Pirate Titanic?! - with open seas, a mermaid and sinking ships!

[dangmal]

I'd love some feedback on this, which is just basically me practising my story telling techniques, and trying some special effects with the barnacle bay set - it really annoyed me that we got pirates in the series of games, but they weren't... piratey enough. This is my attempt to squeeze in everything you'd want from a pirate movie into a tiny little daft youtube video. I hope you like it! - let me know if you like the choice of music, or if theres something you'd have done differently - a happier ending maybe? cheers! x Dan
also, i'm hoping people think i approached the special effects well, i really tried to nail the idea that the ship was on the open seas, that the pirate captain jumped off the end of the boat and not just into a swimming pool and that the mermaid was swimming when really she was totally still and only the camera moved :) x what do you guys think?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p7Zf-DDTFmY

here's some screenies:

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