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ChrstyFarie07_SC
22nd Feb 2007, 2:32 AM
:clap: I read your story and I love it and please update, please, *cute puppy eyes*

i.love.your.mullet
22nd Feb 2007, 4:21 PM
i check this story prety much everyday to see if it has been updated haha
lovelovexx

Elyssa
22nd Feb 2007, 7:54 PM
Oh my goodness I just read this whole thing...WOW is this an awesome story!!!!

Update please! I need to know how it all works out!

LilacBaby
22nd Feb 2007, 8:18 PM
Update pretty please!!!!!!!!!

simsistah_14
22nd Feb 2007, 10:16 PM
OMG!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!! This story is soooooooo awesome!!! I wish you would update soon cuz this is soooo addtictive!!!! Good Job!! :D

kristalshyt
23rd Feb 2007, 3:50 PM
Update? Update? *looks around* Where??? :gonemad: Where is it? :disagree:
Okay, I'm done being silly. I shall now wait patiently...

cory_g
23rd Feb 2007, 6:59 PM
Guys I feel so bad! :( I should have updated a whole lot sooner, but I got caught up with school and all and didn't have time to complete the chapter.

But now I finished writing it, but cannot update due to the fact that my game crashes when I try to load the lot and I cannot take the pics...

I put up a thread on MTS2 asking for help with this. Hopefully everything will turn out okay.

Sorry for not ansewring each of you like I usually do... But thank you very much for your patience and I hope you can still hang on a little until I sort things out. And welcome to all the new readers! :)

moonlitsmiles5
23rd Feb 2007, 8:13 PM
wow Cory that's a great story so far. I read it over a few days when I could fit it into my tight schedule. I finally finished it and it's an awesome story. Keep up the good work

kristalshyt
25th Feb 2007, 3:30 AM
That stinks that your game is crashing. I don't know if you got the suggestion already, but when I had that issue, getting rid of a lot of my downloads fixed it. Good luck getting it all fixed & better. I look forward to such a time when you are able to update. :)

SpacemanHPSpiff
25th Feb 2007, 4:10 PM
I'm sorry cory! I had that happening a while back, and it was reallly incredibly frusturating, I kept having to drop out of contests and stuff and couldn't play for a long time... I hope your problem gets fixed! (I had to end up getting a new computer, as my laptop just couldn't hold the game! And now my poor baby ister's stuck with a game that crashes...)

Best of luck to you and your problem, I hope it can be soon fixed! *good luck hug*

Jade07_SC
25th Feb 2007, 4:30 PM
Amazing story!

~Squash-buddy-ven~
25th Feb 2007, 4:45 PM
Aww I'm so sorry Cory! I know wht you're going though, my game keeps chrashing all the time too.. :(

I sincerly hope your problem can be fixed.. I wish you the best of luck! :luff:

xXharp_babyXx
25th Feb 2007, 4:49 PM
Aw :( I hope you get it fixed soon :anime:

simsistah_14
26th Feb 2007, 12:25 AM
dang!!!!! i hope it gets fixed soon...gud luck!!!

cory_g
26th Feb 2007, 5:44 PM
Thank you for understanding, guys! *gives a big hug* I hate buggy houses :(

Also, welcome to the new readers! :D

ChrstyFarie07_SC
26th Feb 2007, 10:49 PM
*crosses fingers* I hope cory_g fixes thebug, I hope cory_g fixes the bug and updates, I hope cory_g fixes the bug

ChrstyFarie07_SC
26th Feb 2007, 10:51 PM
and cory_g i know what you mean, I was going to make a story, but it woudn't upload pictures, but now I can and I not going to make a story. Yay me! lol

yayDaphne
28th Feb 2007, 8:28 PM
Usually when it crashes for me, it's from like music added to the game. When I clear out my music folders that usually fixes the crashing. If it doesn't help then well, I tried. :beer:

ChrstyFarie07_SC
3rd Mar 2007, 1:38 AM
cory_g i haven't heard from you, are you are right? cory_g? cory_g!

cory_g
3rd Mar 2007, 5:23 PM
Chrsty: Welcome! :) I did get an answer for my problem but it's a really tedious thing to do, so in the end I'm just going to redecorate the house again like it used to be and move the family out... but yet again this is going to take some time :( But I'm okay, no problem!

Daphne: Welcome and thank you for the suggestion, but it didn't work. I'll do it that way in the end ^ :)

LilacBaby
5th Mar 2007, 5:14 PM
Good luck cory! I hope you are able to fix the problem soon!

ChrstyFarie07_SC
5th Mar 2007, 11:01 PM
Good Luck!!

cory_g
6th Mar 2007, 4:14 PM
Thank you Lily and Chrsty! :) I got rid of the problem eventually...so here it is, chapter 20! Hope you'll enjoy! :D

Chapter 20

‘Family reunion?!? But grandma…’

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Shadee groaned loudly and stared at her feet. She really disliked family reunions just because she had more relatives than she could handle and cousins of all ages, even unborn ones. They were all loud and cheerful, always getting in her way when she wanted to swiftly leave the room and lock herself up in her quiet dormitory.

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‘You’re going off to college tomorrow! Do you expect us to just sit around and do nothing to celebrate that or say goodbye? You won’t see us for a few years…Okay apart from your free time when you’ll probably pay us a visit.’ Gypsy crossed her arm and measured her almost adult granddaughter from head to foot. When had the summer holidays gone by? Just yesterday she had come from her prom, all flushed and happy. ‘If it makes you more comfortable, you could invite Sebastien. He seems to be quite a down-to-earth young man.’

Shadee’s head shot upwards and a big grin spread across her face.

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‘Really? I’m gonna go give him a call then!’ she rushed up the stairs to her room without protesting any more and grandma Gypsy returned to the kitchen where she was cooking all kinds of delicious meals for that evening.

cory_g
6th Mar 2007, 4:15 PM
The bell rang and Shadee darted at the door. Despite the horrible racket in the living room, she had been intently listening for any sounds that could announce the arrival of her boyfriend. She checked her image quickly in a near-by window before letting Sebastien in.

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‘Hey!’ she beamed and gave him a quick and playful peck on the cheek, suddenly realising that the whole room had become unusually quiet. She gulped down and turned around, facing the others in the room and grinned uneasily ‘Um…everyone…this is my boyfriend, Sebastien! Sebastien, you know Caleb, grandma and grandpa, right? The others are my aunts, Alillee and Onasis with their husbands and kids, my uncle Zenyth and his wife Brigitte.’

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Sebastien nodded and smiled at the huge reunion. He had quite a difficulty keeping in mind all their names, seeing they were quite unusual. Shadee seemed to know what he was thinking, as she added barely audibly ‘My grandma has a knack for unique names!’

The buzz seemed to grow after the novelty had worn off and they were all soon seated at a big table, chatting away loudly.

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‘So, young man’ Gypsy turned to Seb ‘I heard you chose med school. That’s quite a high ambition and not everyone can succeed…’

‘I’ve always been interested in the human body.’ The boy looked Gypsy in the eyes ‘It’s something that I like and, on top of that I can also be close to Shadee during college with her having chosen arts and all. The dorms are in the same building.’

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The old lady nodded and smiled friendly ‘I’m really content about that, to be honest. I believe I can trust you to protect her and make her happy.’ There was a brief moment in which they made eye contact and Sebastien thought he could see a flame burning in Gypsy’s eyes; it gave him a distinct feeling that she resembled a lioness defending her cubs and the words “or else” came him to mind, even though no one had pronounced them.

‘You can be sure of that!’ he answered back and didn’t avoid her gaze. Everything went back to normal in an instant.

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‘This salmon is great, gran!’

‘Why, thank you dear!’

‘I like the turkey!’

‘Granny, the lobster looks scary!’

The kids were quite impressed by the wonderful feast their grandmother had prepared. They kept bickering over which dish was more delicious, until desert came - they all declared banana split “the bestest”.

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[i]’It’s not so bad after all…’ Shadee smiled looking around the big table and munching away at a particularly stiff piece of banana. She was leaving home, after having got used to being there she was once again moving away, leaving behind people that she loved.

Everyone was so loud but, having drifted off into her own dream world, the girl couldn’t hear a word that was being said. She remembered her parents, her siblings, all gathered round a table one cold winter evening many, many years ago – or so it seemed to her. For a brief, selfish moment she wished her parents were alive, sitting there instead of one of her aunts or uncle. She chased the thought away. If a more powerful, supreme being had meant it for her to be that way, she had to accept her fate and learn to deal with it. In the end, after all the twists and turns she had actually received a prize – Sebastien.

‘Shadee, honey, please help Marcus take the dishes away!’

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‘Umm? Oh, yeah, gran!’

The evening ended in a pleasant gathering in front of the TV, watching some slushy romantic comedy. Everyone headed for their homes eventually, after shedding a few “I’ll miss you” tears and repeatedly hugging Shadee. Even Shadee’s grandpa stood up from his wheelchair for a few minutes, seeing his children and grandchildren out.

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Not long afterwards, the grandparents headed for their room and wished Shadee a good night. The girl was about to do the same when she noticed o a dark figure sitting on the swing outside. It was Caleb.

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Shadee opened the front door as soundless as possible and approached the little boy.

‘Caleb? What’s wrong?’ she leaned in to see his face better, but there was silence for a few moments.

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‘Am I a horrible boy?’ he looked up and stared sadly into Shadee’s eyes.

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The girl was taken aback by his unexpected question and smiled relieved. She had thought her “uncle” had a more serious reason to be upset.

‘Of course not! You’re wonderful, one of the best things that ever happened to me, grandma and grandpa! Are you serious?’

‘I thought everyone hated me…’ Caleb answered thoughtfully ‘You’re all leaving me. First Fiona, now you!’

‘I’m not leaving for ever, carrot top!’ she ruffled his hair playfully and wiped off the tears from the corners of his eyes ‘It’s just for a few months, then I’ll come to visit on holidays and during weekends. And I don’t think Fiona’s leaving you-’

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‘Yes she is! She’s moving out of town with her parents! I’m never going to see her again!’

There was another moment of silence in which Shadee watched a few tears roll down the boy’s cheeks. ‘Oh…I didn’t know that… I’m – I’m really sorry for you-’

She didn’t get to finish her sentence because the boy had pulled her into a tight hug, damping her white blouse. But it didn’t matter to her. Even though Shadee tried to fight against them, tears made their way down her chin, blurring her view and choking her.

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‘I love you so much, Shadee!’ Caleb’s muffled voice whispered and the boy dug his face even deeper into her belly.

‘I love you too, Cae!’

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They spent a few good minutes in the front yard, hugging and crying like mad people, then finally tired down and retreated to their rooms. The girl packed the rest of her stuff into the second huge luggage and went to bed, unable to fall asleep for hours on end.

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Please excuse the plumbob's and thoughts bubbles, I made the pics in quite a hurry to give you guys the chapter and I forgot to take care of all the details...

xXharp_babyXx
6th Mar 2007, 4:25 PM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!! UPDATE! :anime:
They are such a cute couple :luff:

amalinaball
6th Mar 2007, 4:37 PM
Aww...bless, poor lil Caleb!

But yeah, Seb and Shadee are a real cute couple. Nice update, I am already wondering how college will be for them. :D

kristalshyt
6th Mar 2007, 4:56 PM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!! UPDATE!

I second that - Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!! UPDATE! :D

4oh4error
6th Mar 2007, 6:03 PM
Great chapter. Thank you :D

jennywren
6th Mar 2007, 6:16 PM
awww! and about time too, caleb is soooo sweet

Loco
6th Mar 2007, 8:22 PM
YAY! I love seeing unexpected updates! It was so good, too. Poor ickle Caleb, he's so cute... Seb and Shadee are so sweet together! It'll be weird with them both going off to college...

auroraspirit
6th Mar 2007, 9:41 PM
Awwww, that made me cry #grabs a box of tissues#

Its nice to see Shadee and Seb together at last :luff:

I really have missed this story cory.

Auroraspirit :angel:

onsenmark
6th Mar 2007, 9:46 PM
*flails* Yay update!

Plus, we finally see the REST of the family.

(kashira, kashira, gozounji kashira? -- I see an broken tag, below the image of Shadee and the banana split. Just so you know. ;) )

Maneater<3
6th Mar 2007, 11:26 PM
I just read your entire story, its fantastic, and it give me inspiration to start my own story! :) amazing, worderful, breathtaking (especaly the lots) :)

LilacBaby
7th Mar 2007, 1:18 AM
Okay so I am like the happiest person in the world that you updated and I don't want to ruin the moment but what about Holly? Sorry. AMAZING though!!!!

darksixx
7th Mar 2007, 3:59 AM
Awwww! So sweet! Great update!

vio1ette
7th Mar 2007, 12:06 PM
*crys* g-good update *sniff*

Ps. Where did you get Shadee's clothing before the family reunion? (the one from PART 1 on the other page) I simply love it!

Applekissis
7th Mar 2007, 2:12 PM
Great to see you back Cory~~~Lovely updates as well hun..

ChrstyFarie07_SC
7th Mar 2007, 10:34 PM
YYYAAAYYY! CORY_G MADE AN UPDATE! hey cory_g if you were here i would hug your guts out!

Angelle
8th Mar 2007, 4:04 AM
that was so cute! =D

Stormy_SC
8th Mar 2007, 7:16 AM
I absolutely am addicted to your story! Shadee is so beautiful and I love her name!

Hyperkitty21
8th Mar 2007, 3:56 PM
OMG!!! Thank you so much for updating!

Captain THPS4
8th Mar 2007, 9:37 PM
Ahh this update was two days ago? How on Earth did I not see this earlier? Great update, I'm so sad for Caleb. :(

BethanSims2
8th Mar 2007, 10:45 PM
I love this story! Can't wait to read more! Oh and Shadee's hair is so cool btw! :anime:

leighcy
9th Mar 2007, 12:14 AM
Yay! You updated! :) I really enjoyed it, as usual. Will be anxiously awaiting more.

cory_g
9th Mar 2007, 3:53 PM
Loren: I made someone happy! :D Yay! :jig:

amalina: Heh, I was feeling sorry myself for Caleb lol As for college life, I’m gonna make it quite short because I don’t have too many ideas for it… adulthood, here they come! :D

kristal: Thank you for reading! :anime:

4oh: Welcome! And thank you very much!

Jennywren: it really was about time! ;) whew…I’m really glad I finally managed to get myself together and update!

Loco: Thank you! :) I’m happy they’re not of different ages because this way I can get them through everything at the same time! :D

aurora: *pats aurora on the back* There, there! :) I’m glad I was able to make another person happy by updating! I also missed being here and…umm… updating! :D

mark: Thank you for checking out the update! :) There were more grandchildren in the family tree, but there really weren’t any spots left at the table or on the couch… >.< About the broken link, I dunno what happened, maybe try refreshing or something. BTW: Are you Japanese? :D

Maneater: Oh, wow! That’s a lovely compliment! Thank you very much for reading and good luck with your own story! :) (PS: I love that Grey’s Anatomy line in your signature :valentine )

cory_g
9th Mar 2007, 3:55 PM
Lily: Thank you! And I’m really happy to see you’ve enjoyed! :) Well, about Holly, I didn’t have how to squeeze her into this chapter, but you’ll be seeing some of her in a future update. Just so you know, she’ll be going to a different university than Shadee and Sebastien

dark: Thank you! :D

vio1ette: Thank you! :) And Shadee’s outfit is from BoutiqueEmilie I think, that has unfortunately closed down…

Apple: It’s really good to be back! :D And thank you! :luff:

Chrsty: :lol: I love your enthusiasm! I’m glad I made you happy! *hug* ;)

Angelle: Thanks :D

Elle: Than you for reading! ;)

Captain: Thank you, I really hope you enjoyed it! :D

Bethan: Thank you! :) I love it when people say they love my story lol And in case you’re wondering, Shadee’s hair is from RoseSims, page 16 of the donation section.

leighcy: Glad you did, hun! :) And btw way, I’ve been drooling over your seasons pics at the picture threads, they’re really wonderful! :D Wish the friggin’ ep would have appeared here as well. But no! They postponed the dang release date to !!14 march!! from the previous 2nd of March and God knows whether they’ll actually put it on shelves then! :mean: [/end of rant]

simsistah_14
9th Mar 2007, 11:45 PM
you did it again cory_g!!!!! this was a good update lolz...awesome job!!

grape_merchant_001
10th Mar 2007, 1:26 AM
Ye i agree wonderful update!

onsenmark
10th Mar 2007, 3:25 AM
cory: Nah, I'm an eastern U.S. kid. 'Course, I can't really call myself that, since I'm figuratively older than dirt, lol. XD

JenF
10th Mar 2007, 5:43 PM
Just read this all in one day, it's totally fantastic, where did you get Holly's body mesh?

Keep going please!!!! :D

cory_g
10th Mar 2007, 6:47 PM
Scratch what I said earlier about "Seasons"! i got my copy earlier today and I simply love it! :jig:

Sistah: Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed! :D

grape_merchant: Thanks! :)

mark: :lol: That cracked me up! :D

jenf: Welcome and thank you! :anime: As for Holly's body mesh, you can find it here http://www.xl-pozytywnie.pl/sims/femaleclothing.htm

~Squash-buddy-ven~
11th Mar 2007, 11:50 AM
Wauw! What a wonderful update cory! :) It got me a tint emotional when little Caleb asked Shadee if he was a bad boy..

Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next update! :D

cory_g
11th Mar 2007, 5:09 PM
Thank you Pernille! :) I really tried to feel through Caleb, like a child being deserted by some of the people he loves most and I hope I did it accurately enough...

ChrstyFarie07_SC
11th Mar 2007, 10:05 PM
Nice update, no awlsome update! oh yeah cory_g are you a female or a male, old or young, i'm just wondering, oh and what could i call you?

hockeyluver99
12th Mar 2007, 2:03 AM
i love this story! good job cory_g poor little caleb :(

White Queen
12th Mar 2007, 7:59 AM
What a beautiful update, Cory! Can't wait to see more!
Caleb is too cute! :anime:

cory_g
12th Mar 2007, 8:09 PM
Chrsty: Thanks again, hun! :) And now to answer your questions: I am female, 17 and you can call me Cory if you want - it's actually sort of a nickname from my real name Corina

hockey: Thank you! :D

White_Queen: Oh, thank you! :luff: To be quite honest, I kind of got tired of the sims' face structures and genetic custom content...But hey! This is what you get when you stretch your story on a longer period of time: you're bound to find nicer and newer stuff :P

ChrstyFarie07_SC
13th Mar 2007, 12:18 AM
Chrsty: Thanks again, hun! :) And now to answer your questions: I am female, 17 and you can call me Cory if you want - it's actually sort of a nickname from my real name Corina

Cool! I'm a female, 13, and my name's Christina, and guess what? I LOVE YOUR STORY!

cory_g
13th Mar 2007, 5:21 PM
You've got a really pretty name! :anime:

Cissia
13th Mar 2007, 7:40 PM
I just wanted to stop by and say that I really love your story. it captures emotion so well, and the storyline is great! how many chapters total is there (going to be)? Cissia xx

cory_g
14th Mar 2007, 5:00 PM
Hi and welcome Cissia! Thank you, it means a lot to me that you took your time to leave me a comment! Concerning the chapters, I can't really tell, because I always stretch everything... I have the events in mind but they often take more pages than I actually intented and I sometimes find myself finishing a chapter without the ideas I wanted to include... :D Just as a refrence number, I should say about 40 or 50, but don't take my word for it! ;)

Annique
15th Mar 2007, 10:48 AM
*MacD's tune* Padapapapaaa!

Starting a new life; I'm loving it!

LilacBaby
15th Mar 2007, 2:10 PM
Lily: Thank you! And I’m really happy to see you’ve enjoyed! :) Well, about Holly, I didn’t have how to squeeze her into this chapter, but you’ll be seeing some of her in a future update. Just so you know, she’ll be going to a different university than Shadee and Sebastien


Really? Well that might be better for Shadee and Sebastien relationship considering Holly could be in love with Sebastien...don't mind me by the way. I'm just making up scenerios...hehe! :p

ChrstyFarie07_SC
16th Mar 2007, 1:42 AM
You've got a really pretty name! :anime:
Why Thank you! :banana:

dbragazza
18th Mar 2007, 4:50 PM
wow wow amazing job....loved the update
you are ver talented !!!!!!
can't wait to know what happens....
I feel like heartbreak is on the way......

i.love.your.mullet
18th Mar 2007, 5:22 PM
this story is amazing!

SpacemanHPSpiff
19th Mar 2007, 11:16 PM
Ooh, I've been behind on my reading! Cory, thank you for another fantastic update! I loved seeing Seb and Gypsy's personalities collide - they both are very strong chracters, and it was fun to see Seb react so well and boldly with her! You did a really nice job with the group shots in this scene, they must have been incredibly difficult!

Poor Caleb! Why must he be so adorable and innocent? That was such a sweet ending to the chapter!

Thanks for this chapter! I eagerly await the next one! I'll miss Holly in her other college, but it'll be interesting to have Shadee and Seb focused on!

(EDIT: Just looking over the comments - you have such a beautiful name, cory! Lucky ducks! :P)

ChrstyFarie07_SC
20th Mar 2007, 5:35 PM
When will you update? Haven't heard from you for 1..2..4 days are you ok?

cory_g
20th Mar 2007, 6:54 PM
Annique: Thank you! :D

Lily: :lol: Nah, she's not in love with him, she just gave a helping hand

Chrsty: you're welcome and thanks for the concern! :anime: I think I'll update towards the end of the week, but I can't really promise anything... I am okay, I've been away for 4 days, took advantage of the last days of snow on slopes for some snowboarding ;)

ragazza: Thank you! :luff: I rwally have to get around to writing some more. Now that I have Seasons, pics will be so much more interesting!

i.love: Thanks! :)

Spaceman: Woo! Lenghty comment! :P *reads* Thanks, I'm really glad to see you enjoyed! And...umm...thanks for...umm... liking my name! :lol:

ChrstyFarie07_SC
23rd Mar 2007, 7:01 PM
Nice! Uh its snowing there? Where do you live (state or country)?

cory_g
25th Mar 2007, 8:46 PM
Chrsty, it wasn't exactly snowing, just some fake snow ;) I live in Romania - Europe

BTW, Thanks so much for putting my story in your sig, it means a lot to me! :luff:

ChrstyFarie07_SC
25th Mar 2007, 9:15 PM
Chrsty, it wasn't exactly snowing, just some fake snow ;) I live in Romania - Europe

BTW, Thanks so much for putting my story in your sig, it means a lot to me! :luff:

Lol, and your welcome, your story is one of my favorites and when are you going to update!

PS: While I wait for an update I'll have some cookies :) http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k74/christinafariy/Cookies.jpg

Anyone care to join me?

ending
26th Mar 2007, 1:11 AM
Wow XD Haha. I love this story. It's so realistic, like something that could happen to any normal teenager.

Juliette*15
26th Mar 2007, 10:31 AM
I go away for a little bit, and I get rewarded with this! Woo! *Skips around happily*

... 'A little bit' yes... About 4-6 months is a little bit isn't it? :D

Caleb is so cute... Poor baby...

Wonder how long this is going to keep going... I mean, there's lots of times when she's 'Starting a new life' right? :P *Hopeful*

ChrstyFarie07_SC
30th Mar 2007, 12:53 AM
Cory when are you gonna update? *puupy dog eyes* Please update? I'm now worried about you, are you ok?

EDIT: I forgot the cookies!
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k74/christinafariy/Cookies-2.jpg
and you buy the milk!

Kimmers
30th Mar 2007, 5:53 AM
I only just found this story and I've read all of whats up so far! I'm obsessed! Almost. eeeeee update plz!

daltonism
1st Apr 2007, 8:08 PM
Wow.This.Is.So.Awesome!!

I lvoe it, I really do. I've been reading it all evening!
Awww! Its soo good!

ChrstyFarie07_SC
1st Apr 2007, 9:33 PM
7 days, you been gone for 7 days! Cory now i'm really, really worried about you!

pompom
1st Apr 2007, 9:42 PM
No! I'll buy the milk if she uppdates soon^^

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cory_g
2nd Apr 2007, 7:22 PM
Chrsty: Oh, God! I'm sorry I made you worry! :( I caught a cold and simply stayed away from the computer for a while, just checked in from time to time! But I'm back now and I come carrying and update! ;) *eats cookies* Yummy!

ending: Welcome! :) Thank you very much for commenting, I'm glad you can relate to te story, this means my target has been reached! :D

Juliette: Woo! Glad to see you're back! :jig:

Kimmers: Welcome! Almost obsessed is good LOL :D I hope you'll like it all the way to the end!

Daltonsim: Welcome and thank you for reading and the compliments! ;)

pompom: I'm updating now! Can I get the milk then? :D

cory_g
2nd Apr 2007, 7:25 PM
Chapter 21

I know, it’s hard! College takes up four years of your life, but I can honestly say the first two were absolutely fantastic!!!

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I settled in quite fine on campus. I’ve got a charming room with all the essentials.

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At first, I also had a dorm mate – a chick called Katie, but because her boyfriend shared a room with Sebastien, we kinda switched. Yeah, we knew we weren’t supposed to do that, but no one actually made sure that we didn’t break the rule, so… IT HAPPENED!

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My first time during the second month of freshman year. I will never forget those moments, even though they weren’t really what I had imagined. It was quite spontaneous actually! No candles or rose petals, but a lot of romantic caresses and hugs. Sebastien was very gentle and sweet, it made me love him even more – we really took our relationship to the next level.

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I’m also coping quite well with my art major. The classes are sometimes long and hard, but I think I’m getting by fine. Hopefully, I will manage to become a renowned artist some day, if I put enough passion into my works.

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Sebastien…what can I say about Sebastien apart the fact that he is a sweetheart?

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He didn’t learn too much during highschool, but he now seems to have sprouted wings! He studies like mad, but that’s quite understandable, as he has chosen one of the hardest majors: biology. He sits in front of his thick books day in, day out; I sometimes just sit there and watch him – he looks so absorbed into his own little world.

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Ever since he got away from his father he’s like a new person, no longer stressed or worried, he smiles a lot. But I do understand what’s going on in his heart, I believe he still cares about his brute of a father after all he did to him. Sebastien doesn’t know that I know, but he keeps calling his father every few days. They don’t speak, Seb just hangs up when he answers – I think he just wants to make sure he’s alright.

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He’s such a good person!

I’ve also kept in touch with Holly. She’s sent me a whole lot of photos!

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I’m really sorry that she didn’t come to the same university like me and Seb, but from what she’s told me everything is fine with her too. She’s majoring in economics. People in college are far less mean - everyone seems to be minding their own business. She’s made friends with this girl, Carrie Nichols, her dorm mate.

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They get along really well, even though they’ve got opposed personalities. Carrie’s more of a wild child. Holly’s love life has blossomed as well: she’s met a wonderful guy who’s training to become a cop – he eats a lot of doughnuts!

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They’re adorable together!

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I really want to make the best of my college years. Adulthood is looming ahead and I seriously doubt everything will be peachy in the future…
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Sorry for the oh-so-cliche cop eating doughnuts thing, but I just had to add it! :D I hope you all enjoyed the preview into the trio's college years!

amalinaball
2nd Apr 2007, 7:35 PM
Aww...that is So Damned Cute! I hope Holly features a lot, though, I really like her. :)
Woah - and Seb's chin went all blocky. I mean, he's still nice-looking and all but wow! big chin. I guess it kind of makes him look manly. ;) I like how he keeps checking on his dad - too often it ends up where the child never cares about the parent, and I am pleased that isn't the case! This was a lovely update!
But now I keep thinking of doughnuts...oh well, I get chocolate doughnuts on Sunday. Woohoo! :D

gazania
2nd Apr 2007, 8:32 PM
Well, it's great that Holly has a steady boyfriend, too. It will help pass the time wonderfully while she's at college!

And it's sweet that it was the first time for both Sebastien and Shadee. :)

Plum_SC
2nd Apr 2007, 8:55 PM
Seb got HOT!

hockeyluver99
2nd Apr 2007, 10:14 PM
I cant wait till the next update!!Seb is sooooo hot(lol im crushing on a pixeled sim)
:)

onsenmark
2nd Apr 2007, 10:44 PM
Whoa, an update. O_o Yay. XD

I think Shadee should count her lucky stars she's a YA... unless you're running a hack that lets YA Sims get "totally PG"... ^^;

And what happened with Caleb? Y'left that open. :(

White Queen
3rd Apr 2007, 7:18 AM
Yay, the long-awaited update! I couldn't wait to see them all grown-up in college... And I wasn't disappointed! :jig: (Seb's so cuuuuute :lovestruc )

Queenloopy
3rd Apr 2007, 8:33 AM
I have to say that as a download junkie, this story has actually made me want to play the game, just to have my own stories too!! By the way Sebastion is HOT. :P And I am really digging the whole fatter body meshes, I wish they would have that in the Sims instead of the wimpy beerbelly they get when they don't work out.

Kimmers
3rd Apr 2007, 8:55 AM
Yay! Awesome update! I'm so excited for another update :D I'm gonna be checking atleast a few times a day for new updates!

Juliette*15
3rd Apr 2007, 9:09 AM
Go the doughnuts! :D And they all look so gorgeous! Its so cruel (To the rest of us that is)

cory_g
3rd Apr 2007, 10:03 AM
amalina: I'm actually quite fond of Seb's blocky chin :lol: I like blocky chins on men, like you said it makes them manlier! :D You'll find out a little more about Sebastien's family, his begginings

gazania: It was simply time for romance for all of them. After all, holly had suffered enough in highschool :)

Plum: :giggler: Glad you like

hockeyluver: Guess what? I'll be having next week off (Easter break), so the next update will probably come quite soon :D

mark: I used to have Inteenimater in my game, but it hasn't been updated for Seasons. So no "action" for Shadee until she becoma a YA or A :D Caleb, what can I say, he's okay, trying to cope with the fact that he feels lonely.

White_Queen: I'm happy you enjoyed :luff: Seb seems to have quite good genes, huh?

Queenloopy: Welcome! *whispers* I'm a download junkie as well! I would have also enjoyed a bigger body type variety in the game, but hey! you can't have everything, can you? ;) Maybe they'll include this in a future EP "The Sims 2: Body Variety" :P

Kimmers: Thank you!! :D I'll update quite soon, I just have to prepare some new sets ;)

Juliette: You've got to keep in mind they're only pixels! :D With great bodies and faces... *grumble* :P

~Squash-buddy-ven~
3rd Apr 2007, 10:59 AM
I just came to check to see if you had updated, and you have! :D I'm really glad that Holly's got a boyfriend, she looks really happy now! And Seb is just hot! No more to say about that.. :)
I hope that Caleb will be in the next chapter, I'm wondering if he's alright. You kinda left an open end on him.. ;) Can't wait for the next chapter!

dbragazza
3rd Apr 2007, 3:37 PM
good update....hoping for more "action" in the next chapters.

ChrstyFarie07_SC
3rd Apr 2007, 10:51 PM
Aaaah you updated, could I be dreaming? :D

ChrstyFarie07_SC
4th Apr 2007, 2:15 AM
Hey people, you know Cory just updated! Post some comments!

cory_g
4th Apr 2007, 8:08 AM
Pernille: Glad you liked how things evolved in their lives! ;) You'll actually see some more of Caleb in the next chapter! :D

ragazza: :giggler: Thank you!

Chrsty: Nope, it's definately not a dream! :lol: You're too sweet! :luff:

energy_genergy_SC
4th Apr 2007, 9:22 AM
OH MY. SEB GOT... YEAH. xD Everyone else said it too, but... MAN, he is gorgeous. *lols* Great update! I love that Shadee is doing an art major. That's practically all I have my college sims do; that or drama. xDD :)

Annique
4th Apr 2007, 1:33 PM
Seb is just wow....

pompom
4th Apr 2007, 3:16 PM
YAEH! The Milk Is yours hun! Can't wait until you update again ^^

LilacBaby
4th Apr 2007, 4:02 PM
I just read this and omg! Seb is so gorgeous but he's Shadee's and I'll respect that :lol:

Anyways great story and I can't wait for another update!!!

Loco
4th Apr 2007, 7:49 PM
WOO! Update! Aw, they're all so cuuuute... especially Holly and her boyfriend. And Seb... yum. :D Too gorgeous. I might just have to print out that top picture of him and keep it... :P Anyways, yay, I'm so happy you finally updated. :)

Gerbera
4th Apr 2007, 8:41 PM
Wow, I missed a few updates during the last two months without internet ...
I love how the story had turned, thanks a lot! :D

Captain THPS4
4th Apr 2007, 11:24 PM
Wow, whenever I least expect it there's an update! I guess that's a good thing though. I never expected that Shadee would have that kind of underwear, never thought she had that kind of personality in her. :p Will we be seeing more of Holly's boyfriend?

ChrstyFarie07_SC
5th Apr 2007, 12:18 AM
Oh and yeah Seb... is just... wow ..., even more dots .............................

Stormy_SC
5th Apr 2007, 1:42 AM
Seb has gotten so cute! :valentine And Holly and her bf are adorbale together! And Shadee...well, she's gorgeous as usual! Great update!

ChrstyFarie07_SC
5th Apr 2007, 9:53 PM
I was just wondering... if you packaged you sims? If its a yes then, where?

auroraspirit
5th Apr 2007, 10:45 PM
I'm so happy for Holly that she found someone, he's so sweet and handsome :) Seb looks amazing and so does Shadee, wheee, they are all progressing so well, I'm pleased that their friendship hasn't fizzled because of the long distance between them.

Auroraspirit :angel:

kristalshyt
5th Apr 2007, 11:52 PM
Yay! I'm back & there's an update! I love it!

Don't worry about the cliche cop donut thing... it made me laugh. :D

ErrMiGawd
6th Apr 2007, 1:00 AM
*almost explodes with happiness*

WOOOO-HOOOO! *does happy dance in chair* now Seb is all Shadee's MUAHAHAHAHA! *evil smirk*

cory_g
6th Apr 2007, 11:27 AM
Katie: Thank you! :) Yeah, I thought that since she liked to paint in highschool, she would be appropriate for an art major

Annique: Glad you like ;)

pompom: Yay! I got the milk! Yummy! :D

Lily: Thank you! You can share Seb with Shadee if you really want! :lol:

Loco: I'm quite satisfied with how he grew up as well! :jig: I'm really glad you like the couples

Gerbera: You're very welcome! :) A few months without internet? I would crumble to death! :P

cory_g
6th Apr 2007, 11:28 AM
Captain: I like surprising people! :D Shadee needed some "special ocassion underwear" for her... ahem special ocassion LOL Holly's boyfriend will appear again! ;)

Chrsty: Well, they aren't up for upload, mainly because Shadee was an offspring of a downloaded sim, so it didn't seem right to me to put her up :D

stormy: :giggler: Thank you!

aurora: Holly's a really good person, so I didn't want distance to seperate her from her friends :) Thank you for reading and commenting! :luff:

kristal: Thank you! :D Happy to hear I made someone laugh! ;)

ErrMiGawd: Wlecome! :D But we'll see about Seb being all Shadee's *insert evil laighter* Nah, just kidding! :elephant:

ErrMiGawd
6th Apr 2007, 5:03 PM
Wow, Shadee's a little kinky ain't she? :wow: :wow: :wow :wow :blow:

Gerbera
6th Apr 2007, 5:25 PM
cory, I nearly did, believe me ;) But I couldn't do anything against that .... I am really happy to be back home and have internet 24/7 ^^

MentalMetalPetals
7th Apr 2007, 9:46 AM
WOOOO :howdy:
I've had a VERY long break from sims 2, i got a little simmed-out, know what i mean?
But anyway, now I'm BACK and reading these updates was great! I'm so happy for Seb and Shadee and Holly and everyone! Keep up the good work Cory! :elephant:

cory_g
7th Apr 2007, 7:17 PM
Err: :giggler: Now, what made you think that? :P

Gerbera: I can totally understand because I'm a computer & internet addict! :D

Petals: Yep, I do know what you mean! ;) But I don't think I would be able to try doing something like this haha :D Thank you! I'm really happy you enjoyed!

cory_g
7th Apr 2007, 7:19 PM
I think this is totally unexpected, but a new update is here! :D Happy Easter everyone! :jig:

Chapter 22

A loud buzz suddenly interrupted the peace of the night. The cell phone vibrated its way towards the edge of the end table, menacing to fall off at any second.

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‘Who the heck is calling at this hour?!?’ Shadee grumbled, still unsure whether she was sleeping or awake.

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Stretching a hand, she groped around the table, trying to find the source of noise. Sebastien grunted next to her, then turned on the other side.

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‘Yeah?’ Shadee tried to stifle a yawn while listening to the voice at the other end of the line ‘Grandma, are you okay? … Take it easy and just- … Is everyone okay?... Just try to calm down and tell me what happened!’

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With a soft thud the cell phone slid out of the girl’s hand, landing on the wooden floor.

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***

‘We have all gathered here today for the sad purpose of laying to rest the mortal remains of Menas Evans. As we meet here our hearts are full of grief. Our eyes burn with the salt of bitter tears. We are thus afflicted because…’

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The words of the priest seemed to die away as Shadee’s eyes blurred with tears. She knew perfectly well this had been coming, she had thought of it and dreaded it, but in no case had she really been prepared to deal with the death of another person dear to her.

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Her grandfather had been like a second parent to her. She had got used to seeing him every day – as of late only during the holidays. She hadn’t even said a proper goodbye to him and she was now no longer able to do it – he was gone, probably in Heaven to meet with his son and grandchildren – Shadee’s family.

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By far, the most affected of them all was Gypsy. She just stared at the closed shiny, black coffin without blinking.

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Her eyes were red and swollen, but tears refused to flow. She had probably cried every drop of water left in her body. Her withered hand pressed Caleb’s small body to hers, as if he was everything she had left. She suddenly looked old, as if twenty years had passed in only one week.

With slow, almost lazy movements, the casket was lowered inside the grave. Caleb detached himself from his adoptive mother and, shaking slightly, approached the opening in the ground with a beautiful bunch of flowers in his hand. It was a heart-breaking sight.

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The poor ten-year-old boy hadn’t had any luck throughout his life: first being put up for adoption, making good friends and loosing them, then the person he had known as a father for the past six years dieing.

Caleb’s whole body began to shake as he hid his face in Gypsy’s belly, letting his emotions loose.

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Two men with shovels started to cover the casket with dirt, hiding its image forever in the depths of the ground. Everyone taking part in the gathering stared at the coffin; it was the last goodbye to a wonderful person, husband, father and grandfather.

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xXharp_babyXx
7th Apr 2007, 7:32 PM
D: You killed him! :lol:
Anyway, that was a sad update :(
I hope Shadee and Caleb will be okay. :)

ChrstyFarie07_SC
7th Apr 2007, 7:46 PM
:( Whaaa! I feel sad for Shadee and Caleb and Grandma Gypsy, Whaaa!

Loco
7th Apr 2007, 8:11 PM
Noooo, that's too sad! :( Poor Grandma and Caleb and Shadee, I hope they're okay...

ending
7th Apr 2007, 8:14 PM
Aww sad but yay update! Optimism and pessimism in one comment. XD Score.

Incomplete
7th Apr 2007, 8:21 PM
No!!! I didn't see that coming at all. :( I feel so bad for Grandma Gypsy and Caleb and Shadee. Send them hugs from me! :grouphug:

Anne_SC
7th Apr 2007, 9:07 PM
Awww :( Noooooo

onsenmark
7th Apr 2007, 9:19 PM
Oh, man. :(

greenmtx
7th Apr 2007, 9:44 PM
Very well-written and beautiful scenery...but very sad :-(

Captain THPS4
7th Apr 2007, 11:06 PM
I didn't see the update or Shadee's grandfather's passing coming! Oh how sad, I feel sorry for Shadee and her family. Looks like Caleb especially will never catch a break. :( Happy Easter to you too!

~Squash-buddy-ven~
8th Apr 2007, 11:17 AM
Aww! :( That's so sad. Poor Caleb & Gypsy! They have a hard time ahead of them. And Shadee didn't even get a chance to say goodbye.. I really feel for her, she's had a hard life already, loosing a lot of the people she loves, and now her grandfather too! That's so sad!

But, as always, very well written chapter and you did an amazing job on the scenery. It's so beautiful, you almost feel that you are standing right there watching the story "live"!

And Happy Easter to you too! :D

dbragazza
8th Apr 2007, 9:01 PM
Oh !!.....why did I ask for action????
well....maybe it was his time....
hopefully next updates will hold cheerful news...
thanks

XsnowdropX
8th Apr 2007, 9:33 PM
Yay good update. I knew he was gonna die sometime, after all he was in really bad health like.....two years ago. But its still sad:(.

callum91_SC
8th Apr 2007, 11:36 PM
aww cory,I just read through 46pages in one go,skipping everyone exceot yours posts!
What a great story,and I dont normally read them,but I got this one subscribed. And its good to see Holly with someone her size,no more name calling <3
^-^
And is Caleb a Maxis made sim,or did you just make him for the story? Hes adorable,same as Fiona :D

moonlitsmiles5
8th Apr 2007, 11:47 PM
great update Cory it was sad to read but I knew it needed to happen sooner or laater. What kind of life could Menas live in a wheelchair anyway? Happy Easter and thanks for the update

kristalshyt
9th Apr 2007, 12:23 AM
Well written update, but..... :blink: :weep:

BethanSims2
9th Apr 2007, 1:16 AM
I just read chapter 21 & 22...again...and there both so different...chapter 22 is really sad, I feel so sad for Grandma Gypsy, Claeb and Shadee :( but judging from the many *ahem* positive remarks for Seb, well I think you should start a fanclub...*teehee* I think Seb is gorgeous too :D lol...but seriously great story! :D :bow2:

Stormy_SC
9th Apr 2007, 3:07 AM
Aww thats so sad! :weep: Great update though! I love the scenery and everything. Great job, but so sad! :up: :cry:

Juliette*15
9th Apr 2007, 3:09 AM
Awww.... Why do I feel so cruel for thinking 'So long, farewell... One with the rest'???? Oh well... Really good idea, the pictures aren't all that brilliant this time... But lemme guess, the stupid simmies wouldn't play nce buggers would they?

auroraspirit
9th Apr 2007, 5:49 AM
Whaaat! Talk about a shocker of an update, hope everything will be okay for everyone :)

Auroraspirit :angel:

cory_g
9th Apr 2007, 9:37 AM
Loren: Thank you for reading! :) It was high time for a sad update, everything had been a little too peachy lately!

Chrsty: Aww, daon’t be sad! It’s just pixels! ;) But I do have to admit I was sad myself doing the funeral part.

Loco: I guess it will take them some time to adjust to their new life, it will be especially hard on Gypsy though :(

ending: :lol: A good blend, huh?

Incomplete: Well, I have to admit I like bringing the element of surprise! :giggler: I shall send the hugs to my pixelated friends!

Anne: Heh, your avvie suits the comment so well! :P

mark: It had to come! It really was something inevitable, right? :)

green: Thank you! :)

Captain: Well, like I said, I really enjoy surprising people! ;) Yeah, Caleb seems to have been born under an unlucky star, but he will eventually catch a break.

Pernille: I actually tried to put myself in Shadee’s place: being away for studies and not knowing that that was the last time I would see a person dear to me. That would really be heart-breaking! :( Thank you for reading and commenting!

cory_g
9th Apr 2007, 9:38 AM
dbragazza: It really was his time… You’re very welcome! :)

snowdrop: Thank you! :) BTW I wanted to ask you: is that your puppy in the avatar? It’s so so so adorable! :anime:

callum: Welcome! I’m always happy when I get new readers! :D Thank you, I feel flattered, especially that you don’t usually read stories. I made Caleb myself, moved him and his father on a lot, then neglected him. Eventually he got taken by the social worker, so I could make Gypsy adopt him ;)

moonlit: Thank you! :luff: You’re perfectly right: Menas lead a terrible life in the wheel chair, having led a very active life. But he didn’t want to show this to his family. You’re welcome!

kristal: Thank you! :) I do hope you enjoyed, despite the sadness.

Bethan: Ha ha! “The Seb fanclub” :lol: Thank you, I’m glad you like the story!

stormy: Thanks! :) I really hope the cemetery looks cemetery-like! ;)

Juliette: It’s not something cruel to say, IMO. ;) Yeah, I couldn’t find good enough interactions for some of the scenes, so I guess a few pics looked a little out of place…but I tried my best with the limited interactions of the game :)

Aurora: heh, shockers are good, aren’t they? :P Thank you for reading!

Nicole_artist
9th Apr 2007, 10:51 AM
I clicked on the link in your avatar and found myself reading the entire story! I couldn't tear myself away! It's amazing how it just... flows...

Aw, I can't think of any original compliments. *sigh*

Btw, is it just me or just Holly's boyfriend look a little like an overweight Dirk?

callum91_SC
9th Apr 2007, 4:21 PM
cory,you couldnt upload your sims after could you? Like all in one post on MTS2,I feel for them and would love to have them :giggler: <3
I think Ill start reading more now, teehee! :giggler:

XsnowdropX
9th Apr 2007, 4:40 PM
no it isnt:). Just an icon I found and I thought it was cute lol

DuH_SoHArDCoRE
9th Apr 2007, 5:02 PM
ok that was sad:-(
i'm listening to the song "fix you" by coldplay.it kinda made me cry.cause the chapter and song kinda fit together.dunno why.

Garnet_SC
9th Apr 2007, 5:06 PM
I love this story! I read the entire thing in one sitting. I am very curious to see what will happen next... It's so sad that the grandpa died after that family has already lost so much. However, it would be lame to have a story that was 100% happiness so I'm not complaining. :D

hockeyluver99
10th Apr 2007, 2:06 AM
oh noo :( thats so sad :(

Annique
10th Apr 2007, 9:27 AM
Whoa, that really came by surprise. That was a very sad update. I don't know if it's just me being a total softie, or the feeling were brilliantly displayed, but I was this close to crying.

Nicole_artist
10th Apr 2007, 11:22 AM
I don't mean to pressure you buuutt... UPDATE!

Ehem, don't mind me, I'm just your usual crazed fan.

Gerbera
10th Apr 2007, 5:26 PM
A sad update but great anyways!
I think now Menas can live happily again in heaven together with his family ...
I hope poor Caleb will recover soon .. Maybe he'll find a new friend?! :)

White Queen
11th Apr 2007, 7:38 AM
Oh, dear, that was so sad! Poor Gypsy and little Caleb! :(

However, it was great to see another update! You gotta love Easter holidays! :D ;)

Stormy_SC
11th Apr 2007, 5:15 PM
Oh it really does look like a cemetary very much! :gjob:

cory_g
11th Apr 2007, 5:43 PM
Nicole: Welcome! :) Thank you for the comments, they were original enough for me ;) As for Holly's boyfriend, it must be the hairstyle PS: crazed fan is good! :D

callum: Well, I'm gonna think about that :D But if I do put them up, I'll probably do that after I finish the story

snowdrop: Well, it's still dang cute anyway! :D

duh(may I call you that?):Welcome! I really like that song, it's really sad as well... :( if you were already in the sad mood this may be what triggered the tears...

Garnet: Welcome and thank you for loving my story! :lol: Glad you're realistic about the 100% happiness thing...he hee. I do myself like to read happy stuff, but a sad chapter every once in a while is quite necessary ;)

hockeyluver: Here's a hug! *hugs* :D

Annique: I'd like to think that the feelings were brilliantly displayed :lol: But I'm not all too sure about that ;)

Gerbera: We'll see about that. ;) The sun will shine for him as well, at some point or another... (I'm being vague, am I not?)

WQ: Thanks for reading and commenting! :) Yep, yep Easter holidays, but oh-so-short! :P

stromy: That's good! :D Thank you!

msp_teen
11th Apr 2007, 10:51 PM
This is such a good story cory, I absolutely love it, but it is sad that caleb has been through so much and he is only ten, but can't wait until you update....Keep up the Glorious work!!

Nicole_artist
12th Apr 2007, 10:48 AM
Oh goody, I can be a crazed fan :gonemad: :loco: :jig: XD

I've got a sore throat. I think I caught something. :( :sick:

Oh well. *vibrates in anticipation of next chapter, but then has a break to get a cough lolly*

callum91_SC
12th Apr 2007, 10:38 PM
callum: Well, I'm gonna think about that :D But if I do put them up, I'll probably do that after I finish the story

cool! yay! :D:D

DuH_SoHArDCoRE
13th Apr 2007, 12:22 AM
yeah,you can call me duh.:D

ChrstyFarie07_SC
14th Apr 2007, 2:59 AM
Cory when are you going to update?

ErrMiGawd
14th Apr 2007, 5:23 AM
"NOOOOOOOOOO!" How sad...my grandpa died when I was at a young age....poor caleb...poor poor caleb.... =C

onsenmark
14th Apr 2007, 5:30 AM
Before I do a spur-of-the-moment update of my own story: POST MOAR.

Please? ^^;

cory_g
15th Apr 2007, 3:33 PM
msp: Thanks so much! :luff:

Nicole: Yeah, you can be a crazed fan! :D I hope you're feeling better now

Chrsty: Today ;)

Err: I'm sorry to hear that! :( My grandpa died when I was six as well, but I couldn't really grasp the meaning of everything at that age...

mark: Heh, if you insist, I'm gonna post a short update right away! :D

cory_g
15th Apr 2007, 3:35 PM
Chapter 23

Even though Menas’s death had been a hard blow for the whole Evans family, life went on with its natural course. Still, things were very different from the way they used to be: Gypsy was no longer cheerful and upbeat, as much as she tried to hide that for Caleb’s sake, and the boy himself always had a sad, melancholic air about him.

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They both felt lonely in the huge mansion that had once been full to the brim with children.

Shadee had returned to college with Sebastien and had actually managed to get over her grandpa’s death in a few months.

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She continued working harder and harder for her major, her boyfriend as well, as all the teachers kept giving them more and more assignments.

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And, as all storms are followed by sunshine, Sebastien proposed to Shadee on one beautiful autumn day at the begging of their senior year.

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They decided to postpone the wedding though until they finished college and managed to get themselves a house of their own. Nonetheless, they announced their engagement to all their friends and relatives.

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In this manner another two long years passed and graduation finally loomed around the corner. The couple both had top grades and were about to finish college with a “Magna C*m Laude” diploma for Shadee and a “Summa C*m Laude” for Sebastien.

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After a grand graduation, with many words of praise for the outstanding student Sebastien Bronfield, it was time to say goodbye to the crazy college years and finally settle down as adults and return to their hometown.

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Please excuse my poor photoshopping skills on that last pic :)

ending
15th Apr 2007, 3:47 PM
Yay! They're getting married and growing up so fast

Loco
15th Apr 2007, 3:58 PM
Yaaaay, happiness! :D Poor Caleb and Gypsy, though... I hope the wedding will cheer them up. :) Fantastic mini-update! :D

Bad Kay
15th Apr 2007, 4:04 PM
Aw, poor Caleb! He does have one tough life... Loved the update :)

jennywren
15th Apr 2007, 4:53 PM
I swear this wasn't here two seconds ago, great update

Incomplete
15th Apr 2007, 4:57 PM
I just knew Seb was going to pop the question sooner or later. Great update, even though I still feel very sorry for Grandma Gypsy and Caleb. :(

LilacBaby
15th Apr 2007, 4:58 PM
They are so cute together and they are getting married! Poor Gypsy and Caleb though...living in a big place but it's only for two...great update though!

Stormy_SC
15th Apr 2007, 5:40 PM
Yay! They're getting married! Oh how I love love stories! Great job as usual!

Captain THPS4
15th Apr 2007, 5:48 PM
Good update, way to go Seb! Poor Gypsy and Caleb, the fact that they live in a mansion must make them feel even more lonely.....

onsenmark
15th Apr 2007, 6:42 PM
Yay, update!

Although it seems like the college days have gone by a bit too fast... hope this doesn't mean that the story's going to end soon...

Gerbera
15th Apr 2007, 7:14 PM
Shadee and Seb could move in together with Gypsy and Caleb ^^

iampinkstar_SC
15th Apr 2007, 7:22 PM
I'd hate to see it end.

Does Holly come back any time soon? I want Holly to come back into the picture, good old next door neighbour, the kind that all mum's seem to have. (Yes I'd like to see that too!) You must know what I mean, you come home from where ever you've been and Mrs Smith is sitting on your sofa, she knows where the coffee is kept in the cupboard and says things like "I remember when you were small enough i used to change your diapers".

Good update although I agree i'd like to have seen more of Shadee at college? did she joing a greek house?

xxmeghan
15th Apr 2007, 7:31 PM
Yay!
You should totally upload Seb some where. He's pretty.

dbragazza
15th Apr 2007, 9:46 PM
that seb is a hotty.....I can't wait to see how their children will look ..
I hope it'll happen some time soon ;)

Sabb.
16th Apr 2007, 12:11 AM
oh my god i just read the whole story and just want to know what happened next! it's one of the best ones I ever read!! Please update soon :D

Kimmers
16th Apr 2007, 2:03 AM
Great update! I bet they'll make gorgeous children. Lol! Can't wait for the next update!

ChrstyFarie07_SC
16th Apr 2007, 2:35 AM
WHOOOOO! Cory updated! Great update by that way and you could download some suitcases from MTS2, you know...

...Heres one for exsample http://www.modthesims2.com/showthread.php?t=162747

ChrstyFarie07_SC
16th Apr 2007, 2:36 AM
Oh and I see you got Seasons, if i'm right?

Nicole_artist
16th Apr 2007, 5:04 AM
Caleb should be a teenager by now if you ask me.
Great update! I couldn't recognize Shadee with the graduation hat and uniform on! ^_^

jenny
16th Apr 2007, 5:18 AM
Great update!

White Queen
16th Apr 2007, 7:16 AM
Great update! Can't wait for more! ;)

hockeyluver99
16th Apr 2007, 9:59 PM
Yay! i got a hug!(like my 1 millionith of the day from at school and my other friends) lol I love the update its soo cute sebee's!(thats what their kids name should be lol)

simsdrama
17th Apr 2007, 3:37 PM
Great update . I hope you continue this story when Sebastien & Shadee get married . that would be really cool.

auroraspirit
17th Apr 2007, 10:37 PM
How do you know there will be a wedding sims? :D :jk:

Auroraspirit :angel:

onsenmark
17th Apr 2007, 10:40 PM
A wedding would be inevitable, I think... XD

Jennybean
17th Apr 2007, 10:41 PM
Hey I'm your newest reader! I just read the whole thing and I LOVE it!! It's so sad Menas had to die :( But on a happier note I'm very happy about how things turned out for the golden trio! :D Can't wait to see what's next!

Juliette*15
18th Apr 2007, 3:16 AM
I cant wait for the other inevitable to happen... *Cackles evilly* HEHEHEHE!

Nicole_artist
18th Apr 2007, 9:09 AM
I long for the day when in my topic subscription email it says Starting a New Life Chapter 24 Up! ^_^

kristalshyt
20th Apr 2007, 2:23 AM
I cant wait for the other inevitable to happen... *Cackles evilly* HEHEHEHE!

Inevitable??? :confused:

onsenmark
20th Apr 2007, 2:24 AM
Inevitable??? :confused:

Probably the chimes that sometimes come after woohoo. ;)

ChrstyFarie07_SC
22nd Apr 2007, 2:05 AM
Cory I worried again now, you been gone for 1,2,3,4,5,6 days! Are you ok?

Swimluver97
22nd Apr 2007, 5:17 AM
HURRRY! update NOW!

Juliette*15
23rd Apr 2007, 6:41 AM
HURRRY! update NOW!

I agree with that, except it could be stated in a less forceful manner... Such as 'Gee Cory, getting a bit slack are we?' or 'Wow! This sure needs an update... *WinkWink*' Lol :P

~Squash-buddy-ven~
23rd Apr 2007, 9:26 AM
I just got back from vacation and the first thing I did was to see if you had updated, and you had! Squeee!

Great update. I'm feel so bad for poor Caleb, he's not had an easy life and he seems to have a hard time dealing with the loss of Mena. I hope he'll be okay!
On the other hand, I'm thrilled to see that Seb & Shadee are getting married! I can't wait to see their wedding! And to see their children, I bet they'll make gorgeous kiddies...

cory_g
23rd Apr 2007, 12:04 PM
Ok, guys, I’m back! :D I’m sorry, but I won't be able to respond to each of you individually this time…

So, I’ve been away from home for a few days and didn’t have time to let you know. But I’m okay, safe and sound, just a little sleepy! ;)

Welcome to all the new readers, I’m always happy to have new people read and comment! :luff:

Now, on to a few questions asked: I wanted to finish quickly with college because, first of all I used the Maxis made dorms which were ugly and then I hadn’t actually thought of too many things to happen during her college years. But this doesn’t mean the story is nearing its end. I’ve still got a few tricks up my sleeve for adulthood :)

You will also see more of Holly in the near future. Like pinkstar said, she will be Shadee’s neighbour.

Yes, I have “Seasons” :D

And I’m not sure when I’m going to update next. :( seeing that I’ve been away from my dear computer, I didn’t have time to write anything. And it also isn’t holiday anymore… *sniffle*

Stormy_SC
23rd Apr 2007, 5:41 PM
Yay I can't wait! :yippee:

kristalshyt
24th Apr 2007, 12:21 AM
Probably the chimes that sometimes come after woohoo. ;)


Ohhh... I feel stupid now. :dumbfunny

Nicole_artist
24th Apr 2007, 11:48 AM
*sings song to Cadbury tune* Wouldn't it be nice if Cory updated... *wink*

SummerShine
24th Apr 2007, 10:28 PM
And you said you couldn't answer individually this time, but you did, except there was no names...

ChrstyFarie07_SC
24th Apr 2007, 10:37 PM
I knew it! You had Seasons! Lol!

auroraspirit
24th Apr 2007, 10:41 PM
Hey, you did well with the photoshopping :)

Great chapter, certainly life is ticking away for them both, they sound like they would be heading close now to their mid 20's lol.

The engagement too was just so :luff: :lovestruc

Loved the update.

Auroraspirit :angel:

ChrstyFarie07_SC
28th Apr 2007, 7:23 PM
@_@, a little lazy and crazy to day, vut just want to stop by and say, update please?

Angelle
29th Apr 2007, 1:37 AM
he proposed! that's so exciting. =]

ErrMiGawd
29th Apr 2007, 5:43 AM
*Head almost explodes* THEY HAD BETTER HAVE A GOOD WEDDING OR i SWEAR TO BOB I WILL PIXILATE MYSELF AND JUMP INTO YOUR COMPUTER AND DESTORY ALL SIMS! Wow...That was cool... ^.^

Jacuzzi_SC
29th Apr 2007, 10:15 AM
Aww, so cute. Love it as much as ever Cory. *Gives Cory a chocolate shop*

cory_g
30th Apr 2007, 7:12 PM
stormy: I hope to get it written soon ;)

Nicole: Uh oh...I feel bad... But I'm trying to get it done! :D

Summershine: I did? Heh...old habits die hard :lol:

Chrsty: I'm working on it. Please don't hate me for being so late :P School gets the better of me!

auroraspirit: Thank you! :luff: Oh, yeak, you're right! If my calculations are correct, they should be 23 around now... Oh wow! :blink:

Angelle: Glad you liked! ;)

Err: Haha! That cracked me up! :P

Nina: Ohhh!!! Chocolate shop! :luff: *starts typing like crazy*

ChrstyFarie07_SC
1st May 2007, 12:18 AM
I didn't mean that in bad way, if you took it that way, but I just wanted an update, but take your time :D

LizaLizBethy
3rd May 2007, 6:31 AM
This story is fabulous. It's really well written. I get happy every time I see it's been updated :)

onsenmark
5th May 2007, 12:55 AM
In a word: moar.

Oh, and PM me if you get a chance; I need to ask you something, ya?

cory_g
5th May 2007, 7:11 PM
Chrsty: No, I didn't take it in a bad way, I just feel bad myself for not updating in such a long time... :( Thanks for the support! :luff:

Liza: Welcome! :) Thank you for the nice words!

mark: uh om, I hope to get the "moar" up soon enough! :P PM on the way! ;)

onsenmark
5th May 2007, 7:28 PM
Yeah, just replied.

I should get going on "moar" of my own story. I've got pics and plots for the next regular part, and ideas for an omake or two in my head. :)

For now, though. Maple Story is calling to me, and I have a L60 fire mage I need to grind on. XP ack.

ChrstyFarie07_SC
6th May 2007, 5:45 PM
Chrsty: No, I didn't take it in a bad way, I just feel bad myself for not updating in such a long time... :( Thanks for the support! :luff:


Ok thats great! But don't feel bad, everyone has some ups and downs :D

nikki_colie
6th May 2007, 6:16 PM
aw he proposed finally!!!!

jennywren
6th May 2007, 7:25 PM
well cory at least you don't have a deadline to complete the actual story itself! I've got till september to complete mine, and I'm still working on the next chapter, I've finished 43 pictures so far, so, fans of can't go on, you've got a good chapter coming up!

Gallowsraven
6th May 2007, 8:10 PM
Yay!!! The updates have been so filled with that warm and fuzzy feeling...good job!
Too bad about Grandpa dying......*sniffles*

Glad to hear there'll be more to the story!

Gallows ^^"

leighthesim_SC
7th May 2007, 6:07 PM
aaaahhhh wow i think i read this before but i didn't comment but this is a great story i can't wait for more

jennywren
8th May 2007, 6:43 PM
you're right there gallows, by the way, may I say that your avatar is half freaky yet half cool?

maxpax318
8th May 2007, 9:11 PM
Very very very good, I have just read the whole lot. It is very well written - great job. :)

I'm just wondering if Shadee is/will be avaliable to download anywhere as she is a very nice sim who would fit into my game very well. :)

Dragon Guardian
8th May 2007, 10:02 PM
Yay for Shadee! She's happy!
But... poor Gypsy :( The house will never be the same without Menas.

Gallowsraven
9th May 2007, 3:22 AM
Jennywren: Thanks for the comment about my avie! Yes....Mr. M. Manson can look slightly freaky sometimes....lol...

Can't wait for an update!!! And once again Cory, Shadee and Seb are really cute together!....:D

Gallows ^^"

kawaiimeg_SC
11th May 2007, 4:13 AM
Great story just read the whole thing. Nice job!

cory_g
12th May 2007, 8:56 PM
mark: Okies, I did what you asked me for and I really hope I'm not too late! @_@

Chrsty: Thank you for understanding! :luff:

nikki: Welcome! :D I am a hopeless romantic sometimes, heh

Jennywren: Oh, how I hate deadlines! :( Good luck with your story!

Gallows: I'm really happy you enjoyed! :) I do love giving you guys warm, fuzzy feelings, but a few bumps once in a while make everything more dynamic ;)

leigh: thank you very much! Comments are really what keep me going! :D

max: Welcome! :) Thank you for reading, enjoying and commenting! :P About Shadee, I shall ask shuldig_seiben for permission to upload after I finish the story and if she's okay with it, I'll put her up

Dragon: You're very right there, this will be shown in today's chapter quite a lot ;)

kawaiimeg: Welcome and thank you! :luff: I'm reaggy glad you didn't waste your time reading this! :lol:

cory_g
12th May 2007, 8:57 PM
Chapter 24

The yellow taxi pulled up in front of the huge, oh-so-familiar mansion belonging to Shadee’s grandmother. Even though nothing gave it away, the house’s air seemed to have changed considerably over the past few years, becoming a little gloom and not as warm as it used to be.

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Without rushing, Sebastien paid the taxi driver, then proceeded to take out the luggage from the trunk.

‘Okay…you ready?’ Shadee smiled and shook her head in the direction of the front door.

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Hardly had the young woman pushed open the door, that a big, red headed someone burst out of the house and almost made her fall backwards with the strength of his bounce.

‘Caleb!’ Shadee gasped for air, stretching a hand to ruffle the teenager’s head ‘Wow! Look at you! Look how tall you got!’

She took a step backwards to eye him carefully from head to foot. The almost fourteen year-old boy was grinning widely at his beloved “niece”. It was incredible how he had grown over the past months since they had last seen each other.

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‘Shadee! Seb! I missed you guys!’ Caleb’s voice was significantly deeper and manlier ‘Grandma told me you two are going to stay here until you find a place of your own. That’s going to be so great!’

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They all entered the living room. The place hadn’t actually changed at all. A wonderful smell drafted from the kitchen, making Shadee’s stomach grumble loudly.

‘Surprise!’ Shadee gave her grandmother a peck on the cheek and squeezed her tightly before examining her as well.

Comparing to Caleb who had literarily bloomed, Gypsy had withered considerably. It was the same change that had destroyed Menas at the early stages of his illness: deep wrinkles creasing her once smooth face, hair thinner and much whiter than the last time. Her bright green eyes were still warm and loving though, making Shadee feel welcome after all.

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‘Ah, I’m glad to see you two love birds have arrived safe and sound.’ the old lady smiled and gave them both a big hug ‘I’m almost finished with dinner, so just give me a few minutes. You’ve got enough time to take a shower and freshen up.’

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They carried their suitcases upstairs to Shadee’s old room and were delighted to feel the wonderful smell of freshly changed sheets and general cleanliness. Sebastien took out some clean clothes out of his bag and rushed to the bathroom, leaving Shadee to enjoy the return to her home.

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The departure from her room seemed so distant, so many things had happened in-between; but being there at that moment made her feel as if only a few seconds had passed.

Dinner was spent in a very comfortable manner. Gypsy inquired about their plans for the future and offered to give them the necessary money for purchasing a house, but they both refused.

‘I really couldn’t do that, Mrs. Evans!’ Sebastien shook his head ‘Me and Shadee talked about this several times and we’ve got a very clear plan of what to do.’

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‘Yeah, gran! We wouldn’t be able to take your money!’

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The old lady waved the words away with a sway of her hand.

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‘Nonsense! I’ve got enough money to live one hundred years from now without any problems! But I can see you’re too stubborn to accept that. I insist though that you accept this offer of mine: promise to let me borrow you the money for the house once you find a suitable one and you’ll give it back to me in monthly rates, or something similar.’

Shadee smiled and nodded, giving Sebastien’s hand a tight, loving squeeze over the table.

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‘In the meantime, you are forbidden to leave the house!’ Gypsy winked, giving both Seb and Shadee another plateful of food.

***

cory_g
12th May 2007, 9:00 PM
Having Shadee and Sebastien in the house put Gypsy in a considerably better mood. The same could have been said about Caleb, who now had a male companion to go to different matches to, talk about girls and sports and get some valuable pieces of advice from. This usually left Shadee and her grandmother alone at home, baking cookies and sharing memories.

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It was one of those days when both of them had remained home alone, that Gypsy asked Shadee to join her for a cup of coffee and a chit chat. She didn’t seem to be in too much of a good mood.

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‘I’ve been thinking about selling the house.’ She started, turning the cup in her hands without drinking from it ‘For Caleb’s sake, I mean. I just know he hates the place, even if he doesn’t say it. Every single corner reminds him of his father. So I thought I should sell it and move to a quieter place, in the country perhaps, to a small, cosy house with an orchard… It would be so much better for him! But I can’t! I just can’t leave this house behind!’

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Shadee didn’t say anything. She knew her grandmother didn’t need her to talk, just listen to what she had to say.

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‘I feel so selfish! As a mother, I should be doing what is best for my child, but I can’t! It’s filled with memories, not only sad ones, but also the happy memories of his childhood, of your childhood, of the early years of my marriage…’ she stopped again and took a hearty sip of hot coffee ‘Shadee, honey, I’d like you to promise me something!’

‘Sure, go ahead, Gran!’

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‘Please promise you will sell the house and take Caleb with you after I die!’

Shadee’s eyes widened and she stared at her grandmother, as if the possibility of her dying was the most improbable thing.

‘Oh – okay. But that won’t happen too soon!’ her expression softened ‘You’re healthy and look at leat ten years younger!’

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That had been a lie, but she couldn’t actually say the truth when the old woman was so depressed and blue.

‘You know as well as I do that I don’t have much time left.’ Gyspy smiled, not looking her granddaughter in the eyes ‘Not because I am sick or anything, but because of this here.’ She touched her chest softly, hinting at her broken heart.

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They changed the subject quickly afterwards and never brought it up again.
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Looking forward to your feedback! :anime:

jenny
12th May 2007, 9:03 PM
yeah, an update!...great as usual Cory:)

cory_g
12th May 2007, 9:06 PM
Thank you, jenny! :)

energy_genergy_SC
12th May 2007, 9:09 PM
Yay, new chapter! but poor Grandma Gypsy. :(

nikki_colie
12th May 2007, 10:02 PM
YAY!!!!updates!! i knew somehting good was going to happen today. but i feel really badlly for grandma gypsy. :( great update!

Gerbera
12th May 2007, 10:09 PM
Yay! Another update :D Thanks!
I hope Gypsy won't die to soon ... I'd hate to see her go ... I'd say let Shaydee and Seb move in with her and then they'll all live happily ever after :P

hockeyluver99
12th May 2007, 11:11 PM
yay! Another cute update! But I dont want Grandma Gypsy to die too soon :(

Mordant17
13th May 2007, 4:15 AM
An update! This was a really nice update.

xXharp_babyXx
13th May 2007, 4:20 AM
XD Caleb's gorgeous!
That was a really sweet update, but I don't want Gypsy to die :(

White Queen
13th May 2007, 6:51 AM
That was a lovely update, Cory! :anime:
Shadee, Seb & Caleb have all grown so beautifully (especially Seb :giggler: )
And I really feel for Grandma Gypsy... :(

cory_g
13th May 2007, 8:34 AM
Katie: Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

nikki: :P I'm glad I made your day a little happier!

Gerbera: You're welcome! :luff: But what can I say? No one lives for ever! ;)

hockeyluver: Thank you! :D

Mordant: Thanks, glad you enjoyed! ;)

Loren: He, the pictures I took of Caleb didn't exactly show his features in a good light, but you'll see him better later on! :)

WQ: Thank you! :) I'm quite proud of Seb myself, wish he wasn't only pixels! :giggler:

Stormy_SC
13th May 2007, 8:37 AM
I don't want Grandma Gypsey to die! :weep: Shadee and Seb should inherit the house with Caleb. Awesome update!

Loco
13th May 2007, 11:14 AM
Yay, update! :D Ah, they're all so beautiful. Caleb, Grandma Gypsy (still), Shadee and Seb - my heart still skips a beat every time I see him, I swear. ;) But poor Grandma Gypsy, that's so sad... :( Fantastic update, as ever! :D

leighthesim_SC
13th May 2007, 11:17 AM
yay update... its very emotional and i want to hear more, can't wait for the next update

~Squash-buddy-ven~
13th May 2007, 11:22 AM
Yay an update! I have been wondering when it would come! And today was my lucky day.. Your update was excactly what I needed today, a little cheer-up! Thank you! :)

Caleb is so cute! No, gorgeous is the word.. I just totally love redheads.. :D It's a shame that Gypsy's talking about her dying but I hope that it doesn't come too soon, she's a lovely lady! I can't wait to see Shadee and Sebastien settle down, and maybe have kids! They are going to have kids, right? They certainly would make wonderful kiddies! :D

amalinaball
13th May 2007, 12:32 PM
Aww...that was so sad. :(
I wish I had a lovely grandma like Gypsy - my gran thinks I'm weird and smokes all over us when we visit.
But Caleb really grew up nicely! Hey, I hope he gets some "teenage time" soon, because he'll be babsitting the Seb'n'Shadee babies I presume. (C'mon, they're too cute together NOT to have kids).
That update was really good. :D If a little sad.

jennywren
13th May 2007, 1:10 PM
aww that is really sad for her, such a hard desicion! great update cory, I demand another! :P

Captain THPS4
13th May 2007, 4:34 PM
Poor Gypsy! I'll be sad when her passing comes. :( Caleb looks great as a teen. It looks like as if Shadee is winking in the ninth picture, is she supposed to be?

ChrstyFarie07_SC
13th May 2007, 5:58 PM
YOU UPDATED!!!! Weee! She updated! I'm so happy! And great update by the way!

HRAKLHS_SC
13th May 2007, 7:59 PM
Well im a MAD fan of your story!All i have to say is WOW!!Keep the good work!:)Oh and please update!!!:):)
(Sorry for the mistakes!)

ErrMiGawd
13th May 2007, 10:23 PM
oh my...poor gyspsy ever since Menas died she has realized that she might die soon...*sniff sniff*....please update soon!

SpacemanHPSpiff
13th May 2007, 10:23 PM
O my, I thought I had responded to the last chapter, but I never had! So, here's quick thoughts on all of them - firstly, wow! I'm glad that Shadee and Seb are still doing so well together (Seb is now freakin' adorable-er! :lol: ), and it's nice that you showed Holly happy with her guy in her university... They're all happy! Hooray! I'm super excited about Seb's proposal! I hope they have a wonderful wedding.

Next - Oh my word, I almost cried when I read that Menas had died! Grr, Cory, that wasn't nice! *tackles* I feel SO bad for Gypsy, as she's doing the worst from it. And poor Caleb (another amazingly cute guy! How do you do it?)... I'm glad to see that he's doing well at least. Eee, he's so big now!

Please don't kill Gypsy yet! *hides* She's too adorable to die as well! :lol: Ah, it's so sad to see her age like this...

More blahing- yay for your sets (your one the funeral was in was simply gorgeous...). I love how direct your pictures are, and how much expression is in them! It's amazing, you just keep improving!

Cory, thanks for the lovely update! This story is progressing soo interestingly...

I feel bad for not writing sooner! *hide*

Elena

Juliette*15
13th May 2007, 10:24 PM
Eeek! Gypsy's dying, and caleb is so CUTE! Rivalling a little Sebastien!

auroraspirit
14th May 2007, 6:10 AM
A broken heart is hard to mend :( Hoping that Shadee gets to enjoy many riches in hier life before something happens to her grandma especially if Shadee is able to give her great grand children.

Auroraspirit :angel:

ChrstyFarie07_SC
15th May 2007, 2:05 AM
SAY WHAT! Grandma Gypsey is dying? Whats all this talk about her dying! I don't want her to die, WHAAAA!

gyrobot
15th May 2007, 5:57 AM
Its supposed to be a legacy story of sorts. So death in the family is kind of expected

darksixx
15th May 2007, 8:59 AM
Awww... Very touching. Lovely update.

Nicole_artist
15th May 2007, 11:52 AM
Aw... don't die grandma!
It's such a beautiful house... why wouldn't you like it? ;)
BTW, the title still says Chapter 23.
And, at the risk of sounding cliched, UPDATE! :D

Kyri
17th May 2007, 9:17 PM
I really really love your story. Read through it in 2 hours, now I have to wait for updates...

I wish I could write like that

Gallowsraven
18th May 2007, 11:22 PM
*Weeps loudly at computer desk*
Man...that was *sniff* sad!!! Poor, poor Grandma Gypsy!! She's been nothing but sweet....*sniffles*

PLEASE DON"T KILL HER!!!! WAAA!
She could become a vampire...or..or..e-even a zombie....:(

Good, emotional update though!
Gallows ^^"