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ElaineMc
19th May 2010, 04:36 PM
Story summary: Wilhelmina Winstead is struggling to make a life for herself in 1930s New York until one awful week when everything falls apart....

Chapter 1: Mean To Me

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"And here's another five for some coffee and those little cakes with all the icing, too." Billie van Moyer, newly married to the shipping magnate, winked and turned her attention back to her dinner companion, sighing. Poor old Win, she thought. Always on the bottom of the pile. She reached over to pat her friend's hand, pretty sure she already knew why Win was in tears.

"Aw, honey, that man of yours ain't worth it-- why--"

The dark-haired girl cut her off, leaning forward suddenly. "This time it's different... this time-- oh, Billie! I caught him with her, right out on the street, right in front of the automat!"

Billie's voice went up an octave in outrage. "That good-for-nothing! That rat! Oh, Win, honey, I'm so sorry-- except now you're done with him, right? Right?"

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"I-- I wish I wasn't, Billie. I love him so much, how could he do this?" She wiped her eyes with a slightly threadbare handkerchief.

Billie slumped back in her seat. "When you gonna learn not to take any guff from people, anyway? You're on the job all day and half the night for $80 a month because you can't say no, you let your landlady move you up to the third floor AND charge you extra rent, and that man? He wasn't good enough for you."

The waitress returned with the coffee and cakes. Billie just nodded absently. The two women sipped their coffee in silence, while Win crumbled a cake on her plate. Outside, the autumn evening slipped into night.

Finally, Billie couldn't take it anymore. "Tell you what, Winnie-- me and Eddie, you know we're going to Europe, and we won't be back for six, maybe seven months. Why don't you throw over that nowhere job of yours and come on with us!" She brightened up as she continued to speak. "You'll be my guest the whole time-- Eddie'll be glad to have you go along to keep me company-- we'll go shopping, and around to every dance hall they got, and--"

Win began to shake her head. "Billie, you're a dear for inviting me, but I can't-- I just can't. It wouldn't be right. Mr. Harrison counts on me so much, you see."

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"Honey, you're so busy doing right by everyone else, you forget to do right by yourself," Billie sighed. "But if you--" She stopped talking again, recognizing the "no" in Win's eyes. "Well, I'll tell you what. We don't sail for almost a month. You change your mind, you just pack yourself a bag and send telegram out to the Hall, and we'll get you on the boat with us, no matter what! How's that for a deal?"

"It's a good one," Win said, blinking hard to keep from crying any more. "And you're a good friend to me."

"Hey, didn't you and me work for Harrison together for almost four whole years before I met Eddie? Us girls got to stick together and give each other a hand. Lord knows nobody else will."

***

That was true enough, Wilhelmina thought later as she made her way up the stairs to her fifth-floor room in the run-down old boarding house. She tried not to look at her shabby little quarters: the rusty bedstead, the dingy carpet, the suitcases that still held her clothing, almost six long years after she'd moved to the city. A little defiant, she smoothed a single wrinkle from the worn-out comforter.

It was late-- late enough that she was probably going to be awfully tired in the morning, and the dark circles beneath her eyes would be even darker-- but hadn't it been worth it! The expensive, chic little dinner, the rich cakes and coffee, the ride home in a limousine; and best of all, she'd had the sympathy of Billie, her oldest friend in this big, cold city. It almost made up for Tom's betrayal.

Almost.

She jumped at a knock on the door-- who on earth could be here at this time of night?

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It was her landlady-- a narrow-faced, narrow-eyed, perennially disheveled woman. "Miss Winstead? I need next month's rent from you right now, if it won't be too awful much bother...." Her tone suggested she didn't care if it would be a bother.

Even though it took every penny she had on hand-- even though it was three weeks until next month-- Wilhelmina handed the money over without a word of protest.

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And she went to sleep trying her hardest to believe it was true.

***

(BONUS! Soundtrack time. The title for this chapter was taken from the song "Mean To Me." Here's the 1929 version by Ruth Etting (rar file, mp3 format). (http://finalgirl.us/NellSpeed/S3/Mean_To_Me_1929.rar) This song is in public domain, and you can find more work by her at archive.org (http://www.archive.org/search.php?query=etting%20%20%28collection%3A78rpm%20OR%20mediatype%3A78rpm%29%20AND%20-mediatype%3Acollection)!)

(Edited: I goofed! Win wouldn't be making anywhere near $400 a month. I've corrected it to the more accurate $80.)

ElaineMc
21st May 2010, 06:00 AM
Chapter 2: Big City Blues

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Sims 3 has decided to act up, so I'm swapping back to 2, and will probably stay there for the duration. I'll probably swap back and forth between pictures with text and graphic-novel style storytelling, though.

This chapter's theme song is from Annette Hanshaw-- her 1929 cover of "Big City Blues." (http://finalgirl.us/NellSpeed/S3/BigCityBlues1929.rar) (rar file, mp3 format) As with last chapter's song, this one is also in the public domain, as are the background images I've used in this post.

Jeniveve
21st May 2010, 07:34 PM
This is interesting, and I rather like style yu use in the pictures. Plus, it's nice to see not just sims pictures in a good part of the story, and you manage to integrate them in to look authentic. Like that last one of chapter 2.
Nicely done ^_^ I'll be keeping an eye on this :P

ElaineMc
24th May 2010, 06:20 AM
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He figured something out for you without me even having to ask! And THAT'S why I married him, honey-- not just because he's a millionaire, but because he's sharp as a tack and sweet as pie! But he says to me, he knows this old society doll whose got this big old house. It's older than Gilded Hall, but Eddie says not half so swell. He says it's got furniture from before the Civil War! Who'd want a lot of old junk like that? Anyways, she's got this big old library in this big old house, and she wants someone to go through all the books and make a list of them. You can run a typewriter, and didn't you used to work in a library back in Ohio? So of course you'd be perfect to do it. Eddie wrote you a real good recommendation to the lady, and I'll send it along with directions to the house. The lady's called Weir, and that's the name of the house, too-- Weir Hall. You could catch the train out pretty easy. It's just upstate, about eight hours away, in this little rube town called Oriskany.

So if you get tired of that job of yours, you just trot yourself over to Weir Hall, and you'll be set for at least a year, and I'd bet anything that you'll get better pay than where you're at, and did I mention you'd be living in the house? That's room and board right there! A smart doll like you could save just about every penny she made!

Anyways, we'll be going around just about everywhere, but if you need me, just send over to Buckley, the butler at Gilded Hall. He'll get word to us as soon as he can.

Love you, sweetie!

Mary Williamson van Moyer

PS - If you change your mind, let Buckley know, and he'll let us know, and we'll send you a ticket first thing! Bye bye! - Billie van M.

PPS - I'm sending along a little salad-- just a teeny tiny present from your bestest friend in the big bad world! - B.


Five ten-dollar bills fell from the heavily-scented pages of the letter into Win's lap. "And that's what Billie calls 'a little salad'!" she gasped.

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Win looked around the tiny, shabby room. Her battered old suitcases caught her eye-- they held all that she owned: four books, a brush and mirror, and her out-dated clothing. She knelt on the floor and opened the larger of the two suitcases. Her clothes hadn't been high-quality to start with; after years of daily wear, they were patched and threadbare. How long had it been since she'd owned anything new, or pretty, or--

--five minutes later, Billie's gift in hand, she was down the stairs and out the door, heading for a certain little clothing store; and from there, to the train station to find out just when she might be able to get a train to Oriskany, New York....

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(No song this chapter; instead, here's a bit of vintage trivia. Win makes $80 a month as a stenographer (she was a bit underpaid even then!); today, that's about $1200. Also, thanks again to Jeniveve for her kind words!)

ElaineMc
30th May 2010, 07:37 AM
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(Yes, it turned into a graphic novel this chapter....)

dark_jean
30th May 2010, 09:25 AM
I'm officially hooked to your story!!! Extremely Awesome...!!!

HystericalParoxysm
30th May 2010, 09:59 AM
This. Is. Amazing!

Srsly, I'm just flabbergasted at the beauty of your pictures and the interesting story. Best. Story. Evar.

ElaineMc
31st May 2010, 12:40 AM
lewjen, HystericalParoxysm, dark_jean - Thanks for the encouragement and the kind words!

I'm having, maybe, a little too much fun with this-- tracking down images that suit both the time period and the chapter, fitting them together, etc. I never really got the appeal of scrapbooking, but I kind of do now. And, of course, there's the actual building of sets and Sims, finding (or recoloring) just the right item for just the right effect. Thank god for the Radiance mod-- that probably does the most good of all!

Oh, yeah, and that whole writing and plot thing. :lol:

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Sims Stories - Weir Hall: A Dangerous Winter (http://www.modthesims.info/article.php?t=402379) || A Garland of Ghosts: Sims Stories of Adventurous Adventuresses! (http://nellspeedts.blogspot.com/)

Jeniveve
3rd Jun 2010, 04:10 PM
heyyyy look, you've even picked up on HP's kind words :P

and yes, they should do a featured stories section - and, by the way, your story continues to facinate me. Unsurprisingly, I'm wondering who the bald man is... :)

ElaineMc
5th Jun 2010, 04:39 AM
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Eddie van Moyer looked up from his paper. "Just go on down the ol' Rue de la whatever and pick up a bunch of perfume and hats and nonsense-- and send a couple gewgaws over with my compliments, baby."

Billie hurried over to perch on the arm of his chair, leaning down to kiss the top of his head. "Eddie, you're a doll!"

"She's your pal, Billie, and I want to make sure she approves of me, whenever I get a chance to meet her. You know, when she's done with that library work, we oughta send her a ticket and bring her over. You girls can run around while I take care of business."

"I'll do exactly that-- sometime later. For now, it's time to shop. Meet you back here for lunch?"

"You got it, doll." Eddie blew his wife a kiss as she breezed out of the room to get her hat and gloves.

"Oh, here's the letter, sweetie-- see you!" She tossed him the neatly-written pages, then headed out of their elaborate suite.

Eddie finished reading an article-- apparently New Jersey and New York State were having warm, spring-like weather-- and took up the letter, smiling. Good old Billie. Trust her to stick to a friend, no matter what.

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...there was a letter actually waiting for me the next morning. She left it at the post office right before she left; the hotel's landlady says Mrs. Weir plans to be in Europe until summer, so you may meet her yourself some time.

Why was I at the post office? Well, I'm ashamed to admit it, but I'd written you an awfully sad, soppy letter, and was all ready to send it off. The postmistress asked my name, and when I told her, she handed the letter right over. She was really terribly nice to me. Everyone here has been, really. I guess it's because there are so few strangers in town, people just naturally take an interest in new arrivals.

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I'll write lots more later, I'm sure, but I'm going to get to sleep early tonight. I expect to go out to the Hall in the morning and start work. Mrs. Weir said, in her letter, that Mrs. Chessie (that's the housekeeper) would make me welcome.

Please tell Mr. van Moyer thank you for his help. I can't tell you both how much I appreciate it!

Sincerely,

Wilhelmina

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After lunch, in the hotel's drab, but clean, dining room, Win sat daydreaming over a cup of cold tea. Her suitcases were packed, her bill was paid, now she just had to wait for a little longer before going--

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The stranger leaned down slightly, as if asking the time, or to borrow a paper. "What business do you have at Weir Hall? Who invited you there?" he asked, almost casually-- almost. One hand rested lightly on the chair next to Win's-- and his fingers grasped the chair's back so tightly, his knuckles whitened. His voice was calm... his eyes were hostile. She saw herself in his eyes: an enemy.

No matter what she said, she realized, he wouldn't believe her... and realizing that, she almost lost her temper, herself.

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"Good day, madam." He bowed slightly, his icy, dark eyes never leaving her face.

All her courage gone, the sound of her heart beating frantically drowned out the sound of the stranger's footsteps. She sat frozen in place, deaf to the quiet hum of conversation going on in the dining room. So far as Win could tell, nobody had even noticed the brief exchange.

What do I do what do I do what do i do what do i--

I should go back to the city, or telegraph Billie or-- or--

...and she could see the telegram in her head, begging her friend for protection, the doormat, the victim yet again-- and just that fast, her head came up, and she set her teeth stubbornly.

...or stand up on my own two feet. I have a life to get on with.

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(...to be continued, of course. Hopefully, I haven't introduced any mistakes in the editing process!)

ElaineMc
6th Jun 2010, 01:23 AM
Unsurprisingly, I'm wondering who the bald man is... :)
Well, like, y'know, he's like dark and totally mysterious, and, y'know. Stuff like that. :lol:

Gefremede
14th Jun 2010, 12:57 AM
Your pictures are amazing! I like where the story is going. It seems like the adventure element is being introduced seamlessly. But I am just flabbergasted at how amazing the pictures are and the way they are integrated into the story with the graphic novel look. So creative!

dark_jean
14th Jun 2010, 03:03 PM
Pics are amazzzinnngg.....you are too good with photoshop!!! I played a game once, there was a Russian fraud art-dealer called Sascha Barbicorn, he looks exactly like him except for his baldness!!