look smaller, and obscures the lovely skintone detail.

[Peoinee]

she looks pretty good but honestly she personally scares me her eyes are almost exact replicas of my moms (oh i hate that woman) lol

[ngluvjj]

I like the first skintone better, I don't think u should rotate the eyes that much and lose the eyeliner