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cory_g
19th May 2007, 09:01 AM
stomy: They will inherit, but grandma Gypsy made her promise she would sell the house afterwards ;)

Loco: I’m glad you still like them all! :luff: Thank you!

leigh: I’ll see what I can do about that! :)

Pernille: I’m just happy to cheer you up, hun! You’re very welcome! I really do have a thing for redheads though, but I mostly channel this towards female sims… About the kids…gee, I dunno! :P

amalina: :lol: You cracked me up! Hmmm…I don’t know if they’ll have kids or not, just wait and see ;)

Jennywren: Thank you! :)

Captain: Well, I just thought it was an awfully cute pic and somewhat went with what she said… :giggler: She wasn’t necessarily supposed to wink :D

Chrsty: Oh yay! I’m glad to have made you happy! :jig: thank you!

HRAKLHS: Welcome! :) Thank you very much for all the nice comments! They’re my fuel :D I hope you’ll continue reading

Err: Yup, it was Menas’ death that brought her down so much…

cory_g
19th May 2007, 09:02 AM
HP: Wow, another wordy comment from you! :jig: To resume it all, I’m really glad you enjoyed reading the last few chapters! :luff: Thank you!

Juliette: I gotta take a few more pics of him! :giggler:

aurora: I’ll make sure she enjoys her life at least a little bit! :)

Gyrobot: Welcome! :D It’s not exactly a legacy story, even though at one point in my game it was, it’s just the story of a family

darksixx: Thank you! :)

Nicole: Oops, thank you for pointing that out! :D

Kyri: Welcome! :D I’m happy you took your time to read my story! :luff: Yay, I write nicely! :D

Gallows: Zombie Gypsy…hmmm *imagines* Nah, not exactly the best image! :P Thank you! :)

maxpax318
19th May 2007, 02:03 PM
Very very nice update, looking forward to the next one!! :)

LilacBaby
19th May 2007, 02:08 PM
Another great update!
I hope Gypsy will be okay...:)

Juliette*15
20th May 2007, 10:29 AM
Juliette: I gotta take a few more pics of him! :giggler:

Indeed you do!!! He's gorgeous! Almost as good as Sebby was... Actually... I think there may be a near slide in Cuteness power...

cory_g
20th May 2007, 06:09 PM
max: thank you! :D

Lily: Thanks! :) I guess you'll have to find out in the future ;)

Juliette: Your wish is my command! :P

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And the rugged side of Caleb :giggler:

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Hope you liked!

MrsNsh06
20th May 2007, 07:08 PM
Oh he's gorgeous! They grow up so fast don't they? :)

Gerbera
20th May 2007, 07:09 PM
oh he is hot! thanks for the picture, I hope to see more of him soon ... :D

happycowlover
20th May 2007, 07:12 PM
Wow, Caleb's hot! LOL Great story cory_g! :) Are you planning on making any more after this one ends?

onsenmark
20th May 2007, 11:19 PM
Is it me, or is Caleb with a bad attitude woefully out of character?

ChrstyFarie07_SC
21st May 2007, 02:12 AM
Oooo, I like, lol, do have him up for download, and could I use one of the pics as an avie? Please? :D

White Queen
21st May 2007, 07:12 AM
What a cutie!!! I just love his eyes! :lovestruc

Loco
21st May 2007, 02:15 PM
Wow :blink: I love him! I want him! The 'bad boy' pictures are funny :D

LilacBaby
21st May 2007, 02:20 PM
He's so adorable even in his ruged pics. He's so cute! :)

~Squash-buddy-ven~
21st May 2007, 04:01 PM
oh, Caleb's so hot! I want him too! :D

leighthesim_SC
22nd May 2007, 04:38 PM
wow loving celeb

pompom
22nd May 2007, 05:29 PM
CORY! ^^ He's cool but I think the more soft personality like the first two pictures suits him better. Buuuuuuuuuuut thats just me and it's your story! But I'll luvv you either way xD^^

cory_g
22nd May 2007, 08:17 PM
MrsNsh: Oh, yes they do…but they’re only pixels right? :D That doesn’t stop me from getting attached to them though

Gerbera: You’re welcome and I’m glad you like! ;) I’ve got something coming for him as well!

happycowlover: :giggler: Thank you! Now that you ask: yes, I’ve been brooding over a new story inspired by some characters in an anime series I watched a few months ago. I really hope I’ll be able to get it started as well. :)

mark: Yeah, you’re quite right. Little Caleb was never meant to be a bad boy, but I really like playing with my characters’ appearences :D

Chrsty: Sure you can use the pics as your avvie, just choose whichever you like :) I’ll upload Caleb and some of the others in my story after I finish it ;)

WQ: :) .I used to really love them when I first made Caleb, but now I kinda got bored of them…the evolution of custom content :lol:

Loco: You shall have him sometime in the near future ;)

Lily: Glad you like! :anime:

Pernille: Well, he will be up for download after I finish with the story. If you still want him then, he will be all yours! ;)

leigh: :giggler: Happy you like him!

pompom: Well, you’re right; I like the soft personality better as well, maybe because he was, so to say, designed to be so ;) Haha, but I’m glad you love me either way :P

ChrstyFarie07_SC
22nd May 2007, 09:50 PM
Yay!!! I love you! :lovestruc

hockeyluver99
22nd May 2007, 09:50 PM
hes HOT!i like his bad side :)

ChrstyFarie07_SC
22nd May 2007, 09:59 PM
I put him on my avie! I kinda brighten it and sharpen it so yeah, but I couldn't fit the credit :(
EDIT: Once again he looks so cute! I'm in love with pixels :lovestruc :grouphug:

Stormy_SC
23rd May 2007, 07:55 AM
Caleb is getting pretty hott!

cory_g
23rd May 2007, 06:00 PM
Chrsty: Love ya too, hun! ;) I really like how it looks, goes nicely under your username! :D

hockeyluver: I'm glad you like! :D The "bad side" was purely done for fun, though he wouldn't look half as bad being bad

stormy: Heh, these pics that I posted are somewhat a view into Caleb's near future, 'cause he's more mature looking than his age ;)

ChrstyFarie07_SC
23rd May 2007, 10:34 PM
Really! Thank you! I love you too, again! :lovestruc

Annique
24th May 2007, 09:19 AM
Wow, this is getting better and better. I feel a bit sad about Gypsy's life coming to a close though...

cory_g
24th May 2007, 12:09 PM
Chrsty: you're welcome ;)

Annique: Thanks! :luff: I'll also be really sad when Gypsy dies... *sniffle*

onsenmark
24th May 2007, 10:22 PM
Chrsty: you're welcome ;)

Annique: Thanks! :luff: I'll also be really sad when Gypsy dies... *sniffle*

I know the feeling; I went into my self-Sim's house today, and he and his wife have another ten days to go... :(

Juliette*15
25th May 2007, 01:08 AM
Juliette: Your wish is my command! :P
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Hope you liked!

I like my wishes now... I love his hair in the top two!!! Uh! Gorgeous... We're really gonna have to set up a battle of the hot boys around Shadee comp! Lol.. Where on earth did you find that hair? (Indeed I did like :D)

ChrstyFarie07_SC
25th May 2007, 02:31 PM
Is Granny really dying? I don't want her to die :(

cory_g
26th May 2007, 10:41 AM
mark: That's sad :( But unlike real life you can always prolong their remaining days using the elixir of life! :D

Juliette: I'm glad you liked! :luff: Caleb's top hair is from peggysims2.net and it's unfortunately pay...

Chrsty: I'm afraid her days are drawing to an end...but she will not be forgotten! :)

ChrstyFarie07_SC
26th May 2007, 05:03 PM
Whaaaa! :cry: She's gonna *sniff* die :cry:

Elyssa
26th May 2007, 05:07 PM
Oh man I rediscovered this today! I was addicted before but now I'm totally neeeeeeeding an update :)

Shadee can't sell that house! It's a family heirloom! That house is too gorgeous to get rid of!!! ;)

Kyri
27th May 2007, 11:51 AM
Wow, Caleb is really hot! As a kid I thought he was gorgeous, but now :jaw:

I don't want you to finish the story because I love reading it, but on the other hand I'm waiting for the uploads and therefore you have at some time finish the story... How difficult this is :blink:

iampinkstar_SC
28th May 2007, 01:03 PM
Hello!! Loving the story, the emotion in it is great!

I am a little confused about Caleb though, we met him as toddler when Shadee was in Highschool, and no more than about 8 years later he's 14 years old?
Also they got engaged senior year and two years later they graduate?

Sorry I know it might seem picky and I apologise but I am a stickler for little details.
Can't wait for chapter 25!

cory_g
28th May 2007, 09:09 PM
Chrsty: :( awww....don't be sad...even sim life has its ups and downs

Elyssa: :luff: I'm really happy to hear you've rediscovered my story and still like it! I don't know what Shadee will do with the house (okay, I actually do know :D ) 'cause she's promised her gran she would sell it, but it's still a nice house though!

Kyri: :D Glad you like! Heh...I know the feeling of wanting something to end and continue at the same time!

pinkstar: Rewelcome! :giggler: I'm really glad you're attentive at all the details, I'm usually so as well. You don't need to apologise! :D Picky = Good!

So...let me think a little and reread some of the parts: when Caleb was adopted he was about 4-5 yrs. At first, I have to admit I had planned for him to be younger, so there may still be a few incompatibilities with some parts of certain chapters. This makes him 10-11 yrs younger than Shadee, which means that he is somewhere between 13-14 yrs old. This is the thing I usually keep in mind ;)

The other thing with the graduation: when I said the thing along the lines of "two years had passed in this manner..." I meant that two years had passed since Menas' death and then I described the most important events that had happened in the meantime. :)

Sorry for being so inexplicit in my writing, I sometimes forget to put my thoughts into words in a logical manner :giggler: I hope everything is clearer now!

ChrstyFarie07_SC
29th May 2007, 02:46 AM
Yeah, I know, but i'm sooo addicted to this, and its like I'm really there

cory_g
30th May 2007, 07:21 PM
I'm glad I managed to induce this feeling to you, Chrsty! :D

Stormy_SC
30th May 2007, 07:52 PM
Having cory g withdrawals! :jig: Well not you, the story, actually lol. *Praying for the next update*

ChrstyFarie07_SC
30th May 2007, 08:02 PM
*joins stormy and prays* I hope she updates, I hope she updates

cory_g
3rd Jun 2007, 09:02 PM
stormy and Chrsty, thank you for still hanging around, dears! :luff: I've written the next chapter, I just need to take the pics! :D

Gerbera
3rd Jun 2007, 09:10 PM
Yay, can't wait! :D

cory_g
4th Jun 2007, 03:35 PM
Your wait has paid off Gerbera! :D

Chapter 25

Two weeks after having come back to their hometown, Sebastien found himself a job at the local hospital as an intern.

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The hours were long, the work hard and the pay not high enough, but it was still worth it as he was able to do what he enjoyed. Shadee, on the other hand, preferred to work at home, painting in the peace and quiet of her room.

They also started visiting different houses that were for sale with the help of their trustworthy estate agent Phil, but didn’t exactly manage to find something to their taste. They continued to live at Gypsy’s house well into the summer.

‘Seb.’

It was a lazy late August afternoon and Shadee was quickly running up the stairs to hers and Sebastien’s room. She was wearing a cute bathing suit and water was still dripping from her hair, all over the wooden steps and the carpet.

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‘Seb –’ She stopped for a few moments to catch her breath, then continued ‘We’ve got to go to the supermarket! I was swimming around in the pool when I thought about trying out to cook something nice for this evening! Something sweet!’

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Sebastien yawned widely and put his anatomy book down ‘If we really have to…’

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He trudged to the closet and rummaged around in search for some clean clothes, while Shadee ushered him to hurry up. She rubbed her hair with a white towel, chose a skimpy outfit perfect for the hot summer day and applied the minimum amount of make-up.

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‘Still not ready?’ she shook her head energetically at the sight of a still undressed Sebastien ‘You know…I wanna make your favorite – strawberry tart!’ with a wide grin, the young woman watched her boyfriend suddenly move at the speed of lighting.

Ten minutes later the couple was wandering around the nearest supermarket, hunting down the needed ingredients.

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They were a little confused about the recipe, not having actually made a list of everything necessary for the fruit tart.

‘So…I remember we needed flower, eggs, vanilla essence and…umm…’

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‘Milk, maybe?’ Sebastien suggested hopefully, but Shadee shook her head, biting her bottom lip, as if to punish herself for having forgotten everything.

‘I hate it when I’m all confused about things!’ she pouted ‘What kind of wife am I going to be for you, Seb? I can’t even remember the ingredients for a simple cake recipe.’

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The man smiled and just hugged her lovingly; an answer was superfluous. Shadee’s face suddenly lighted up with joy.

=============> continued in next post

cory_g
4th Jun 2007, 03:37 PM
‘I know! Strawberries!’ she slapped her forehead playfully ‘The obvious! I’ll go fetch them, hun, you take care of the flower and baking powder.’

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She rushed behind a corner and made her way towards the fresh fruit aisle, humming loudly and not exactly paying attention to things around her. Turning yet another corner, she almost collided with a blond, slightly balding, beer-bellied man.

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‘Oh, so sorry! Didn’t see you!’ the young woman excused herself and wanted to resume her search for strawberries, when the man stopped her.

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‘Hey there, pretty babe! Wouldn’t have minded if you did actually bump into me…you could bump into me aaaanytime you wanted…’ he licked his lips seductively and his bright blue eyes wandered from Shadee’s slender calves, up to her round breasts, where they rested greedily and full of desire.


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’What a creep!’ she shuddered inside and prepared to leave again, when a somewhat familiar female voice grumbled loudly.

‘Would you stop hitting on other women! At least when I’m there with you, you b@stard!’

Shadee spun round and gapped in awe at the well-rounded woman, having a row with her seemingly unfaithful husband. She knew her, she knew her quite well, but she just couldn’t believe her eyes.

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‘You always do this!’ the woman barked angrily, hitting her spouse with her cheap, fake designer purse ‘The moment you see a pretty woman you start drooling all over her, as if she would even look at you, you buffoon! Three years of marriage! Just three and you already started to run around after other chicks! Don’t you even care about the kids?’

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She stopped for a few moments, slashing him open with her fiercely narrowed eyes then continued her tirade, oblivious to the painfulness of the situation.

‘I should have never married you! My daddy should have never trusted your idiot of a father! I would still be living in my million dollar villa had it not been for your father’s stupid business idea! It’s only his fault! And your fault! You filthy scumb@g!’

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She gave him one more purse hit over the head before Shadee regained her use of voice.

‘Regina? Brandon?’ she looked from one face to another, unable to believe her eyes. It just didn’t seem possible for these two to be the same she had known in highschool.

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‘Do we know you, missy?’ the blond woman barked, tilting her head to one side and examining her face.

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‘It’s Shadee.’ She grinned, obviously superior ‘We used to go to highschool together.’

An icy stare that could freeze up an ocean. The once gorgeous and popular Regina stood there in her baggy, second-hand clothes which tried to cover her flab, looking worse than ever and having married a loser of a guy who had also proved to be a skirt-chasing drunkard. Oh, the irony!

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Not loosing a moment, she grabbed the giddy Brandon by the sleeve and dragged him towards the exit, without bothering to say anything to Shadee.

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‘You forgot to give me your number!’ was the last thing she heard before Regina ushered him briskly out of the supermarket.

‘Well…that really was an interesting encounter!’ Sebastien emerged chuckling from behind a stand, having followed the whole scene ‘Who would have thought they’d end up like this?’

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Both him and Shadee couldn’t help but laugh at the funny trick fate had played them. A nice way to end a rather enjoyable summer day.




I hope you enjoyed & please leave comments! ;)

Anne_SC
4th Jun 2007, 03:51 PM
LOL! That was awesome.I still love Seb :D

And Regina and Brandon are... xD Weird.

Stormy_SC
4th Jun 2007, 03:54 PM
Yes, another update!!

I knew those popular kids would end up to be even more losers. Seb is sooo cute! *Drools* Great update!

pompom
4th Jun 2007, 03:55 PM
Yeaah! Karma! ^^ Great Chapter Croy! <3

cory_g
4th Jun 2007, 03:58 PM
Anne: :lol: I agree with you there! I dunno why, but I feel very optimistic after writing this chapter! :D

stormy: :giggler: I hope you noticed the seemingly unintentional pic of Seb in his undies...

pompom: What goes around, comes sround, huh? ;) Glad you liked!

Gerbera
4th Jun 2007, 04:04 PM
Haha, Regina and Brandon got what they deserved :P
Thanks for the update :)

moonlitsmiles5
4th Jun 2007, 04:21 PM
I haven't followed your story for a while but I finished the rest of it today and I thought I'd say what an awesome story. Thanks for the update!!! I can't believe how much Regina and Brandon have changed. Keep up the good work!!!

Tusnelda7
4th Jun 2007, 04:30 PM
Great story! May i ask where you got Shadee's hair from in the last update?

leighthesim_SC
4th Jun 2007, 05:11 PM
omg regina and brandon i can't beleivee it regina turned out do ugly hehe

great chappie though

~Squash-buddy-ven~
4th Jun 2007, 05:53 PM
Haha.. I laughed really hard at this one! :laugh: It was one of the best chapters yet. I love how Brandon and Regina turned out, guess they kinda deserved it. And I can't get over Seb. He is just yum! :lovestruc

You rock Cory! :bow: Can't wait for the next update!

Stormy_SC
4th Jun 2007, 06:36 PM
stormy: :giggler: I hope you noticed the seemingly unintentional pic of Seb in his undies...

Oh, you know I did! :lovestruc

amalinaball
4th Jun 2007, 06:43 PM
How fabulous! If only in real life the people you disliked in high-school always ended up so ugly...sigh...ah well.

Hmm...I'm probably wrong, but they say that when you crave something sweet you're about to have a baby girl! Maybe there IS a baby round the corner for Seb and Shadee. Nice update anywho!

ChrstyFarie07_SC
4th Jun 2007, 07:40 PM
Wooo! You updated! Lol, its really funny how Brandon ended up, cause from what I remember she used to have biiigg crush on him! COULD not stop laughing, after that update! I really wondering what Grandma Gypsy and Caleb are doing, and did she make the tart cake yet? lol

Dragon Guardian
4th Jun 2007, 07:54 PM
Haha. Brandon got owned xD
And Regina deserved it. :)

Captain THPS4
4th Jun 2007, 10:18 PM
lol I feel the same as Shadee and Seb about how Regina and Brandon turned out! Very funny how those two popular kids turned out so bad. :laugh:

jenny
5th Jun 2007, 02:14 AM
great update Cory.....:D

Juliette*15
5th Jun 2007, 08:23 AM
Hehe... Thoose two are so deserving... And Sebby Sebby Sebby, your such a smart boy

auroraspirit
5th Jun 2007, 09:28 AM
Life has a funny way of flipping things around and giving it a good shake on you.

In Regina's case, she wasn't the most nicest person at all towards Shadee.

What comes around, goes around.

Auroraspirit :angel:

Loco
5th Jun 2007, 10:25 AM
Eeee! Update! They're so sweet together. Haha, it's so funny about Regina and Brandon! Sebby is wonderful, as ever. :D Fantastic update!

.~*Iris*~.
5th Jun 2007, 12:30 PM
looool how unexpected and funny!! How fat and ugly they got!! and Brandon lost his hair ahaha! :) loved it, great update cory!!

and seb... *does the swoon reaction that sims do when there's someone HOT in the rrom*

Nicole_artist
5th Jun 2007, 12:47 PM
Yay! You updated! Hehe, that brought a warm and fuzzy feeling to me for some abstract reason. *cough* annoyingpopularpeople *cough* ;)

cory_g
6th Jun 2007, 03:05 PM
Gerbera: You’re right :D You’re welcome!

moonlit: Well, I’m happy you’re back! Thank you and you’re welcome :) I do hope the change isn’t to drastic for only four years…but considering what they’ve been through :P

Franziska: Thanks! :) Her hair is the newest donation one from Peggy’s site

Leigh: Well, they got fat, lost some hair and are in a general shabby state :giggler: Thank you

Pernille: Oh yay! I’m glad you liked it that much! :D

Amalina: Well…as long as it’s a story we can do whatever we please with the characters, especially punish them :giggler: I feel powerful! Baby girl? Geez…I dunno! :P

Chrsty: He he he! Glad I made you laugh! :Dshe did cake the cake when they got home and everyone got a slice :P The rest went into the fridge as leftovers ;)

Bren: I really like to think that everyone gets what they deserve :D

cory_g
6th Jun 2007, 03:05 PM
Captain: Like I said…what goes around, comes around! ;)

Jenny: Thank you! :luff:

Juliette: Well…Seb’s really changed from the kid he used to be at the beginning of highschool! :D

aurora: You are very right. Even though such lucky things don’t happen too often in real life, we could at least balance that out in stories ;)

Loco: Thank you! :luff:

Laura: I’m glad you enjoyed the changes! ;) I do hope the two still bear somewhat of a resemblance to their past “form” :lol:Thanks! And BTW, when are you going to update that wonderful story of yours, huh? :P

Nicole: I have to admit it also gave me a warm fuzzy feeling by taking pics for it. Maybe it’s the popular-girl-who-was-mean-to-the-main-character-goes-down thing that made me so ecstatic! :P

emopunk_boii5
6th Jun 2007, 03:23 PM
OOOHHH! MORE MORE MORE!! :beer: HAHAHA. Poor regina! HAHAHA :kami: MORE UPDATE!! :3

White Queen
6th Jun 2007, 04:02 PM
LOL, Cory, that was a cute chapter! If only this could happen more often in RL! ;)

girl5874
6th Jun 2007, 09:42 PM
Wow, I can't beleive it... that was hilarious! Karma is a sweet thing sometimes eh?

Juliette*15
6th Jun 2007, 10:29 PM
I still cant believe you were gonna kill Shadee with the rest of the fam....

onsenmark
7th Jun 2007, 01:01 AM
Aw, poor Regina n' Brandon... *snerk* XD

cory_g
7th Jun 2007, 02:18 PM
emo: Well, I'm glad you could find it in your heart to pity Regina :lol: Even when's she's down, she's still cocky! :P

WQ: Thank you! :luff: One can only hope, huh?

girl: Welcome! :) Yep it is! :P I also like to think it exists lol

Juliette: Heh...she had huge eyes when she was a kid, like most of the family actually :D But with a little tweaking (ok, maybe a little more) after she became a YA, she's much prettier!

mark: This reminds me of a sintagm "poor little rich girl" :lol:

tweety64801
9th Jun 2007, 01:28 AM
Great job can't wait for the rest of the story sort of left me hanging. You actually inspired me to maybe do a story of my own. Got any tips for someone thinking of writing their own?

ChrstyFarie07_SC
9th Jun 2007, 03:46 AM
I'm still laughing about the people :D Mostly Regina HAHA HEHE, sorry lol

cory_g
10th Jun 2007, 09:49 AM
tweety: Welcome! :D That's a really nice thing to hear! :) About the writing tips, the thing I first suggest is to write a few chapters in advance before actually posting it on the forums. had I done this I would have been able to update more often... :P

Chrsty: :lol: Well, I'm glad I provided you with a healthy laugh! ;) Hopefully you will enjoy the next chapter just as much!

x Jules
10th Jun 2007, 07:28 PM
I absolutely adore this story! ;D
I'm so happy you re-incorporated Brandon and Regina. That was truly hilarious!
Please keep updatinggg. This story should seriously have way more than just 1 star, I think it deserves more like 5 stars! [;

Kyri
11th Jun 2007, 12:37 PM
Yaaay, an update!

They're so really sweet together :D. I read the chapter twice 'cause it made me feel so happy. Have to bookmark that post for when I'm feeling a bit down and it'll make ma happy again.

And to repeat what the others were saying: what goes around comes around...

girl5874
12th Jun 2007, 01:45 AM
Oh, dang, I just compared how Brandon used to look and how he looks now... It's amazing how he doesn't look at all the same... hey wait a sec... how'd he get bald in three years? :lol:

emopunk_boii5
12th Jun 2007, 10:38 AM
Moreeeeeeee! :cdance:

ChrstyFarie07_SC
12th Jun 2007, 06:17 PM
YAY! Moreee sooon! *does happy dance*

hockeyluver99
12th Jun 2007, 08:26 PM
Yay another update!I was in california and coming back from a vacation with my family, I just wanted to have another update :) :jaw: ahmazing update

cory_g
13th Jun 2007, 08:48 PM
Jules: Thanks so much! :) Those were some really nice words for my ego! *feels special* :luff:

Kyri: :giggler: Really happy to hear it lifts your spirits!

girl: :lol: Well, yeah, I did do some tweaking, he didn't age naturally! ;) And the baldness was all due to excessive stress, children, a bickering wife and a generally unfulfilled marriage! ;) Not to mention lack of money! ha!

emo: soon to come, soon to come! I've almost finished writing it, but there are also quite a few things I have to take care in game! Buah! :|

Chrsty: *joins happy dance* Ooopss...no dancing for me, I have to out my butt to work! :D

hockeyluver: California... *daydreams* You lucky thing! ;) Thanks! :luff:

ChrstyFarie07_SC
13th Jun 2007, 08:53 PM
Lol, pulls her from her chair, and does happy dance together :D

JoeSims
13th Jun 2007, 08:54 PM
Cory, I am waiting for that update patiently. LOL great story!

onsenmark
14th Jun 2007, 03:59 PM
I'm waiting to see if Marissa pops up someplace. I bet she's become a nun. XD

cory_g
15th Jun 2007, 08:09 PM
Chrsty: :lol: That cheered me up a lil'! ;)

joe: Glad you are, thank you! :)

mark: *pictures that in her mind* :laugh: Oh man....With the plans I have she will sorft of pop up a little later ;) But who knows, that may change...

ChrstyFarie07_SC
15th Jun 2007, 08:13 PM
Hehe, it better or i'll do it again :D

girl5874
15th Jun 2007, 08:14 PM
girl: :lol: Well, yeah, I did do some tweaking, he didn't age naturally! ;) And the baldness was all due to excessive stress, children, a bickering wife and a generally unfulfilled marriage! ;) Not to mention lack of money! ha!


Oh, good point...

cory_g
16th Jun 2007, 03:25 PM
Chrsty: You know what? I was in such a good mood that I managed to finish the update! :D

girl: Heh...I'm glad his baldness isn't that unexplainable... lol

cory_g
16th Jun 2007, 03:27 PM
Chapter 26

Riiiiiiiinnnggg Riiiiiiiiinngg Riiiiiiiinng

‘Someone get that phone already! It’s driving me nuts!’ Shadee got up from the couch, waking up from a short nap.

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She hadn’t been too well for the last few days. She had terrible stomach aches, her head hurt constantly and she kept throwing up at the worst of times.

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‘I got it, hun!’ Sebastien shouted from the second floor, then disappeared with the phone in the bedroom.

‘I think I’m going to be sick again…’ Shadee closed her eyes and tried to imagine someplace nice and quiet. Even though she knew she was being selfish, she had become quite desperate to move out of her grandmother’s house. It wasn’t that Gypsy or Caleb bothered her, not even in the least, but she just felt the urge of having a place of her own, where she could just be alone with Seb, get some peace and quiet. And maybe a nap without being woken up. The two concepts contradicted each other, but Shadee felt she was grown-up, ready to start a life of her own. She wanted to be independent and finally start a family with her fiancé. The place simply chocked her, she felt trapped between the walls of a house she had dearly loved.

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She wiped the beads of sweat that had taken shape on her forehead and suddenly felt the familiar knot in her throat.

‘Oh, God!’

Without loosing a second, she rushed up the stairs before collapsing in front to the toilet and once again throwing up. She really hated being sick!

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‘Honey, are you okay?’ Sebastien called worriedly from the other side of the door.

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‘I’m better now.’ Shadee answered faintly and let the water run for a few seconds in order to be cold and refreshing before washing her whole face.

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‘Listen, I’ve got some good news!’ her fiancé continued on a brighter note ‘It was Phil on the phone. He thinks he’s finally found something that we might like. He wanted to take us there today ‘cause there are a few other customers that are interested in buying it. So…are you up for a little “sightseeing”?’

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‘Yeah, sure!’ she emerged from the bathroom smiling as wide as she could ‘Let me just get ready, okay?’

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Sebastien looked at her for a few moments, furrowing his brow ‘You look so pale... Are you sure you’re alright?’

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‘A little sick, but don’t worry! It can’t be something serious, can it?’

Seb’s facial expression changed suddenly ‘You know…this whole illness of yours has got me thinking…’ he stopped and looked at her again, eyes widening with the excitement of a small boy who is about to receive candy ‘Head aches, dizziness, sickness…’

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‘You think…’ Shadee began, but didn’t end the sentence. She once again experienced the tingling sensation in the pit of her stomach, the butterflies of excitement ‘It can’t be! I’ve taken the pills regularly, I didn’t forget…’

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The young man watched her as if mesmerized. The contemplation of becoming a father seemed to please him to no limits.

cory_g
16th Jun 2007, 03:28 PM
continued

‘A baby…’ he whispered and a wide grin spread across his face ‘A baby! A baby!’ he started jumping around his girlfriend in a frantic dance.

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‘Sebastien! Shush!’ Shadee smiled, trying to quiet him down ‘We can’t be sure of anything. Don’t get too worked up!’

‘Ok then. Let’s run some tests! We’ll go see the house, then straight to the hospital!’

They agreed on the plan, then soon left to see Phil. Sebastien was fidgety all the way to the meeting point. He kept stroking his future wife’s hand, grinning to himself and generally not paying attention to the road.

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‘There you are!’ Phil boomed in his usual loud tone, giving Seb a pat on the back and kissing Shadee’s hand. He was a friendly man in his thirties, particularly good at his job who had become a familiar face in the couple’s life, helping them out through their home-hunt ‘You are definitely gonna love this! It’s got your names written all over it! The first moment I saw this beauty…I just knew I had my man for it. And it’s about time you found something! I am quite getting sick of you two!’ he started to laugh loudly at his own joke ‘You can leave the car here. The house is a only a ten-minute walk away!’

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The surrounding area was astoundingly beautiful: neat houses with perfect gardens, quiet and inviting at the same time. It was simply the perfect neighbourhood for a young family.

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Even from a remarkable distance, the house seemed to shine like a well polished diamond. It was a two story building, with beautiful red brick walls, a cosy porch and a nice white fence limiting the still bare yard.

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‘It’s a brand new house, guys!’ Phil grinned, taking out an impressively big set of keys ‘Now…which one was it…’

Shadee threw Seb a meaningful look. She was already in love with it; the young man seemed to be feeling the same. He just didn’t want to show his enthusiasm yet.

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‘The place seems a bit empty and deserted.’ He observed quietly.

‘You must be kidding, old man!’ the agent boomed again ‘Ah, here’s the little bugger… Now, let me show you the interior. Come, don’t be shy, you two!’

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They found themselves in a spacious entrance hall that lead to a huge living room.

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‘It’s exactly the way you like it! Big, very well lit, with a pretty door to the back yard… The toilet is in the far left corner, the kitchen is also here on the left and upstairs are the rest of the rooms. ‘Kay, follow me!’

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They went up the well polished wooden staircase and arrived in another long hall with doors on each side.

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‘So here, on the left is the toilet again and the master bedroom. On the right are three smaller rooms which you can arrange to your heart’s desire: more bedrooms, study or - ahem - a pretty little nursery…’ he paused and grinned at them. Shadee felt her cheeks blush a deep shade of scarlet and she instinctively put a hand on her belly.

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‘You can go ahead and look inside each of these, my dears. You’ll see they’re all big enough and well-lit, just the way you like them.’ Phil winked, leading the now very excited couple into the nearest room, being sure that he had finally found his clients a house that was exactly to their taste.

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After having seen and admired every single corner of their future home, Shadee and Sebastien arranged the last details of the purchase with their agent, then returned to their car, talking animatedly about each room’s design and purpose.

They went straight for the local hospital where Seb worked in order to investigate Shadee’s mysterious illness. The young woman had some blood samples taken and was promised to be contacted in 24 hours with the results.

cory_g
16th Jun 2007, 03:30 PM
continued

***

Riiiiiiiinnnggg Riiiiiiiiinngg Riiiiiiiinng

The phone once again threatened to fall off the hook.

‘I’ll get it!’ Shadee’s muffled voice came from the toilet.

In a few moments she was already in front of the device, taking a few deep breaths.

‘Yes?’

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‘Good evening, m’am! I’m calling from Glenwood Hospital. May I please talk to Mrs Shadee Evans?’

‘This is she!’ the young woman almost shouted into the phone.

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‘Alright then…I’ve got your results for the tests…’



Well...this is it. I hope you enjoyed this chapter as well! :) Please leave me comment! :duck:

Anne_SC
16th Jun 2007, 03:36 PM
OOooooOOOhh :D I want her to be pregnant! I'm so loving the story.

ChrstyFarie07_SC
16th Jun 2007, 04:42 PM
Oooo, I really want her to be pregnant :D, cause I want to see what their kids would look like, I LOVEY this update! :D, Seb looks as cute as ever :D

emopunk_boii5
16th Jun 2007, 04:55 PM
Yay!!! I Hope She`s Pregnant!! Weeee! Can`t Wait!!

leighthesim_SC
16th Jun 2007, 05:37 PM
OMG shaddee could be pregnant thats great i can't wait to hear from the tests

onsenmark
16th Jun 2007, 06:03 PM
AAAAAAAAAAAARGH cliffhanger! ;_; *flails*

girl5874
16th Jun 2007, 06:03 PM
Yay, she's pregnant! Oh gosh that's gonna be one hot baby! :anime:

MrsNsh06
16th Jun 2007, 06:07 PM
Yay! A baby (I just know it). Love the new house. Great update. I just wish there was more...:)

White Queen
16th Jun 2007, 06:28 PM
Wow, I enjoyed this chapter a lot! If she's pregnant, this is gonna be such a beautiful baby!!! Yay! ;)

Stormy_SC
16th Jun 2007, 06:36 PM
Yay a baby! I hope so! And a new house! Yay!

Awesome as usual!!!

hockeyluver99
16th Jun 2007, 08:50 PM
No! You ended it with a mysterous mystery!lol now im gonna be thinking every second 'what are the results!' lol but its pretty obvious. Great update :D
p.s i hope she has a baby! itll be sooo wonderful and cute! :)

The Paper Lady
16th Jun 2007, 08:58 PM
Wow, this is fantastic! I've read the entire story in just one night.

Seb's clothes are gorgeous (and he is too), where'd you get them from? I like his hair too. ^___^

And I hope they have a baby, I'm sure it will be very cute. ~

Keep up the good work!

Gerbera
16th Jun 2007, 09:00 PM
Oh, great update :D Can't wait to see the house furnished and of course the baby!
Though I hope Caleb and Gypsy won't be too sad :blink:

.~*Iris*~.
16th Jun 2007, 09:14 PM
awesome update Cory, as always! Shadee is indeed all grown up! and Seb... *drools* :) oooooooooooh baby baby!!!

zizismommy_SC
16th Jun 2007, 09:43 PM
Boooooo for stopping there. :P Great update Cory.
PS, where's the house in part 2, 2nd pic from? ;)

jenny
16th Jun 2007, 09:58 PM
great chapter!...baby is on the way.....:D...seb looks soo handsome!

Incomplete
16th Jun 2007, 10:17 PM
Oh boy! A baby! (Possibly.) That cliffhanger was evil. :P

sweetbabyhnd2007
17th Jun 2007, 01:12 AM
AWESOME update...I want another update..pretty pretty please with sugar on top

auroraspirit
17th Jun 2007, 01:54 AM
I want another update Cory, please don't let it be a month's wait! I think I'd be asking every single after a week, are we there yet, are we there yet :D :jk: :giggler:

Wonderful update, I already have a feeling that she is pregnant.

Auroraspirit :angel:

x Jules
17th Jun 2007, 04:04 AM
Ehh! I'm very excited! She has to be pregnant. Seriously this story is amazing. Seb is such a babe and Shadee is absolutely gorgeous.

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Can I ask where you got the green car? It looks like something I've seen on ModTheSims2, the BMW X3?

schitzwa_SC
17th Jun 2007, 10:20 AM
Awesome! Update!!!! Plz??? :)

~Squash-buddy-ven~
17th Jun 2007, 10:46 AM
A baby? Wee, I hope she's pregnant! It'll be a beautiful baby. :lovestruc
Amazing update cory! Leaving us with such a cliffhanger is just evil.. :D I hope there's going to be an update soon so we can see if Shadee is preggers! Pretty please! :P

Loco
17th Jun 2007, 12:16 PM
Eee! Don't stop there! I mean, I'm pretty sure she;s pregnant, but... eee! And the house is perfect! YAY! :D Lovely update!

Juliette*15
18th Jun 2007, 09:13 AM
Hehe... Seb's a stud...
And YES I meant in the non-hot way... Though it could mean the hot way too...
Love the house... Where Caleb gonna live when Gypsy dies?

cory_g
19th Jun 2007, 07:16 AM
Anne: You’ll have to wait until the next chapter then! ;) Thank you!

Chrsty: Is she or is she not, that is the question! :D Glad you liked it…and I must yet again admit I love my lil’ Seb!

emo: Well, who knows… *feels evil* :D

leigh: My hopes are to finish the next chapter quick for you guys, but I cannot promise anything yet ;)

mark: :lol: I LOVE cliffhangers! The only problem is, I’m not too good at writing them (aka I always feel I have to end my idea with the chapter >.< )

girl: I’m kinda curious myself how a baby between these two is going to look :anime:

MrsNsh: :luff: Thanks, glad you enjoyed! I would have liked to write more, but I just had the perfect opportunity for a cliffhanger…couldn’t resist that! ;)

WQ: Thank you, hun, happy you did! :)

stormy: The baby is shrouded in mystery… :lol: That sounded weird… Thanks!

hockeyluver: Heh, I should do this more often *cackles evilly* But Thank you! :D

Paper Lady: Welcome! :) That must have been a pretty long night :D I got his latest clothes from www.glamorouslounge.com I think and his hair is from www.raonsims.com Thank you & I hope you’ll continue reading!

cory_g
19th Jun 2007, 07:17 AM
Gerbera: Thanks! Furnishing that house is really gonna be a challenge for me, as I’m not too much of a skilled builder and decorator… :lol: Those two will most probably be sad, but life goes on, doesn’t it?

Iris: Thank you very much! :luff: Yep, Shadee no longer is the scared fourteen year old she was at the beginning of the story… :)

zizismommy: Hehee, I do have my evil periods… ;) thanks! And the house…it doesn’t say in game where it is from and I downloaded it ages ago… But look on the first page, the post with the intro, and there’s a link for the site where I downloaded the grandparents’ house from. It may be the same place!

jenny: Thank you! :)

Betty: Yep, possibly! Should I pride myself with being evil? :P

sweet: Thanks! :D If there’s sugar on top, then I’ll most definitely quicken the pace! ;)

aurora: :luff: I would like to update at the next weekend, so you guys will have something to read while I will be away for a week! And I really hope everything will go according to the plan… Thank you! :)

cory_g
19th Jun 2007, 07:18 AM
Jules: thanks a bunch! :D I don’t know where the car is from , though, it only has the model written on the license plate: X5, hope that helps! :)

Schitzwa: Welcome! :) And yes, I will!

Pernille: Thank you! :luff: I’ll try my best to update soon enough! :)

Loco: Thanks, I’m glad you like the house! :D Though it doesn’t look too good unfurnished… :P

Juliette: :lol: a hot/non-hot stud! Well, Gypsy made Shadee promise she would take Caleb with her and Seb when she dies, so he’ll be living with the two of them ;)

Nicole_artist
19th Jun 2007, 07:51 AM
Oooh, cliffy! *falls off cliff in anticipation*

I was so happy when I say the topic subscription in my inbox that said 'Starting a new life: Chapter 26 - UPDATED 16/06 A new home...and pregnancy?" update' !

Hyperkitty21
20th Jun 2007, 01:14 AM
OOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH!
Cliffhanger!
Well done but I need an update!

The Paper Lady
20th Jun 2007, 05:35 PM
Yay! Thank you! I can't wait for the next update!~

Dragon Guardian
20th Jun 2007, 06:14 PM
YAY!
She is gonna pop us out a purdy baby :D
I can't wait :)

auroraspirit
20th Jun 2007, 11:00 PM
I hope you have a lovely trip cory :) Looking forward to the next update :jig:

Auroraspirit :angel:

Plum_SC
21st Jun 2007, 01:31 AM
That's where you're ending the chapter?! You're pure evil!

Juliette*15
21st Jun 2007, 08:54 AM
:O I forgot to ask, where did you find that house? *Would love linkage*

Annique
21st Jun 2007, 12:57 PM
YES! Babytime :D

This story is amazing.

Captain THPS4
22nd Jun 2007, 01:10 AM
Well, the pill is not guaranteed to prevent pregnancy so I guess Shadee really is pregnant! Wonder how the baby will turn out....

cory_g
22nd Jun 2007, 12:36 PM
Nicole: Aww, well I'm glad to hear you've got yourself subscribed to my story! :luff:

Elle: :lol: Thanks, I'm working on it

Paper Lady: you're welcome! :)

Bree: :giggler: Well..we'll see ;)

aurora: Thanks! :) I'm really looking forwards to leaving. I :valentine that seaside!

Plum: There's evil in every one of us...mine just seems to come out at the worst times, resulting in cliffhangers :lol:

Juliette: I feel proud...I made it! :D If I can figure out how to package houses, I'll send it over your way, if you want.

Annique: I'm always excited about simbabies, mostly about their looks! :D Thank you!

Captain: You're right there, there's always a small chance that things don't go they way you planned them to. :)

Kyri
23rd Jun 2007, 12:10 PM
Another nice update :D

I really hope she is pregnant... really want to see how the baby lookks like.

BTW, you have a really nice neighbourhood with all these houses. Mine looks rather empty... *goes in-game to make houses*

Bye

cassieandra
23rd Jun 2007, 12:27 PM
Omg your story is awesome! All of your pics are so good! I never know how to get pics without the speech bubbles and curser thing... I hope to read the rest of your story soon!

amalinaball
23rd Jun 2007, 07:00 PM
Agg...I was on holiday so haven't had a chance to read this for a few weeks! :D

Oooh, it'd be lovely if she was pregnant all along and she was craving sweet stuff because of the baby. But I really hope it isn't something truly awful - like she's infertile or she's got some stomach problems or something. :(
Bring on the babies, I say! Huzzah!

MrsNsh06
23rd Jun 2007, 10:04 PM
I am also interested in the house cory so if you figure out how to package, I want it too. :)

cory_g
24th Jun 2007, 08:08 AM
Kyri: Thank you! :) Well, most of the houses you can see around don't have any families to live in, they're just there for decorative purposes! ;) Good luck building some pretty houses!

cassieandra: Welcome! :D Thank you very much for the compliments! As for taking pics without thought bubbles, you can use the"showheadlines off" cheat ;)

amalina: I hope you had a nice time on your holiday! :anime: You'll actually get the chance to find that out today! :giggler:

MrsNsh: Sure, I'll send it to you too! :D But I may not be able to fire up the game today, so I'll probably try to package it in a week or so due to my leaving to the seaside...yay! :jig:

cory_g
24th Jun 2007, 08:10 AM
Chapter 27

Sebastien skidded to a halt behind his future wife, just as she had finished the phone conversation.

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He had been in the pool, just relaxing and swimming around when the distant, yet loud ring of the phone reached his ears. It could only be one thing! Without loosing a moment, he had jumped on the ladder and ran all the way inside, leaving small puddles on his way there.

‘Well?’ he asked excitedly, waiting for Shadee to respond ‘What did they say?’

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The young woman was with the back to him, facing the wall and still holding the receiver in her hand. He couldn’t see her face, but he was sure he knew what the result was, until she turned around.

Shadee’s eyes were filled with tears, yet they hadn’t made their way down her cheeks yet. A distinct sad expression was on her face, but she tried to smile.

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‘Honey, is everything alright?’ Sebastien just couldn’t shake off the feeling that something must have been wrong ‘Were the results okay?’

‘Yes, yes…’ she nodded and discreetly rubbed the tears from her eyes ‘Everything is fine. I’m not dieing or anything!’ she gave a small laugh that didn’t seem too genuine though ‘The results were negative. I’m not pregnant.’

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The words seemed to hang in the air, creating a brick wall between the two. A few moments of silence followed in which they looked at each other. Then, at the same time, they spoke again.

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‘Well, umm…I’m gonna go back to swimming…’

‘I think I’m gonna go upstairs and lie down a little…’

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Shadee started to walk up the stairs and everything felt like in a dream, the daze and uncertainty surrounded her, her brain seemed foggy and the tears she had rubbed away from her eyes a few minutes before, came back flooding her whole face.

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Sebastien still remained at the foot of the stairs for a while, watching her leave. He wanted to move, return to the pool filled with cool water. But he felt as though his feet had been tied up together, like a huge block of concrete kept him rooted on the spot.

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Having reached her bedroom, the young woman let herself fall on the soft bed and buried her head in the pillow. Why was she feeling that way? She knew perfectly well that she wasn’t yet ready for a baby, she didn’t feel mature enough to take care of a small creature that depended wholly on her. And still, at the sound of the news she had felt her heart sink well below sea level. In only one day she had gone from panic to refusal to acceptance and then to sheer excitement. Who was she trying to kid? She really wanted to have a baby, she had already started to make plans inside her mind, how she would decorate one of the upstairs rooms of her new house into a lovely nursery, she had thought of names for the baby, she had imagined sunny Sundays spent in the park with Sebastien and a stroller, she had pictured holding a tiny infant in her arms and knowing it’s hers. And there was also Seb. He had been so excited at the thought he might become a father, how disappointed he must have felt. Who would have thought that a temporary stress induced sickness could wreck such emotional havoc in the small family…

***
It took only a few more days for Shadee to get better from her illness and almost a month for the couple to get over the disappointment. They succeeded to keep their mind off of things while working on their beautiful new house: painting the walls, choosing the parquet or carpet, buying the suitable furniture and arranging it as to fit into the rooms. But sure enough, everything was ready at the end of September. They simply couldn’t recognise the house with its beautiful finishing. They had also built a garage for their pretty car and planted some bushes, flowers and trees in their garden.

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The back yard had been transformed into a vast terrace with a big, nice pool, a Jacuzzi and a grill.

Surprisingly enough, there were no tears when Shadee and Seb finally moved out of Gypsy’s house.

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She was just happy to see them happy and it wasn’t like they were moving to another part of the world. They were just a few streets away and both the old lady and Caleb were welcome any time they wanted to pay them a visit.

Yet another few weeks and the couple had settled into their new house. The fact that Sebastien got promoted was an even bigger achievement for both of them and, on the career part, Shadee was considering opening up an art gallery of her own. But it was too soon after having spent a huge amount of money for their home.

***
It was a mild autumn afternoon and Shadee was just about to start working on a new painting in her “art room”.

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Sebastien was in his office going through some important work for the hospital.

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Exactly when the young woman wanted to put the brush on the pure white canvas, the doorbell rang loud and distinct. Shadee sighed deeply and rubbed off the paint of her hands, looking at the hour on her cd-player. Half past four it couldn’t have been Caleb and Gypsy, they hadn’t announced them about anything and they never came without calling first.

‘Coming!’ she shouted, starting to descend the stairs.

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Finally getting to the door, she had the most pleasant shock in a while, at the sight of her visitors.

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Hope you enjoyed and weren't too disappointed about the results, everything at its own time ;) I just wanted to create a little twist. Please share your thoughts!

auroraspirit
24th Jun 2007, 08:20 AM
It wouldn't surprise if its the other musketeer ;)

Auroraspirit :angel:

ChrstyFarie07_SC
24th Jun 2007, 08:22 AM
EKK! You updated!!!! I think is Regina and um I forgot what that dude's name is :P

Stormy_SC
24th Jun 2007, 08:22 AM
I'm kinda disappointed she wasn't preggy! But I'm sure she will be soon enough. Great update Cory_g!!!

White Queen
24th Jun 2007, 08:58 AM
Oh, cliffhanger!!! I hope it's Holly!!! I miss her!
Quite sad this update, but great nevertheless! :gjob: :bunny:

Simmerlis
24th Jun 2007, 09:37 AM
That was NOT supposed to happen. I bet its the Doctor at the door telling Her he made a mistake. *Nods* :)

cassieandra
24th Jun 2007, 11:02 AM
OMG! I so wanted her to be preggers! Btw where did you get the laptop that he was using?

Loco
24th Jun 2007, 11:41 AM
That was NOT supposed to happen. I bet its the Doctor at the door telling Her he made a mistake. *Nods* :)

Yeah, that's what I was thinking. :D Poor Shadee and Sebby... that's a shame. But I'm sure it'll happen soon enough. :D Cool update!

Jordan09
24th Jun 2007, 11:57 AM
Great update! I also think that her not being pregnant will give a chance for more possiblities in the story! :)

amalinaball
24th Jun 2007, 01:10 PM
Oh, I bet it's Holly and her beau from college! Yay! Well, I hope so...I miss Holly a great deal. :D
It's a pity Shadee's not pregnant, but there's plenty of time for babies and that sort of thing later - and at least it wasn't a serious illness! All I can do now is wait for it to be updated! :)

BabyGirl250185
24th Jun 2007, 03:49 PM
Hey Corry_G I love your story I read all 56 pages today I Love it.
I Love it
I Love it
I Love it.

Babygirl250185

P.S. can't wait for the update.

Luminee
24th Jun 2007, 05:14 PM
I've been following along with the story,
never posted.. until now. :D

AWESOME STORY!
I can't wait for another update, but please, take your time.

jenny
24th Jun 2007, 06:14 PM
Great update Cory....hmm, loving Seb's body type.....?..and I love that hair on Shadee...its perfect for her:)...Looking forward to more!

Captain THPS4
24th Jun 2007, 06:28 PM
Oh good, I thought if Shadee wasn't pregnant she would be coming down with something really bad. Argh, the cliffhanger from this chapter is even worse! I hope it's Holly since she has not been in the story for a while. :)

~Squash-buddy-ven~
24th Jun 2007, 08:12 PM
Aww, she's not pregnant! :( Well, it wasn't the time for them to have a baby (Can't wait for it to be, though :lol:)..
On the other hand, their house is so beautiful.. You really have a talent for decorating and building (and for sim-making! Your sims are amazing)..

I can't wait to see who's at the door, it's so exciting.. I hope it's Holly too, I kind of miss her.. :)

x Jules
24th Jun 2007, 10:11 PM
This basically is the best story EVER.
Ahh. I was kinda hoping she was pregnant, but I think the twist was certainly needed.
Thanks for the update cory! And, the house on the inside looks marvelous. :)

onsenmark
24th Jun 2007, 10:41 PM
ehh, Shadee's got enough time to be preggers. XD

Also, I bet Holly and her beau show up in the next part, and both of them are trim and fit. XD

greenmtx
24th Jun 2007, 10:55 PM
I hope its Holly...I miss her too!

hockeyluver99
25th Jun 2007, 05:13 AM
Aw. She isnt having a baby :( oh well I wonder whos at the door? We havent been hearing from Holly for a while maybe her?Great update! :)

Gerbera
25th Jun 2007, 07:21 AM
Aww ... I was really hoping for a baby :(
But the house looks awesome now :D
Thanks for the update Cory :)

Juliette*15
25th Jun 2007, 08:27 AM
Darn shame that is.... But atleast everything else is going well... (Oh yeah, I'd love to download the house once you figure out the packaging... it would be so cool!!)

Jade07_SC
25th Jun 2007, 10:20 AM
wow ..... love this story. Great job! I hope it's Holly too.

leighthesim_SC
25th Jun 2007, 04:57 PM
cool lil update but i want to know whos at the door.....TELL ME OR UPDATE.....i cammand you to do one of the above and i will give a nice big plate of cookies

girl5874
25th Jun 2007, 06:47 PM
Poor Shadee, I really wanted her to have Seb's baby. And I'm starting to drool over Seb :lovestruc:

HRAKLHS_SC
25th Jun 2007, 07:56 PM
Great update!:)I hope its Holly!Oh and i love your decorating and your sims!:)
Ps:Where can i find the grandparents house?I cant find the archive section in sims society:(:(

Kyri
26th Jun 2007, 10:18 AM
I feel sorry for them that they didn't have a baby, but wull, time enough to grow a big family :D.

I'm so dying to know who is at the door... I'm too curious for my own good ;)

emopunk_boii5
26th Jun 2007, 12:04 PM
Awwww! i thought shadee was pregnant! *swt*

Pinkmaltese1
26th Jun 2007, 08:31 PM
Aww I was hoping for a baby too..but its cool. Hey can you make seb and shadee downloadable? I would love to have them in my neighborhood!!!

.~*Iris*~.
26th Jun 2007, 09:41 PM
I'm happy she didn't get pregnant. Then it would have been too predictable!

well at least not pregnant now! ;) She has all the time in the world!

MrsNsh06
27th Jun 2007, 04:38 AM
Is there going to be a wedding?

sweetbabyhnd2007
30th Jun 2007, 10:45 PM
Great update

bluemoon11
1st Jul 2007, 02:25 AM
I'm going to be completely random and say that the mystery person at the door is Seb's dad.

unsettled_76
2nd Jul 2007, 07:51 PM
I'm thinking it is Holly and her boyfriend.

hockeyluver99
3rd Jul 2007, 04:49 AM
Yes it should be Seb's dad!I agree with bluemoon11

cory_g
5th Jul 2007, 08:46 PM
aurora: he hee…I dunno :D

Chrsty: you’ll have to read the next update for that :P

Stormy: sorry to disappint! :luff: but thank you!

WQ: Maybe it is, maybe it isn’t her… :giggler: Thanks!

Simmerlis: Welcome! :) That is an interesting hypothesis, but wouldn’t it be a little too late for him to come now? ;)

Cassie: She’s not yet, unfortunately… the laptop is part of a donation set called “Ador”, from muranomobilia

Loco: Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

amalina: It could be them… I’m kind of missing Holly as well. :D

babygirl: Welcome! :D I’m very flattered by your commet, thank you very much loving this!

Luminee: Welcome and thank you for posting! :) I’m really glad you like it and hope you’ll continue reading!

jenny: Thanks! The body type comes with the bathing suit, though :P I like that hair as well, it’s quite pretty.

Captain: Even worse? What can be worse than not telling the results for a pregnancy test? :P Well, we’ll see in the next update who it actually is at the door ;)

cory_g
5th Jul 2007, 08:46 PM
Pernille: Not being pregnant was quite a blow for both of them, but at least it got them used to the idea ;) Thanks, I really tried my best decorating and building the house :luff:

Jules: Yay! It feels good to read that :lol: You’re welcome and thank you too!

mark: Well, that’s what I thought too ;) We’ll see…

green: Next update will tell :giggler:

hockeyluver: As much as I’d like to, I won’t just give this detail away, but I think you’ll enjoy the chapter! Thanks :)

Gerbera: Glad you like the house! :D You’re very welcome!

Juliette: Yep, things have finally settled down a little. I’ll send the house to you too ;)

Jade: Welcome! :D I’m glad you’re enjoying and I hope you’ll continue reading!

leigh: Thanks! A nice big plate of cokies?!?!? Oh, the temptation… :D I must not give in!

girl: Seb is a special boy to me… I really am proud of him :jig:

HRAKLHS: Welcome! :D Thank you for all the nice compliments! As for the houese, I really don’t know if it isn’t there anymore, maybe they deleted it :confused:

Kyri: Yep, enough time for that! :D Heh, curiosity killed the cat, but it won’t in this case! :P

cory_g
5th Jul 2007, 08:47 PM
emo: Well, I think it’s nice to be surpried, right? ;)

Pinkmaltese: Welcome! I will put the characters up for download at MTS2 after I finish the story. I plan to finish it this summer, so I don’t think it will take too long :)

Iris: Well, I’m glad you liked my twist! :D

MrsNsh: I don’t know ;) Maybe something totally unpredictable happens and there won’t be one…

Sweet: Thank you!

bluemoon: Welcome! :) My lips are sealed about that though ;)

unsettled: Welcome and thank you for posting! :D

HRAKLHS_SC
5th Jul 2007, 10:25 PM
well i cant find the archive section:(can you give me a link?:)

cory_g
6th Jul 2007, 09:24 AM
I cannot give you a direct link, but I checked out the site and I'll direct you to the place where you can find it. So, first of all click on this link http://www.thesimssociety.com/ You'll get to the main site. On the left is a thing with mailing list, then two lilliac buttons: archive and pyros productions. Click on the first, the archive. You'll now be shown a list with six different types of houses, click on "estates" and it's the third one on the second row, "Chrystal White" :)

HRAKLHS_SC
6th Jul 2007, 07:50 PM
Wow!THANK YOU!:):):)

sweetbabyhnd2007
9th Jul 2007, 06:55 PM
When Will The Next Update Be????? Im Going Crazy Without One Lol

maxpax318
14th Jul 2007, 05:11 PM
This story is coming along great, can't wait for the next installment... :)

cory_g
20th Jul 2007, 02:27 PM
HRAKLHS: you're welcome! :)

sweetbaby: Uh oh, going crazy is not too good! I'm kind of on a hiatus right now, so I don't know when I'll next update... :(

maxpax: Well, I'm glad you think so and continue to read the story! :D

Once again, I have some things to take care of in real life: I have a friend who came over to stay for a month with me and I have to always be there for her, Ialso managed graze my knees quite badly while rollerblading in the park, and to top it all, there's an unbearable heat in my town, that makes it almost impossible to stay alive. Please hang on in there and don't give up on me! :)

ChrstyFarie07_SC
20th Jul 2007, 04:16 PM
Ooo, wow, I hope you knee is ok and your friend has fun with you. And hope the heat calms down! We will hang on! :D

Stormy_SC
20th Jul 2007, 05:16 PM
Sorry to hear that Cory G. Take your time. We'll still be here. :)

hockeyluver99
20th Jul 2007, 07:59 PM
Ooo sorry to hear bout your knees and the horribal heat!(Its pretty hot here too)Take all the time you need.

SherrytheCherry_SC
20th Jul 2007, 10:18 PM
Aww sorry to hear. It's warm here too. I can wait. :)

The first thing that comes to mind when you say "visitors" is Holly and her boyfriend. :P

onsenmark
21st Jul 2007, 01:00 AM
Don't feel bad, cory; I have to work three nights next week, so I know how it feels. I'm gonna be so drained, lol. XD Add that to everything else that's been going on, and... @_@

Still, do what you have to. We'll wait here patiently. :)

XsnowdropX
21st Jul 2007, 01:22 AM
Ahh

Its really hot here too, on top of that my air is broken>.<. Lol. Figures

Ill be waiting then:).

Kyri
22nd Jul 2007, 10:28 AM
Heey Cory_g. Hope you're fine. I still have patience :) so I can hold on for a while. Take your time.

White Queen
23rd Jul 2007, 07:51 AM
Take your time, Cory! RL comes first. :)

Hope we all survive through the heat... *melts slowly*

~Squash-buddy-ven~
23rd Jul 2007, 10:16 PM
We'll still be here for your amazing updates cory! Just take your time. :)
I'm sorry to hear about your knee, hope you feel better soon. :luff:

auroraspirit
24th Jul 2007, 01:04 AM
I hope things look up for you cory, heatwaves are shocking and I couldn't last in one :hmm:

I hope things turn around for you :)

Auroraspirit :angel:

Jenjen1000
28th Jul 2007, 05:17 PM
Please keep updating!!! This is my FAVORITE story!!!!

Inucrazy101
28th Jul 2007, 08:18 PM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
*pouts* I would love to see their kids! OMG with Shadee's beauty and Sebastien's...er...Manliness, who wouldn't?
PLEASE update! PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEA-
*inner self comes up and slaps me across the cheek*

(I kinda was hyper and crazy this morning so...yeah :smash:)

sweetbabyhnd2007
5th Aug 2007, 09:23 PM
Aww...Im so sorry bout ur knee..Hope it gets better

cory_g
5th Aug 2007, 09:35 PM
Chrsty: Thank you! I really am much better now! My knees have healed almost completely, my friend did have fun and left quite satisfied with her ‘holliday’ and it really got cooler outside! :D

Stormy: Thank you very much for your patience! I appreciate it! :)

hockeyluver: Thanks a lot for understanding! :luff:

Sherry: Welcome! :D I hope it’s cooler where you are as well. About the visitors, you are quite right!

Mark: Ouch, sorry to hear you had so much work to do… hope things have straightened out by now. Thank you for the patience you showed! :)

snowdrop: That really must be hard :blink: Heat + brocken ac = very, very bad! I wish you a cool wave of air! Lol

Kyri: Thanks, I’m loads better now! :D

WQ: Well, I hope you’ve managed to survive the heat as well! :D

Pernille: Aww, thank you very much! :luff: Yup, my knees are quite better now!

aurora: Thanks! :) I really hope there will be no heatwaves in Aussie! ;)

Jenjen: Welcome! :D I will now be able to fulfill your wish, thank you for liking the story!

Inucrazy: Welcome and thanks for commenting (I do like hyper people! :D ) I’m glad you like my characters!


sweetbabyhnd: Thank you, it did get better! ;)

cory_g
5th Aug 2007, 09:36 PM
Chapter 28

‘Holly! And you must be Steve!’ Shadee smiled widely at the couple standing on her porch.

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She hadn’t seen her friend in more than three years and hadn’t heard from her since they were still in college ‘Wow, what a surprise! Come in, you two!’

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Shadee led them into the living room and invited them to sit down on her 3000$ sofa in front of the fireplace. She felt really ecstatic to see her old friend back. Holly looked very good, she was glowing, even though she seemed to have gained quite a few pounds since they had last seen each other

‘I missed you so much, Shadee!’ Holly grinned happily while giving her a tight hug ‘Look at you! You look gorgeous and look at this house!’

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She took an appreciative look around the spacious room and finally sat down next to her boyfriend.

‘Let me just go fetch Seb, he’ll be thrilled to see you!’ Shadee hurried back to the second floor, returning in less than two minutes with Sebastien on her tail. He exchanged a few warm greetings with Holly, shook hands with Steve and they all sat down for a chit chat.

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‘So, what have you been doing?’ Shadee asked, looking at the young couple ‘I kept calling your mother to see if you were back in town, but got the same answer every time. She must have gotten sick of me calling every few days.’

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‘Well…’ Holly started, making it obvious that she was about to tell a long story ‘I kind of dreaded coming back in town without having had an unforgettable experience first. You know, they all say your college years are the wildest, when you do all kinds of things you’ve never done before, but for me it was as usual as always.’ She paused, throwing Steve a loving look ‘Of course, apart from meeting this one here! So, after graduation, I went to Steven and told him “I want to do something crazy! I refuse to settle down without having done something unusual”. You two know me, I’m not the whacky type of person, but what I did really was whacky!’

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Shadee giggled, unable to imagine what whacky thing Holly could have done. Just then did she notice the shiny golden ring on both her friend’s finger and her lover’s.

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She decided to keep quiet though. Chances were Holly was going to tell them everything anyway.

‘The two of us thought and thought for a few minutes. Our bags were packed, we had to leave the college premises, but we really didn’t want to return. So instead we took a taxi to the airport and chose the first flight away. This is how we got to Las Vegas!’ she started to laugh loudly at the faces Shadee and Seb had made ‘Without any plans, any scheming, we just got onto the plane and left. We stayed there as long as we could, seeing that we had quite a big sum of money from our scholarships. We visited the casinos, which by the way were really glamorous, but not really our type of thing! In the end, we decided to do another crazy thing and…’ she stretched out the hand with the ring ‘…we got married!’

There were a few moments of silence in which Sebastien and his fiancé digested the news.

‘Wow! You really did do something!’ Seb observed amusedly.

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‘What bothers me’ Shadee pouted ‘is that you got married without me being there with you!’

‘Ah, well…we hadn’t thought about all this in advance’ Holly shrugged ‘But we didn’t really have any people invited. I didn’t even tell my mother until we got back, earlier today. She was actually a little upset at first, but she knew I never wanted a big wedding anyway!’

‘So, you’re a married woman now!’

‘Yep, Mrs Holly Rendell. I love the sound of that!’

‘Well, Mr and Mrs Rendell!’ Shadee got up from the couch ‘You do know you’ll have to stay for dinner! God knows when we’ll be having the chance to see you two again!’

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She took a few steps in the direction of the hallway but was stopped after a few seconds by a very eager-to-help Holly. She had bolted up from her comfortable seat and sprinted the few meters to Shadee.

‘Let me give you a hand! So the boys can have a manly talk among themselves…’

She gave a small laugh and followed her friend inside the spotless kitchen, letting out a murmur of admiration that stroke Shadee’s ego.

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Even though she had known Holly for quite some time, the period they had spent apart had made them feel a little estranged all, a sense of competitiveness rising up in them, each trying to outrun the other. In an effort to push the barrier between them away, Shadee gave her old friend another hearty hug, and smiled warmly.

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‘Let’s get down to business, shall we?’ she grinned and walked over to the fridge, trying to decide which of the ingredients she could find there were most suitable for a fancy, yet quick meal.

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A half an hour into their cooking, both young woman felt themselves warming up more and more to each other, thinking back at all the memories they shared together, be it sad or happy ones. In an impulse of sincerity and in the name of their old friendship, Holly blurted out:

cory_g
5th Aug 2007, 09:37 PM
‘Guess what? I didn’t know whether to mention this or not, but heck! You’re still my best friend!’ Shadee looked up at her enquiringly, leaving the fish in the oven to cook unattended’ I’m three months pregnant!’

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Shadee’s mouth dropped open with shock and a glacial air seemed to fill her lungs at the sound of the news. She wanted to speak out, congratulate Holly on her future baby, but no sound came out. The wound of not having been pregnant herself were still fresh in her mind. She regained her composure a little in a few seconds and said all the right things that were to be sad. At least this could explain Holly’s few pounds extra, anyway!

‘Wow! Out of college, gone to Vegas, married and now pregnant!’ Shadee gave a long whistle, but could still feel the pang in her heart, that hadn’t subsided at all since first hearing the news.

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‘Well, I can say I have everything I ever wanted.’ Holly nodded serenely, unaware of the struggle Shadee was going through.

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Their talk was interrupted by a loud “ding” from the oven: the fish was ready.

The rest of the evening went by in a swirl of food and talk. Shadee went through it all like through a thick layer of fog, not really registering what was being spoken at the table and giving mechanic answers whenever addressed.

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She kept throwing furtive glances at her friend’s belly. There, inside her, a baby was growing and developing. Despite herself, she felt envious and angry and would have given anything in the world for her to be in Holly’s place.

Later though, while lying wide awake in bed next to an already sleeping Sebastien, Shadee felt ashamed of herself.

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There was a time and a place for everything; it was Holly’s time to be happy and fulfilled. Maybe she just wasn’t meant to have a baby yet.

hockeyluver99
5th Aug 2007, 10:01 PM
Its Holly!wow shes pregnant!cant wait till the baby.I hope Shadee can have a baby sometime :(
:)

Simmerlis
6th Aug 2007, 01:01 AM
Yay! it was worth waiting for that update, great work!

sweetbabyhnd2007
6th Aug 2007, 02:21 AM
Awesome update

msnicolejones
6th Aug 2007, 03:24 AM
Great updates!

jenny
6th Aug 2007, 04:14 AM
great update!..Holly pregos, soo sweet:)
Good to see you back:)

Gerbera
6th Aug 2007, 06:54 AM
Great update Cory, thanks so much :D
But I feel so sorry for Shadee, although it's of course great for Holly ... :/

cassieandra
6th Aug 2007, 07:17 AM
Great updaet! I'm hooked!

White Queen
6th Aug 2007, 08:13 AM
Yay! It was Holly!!! And I'm so happy for her! :)

amalinaball
6th Aug 2007, 10:30 AM
Wowzer - I was right! Yaaay!
Shame on Shadee for being jealous about Holly's pregnancy; she'll get pregnant herself in her own time, and she should really be happy about her friend having a baby.
Awesome update! :D

satsoveranddone
6th Aug 2007, 11:49 AM
yay another chapter to read

its realy good cant wait for more

ChrstyFarie07_SC
6th Aug 2007, 04:16 PM
Hehe, it was Holly and her hubby! I really can't believe she's preggy! Lol, Great update!

Kyri
6th Aug 2007, 04:32 PM
Yaaay Holly is back :D.
Felt a little bit sorry for Shadee, though. But she's still young so she shouldn't be jealous. Good thing she realized that ;).

Keep up the good work cory_g

Kayshay
6th Aug 2007, 05:28 PM
Great update, i'm glad holly is back, but i really wanted shadee to be married because they would make a beautiful baby together.

satsoveranddone
6th Aug 2007, 05:31 PM
i hope we can have a update soon

Captain THPS4
6th Aug 2007, 05:42 PM
Oh yay I'm so glad that it was indeed Holly and Steve at the door! Great to see them as part of the picture again. :)

BabyGirl250185
6th Aug 2007, 10:06 PM
i love love love it love it really

leighthesim_SC
6th Aug 2007, 11:16 PM
tis very true there is a time and a place for everything maybe she is ment to have a baby in a few years, or maybe she can't ,but if she wants one that badley she could adopt one

great chappie i can't believe holly is married, i can't wait to here more

Stormy_SC
6th Aug 2007, 11:27 PM
Aww Holly's having a baby!! :D She's gotten very pretty too! Great update! I hope Shadee will have her turn sometime soon though. :(

HRAKLHS_SC
7th Aug 2007, 12:49 AM
Great update!!!:):)
Where i can find Shadees outfit??:):):)

auroraspirit
7th Aug 2007, 04:14 AM
Congrats to Holly :blow: Steve must be elated with the news. I hope Seb and Shadee manage to conceive in time.

Auroraspirit :angel:

cory_g
7th Aug 2007, 10:35 AM
hockeyluver: Yeah, Holly’s back and tremendously happy! :D You will actually get to see her baby!

Simmerlis: Thank you, I’m glad you considered it worth the wait! :luff:

Sweetbaby: Thanks! :)

Msnicolejones: Thank you! :D

jenny: I’m glad you liked it, thank you! :) And it’s really good to be back as well!

Gerbera: You’re very welcome! :) Well, Shadee had to go through that experience of not actually having been pregnant, this is what made her so sensitive to Holly’s. Otherwise she would have been sincerely glad about it all the way through.

cassieandra: Thank you! :D

WQ: That’s quite right, Holly has finally found happiness! ;)

Amalina: As always ;) The problem with Shadee is that she felt Holly was rubbing everything under her nose, even though the poor woman had no idea what she had been through. Still, she realises her mistake in the end. :D Thanks

Satsoveranddone: Welcome! More will come, not to worry! ;) Hopefully sooner than this one :P

Chrsty: Well, at least I managed to make this a surprise, even though many of you had already guessed who was at the door! ;) Thank you

cory_g
7th Aug 2007, 10:35 AM
Kyri: Back, married and pregnant! :D She will eventually get over it and go on with her life, though, there’s no need for her to worry! I hope I will be able to live up to your expectations in the updates that will follow! :)

Kayshay: Thank you! :) Shadee will get married, but she needed soms time to settle into her new home ;)

Captain: And they will continue to be for quite some time :D

babygirl: Thank you! :D

leigh: There are very many options, you’re right! Thanks you :)

Stormy: Yep she is! :D I dunno about Shadee though :P

HRAKLHS: Thanks! :) You can find Shadee’s outfit here http://www.all-about-style.com/adult_feca11.html Third one on the first row.

aurora: I’ll tell her ;) Yeah, they’re quite the happy couple right now! As for Shadee and Seb…well…I can’t say just yet!

HRAKLHS_SC
7th Aug 2007, 12:53 PM
Thank you very much!Keep up the great work;)

cory_g
8th Aug 2007, 02:41 PM
You're welcome! :)

sweetbabyhnd2007
8th Aug 2007, 05:11 PM
When will the next update be??? im so curious as to what is going to happen next... Love the story by the way

Inucrazy101
8th Aug 2007, 07:10 PM
Those were very good updates! :P
Please update again...
*backs up from Inner Self*
(I stole a cube of cheese from my Inner Self so now its mad at me...:P)

cory_g
8th Aug 2007, 08:30 PM
sweetbaby: Dunno yet :confused: But I'm glad you're interested in the outcome of the story!

Inucrazy: Thank you! :D Your Inner Self has cheese?!??! Uh oh...can't help it... :P Must have...

savemykissesx
8th Aug 2007, 08:34 PM
Just stopping in to let ya know that I've been reading, as well.. I just found the story two days ago and i caught up :D it's amazing.. can't wait for the next update

cory_g
9th Aug 2007, 07:50 AM
savemykisses: Welcome! :) And thank you very much for taking your time to drop me a line and the nice compliments! :luff:

Princessme
9th Aug 2007, 07:29 PM
I love it :D
Cant wait for the next update ;)

kawaiimeg_SC
11th Aug 2007, 05:25 AM
Great update! I love this story!

cory_g
11th Aug 2007, 08:32 PM
Sophie: Glad you do! ;) I'm not home right now, but as soon as I get back - in a few days - I'll get on to writibg it!

meg: Thank you! :D

wittier112
12th Aug 2007, 06:48 PM
I love this story! It really good!

onsenmark
12th Aug 2007, 10:02 PM
Somehow, I KNEW it would be Hol at the door. XD

Tell us you're gonna throw 'Dee a bone sooner or later... :(

KSpiffy
14th Aug 2007, 10:00 PM
Aaah :D I haven't read this story in forever (I didn't have internet for several months), so when I was able to use it again I hopped on and went searching for this right away ^-^ I was actually afraid I wouldn't be able to find it but I did, and rather easily. I was practically jumping up and down when I suspected Shadee might be pregnant. :o I just wanted to say, Cory, you're an amazing writer and I love your story. Your characters (especially Seb) are very lovable :3 I hope you have many, many future updates.


Kelly

cory_g
15th Aug 2007, 05:47 PM
wittier: Thank you very much! :) BTW I love your Ron avvie! :valentine

mark: Hopefully my next cliffhanger won't be so see-through ;) That I can't tell though...maybe I will, maybe I won't! :D *acts all mysterious*

Kelly: welcome! :D You're very sweet, thank you very much for the nice words! :luff:

~Squash-buddy-ven~
15th Aug 2007, 05:52 PM
Ahh! How could I almost miss an update of this faboulous story? Guess that's what you get for being on holiday. ;) Well, Great chapter as always cory! :) I love that Holly is back for a visit and that she's preggers! I think that her baby will be a pretty little bundle of joy. Can't wait to see her/him. I hope that Shadee will get pregnant too, sometime... That would be so great.
Anyway, I can't wait till the next chapter and see what happens.

cory_g
15th Aug 2007, 05:54 PM
Glad to see you back, hope you had a nice Holliday, Pernille! :) I'm happy you liked Holly's comeback! :D Got to get working on the next chapter though...I'm leaving again quite soon, and I don't want to leave the story hanging again!

cory_g
21st Aug 2007, 01:36 PM
Here's the new chapter. You may find that certain parts lack detail, but I have previously described a similar event and I didn't want to stree the point! ;) Enjoy!

Chapter 29

Life continued its natural course and Holly and Steve settled themselves back in town, living with Holly’s mother. The friendship between her and Shadee strengthened progressively, with the help of many days and evenings spent together. Her belly also got bigger by the day and soon it was no longer a question whether she had a few extra pounds or was actually pregnant.

Approximately six months after her return in town, Holly finally gave birth, but with a twist: she had a gorgeous pair of identical twin boys, whose godparents became Shadee and Sebastien.

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h207/cory_g89/snapshot_32ccc4c8_33d70839.jpg

Only four months after the birth of Martin and Adrian, Shadee and Sebastien finally had their dream wedding in a beautiful chapel in town. It wasn’t a very big affair, but it certainly was a day that wouldn’t be forgotten so easily.

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Shadee’s whole family was there to witness the ceremony where she and Sebastien stood in the spotlight. It could have been said that Gypsy was the most anxious and nervous of them all. She fussed over every tiny detail and stressed herself so much that she was absolutely exhausted on the day of the wedding.

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h207/cory_g89/snapshot_d3d715f2_73d71c35.jpg

Shadee wasn’t as nervous as she had expected, but the walk down the aisle at the arm of her uncle Zenyth really quickened her heartbeat.

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h207/cory_g89/snapshot_d3d715f2_73d71d65.jpg

Everything seemed to happen in slow motion, all the sounds died away as she approached a grinning Sebastien in front of the altar.

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The ceremony itself was quick – the priest’s speech, the vows,

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h207/cory_g89/snapshot_d3d715f2_d3d71f26.jpg

the ring

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h207/cory_g89/snapshot_d3d715f2_d3d71f0e.jpg

and the kiss.

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h207/cory_g89/snapshot_d3d715f2_93d71f44.jpg

The whole thing was over quite soon.

For the honeymoon, they went for only one week on a very beautiful and exotic holiday in the islands, returning with a perfect tan, but evenly empty pockets.

Not soon afterwards, tragedy stroke again in the form of Gypsy’s death. The whole family was devastated, but the one who suffered most was undoubtedly Caleb: Gypsy had been his mother, it had been only the two of them in the big mansion ever since Shadee had left and Menas had died.

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h207/cory_g89/snapshot_12f8bd90_d3d72aaa.jpg

He refused to talk to anybody but Shadee from the day Gypsy died and until the funeral and locked himself up in his room. Only the young woman was allowed to enter the dormitory, to bring him food or water.

After the funeral, Caleb returned from his room with all his bags packed and simply left the mansion for Shadee’s house without as much as looking behind.

It was a terrible ordeal and the whole family was sure that the teenaged boy would never be able to recover from the loss.

But in time everything gets washed away, the pain, the emptiness, the happiness, the joy …

Gerbera
21st Aug 2007, 01:46 PM
Thanks for the update, cory :) Shadee's dress is beautiful, where did you get that?!

It's so sad to see Gypsy die, but you wrote that part so short that one could not really feel sad :/

amalinaball
21st Aug 2007, 02:47 PM
Nooooo! Gypsy, you're gone forever. But at least she got to see her granddaughter get married and she did well to raise all those kids. It's really sad.

Yay! Holly had babies! I can't wait to see how they look when they grow older! Great update - hopefully the next one won't be as sad.

ChrstyFarie07_SC
21st Aug 2007, 02:51 PM
*sniffs*GYPSY!!!!! NOOO! And Holly has babies? Wowy, do they looks cute grown up? Huh? Huh? And THEY GOT MARRIED! Great Update Corg!

BabyGirl250185
21st Aug 2007, 03:40 PM
Great update where did you get Shadee hair from the wedding hair love it

msnicolejones
21st Aug 2007, 04:09 PM
The wedding was beautiful! Poor Caleb. So sad to see Gypsy go.

jenny
21st Aug 2007, 05:26 PM
yeah, you updated!
those babies are soooo cute!!!!!
beautiful wedding...sad about Gypsy though......:(
Maybe shadee concieved on their wedding night...hmmm, maybe:p

sweetbabyhnd2007
21st Aug 2007, 05:28 PM
Im addicted to this story...Wonderful update..Cant wait for the next one

Kyri
21st Aug 2007, 05:52 PM
Yay update :D

Aww... Holly has twins, I'm curious as to how they grow up, their looks and all.

And finally Shadee and Sebastien got married. She has the most beautiful dress.

It's sad that Gypsy died, I felt so sorry for Caleb. I hope tht with the help of Shadee he can overcome his grief.

Stormy_SC
21st Aug 2007, 06:35 PM
Ooh an update!! :anime:

Aww I hope Caleb will be able to cope with Gypsy's death soon. :( And yay for Holly's twins! And another yay for Sebastian and Shadee's wedding! :P Great update!!

White Queen
21st Aug 2007, 06:36 PM
Wow, that was a full chapter, with lots of twists - happy and sad as well...

Shadee made a lovely bride. I really liked the wedding pics. Good job, Cory! :)

msp_teen
21st Aug 2007, 07:20 PM
This is like the best story on the community right now and I am loving every second and minute of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUt NOOOOO Grandma Gypsy died, I loved that woman to death as if she was my own grandma!!!!

Captain THPS4
21st Aug 2007, 07:43 PM
Well, I guess Gypsy's passing had to happen eventually but poor Caleb! I hope the teen angst won't consume him!

leighthesim_SC
21st Aug 2007, 07:49 PM
noooo, not gypsy, i am glad they got married though, what gonna happen to the house i wonder?, i can't wait to here more

hockeyluver99
21st Aug 2007, 09:46 PM
i luved the wedding!
poor gypsy :( thats soo sad.and poor caleb :(
great update!

onsenmark
21st Aug 2007, 11:53 PM
:(

Just... :(

(and it's not helping that I'm listening to Himitsu Kudasai on Winamp right now... and suddenly, I have the urge to watch Megazone 23 Part 2 again. lol. )

But yay for Seb and 'Dee tying the knot. w00t! XD

HRAKLHS_SC
22nd Aug 2007, 12:03 AM
Great Chapter!:)Poor Gypsy!:(
Oh can i ask where did you found:Shadees weeding dress,her hair,the facial hair of Shadees Uncle and Sebs hair in the wedding?Thanks:)Keep up the good work!(sorry for the mistakes)

MrsNsh06
22nd Aug 2007, 12:33 AM
Yay a wedding! That was good, but it was so short, I'm craving an update already :)

cory_g
22nd Aug 2007, 07:48 AM
Gerbera: You’re very welcome! :) Shadee’s dress is from http://www.peggysims2.net/index.htm and donation, but you can surely find it for free at the infamous booty :P . Well, Gypsy’s death had to occur at some point, no one lives for ever and it also adds realism to the story ;) I know I did her death really quick and short, but I had already gone into great detail when Menas died, so I thought I shouldn’t repeat the whole thing, if you know what I mean :D

amalina: If it makes you feel any better she’s still alive in game :giggler: Yep, it was very important to me for Gypsy to be there at Shadee’s wedding, it was as if she had only been living for this and then she was ready to move on :)

Christy: Gyspsy’s death was sad but there were two other happy events in the update to counterbalance the whole thing ;) As for the kiddies, I’ve no idea how they look all grown up, but I’ll make sure they’re identical, even if it means some tinkering in body shop!

Babygirl: thanks! You can find the hair here: http://www.modthesims2.com/showthread.php?t=240614

Nicole: I have a vague feeling that I didn’t put enough effort into describing the wedding…all my ideas seemed to have had this cliché feeling to them, so I just made it short :D We’ll see how Caleb copes with the whole thing in the next chapter ;)

Jenny: I never know about babies…almost all are cute in the baby stage (but for the alien spawns). We’ll see their real faces when they become tots :D I dunno, maybe that whole week they had the opportunity to conceive…we’ll have to wait and see (I have the silent pregnancy flavor pack :P )

sweetbaby: Glad to hear that! :luff:

Kyri: I put a link for the dress if you wanna download ;) I can say I’m quite pleased with the beginning of the next chapter, in terms of what’s coming next, hope you’ll have the questions to your queries then :)

cory_g
22nd Aug 2007, 07:49 AM
Stromy: Thank you! :D 1 bad even and 2 good events = good, not? :D

WQ: Thank you for reading and liking! :D I actually planned in advamce that Holly had twins, it makes things nicer :giggler:

Msp_teen: That is one heck of a nice compliment! *blush* *blush* Thank you very much, I’m sorry Gypsy’s death affected you so muc, but like I said a few answers upwards, she’s still alive ingame, just dead in the story ;)

Captain: I would tell you what happenes next, but that would spoil the “surprise” in the next update :D

leigh: The house will be sold (Gypsy made Shadee promise she would sell the house a few updates ago :D ) and the money, along with the money from the bank accont will be shared among her children, Shadee and Caleb. The latter two will be receiving a slightly bigger ammount due to the fact that they’re younger and cannot earn too much at the time being :)

hockeyluver: Glad you liked it! :D And thanks!

mark: I don’t know how Himitsu Kudasai sounds, but it seems to be something sad…and also have no idea about Megazone… but I feel quite happy that my story can cause feeling :D

HRAKLHS: Thank you! :) You can find the links for the hair and wedding dress among the other answers for this update. I don’t know exactly where I got the facial hair from, but the Body Shop tag says “rapbd-bro” if that helps :D

MrsNsh: Uh oh, I know the whole thing was too short :( I promise I’ll make up in the next update! :)

I will be away for a week, so I appologise in advance for not being able to answer further questions during this period, but I will be more than happy to reply when I come back! :)

cassieandra
22nd Aug 2007, 07:58 AM
Wow great update! I love this story!!