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cory_g
26th Aug 2007, 11:59 AM
Thank you Cassie! :)
onsenmark
26th Aug 2007, 10:49 PM
Okay, in a nutshell: Himitsu Kudasai is one of those very pretty songs that usually plays over a scene of insane carnage in an anime.(namely, the destruction of Megazone 23 in Megazone 32 Part Two) Other examples of this would be:
- Kom, Suesser Tod playing over the Third Impact in End of Evangelion
- Ai, Oboeteimasu ka(Do You Remember Love) playing over the climactic battle scene in the Macross movie.
In any case, it's kind of ironic, because on one hand, you have this beautiful song playing, and on the screen - carnage. O_o wth, Japan. wth?
And I meant to nutshell this, but... *shrug)
Oh, yeah: wiki info on MZ23: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Megazone_23
btw, I should continue my own story, but I haven't been able to, due to work and whatnot. *sigh*
Edit: Okay, to bring this back ontopic, so I don't get berated or something -- tell me that there's going to be a happy ending, maybe. ^^; At least for Caleb -- poor kid's gone though a lot of stuff, ya?
~Squash-buddy-ven~
28th Aug 2007, 8:39 PM
That was quite a turnpoint! It's hard to decide if I'm happy or sad. Holly's boys are adorable and I really like that she got twins. :)
Shadee and Sebastien's wedding are just gorgeous. They both look so beautiful, and Shadee's uncle is a knock-out too! How do you make such good looking sims? ;)
As I read through the chapter I got this jolly feeling inside that everything was going to be alright with Shadee and her family but then Gypsy died and I was so sad. Poor Caleb, now he's got no parents left and he's almost all alone. Thank god he's got Shadee and Sebastien, I really hope that they will take good care of him.
Great chapter though, the good things kind of outweighs the bad thing so it adds up nicely! :D I really love you pictures, you have a great eye for detail and it almost feels like you're right there watching as the story goes by! :)
cory_g
31st Aug 2007, 6:32 PM
mark: Kinda got it, a little too much new information for my overworked brain :lol: Thanks for the detailed insight! As for the happy ending, I can't promise anything! ;)
Pernille: Thank you! I'm glad you didn't get completely sad and depressed, it's not what I meant for my readers. It was just something imminent :)
cory_g
1st Sep 2007, 6:38 PM
Chapter 30
Time continued its flow as if nothing had happened;
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days, weeks, then months went by
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and before anyone knew it, one year and a half had elapsed since the tragic even of Gypsy’s death. Summer had crept once again over the small town engulfing everything in choking heat.
The three inhabitants of number 12, Huntington Road were each doing something completely different.
Happily humming an unintelligible tune, the almost sixteen-year-old teenager was packing up his belongings in a medium sized suitcase.
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He was once again about to leave for the annual summer camp he had attended the previous year. It was sure to be another great holiday spent with his best friends from school, maybe even meet some girls…the possibilities were endless!
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Grinning widely at the prospect, Caleb casually threw the last item of clothing on the big pile in his luggage and proceeded to try and get the thing closed.
In the next room, with the door locked up, Sebastien was straining to find a solution to his problem.
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He wearily took off his glasses and rubbed the bridge of his nose. He wasn’t sure whether the rows of promotions that had propelled him to surgeon had been a good or a bad thing. All he knew was that he had to finish several reports and think of a way to perform a surgery without loosing his patient.
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No one in that house seemed to understand how important each job was for him: someone’s life depended on the hours he spent in his office!
On the other side of the corridor, lying on the king sized bed and staring at the ceiling, was a young woman, deeply immersed in her own problems.
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What had gone wrong, what had happened to the man she loved? Why had everything changed so much in such a short period of time? Why had everything fallen in such a boring routine: wake up, prepare breakfast for Caleb and Sebastien, watch them both leave for either school or work, then wait another half a day until the teenager comes home; have lunch with him, then wait again, sometimes until the wee hours of the morning for the absolutely exhausted husband to come home, only to begin the routine again.
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She couldn’t even remember the last time they had been intimate with each other, it must have been a couple of weeks since that evening.
She wanted her husband back, not the 24/7 working machine she now had. Locking himself up in his office even during the weekend and not coming out unless he was hungry or needed to use the toilet.
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She sighed loudly, aware of the fact that no one could hear her anyway. It didn’t help that her pitiful situation was making her get stressed and cranky. It wouldn’t have been a surprise if her illness returned, the cherry on the cake!
There was a thundering knock on the door that made Shadee start with surprise. Turning her head towards the door – secretly hoping to see her estranged husband – she saw the red mane of hair that belonged to Caleb.
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‘It’s almost time, Shae! The bus should be here any moment.’
‘Uh, ok.’ The young woman stood up from the bed and tried to shrug off all her depressing thoughts ‘Let’s head downstairs then. You can go ahead, I’ll go call Sebastien so we can see you off.’
Caleb opened his mouth to say something, but Shadee just walked past him, so he gave up on whatever he wanted to say.
She approached the door of her husband’s office, drew a deep breath then pushed the door handle. Nothing. The door was locked. She knocked a little louder than she had meant.
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‘Sebastien! Caleb is leaving, come out of there!’
‘Yeah, yeah… I’ll be there in a minute…’ Seb’s muffled voice answered.
cory_g
1st Sep 2007, 6:39 PM
Shadee rolled her eyes and proceeded towards the stairs after Caleb. He was skipping happily along the fence, throwing continuous glances at the road. He looked up and gave his niece a big grin, seeing that she wasn’t in the best of moods.
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‘Got everything packed up?’
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‘Yup!’ the boy answered, patting his suitcase.
‘Do you have any food or water with you, for the road? If you need a sandwitch I can go and fix you something up in a jiffy-’
‘Don’t worry, Shae’ Caleb laughed ‘I’m not going at the other end of the globe! The camp is just a three hour ride away from here.’
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‘Right...’ She grumbled ‘And where’s Seb? He said he’d come to see you off!’
‘It’s okay, I went to say goodbye to him before I came to you. Knew he’d probably forget anyway.’ The boy chuckled, then suddenly took a serious grimace at the furious glance of his niece ‘Oh look, the bus’s coming!’
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He gave Shadee a quick hug and hurried through the wide open doors. The young woman remained there waving and watching until the yellow bus disappeared in the distance.
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She then turned around, glaring at the window of her husband’s office. Typical for Sebastien! What bothered her most was that poor Caleb had already got used to these awful habits of his and didn’t expect anything more from him.
She turned on her heel, marching back inside the house, up the stairs and back in front of the office door. This time she didn’t try to open the door, she simply banged with her fists.
‘Sebastien, you twit!’
‘Uh oh!’
There was a click from the inside of the room and the young man backed away a few steps to let his wife storm her way in.
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‘I’m so so so sorry!’ he began before Shadee could start screaming again ‘I was just about to leave, when this idea hit me-’
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‘An idea isn’t the only thing that’s gonna hit you!’ she roared back, flaring her nostrils ‘You know perfectly well what that boy’s been through! You know he sees a new father figure in you! He’ll be away for two whole months and you can’t even come for a few minutes to say a proper goodbye to him!’
‘I-’
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‘I’ve had it with this! Really! It’s been going like this for almost an year!’ she had rapidly gone from raging anger to being on the verge of tears ‘Why can’t we go back to the way we used to be? Is it really that hard to put work on second place…’
She would have liked to continue saying her mind, but the phone started to ring off the hook.
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While Sebastien returned to his desk to answer it, she ran quickly to the bathroom, as she suddenly felt the urge to vomit.
sweetbabyhnd2007
1st Sep 2007, 6:50 PM
I need another update already lol its killing me...I dont like cliffhangers lol but anyways great update as usual
Stormy_SC
1st Sep 2007, 6:57 PM
Great update, cory g! I feel for Shadee. I hope she finally gets what she's been wanting! ;)
Gerbera
1st Sep 2007, 6:58 PM
Thanks for the update, Cory :D
Poor Shadee, I feel so sorry for her :( I wonder who's on the phone?!
cory_g
1st Sep 2007, 7:08 PM
sweetbaby: it's just a small cliffe :D But I'm happy you enjoyed the update!
Stormy: thank you! Well...there always seem to be some drama going on, one thing or the other not being as it should...I'm rambling! :D
Gerbera: You're welcome! :luff: Glad you brought up the phone call into conversation, it's gone prove important later on ;)
MrsNsh06
1st Sep 2007, 7:31 PM
Hurry! I need more now! :) Please?
Anne_SC
1st Sep 2007, 8:38 PM
Seb is Hot with glasses xD And I love this chapter, I feel so sorry for Shadee! It's like she's the only one who didn't go with time and just stayed as she was.
onsenmark
1st Sep 2007, 9:39 PM
Oh, tell me Caleb reunites with Fiona -- granted it would be cliche, but that'd be cool. XD
Also, anyone wanna take bets on whether 'Dee's preggers for real this time? XD
BabyGirl250185
2nd Sep 2007, 12:14 AM
love the update sade for shadee can't wait for the next update
ending
2nd Sep 2007, 2:42 AM
Ouu cliff hanger :)
This story never gets dull
sweetbabyhnd2007
2nd Sep 2007, 2:50 AM
I really need an update lol I love the story
cory_g
2nd Sep 2007, 12:58 PM
MrsNsh: You're quite right, I do need to hurry, because from the 15th of September school starts and I will be having my highschool graduation exams to learn for... :( Oh well...
Anne: He's an intelectual ;) Yep, she hasn't changed much, let's say a litle in appearence :D
mark: on both accounts...I dunno! :P I sometimes do use cliches...they're nice in a predictable way :D
babygirl: Glad you liked! :) I'll try to write the next update soon!
ending: Yay, I'm so happy you think so! :D Nothing's worse than a dull story!
sweetbaby: Thanks! Like I said, I'll try to be speedy! ;)
hockeyluver99
3rd Sep 2007, 1:20 AM
for some reason this chapter made me sad :( i dont know why though XD
darn the cliffhangers
p.s. heres a thought...maybe Caleb can be a NHL player?lol that just randomly popped into my head
Kyri
3rd Sep 2007, 12:29 PM
I feel sorry for Shadee and hope that they can work out their problems. Nice update, though.
AngelFrouk
3rd Sep 2007, 1:04 PM
Oh my word... I started reading this story when you forst posted it, Cory. Somewhere along the way i lost track of it. But i have read all chapters again (in one night) and i love it. I hope i can keep reading. I love long stories that let characters evolve!
HRAKLHS_SC
3rd Sep 2007, 1:06 PM
Hey Cory GREAT update!Hmmm i think that Shadee is pregnant..:)
Well the school will start in a few days!:(Too bad...:(
leighthesim_SC
3rd Sep 2007, 5:12 PM
nnoooooo........ not a cliff hanger, i don;t like ahveing to wait ages to here what happens, i hope shes preg then seb will have to put work in second place again
cory_g
3rd Sep 2007, 8:11 PM
hockeyluver: well...the chapter did get quite sad when I Shadee's thoughts started... I really like the idea of caleb being a hockey player! :D i'll put him on the school's hockey team for you!
Kyri: Well, we'll have to see about that! ;) But there will be some complications ahead, I guarantee you that!
angel_f: Welcome! :) Wow, I'm so happy you date so far back...it seems like an eternity from the day I started the story! :D thank you for returning and commenting!
HRAKLHS: Thank you! :D She may be or not ( I use the silent pregnancy flavour pack from inteen, so it's always a surprise). yep, school will certainly start cutting back on my sims time *sniffle* :(
leigh: I really hope I can update quicker! :luff: But usually it takes me a whole day just to take the pics :blink:
jenny
3rd Sep 2007, 10:15 PM
oh yeah!
what a great update!!!
can't wait to see what happens next:D
YoaYoakamal
4th Sep 2007, 12:28 PM
It's such an amazing story! I get attached to it more and more with each update......Cory, you are simply an inspiration,Everytime I read the story i feel i want to start one myself....but im too chicken ;) ....LOL !! Keep up the great work!
fexygurl_SC
4th Sep 2007, 5:00 PM
I LOVE this story!!
hockeyluver99
4th Sep 2007, 9:30 PM
lol!your welcome for that random idea lol :)
cory_g
5th Sep 2007, 9:28 AM
jenny: Thanks! :) I'm glad you liked!
Yoa: :luff: Thank you so much! I feel so flattered by your nice words! :) You should go ahead with a story if you have a nice idea in mind, I asure you no one's gonna chop off your head ;)
fexygurl: Thanks! :)
hockeyluver: :) Now I have to think where to incorporate the idea! :D
hockeyluver99
7th Sep 2007, 9:05 PM
well if you do, there are hockey sticks at retailsims lol
:)
White Queen
8th Sep 2007, 10:25 AM
Aw, I'm sorry about what's happening. I hope it won't be long before they rediscover each other. Oh, well, maybe she's pregnant this time... :D
~Squash-buddy-ven~
8th Sep 2007, 1:20 PM
Aww poor Shadee, I feel a little sorry for her.. :( I hope that her and Seb work their problems out! *Crosses fingers* Maybe if they had a little baby to care for? *Hinthint* :D
Great update though, Caleb is growing into a little hottie there. I love his red hair.. :P
emopunk_boii5
8th Sep 2007, 3:08 PM
love y0ur st0ry..
cory_g
8th Sep 2007, 5:39 PM
hockeyluver: Thanks again! :)
WQ: It's all a mystery ;) Thank you for commenting!
Pernille: Oh, I don't know...maybe a baby is exactly what they don't need at the moment ;) I'm pretty happy about the way Caleb is turning out myself! :D
emopunk: Thank you! :D
sweetbabyhnd2007
8th Sep 2007, 11:30 PM
When is the update gonna be posted????Im missing your story like crazy
BabyGirl250185
9th Sep 2007, 12:03 AM
Whens the next update cant hardly wait for it i check the site every 2 ours so pleasssssssseeeeeeeeeeee update soon
cory_g
10th Sep 2007, 3:45 PM
sweetbaby and babygirl, you no longer have to wait! the update is here! :D Sorry for taking so much time!
cory_g
10th Sep 2007, 3:46 PM
Chapter 31
Emerging out from the bathroom, Shadee noticed how silent and deserted the house seemed to be.
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Apparently Sebastien had finished his telephone conversation as no sound was emerging from behind the once again closed door.
She shook her head, then returned to the bedroom for another few hours of solitude. She could start reading a good book or something… Who was she trying to kid? She wouldn’t be able to concentrate on a word, all she could think of was Sebastien, whether he had understood that his marriage life had reached a crisis point, if he was actually giving their previous argument any second thought.
Shadee had lunch all alone in the kitchen.
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She still wasn’t ready to forgive her husband and was determined to let him fend for himself with food, laundry and whatnot. She strained her ears for quite some time afterwards, waiting to hear when he went to get a bite to eat, but her attempts were fruitless. Apparently he wasn’t hungry at all, or maybe had a secret stash of chocolate bars in his office, as he didn’t leave it for the rest of the day.
When evening finally came, the young woman decided to take pity on him and call him for dinner. She once again approached his office door and listened intently for a sound giving away his activities, but still couldn’t make out anything. She knocked. For a few seconds there was no response, but in the end a soft moan beckoned her to enter.
She had expected to find him immersed in some hospital papers or studying some advanced medical books, but his desk was empty and his computer had been turned off. He was simply sitting there, staring at the blank screen, his eyes bloodshot and puffy.
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Shadee stopped in the doorway, surveying him for a few moments, then coughed lightly. Sebastien turned towards her and smiled faintly.
She was quite content at the thought that her words had weighed so much on Sebastien, that he seemed to care for the two them after all and had stopped working to think things over.
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‘Dinner is ready.’ She said quietly, surprised herself at the tenderness in the tone of her voice ‘Come down if you’re hungry.’
She then closed the door with a soft click and descended into the kitchen, starting to lay the table. Soon afterwards, Sebastien appeared into the room, looking slightly dazed and confused.
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He sat down on one of the chairs and dreamily ran a hand through his hair, intently observing the food on his plate.
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Shadee took a seat across from him and proceeded to eat her dinner without speaking. The silence seemed to press on them from all the sides, the woman suddenly regretted calling him down, his presence there next to her. They seemed so estranged and uncomfortable, she couldn’t remember ever having felt that way.
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‘So… who was on the phone earlier?’ she decided to start a neutral topic, not mentioning their previous fight.
Sebastien shrugged, deliberately chewing longer on his bite of steak ‘It was no one important...someone advertising something…’
‘Oh, got it…Did you manage to finish the report for Sloane?’
‘No, not yet.’ He shook his head and bit his bottom lip ‘Got a few more loose ends to tie up…’
Shadee gave up on trying to strike a conversation and returned to eating her dinner in silence. She threw her husband furtive glances from time to time. He seemed to be somewhere far, far away. His eyes were unfocused and his hand kept filling the fork mechanically, without actually registering anything. Finishing the last bite, the young woman stood up to gather the dishes, but Sebastien shook his head at her outstretched hand.
‘No, let me. I’ll do the dishes this time!’
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Shadee grinned widely. He actually cared! They would finally go back to the way they used to be! She giggled happily and craned her neck to give him a light kiss on the lips.
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Sebastien looked at her startled before turning his head in the direction of the door. Her lips touched his cheekbone, suddenly turning cold and numb. She looked at him frowning, feeling deeply hurt. She had spoken too soon…
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‘I’m sorry!’ Sebastien spoke, realising his mistake ‘I just need some time…for…thinking…for myself…’ he sighed and took the dishes to the sink, turning the tap.
Shadee stood there, rooted on the spot for a few moments; she was still shell-shocked about what had just happened.
‘I think it would be better if I slept on the couch tonight.’ Her husband’s voice wafted from the sink.
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Swallowing hard, the young woman nodded and heard her own raspy voice say ‘Okay...’
She turned on her heel and headed back for the bedroom. Several waves of shock swept over her successively. The reflection in the mirror showed a very white face staring back.
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She couldn’t grasp the events, it couldn’t be happening! She had been so sure that Sebastien was her soul mate, that their marriage would be perfect. But now, only two years after uniting their destinies, they seemed to have hit rock bottom. Was this the end?
Gerbera
10th Sep 2007, 4:28 PM
Aww, that's so sad :cry: What's happening next?! I don't hope you let us wait too long ... Anyways, thanks for this update, it's really well-written! :)
leighthesim_SC
10th Sep 2007, 5:37 PM
no this can't happen to shadee and seb, maybe they need a baby, give them a baby.
lovin the story though keep up the good work
jenny
10th Sep 2007, 5:52 PM
ahh, poor shadee...as in real life a baby dosen't always make the marriage better.....great update Cory, can't wait to read what happens next.:)
BabyGirl250185
10th Sep 2007, 6:38 PM
Super update when is the next one
HRAKLHS_SC
10th Sep 2007, 7:46 PM
Great and sad update:)
cory_g
10th Sep 2007, 8:21 PM
Gerbera: Oh, you'll see what happens next, something really interesting! This unless I get carried away and use too many words and I have to update with what i had already written! :) You're welcome! ;)
leigh: At this point I think a baby would only make things worse :lol: Hopefully, she's not pregnant! ;) Thank you!
jenny: I totally agree! :D Thanks, as always I will try to update quickly! :)
babygirl: Glad you liked! ;) Hopefully, the next one will come soon!
HRAKLHS: Thank you! :D
sweetbabyhnd2007
10th Sep 2007, 9:42 PM
I need another update already lol
burning desire
10th Sep 2007, 9:44 PM
Same here. I love the story. Or atleast the parts I have read. I can't wait for the next chapter!
hockeyluver99
11th Sep 2007, 1:42 AM
Oh no!that cant be good :(
grrr it used to be a happy couple :(
Great update!
MarginallyRandom
11th Sep 2007, 1:54 AM
Great update Cory. Very intriguing, can't wait to read what happens next. :D
ChrstyFarie07_SC
11th Sep 2007, 2:03 AM
Oh my god, NO! Seb and Shadee no more? *cries softely* Its can't be happening! Is there another woman? I must kill her *gets rocket launcher out*. Hehe great update Cory!!! :D :D :D
msnicolejones
11th Sep 2007, 4:00 AM
Oh no, it can't be the end. They are my perfect couple! What is going on with Seb?
Great update Cory!
Stormy_SC
11th Sep 2007, 7:36 AM
Maybe Seb secretly blames her for not being able to have children. That happens sometimes. :hmm: I hope they are able to work things through. I also hope Seb isn't cheating on her, but then again, it wouldn't be a story if something bad didn't happen. Great update, cory! :D
~Squash-buddy-ven~
11th Sep 2007, 10:57 AM
Aww! What a sad update! Maybe they need some marriage counseling? I hope they work it out and that my worst fears aren't coming true! Seb's not having another woman, right? *Gets ready for battle*
Great update though Cory! :D
cory_g
11th Sep 2007, 12:21 PM
sweetbaby: :lol: You're in a hurry! :P I'll do my best!
London: Welcome! :) Thank you, I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story's parts! And I must say, you're very pretty and congrats on the baby! :D
hockeyluver: Yep, not good! :/ I wonder what the furture brings - as if I didn't know! :P
Margi: Welcome and thank you! :) I'll try to let everyone know what happens next as soon as possible!
Christy: It's quite sad, isn't it? I can't say more, but I guess everyone will get a little angry at the next chapter :giggler:
nicole: I'd tell, but then I'd ruin the whole surprise... :P Thank you!
Stormy: Those could be some viable plots :D There is something going on and you’ll find out in the next installment! ;) Thank you!
Pernille: Marriage counseling? I’m not entirely sure it would work in their situation :D Thanks! :luff:
YoaYoakamal
11th Sep 2007, 12:58 PM
That's so sad :(
I reallyyy hope Seb and Shadee patch things up!
but Great Updateeeeee :))))))))))
msp_teen
11th Sep 2007, 7:03 PM
It really is sad they were so happy before and now its like everyone is getting all sad..I'll be glad when I see some smiling faces again!
Kyri
12th Sep 2007, 10:04 AM
Oooohhh.... I want to know what's going on...
I feel sooooo sad for Shadee, I do hope he isn't cheating on her...
cory_g
13th Sep 2007, 9:02 AM
Yoa: thank you! :) Glad to see you enjoyed!
msp: It may be some time before that... :D but I'm zipping it!
Kyri: You will ;) Who knows what's going on with Seb... oh the drama! :D
Jasmin_SC
13th Sep 2007, 3:30 PM
Bad Sep! She's your soul mate give her some attention :handbag:
Love this story, your sims are gorgeous and I'm hooked :)
emopunk_boii5
14th Sep 2007, 4:41 PM
Whaatt?!?! OMG. dis cant be happening!!
msp_teen
14th Sep 2007, 5:08 PM
Sounds great Cory.....and tell me about it emopunk_boii5
emopunk_boii5
15th Sep 2007, 7:18 PM
uhm.. i think seb is cheating on shadee! oh well! i don't know! so i'll just wait for the nxt update.. :)
jennywren
15th Sep 2007, 10:21 PM
he had better not be cheating on her, I can be quite the nutter when I want to be, I have a baton somewhere *hums teenagers - MCR*
brilliant update cory! whens the next?
cory_g
16th Sep 2007, 2:52 PM
Jasmin: Thank you very much! :)
emo: Can it not? :D Who knows what's going on! The next update will eventually come, I've finished half of it!
msp: Yep, misery has a tendency to be very entertaining in stories :lol: I always look forward to writing sad parts! :D
Jennywren: hey, there! :) haven't seen you in quite a while!A baton? Uh oh, Seb should watch his back then! Thank you! :anime:
sweetbabyhnd2007
16th Sep 2007, 3:09 PM
Cant wait for the next update..your such a talented writer
Captain THPS4
16th Sep 2007, 6:46 PM
Great update! Can't wait to find out what's up with Seb....
jennywren
16th Sep 2007, 8:15 PM
you got that right, lovin it
Loco
17th Sep 2007, 2:56 PM
This is sad... :( Things have to go okay, it's Seb and Shadee! Al the same, amazing updates. :D Keep it up, I can't wait for more!
cory_g
19th Sep 2007, 2:33 PM
I started school this monday and I'm already feeling tired as crap... :( The teachers keep reminding us of our finals already and it's all "wah". Oh, well I did have to go through this at one point or another. But I probably finish writing and posting the update, sometime during the weekend. :)
sweetbaby: Thank you very much! I'll do my best to update this we! :D
Captain: You will find out next tim! ;) thanks
Jennywren: *fears for Seb's life* :lol:
Loco: We'll see about that! ;) Thank you!
joanne_SC
19th Sep 2007, 2:42 PM
oh yay! it took me three days on and off to get thru it .... and finally i have, great sotry cory i really love it ... i cant wait to see what happened the shadee and seb in the coming chapters. im predicting not good things :D
Tjaames
19th Sep 2007, 4:16 PM
Cory I am just IN LOVE with this story!
cory_g
22nd Sep 2007, 8:25 AM
Joanne and TJ, welcome to both of you! :D
joanne: Thank you very much for the compliments! :) Your predictions are quite good, may I add! ;)
TJ: Aww, thank you! :luff:
sweetbabyhnd2007
23rd Sep 2007, 12:57 AM
Cant wait for the next update and Where do you get Shadee's clothing ?
cory_g
24th Sep 2007, 7:48 PM
I'm afraid I couldn't keep my promise and update this we... :( sorry, but i was really busy studying. My schedeule is so full, I absolutely have no idea when I will be able to post a new chapter. Hope you can find the patience to bear with me through this year of hell... :|
sweetbaby: most of my clthes are from sites that have closed down, but the more recent that i like are from glamorouslounge
Stormy_SC
24th Sep 2007, 8:01 PM
It's ok Cory. Everyone has been a bit busy with school and stuff. We'll still be here. Take your time. After all, school does come first. :)
sweetbabyhnd2007
24th Sep 2007, 9:04 PM
I'm afraid I couldn't keep my promise and update this we... :( sorry, but i was really busy studying. My schedeule is so full, I absolutely have no idea when I will be able to post a new chapter. Hope you can find the patience to bear with me through this year of hell... :|
sweetbaby: most of my clthes are from sites that have closed down, but the more recent that i like are from glamorouslounge Thanks..Just take your time updating .
Jordan09
24th Sep 2007, 9:59 PM
I'm afraid I couldn't keep my promise and update this we... :( sorry, but i was really busy studying. My schedeule is so full, I absolutely have no idea when I will be able to post a new chapter. Hope you can find the patience to bear with me through this year of hell... :|
sweetbaby: most of my clthes are from sites that have closed down, but the more recent that i like are from glamorouslounge
Thats fine! Real life comes before Sims . . . . Even though alot of us wish it was the other way around! :)
White Queen
25th Sep 2007, 7:13 PM
Darn, things are getting worse! :( I wonder what came over him...
cory_g
29th Sep 2007, 8:10 PM
Thank you very much for understanding! :luff: In the end I manged to finish chapter 32, which I had started a little before the beginning of the school year. :) I will now be locking away my sims cds and ignore the game for a few months. Sorry it's going to take this long for the next update, especially since I'm leaving you guys with a cliffhanger :(
For the mods: Please don't delete the thread! I still plan to finish the story after I'm done with my exams! :)
cory_g
29th Sep 2007, 8:12 PM
Chapter 32
Shadee had a very restless night, all alone in the huge bed. Even though there hadn’t been any interaction between the two of them in the past couple of weeks, she had got too used to feeling him there next to her, hearing his rhythmical breath.
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Something was going on with Sebastien and this time it was no longer a question of him being preoccupied with work, reports and surgeries. The thought that a reassessment of his marriage had made him think their union was worthless made Shadee cringe painfully. She still loved him, her heart still raced every time they kissed or snuggled.
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And the phone call…maybe that phone call had not been “someone advertising something”, maybe its importance was greater than Sebastien had let her think. What if there was someone else… No! She couldn’t allow her mind to stray that far!
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She reached the decision of confronting him first thing in the morning, to clear the air once and for all. One thing that she had learned from their argument was that it wasn’t a good idea to pretend nothing had happened and everything was okay when it actually wasn’t.
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She finally fell asleep at three o’clock in the morning and tossed and turned in her bed until seven. Going down for breakfast, she noticed with disappointment that her husband had already left for work, as the couch was empty.
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She would call him a little later at the hospital and ask him to hurry up when coming home, as they had a few problems to sort out.
The young woman had a scant breakfast, then tidied around the house and especially in Caleb’s bedroom, who was a typically shambolic teenager.
She then picked up the phone and dialed the number of the hospital. The cold voice of the receptionist answered her.
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‘Glenwood Hospital, how may I help you?’
‘Hello, I’m Shadee Bronfield. I’d like to talk to Dr. Bronfield if that’s possible.’
‘Dr. Bronfield took the day off, m’am. He didn’t come to work at all, rescheduled all his appointments.’
‘Oh.’ All the air seemed to be sucked away from her lungs ‘Okay, thank you.’
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The rest of the day all Shadee could do was pace up and down the corridor and look out the window every few seconds. Where was he? He hadn’t mentioned a word about this! What if this wasn’t a first for him? What if this had been happening under her nose, Sebastien actually going to see some other woman. The though was unbearable, but possible nonetheless. She tried her best to keep her calm and not go nuts while waiting for him.
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Finally, after what seemed to have been an eternity, Sebastien’s slightly distant shadow appeared on the sidewalk. Shadee wanted to run out and confront him there and then, but thought better of it.
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This proved to have been a good decision as only a few seconds later another shadow approached quickly that of Sebastien’s. It was a woman!
Heart beating frantically, Shadee pressed her nose to the window, trying to take in all the details of what was going on. The woman was a skinny blonde, wearing quite a revealing red dress, matching hat and shades.
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She put a hand on Sebastien’s shoulder and turned him around, her shiny, red lips pursed to a seductive smile. Shadee could only see Seb’s back, so she couldn’t realise what sort of facial expression he had.
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The mysterious woman said something, batting her lashes and leaning in on him. Sebastien seemed quite petrified as the woman went on talking. If only she could hear what the woman was saying! But it was quite obvious that she was no stranger to him, as she stretched a white, long-finger hand and caressed his cheek.
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Cold, icy air seemed to surround Shadee as she watched her worst nightmare playing before her eyes. She could feel tears taking shape, obscuring her view, but blinked them quickly away, in order not to loose any movement of lips or gesture, aware that this only worsened her condition. What nerve Sebastien had, daring to flirt with that woman directly in front of their house!
The blonde came even closer to him, as if leaning in for a kiss and Seb took a step backwards, throwing cautious looks down the street and at the house. Shadee quickly hid away from the window’s frame, she didn’t want to break the party, not now when she would finally have her answers!
The lovely couple seemed to realise it wasn’t too safe to be flirting around in front of the house, so they said a formal goodbye and parted ways, Sebastien slowly and thoughtfully opening the gate and walking down the path to the porch.
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cory_g
29th Sep 2007, 8:12 PM
He entered the house, looking so tired and anguished that he almost didn’t notice Shadee standing there, her arms crossed.
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‘Who was that woman?’ her voice sounded coarse and menacing, but calm at the same time; it made Sebastien start and give a forced smile.
‘Oh, it was you Shadee!’ he breathed wearily ‘Scared the living days out of me…’
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‘You still haven’t answered my question… And before you hurry to give me an answer, you could also tell me where you’ve been today. I called you at work and they told me you’d taken the day off…’
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Sebastien frowned, being cornered and unable to blurt out convincingly enough lies. His mind was racing, he had to make a plan and quickly. He had had it with everything!
‘I’m sick of being yelled at!’ he fumed, raising the tone of his voice slightly.
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‘I’m glad to hear that, honey!’ Shadee burst out, unable to contain herself anymore ‘But, unless you haven’t noticed, our marriage is going down the drain and you’re the one responsible for this!’
‘Maybe this is for the best then! Maybe I’m just tired of not being understood by my own wife-’
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‘NOT BEING UNDERSTOOD?!? Who do you think has been putting up with your lack of involvement? You think I haven’t tried to get why you never come home earlier, why you never get out of that d*mn office of yours?!? But now I seem to understand!’ she gestured towards the door ‘How long has this been going on for?!?’
‘You know what? I don’t have to do this! I don’t have to answer all your stupid questions!’ Sebastien barked, stormed past her and ran up the first flight of stairs, turning to her again ‘All I want right now is to be as far away from you as possible!’
Shadee heard him stomp all the way upstairs and bang some doors. In a few minutes’ time he was back with a few bags packed and some books under his arm. Without even looking at his wife, he determinately walked out of the door and disappeared into the reddish light cast by the setting sun.
leighthesim_SC
29th Sep 2007, 8:32 PM
nnnoooooo shadee and seb were ment to be the perfect cupple
KaTiE-RoSe
29th Sep 2007, 8:32 PM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
dont make them break up!!!
cant wait for the next chapter
msnicolejones
29th Sep 2007, 10:04 PM
I can't believe things have turned out like this for Shadee and Seb. They were such a perfect, happy couple.
Good luck with school and your exams! Some things are more important than the Sims. This is a great story so I'm sure the update will be worth the wait.
hockeyluver99
29th Sep 2007, 11:02 PM
omg.thats really sad. :( i dont want them to break up.thats really sad :( good update though
MrsNsh06
29th Sep 2007, 11:16 PM
Why did you ruin them? I'm so upset. I wanted them to be happy. I hope this isn't permanent. :(
XsnowdropX
29th Sep 2007, 11:36 PM
Nooooo Sebastian you bad boy!! *slaps with a fishy*
haha. Good update:)
Loco
29th Sep 2007, 11:37 PM
NO! :( That's too sad. Seb, what went wrong?! I miss him. Already. Amazing update, but you have to make it all go well!
jenny
29th Sep 2007, 11:56 PM
hmm, things may not be what they seem......I'm not going to dog Seb yet.....great update!
SpoiledxxAngel
30th Sep 2007, 12:05 AM
:lurks in: I bet that woman he's seeing is Regina. :lurks out:
:lurk:
emopunk_boii5
30th Sep 2007, 3:49 AM
Nooo!! =((
BabyGirl250185
30th Sep 2007, 5:48 AM
Oh no he didn't do that.
I love the update hope the next one is soon can't wait to see what happens
Captain THPS4
30th Sep 2007, 6:29 AM
Darn that's really too bad they're separating since they have known each other since high school! Ugh, that woman is probably seeing other men too. I'm going to miss this story, but I can relate as I've been in grade 12 for only a month and it seems way tougher than last year so I'll wait patiently for your next update. :)
~Squash-buddy-ven~
30th Sep 2007, 10:00 AM
URGH, what happened? I hope they aren't splitting up or anything. They were so cute together..
Anyway, I wish you the best of luck with your exams and I'll wait patiently for your next update! Can't wait to see if Seb comes back or not and who that woman is! :)
AngelFrouk
30th Sep 2007, 4:55 PM
Maybe it isn't too bad (i hope), we never saw Seb's mom. Maybe it's his mom...
*tries to keep the good mood*
White Queen
30th Sep 2007, 5:18 PM
:blink: OMG, NO! Just like that ?!
I really, really hope it's not what it seems... :lonely: And he was a bit too harsh on her!!! :mean:
I'm curious about that woman, but I'll be nice and patient until the next update. You take your time and sort out RL! ;) Good luck with your exams! *hug*
onsenmark
30th Sep 2007, 11:45 PM
What in the flaming blue monkey... I...
...the heck happened?
What, is Seb turning into his DAD now? What's next, is he gonna open a sixer and start whaling on random passersby? O_o;;;;;;;;;;;
I'm so confused...
Stormy_SC
1st Oct 2007, 12:04 AM
What the-- :blink: What just happened?? Who was that woman? What's going on with Seb?! Oh geez, the suspense is killing meeeee! :gonemad:
Awesome update! Update as soon as you can! :)
Trina_SC
1st Oct 2007, 1:37 AM
OMG! He left? I figure that the woman is probably his mom but why wouldn't he just tell Shadee!! Great update - I'm totally loving this story. The update was well worth the wait!! :thumbsup
amalinaball
1st Oct 2007, 6:27 PM
OK, that's it. Me no like Seb any more - unless he can justify his actions, Shadee should really just dump him on the spot. Where's all the cheer and happiness gone to? Waaaah! :(
He must be :screwy: if he thinks he can have an affair while he has someone like Shadee who loves him so much. Or maybe he's not having an affair...problems at work, perhaps?
Awesome update, but please, I want everything to be ok!
msp_teen
4th Oct 2007, 1:46 PM
OMG are you friggin kidding me...that wasnt suppose to happen....that was so sad, I hope something doesnt happen that I think is going to happen!!!
FurryPanda
5th Oct 2007, 5:12 AM
ZOMG!!!!! This was that story I read before I joined that I forgot the title of!!! Joined partially cause I wanted to give props and I sat down and read it in enitrety and tis brilliant!!! Update soon and happy simsing!!
Kyri
5th Oct 2007, 11:16 AM
Nooooooooo, :(
Seb is now officially on my 'sims-i-don't-like'-list.
Too bad updates will be suspended for now, but your exams are way more important than the Sims. Good luck with them.
Jordan09
6th Oct 2007, 7:44 PM
I finally comment again, yey, I meant to ages ago but now I will after reading the new uodate, sucks u gotta put the story away for a while but Ill keep readin when you resume :D
Good luck with your exams :)
Dreea
6th Oct 2007, 7:55 PM
Awsome story. :)
BabyGirl250185
7th Oct 2007, 10:40 PM
Still hoping for an update soon
pleassssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
girl5874
12th Oct 2007, 12:45 AM
It's been so long since I posted, I love lurking, but please, update!!!!!1111ONEONEEINZ!!!!!!!!!!!!! :lurk:
2qewl4u
14th Oct 2007, 1:03 PM
hey i just wanted to tell u how much of a talented writer u r!!! i read all 32 chapters in less than 3 days!!! its really more than brilliant! keep it up ;)
2qewl4u
17th Oct 2007, 8:43 PM
hey me again :D i just wanted 2 ask when ur exams were goin 2 end??
sweetbabyhnd2007
17th Oct 2007, 9:29 PM
Your a really talented writer..Please update really soon.
clairexclaire
18th Oct 2007, 6:46 AM
NOO! you can't make them break up!! they are such cute couple!! noooo!! btw, great update! lab it! <3
iampinkstar_SC
19th Oct 2007, 1:08 AM
I agree, he needs some councelling, a good crack around the head and then he needs to go back to his wife and apologise!!
They were meant for eachother since day one!
YoaYoakamal
27th Oct 2007, 6:36 PM
Cory :) No pressure here just want to make sure u r fine... and I miss ur updates :)
cory_g
28th Oct 2007, 9:33 PM
Hey guys! I know I haven’t been around for a very long time, but I came to answer your posts and just assure you all again that I will come back to this story in a few months, after my exams and everything. Thank you for your patience! :)
leigh: Well, things are not always what they seem to bemant to be – I know, I’m confusing! :D
Katie-Rose: Well, they have actually broke up. I know it’s sudden and far from understandable, but you will get to find out the truth behind everithing eventually.
msnicolejones: Just like real life, there isn’t perfect. There are ups and downs and they have to find a way around them in order to keep their sanity. I hope they’ll manage that! :) And thank you very much, I really look forward to having finished with this hectic learning schedeule and being able to return to the things I enjoy most – Sims and writing!
Hockeyluver: Thanks! This whole thing was something I had planned for a long time, so I’m glad you enjoyed the twist!
MrsNsh: I would give you a better answer, but I would give away too much and ruin your surprise… so I’m just gonna ask you to hang on for a few more months and find everything out! :D
snowdrop: Oh no! Not the fishy slap! :D Thanks
Loco: Thank you! Sebastien snapped, but with a reason… gah, I wish I could tell more! :)
jenny: Your attitude is very cautious… we’ll have to wait and see why seb went whacky ;)
SpoiledAngel: Welcome and I’m glad to see you interrupted lurking to drop a line. I’m afraid though that Regina has left the picture forever, being burried in a marital hell :D
emopunk: That was short, but I get perfectly well what you meant! :D
babygirl: Glad you liked it! :) As for the next update, it’s gonna take some time, sorry!
Captain: I always get sad at the news that peopla I had thought were happy are separating, so I get what you mean! Good luck with school for you too! ;)
Pernille: Quite a tragedy happened… I’m not going to elaborate but I can happily announce that you will evetually have your answers! Thank you very much for the wishes! :luff:
angel: Maybe she is, maybe she isn’t. But he would have stayed there and explained, not ran away ;)
WQ: Yep, it was something that simply happened out of the blue! Thank you for being patient about everything! :)
cory_g
28th Oct 2007, 9:35 PM
Mark: :lol: Flaming blue monkey! That was a good one! Confusion is sometimes a good things, it makes people curious. But having to wait so much for an answer is not such a good thing, so I’m sorry for that :/
Stormy: I’d so like to come out about everything! But I can’t…thank you for understanding! :)
Trina: Welcome and thank you very much for commenting! I really hope you won’t get fed up with the waiting and still follow the story when I so-to-say “return” :)
amalina: I felt the same way, just by writing this update. I just want to tell you that things will be okay as a whole in the end, one way or another *is being confusing again* :D
msp_teen: Yes, not supposed to happen, but it did. Now all we have to do is find out why! :D
FurryPanda: Welcome! :D It’s a really nice compliment, to be part of the reason someone joined a forum! I’m happy you enjoy and I hope you’ll stick with my story till the very end! :)
Kyri: I sense very gloomy days for Seb :lol: Thank you very much for being so understanding!
Galactic: Thank you! :D I hope to see you again when I return, though I have a feeling I will be loosing quite a lot of readers for taking such a big break… I would be loosing interest as well, not reading anything for such a long time! :(
cory_g
28th Oct 2007, 9:36 PM
Dreea: Welcome and thank you! :)
girl: I wish I could fulfil your wish, but I am totally unable to do so at the moment! I’m sorry…
2gewl4u: Welcome! Thank you very much for reading and commenting! :) It means a lot to me! I will be ready with everything sometine at the end of July next year. I know it’s a very long period of time, but I hope you’ll be able to hold on until then :)
Sweetbaby: Thank you! :luff:
claire: Welcome! :D Time will tell what happens next, maybe they’ll get back together, maybe they’ll each find someone else to be happy with, maybe they’ll remain miserable for the rest of their simlife… Thank you! :)
pinkstar: That’s some kind of counseling! :lol: But I have to agree they were quite compatible…
Yoa: Yep, I’m still breathing… thank you for the concern :luff: I miss upading a lot as well!
Stormy_SC
28th Oct 2007, 11:21 PM
A few months?! :( I understand. Good luck on everything! :)
cory_g
4th Nov 2007, 2:17 PM
Thank you for understanding, hun! :luff:
JrockSlore
4th Nov 2007, 4:28 PM
<333 Aww... =[ I thought Seb was so good too. ='[
amalinaball
4th Nov 2007, 4:29 PM
I'm sure I can wait for as long as it takes. Real life comes first! :D
Good luck with your exams!
FurryPanda
4th Nov 2007, 4:39 PM
Your exams take months? Well, I'll sit tight and wait, but darn I am goin to actively avoid whatever state you live in dahl. Good luck, hope you pass, update soon and happy simsing!
Gallowsraven
10th Nov 2007, 10:46 PM
Well, I disappeared for a couple months and now that I'm reading the story again I'm amazed at all that's happened! Really really good, Cory! I never expected things to go the way they're going.......
Good luck on your exams!
Gallows ^^"
onsenmark
15th Nov 2007, 7:34 PM
*blinks* moar? please?
Carramaena
16th Nov 2007, 1:22 AM
Oh gosh, WHY CAN'T ANY SIM STORIES NOT HAVE PEOPLE SPLITTING UP!
I'm so sappy, peace and happiness please! Great story so far ;D
cory_g
20th Nov 2007, 8:10 PM
Jrock: Welcome! :) People are very complex cretures, you think you've got someone figured out, then poof! it all blows up in your face!
amalina: There's heck of a lot to learn, so thank you for undertsanding! :luff:
FurryPanda: Actually they only take a few hours :P But I have to prepare in advance, two years' worth of knowledge for various subjects... Thank you for the wishes! :D
Gallows: Aww, I'm really happy you returned and reenjoyed the twists of my story! :) Hopefully, you'll still be here for the rest! Thank you!
mark: Wish I could! :( But I'm more often than not dead tired and unable to write a thing... sorry
Carramaena: Welcome! :) What's a story without the classic drama? ;) Even though it's cliche, one still wonders what will happen next. Thanks :D
icehockeygirl9090
27th Nov 2007, 10:54 PM
hey its me hockeyluver (i had to get a new account)
cant wait for the next update!!!!
little Caleb is gonna play hockey (u didnt forget did u? lol)
mainegal32
9th Dec 2007, 7:59 PM
Wow, I read this story in one sitting and I LOVE it. Gosh, when will Shadee catch a break? I love her and I'm rooting for her happyending! I really hope it's with Seb. Can't wait for an update.
BabyGirl250185
20th Dec 2007, 10:05 PM
You are killing me with curiosity
Please update soon
.:xin2deepx:.
20th Dec 2007, 10:45 PM
OMG!
So, I just read ALL of the chapters in like an hour.
I have got to say that you have some amazing talent!
:gjob:
There are so many questions running through my head right now!
Seb and Shadee seemed to be the perfect couple!
I guess 'seemed' is the key word there.
Anyway, keep up the good work and update soon!
:bunny:
PS: Seb better get his a** back to that house or he's going to have some serious problems. Plus all of the issues that he has now.
onsenmark
31st Dec 2007, 11:06 PM
*poke* Moar soon? XD
(I mean, since my own story is pretty much gone from here, anyway, and I can only access the first page through archive.org, maybe. *sigh* Maybe a reboot is in order, I dunno.)
auroraspirit
1st Jan 2008, 3:30 AM
Haven't read this story in donkey ages, Shadee and Seb life's are in ruins, its always hard to mend a situation like this...
Auroraspirit :angel:
cory_g
6th Jan 2008, 9:31 AM
Hello everyone! :D I came by to “visit” and wish you all a belated Happy New Year! :D I’m also going to modify the title of the story to suit the break I’m on. Don’t give up on me! :)
hockeyluver/icehockeygirl: Hey there! :D I’m sorry to hear about your account. Well, if you already managed to wait this long for an update, there’s still just a little bit more :) And of course, I’ll keep my promise with Caleb playing hockey!
mainegal: Welcome! :D I’m really glad you read it all so quick and enjoyed! :) Hope the update I deliver next (sometime in summer) will live up to your expectations!
babygirl: I can’t just yet… :( Sorry, but I haven’t given up on the story, I’ll finish it! That’s a promise ;)
in2deep: Welcome! :) Aww, that’s very nice of you, I’m really happy you like it! :lol: Seb really has issues, but I’m not saying what they are just yet :P
mark: Oh, what happened? I’m really sorry to hear that! As for my story, there’re only a few more months to go! :D
aurora: Well, I’m always happy to see people come back :D Life ain’t always perfect and I really wanted to incorporate that in my story. I hope I managed :D
cory_g
30th Jul 2008, 8:07 PM
Chapter 33
Shadee just stood there, her mouth slightly open and eyes widened in sheer surprise. Sebastien had just left…he had just walked out the front door, probably never to return again. She looked at the wooden door, still ajar, noticing the glowing red light spreading over the floor.
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Calm and determined, the young woman took a few steps towards the entrance and softly pushed the door shut. Just then did the wave of shock hit her. Her knees started to shake uncontrollably, but she didn’t make any effort to keep her balance and dropped swiftly to the floor, streams of tears running down her face. She was alone! Her marriage was over! Sebastien had left her for good!
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She suddenly found it impossible to breathe and desperately gasped for air, but her windpipe appeared to be obstructed by something very big and heavy. The clothes seemed to have gained a will of their own and were strangling her, pressing on her chest and lungs. With feverish moves, Shadee tore at them with her trembling hands, finally managing to get them all off, and remained stark naked in the middle of the hallway.
Still finding it hard to breathe, choking in her tears, she abruptly stood up and grabbed the nearest phone off the hook, dialing the number of the only person that could help her through those moments.
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‘Holly!’ she gasped for air again, but couldn’t finish her sentence.
‘Shae! What’s wrong? Is everything ok?’
‘He left-’ Shadee finally managed to mumble. The fact that she had stated it aloud made everything even more real ‘He’s gone!’
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‘Who left? What happened? Are you hurt?! Ah, never mind! Don’t leave anywhere, I’ll be there in a few minutes!’
Hearing the tone at the other end of the line, Shadee felt more alone and desperate than ever. It really was the first time she was experiencing those feelings. She stood up again from the corner she had been cowering into, but her vision blurred and she suddenly felt queasy. She tried to grab something for support as her eyes became more unfocused, but her hand simply grasped out in thin air, then fell alongside her limp body on the floor with a small thud.
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cory_g
30th Jul 2008, 8:08 PM
It was like a dream, a pleasant dream where she was spinning round and round and round, never stopping, never knowing whether it was reality or not. But the dream broke.
Shadee’s eyelids flickered slightly and she opened her eyes to find herself, predictably, in a hospital bed. She had recognised the symptoms of a blackout, but she had no idea for how long she had been out. As there was no one else in the room, she quickly spotted the nurse button and pressed it once. A few minutes later a pleasant woman opened the door to her ward.
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‘You’re up Mrs. Bronfield? Good, good.’ She approached her bed and did a short routine check on the young woman ‘Is there anything you need?’
‘Mm… I am a little hungry actually… but I’d also like to know what happened and how long I’ve been…um…sleeping?’
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The nurse hesitated slightly, but in the end answered Shadee’s questions. ‘Your friend, Holly Rendell called an ambulance from your house. You had apparently collapsed.’ She stopped and bit her bottom lip. Shadee had a vague idea why as well: she did remember having completely undressed herself before calling Holly; plenty of questions must have arisen as to why she was lying there, stark naked. ‘You were rushed into the hospital, Dr Holms decided to administrate you some sedatives and then ran some tests. You’ve been out for almost thirteen hours now.’
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‘But that’s not the correct procedure!’ Shadee was revolted; in what hospital had she landed? ‘He wasn’t supposed to put me to sleep! He should have helped me wake up, then run the tests and everything. I know this, my husband’s a…’ her voice trailed off; she wasn’t really sure whether she still had a husband anymore.
‘Oh, I know Mr. Bronfield! You’re at Glenwood Hospital!’ the nurse nodded eagerly ‘And you shouldn’t worry, Dr Holms is one of the best we have, he wouldn’t have done anything to put you at risk.’
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Shadee didn’t put up a fight anymore, even though she still wasn’t satisfied with the way she had been treated. But she felt tired and exhausted of the strength to continue arguing on the point, despite the fact that she had slept for almost thirteen hours.
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‘Is Holly here?’ she asked after a small pause.
‘No, she left approximately one hour ago. She asked me to tell you her husband had called because one of her sons had fever. There wasn’t anything for her to do here anyway.’ The nurse winked at her friendly, then headed for the door ‘I’ll bring you breakfast, then Dr Holms is going to come to talk to you and I think you’ll be free to go home afterwards.’
‘Mmhm…hospital food ain’t that bad…’ Shadee thought a few minutes later, while munching on a piece of buttered toast from the tray the nurse had brought her.
The ward she was in seemed really nice as well. Lucky thing, she had Bronfield as a last name…
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A soft knock on the door interrupted her train of thought and a friendly young man entered the ward.
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‘ Good morning, Mrs Bronfield! I hope I’m not getting in the way of your breakfast!’ the doctor smiled and walked closer to her bed, putting his clipboard on a table.
‘Ah, no, I was just about to finish.’ Shadee pushed the tray away and sat up straighter in the bed. All she wanted was to get out of that hospital and return home to cry and wail a bit more.
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‘Good, good.’ The young man pulled a chair next to her bed and stretched his hand ‘I’m Dr Kevin Holms and I was the one who ran all the tests on you. Should we get down to business?’
‘Sure.’
‘Well, your blood tests showed me that your iron levels are quite low, which means you are susceptible for anemia, so I’ll prescribe you some iron tablets and such. Also your glucose levels are close to the lowest threshold, but no worries here, you are just eligible for an excuse to eat more chocolate!’ he laughed shortly, then continued to read his clipboard ‘I have tested your hormone levels as well and I must say, your progesterone is sky-high. This may give us a clue as to why you collapsed.’
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‘But what does all this mean, doctor?’
‘Well, it means I should be congratulating you, Mrs. Bronfield. You’re pregnant!’
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***
I'm back! :)
Luthiies
30th Jul 2008, 8:45 PM
So great to see that you've updated Cory !
Poor Shadee, that's such a bad timing !
jenny
30th Jul 2008, 9:27 PM
great to see you back:D and great update! I knew she was pregos...figures....
sugaplum
30th Jul 2008, 9:56 PM
yay another chapter. I have been waiting ages to post a comment on here.
now Im hooked to this story.
YoaYoakamal
30th Jul 2008, 11:51 PM
Coryyy u r back alright!!! ;) VERY GOOd JOB!! WOW!
Olivejuice
31st Jul 2008, 1:15 AM
Oh yay!! This is terrific! I'm so glad you're back Cory! :D
What a surprise. Although I was expecting something like that was going to happen. Oh, and I loved the last shot you had of Shadee! Priceless!
Dreea
31st Jul 2008, 1:44 AM
YEEEEEEEEEEY! SUPER! COOL! So glad to see you back :) and read this wonderful story
sweetbabyhnd2007
31st Jul 2008, 2:58 AM
im so happy that this story is back,,,i have missed it so much
alliemarie2323
31st Jul 2008, 3:58 AM
I love this story. I read it for what seemed to be hours on end and now I'm hooked. Keep writing, you're great at it.
I'm so glad to see this is back up. The suspense has been killing me. :)
cory_g
31st Jul 2008, 7:57 AM
Luth: You know, we have Murphy's laws doing their magic here! :D
jenny: Great to be back! Hehee, I tried to mask it but still give out hints about her pregnancy, now it's out in the open! :lol:
Katy: Well, I'm glad I could deliver.
Yoa: Thank you very much! :)
Olivejuice: I was actually unsure whether I would be able to return, this year has really taken its toll on me, but I hope I can get this story finally done, I've been dragging it along for too much time!
Dreea: I'm glad I could make you happy by doing this! :D
sweetbaby: I really couldn't bear leaving it hanging like that...
allie: Thank you for the nice words! :) I can't wait to see what you guys thing about the events that will happen! :giggler:
Charley-x
31st Jul 2008, 8:12 PM
omg great update i love this last picture i hope seb comes home once he knows the news! - i've been reading this for a long time but i could'nt comment because it was locked :D
romyhorse
31st Jul 2008, 8:54 PM
Great update, good to see you back :)
hockeygirl07
31st Jul 2008, 10:00 PM
omg!wow.amazing update.but poor Shadee
MrsNsh06
1st Aug 2008, 1:41 AM
OMG that was so good Cory. Welcome back!
bluemoon11
1st Aug 2008, 4:14 AM
I think Seb is hiding something worse than an affair... and he's letting Shadee think he's cheating because he thinks it's easier for her or something. Hmm.
Applekissis
1st Aug 2008, 5:16 AM
Cory, Great update!
Welcoem back..You have definitley been missed!
Nirvana_SC
1st Aug 2008, 7:11 AM
I nearly had a heart attack when I saw this thread back at page 1! :D Welcome back! Funny thing is as soon as I read the first sentence of this update, I immediately remembered where you left off. ;)
That's sad that she's pregnant at such a bad time. I hope her and Seb can work things out. :( Great update cory!!!
cory_g
1st Aug 2008, 8:17 AM
charley: Hey! :) Thanks for commenting, I really liked Shadee's shot at the end as well... so matching with the context!
romy: Thank you! :D
hockeygirl: Thanks, Shadee's in for it, isn't she?
MrsNsh: Thank you on both accounts! :D
bluemoon: Firstly, i just *love* you avatar and signature! :D Secondly, I like your idea, I'd tell you if you were on the right track or not, but that would spoil everything...
Apple: Thanks so much! *feels warm and fuzzy* :luff:
Stormy/Nirvana: :lol: I didn't recognise you at first, good thing i read your signature! How would you like me to call you now? If I don't have anything to do with my own story for a considerable amount of time I usually ahve to read back a little to remind myself where i'd left off :lol: Thank you! :)
Nirvana_SC
1st Aug 2008, 5:11 PM
Stormy/Nirvana: :lol: I didn't recognise you at first, good thing i read your signature! How would you like me to call you now? If I don't have anything to do with my own story for a considerable amount of time I usually ahve to read back a little to remind myself where i'd left off :lol: Thank you! :)
I was hoping you'd recognize me. :lol: You can call me Stormy. :P I have to read up on my story too if I don't update for awhile. This is great though. Can't wait to see what happens! :D
lauren777
2nd Aug 2008, 12:47 PM
Wow this is an awesome story line! The photos are just excellent, good job! :beer:
Poor shadee!! :( I wonder what Seb is up to, hmm. I have my own thoughts but I'll just wait and see lol.
One question, I'm just wondering where you got all the nice clothes shadee and Seb wears? I'm having difficulty finding some nice men clothes, and also the men hairstyles you have? I have trouble finding men hairstyles also, and the ones you use are great! :)
I can't wait for the next update, I am definitely hooked!! :D Thanks for sharing your creativity!!
Lauren.
sweetbabyhnd2007
4th Aug 2008, 12:37 AM
I cant wait for the next update.
White Queen
4th Aug 2008, 7:20 PM
Hey, welcome back! *huggles* Everything turned out OK with your exams?
I'm so glad to finally see an update from you! Poor thing Shadee - her expression is priceless in the last pic and just says it all! :P
Kyri
5th Aug 2008, 9:46 AM
Yay, you're back! I was so excited when I saw an update from your story in my mailbox. Poor Shadee, hopefully things will get better in the end for her.
cory_g
6th Aug 2008, 7:42 PM
lauren: Thank you! :D All the hairstyles I use are either from peggy, rose or raonsims, but you can also find them at the booty, you don't have to pay or anything. As for the male clothes, I mostly download from allaboutstyle, MTS (there are some reallt nice outfits from migamoo there), glamorouslounge, sims2fog, simsecrets and hnote.
sweetbaby: *shifty eyes* Well, it may take a while before I update again, as I'm leaving town for a few weeks. But i promiose i'll get back to writing when I return.
WhiteQueen: *huggles back* Thanks! My exams went quite fine, I'm satisfied with the results, thank you for asking! :) We can honestly say, Shadee has hit a low in her life... :P
Kyri: :D yes I am! Life is full of ups and downs and so seems to be Shadee's aswell...
fexygurl_SC
6th Aug 2008, 10:09 PM
YAY i'm glad you're back! I'm glad she's finally preg but i'm not glad because Seb left her.
onsenmark
12th Aug 2008, 11:33 PM
*inhales*
MOAR.
callmefrench
13th Aug 2008, 6:31 AM
Please update!!! I cannot WAIT to see what happens next!!
Bethyy
3rd Sep 2008, 5:56 PM
Oh my god, this was AMAZING. I loved it all SO MUCH. The best sim storie I have ever read, and I had a feeling she'd be pregnant ;D
I don't suppose you'd like to send me a PM with the sites you get your houses and custom content from? I love the items you have.
bratz98
7th Sep 2008, 1:58 PM
Hey Cory, Great story at the fact. I haven't commented this story yet. I think it was because you put it on hold or someting. Well, again great story.
yoyomary
7th Sep 2008, 4:54 PM
Awesome story, I read it all! Can't wait to see more ;)
msp_teen
12th Sep 2008, 8:46 PM
Gosh Chapter 33 was so great!!!!!
Spicycookies_SC
13th Sep 2008, 1:57 AM
Please update soon ;)
GlitterySuperMonkey
15th Sep 2008, 5:30 PM
I just read all of it,and oh gosh,it's really amazing!
Can't wait to see what's next!
jenny
15th Sep 2008, 5:35 PM
can't wait to see the baby! update when you can:)
dylanschillun13
27th Sep 2008, 9:56 PM
Oh my Gosh this is Great!
Good work!
qwackie
11th Oct 2008, 11:01 PM
Aww poor Shadee! :(
I cant wait to see the little one. :)
sweetbabyhnd2007
20th Oct 2008, 9:51 PM
when will the next update be??/ Im getting anxious,,lol and this is one of my favorite stories...,,,but take ur time real life comes first
Annette_SC
21st Oct 2008, 5:50 PM
Same here, can't wait!
martinecek15
25th Oct 2008, 4:48 PM
Good work !! wery nice.. :)
MrsNsh06
16th Nov 2008, 11:59 PM
Guess we have to wait again. :( so sad need update
sweetsweetie85
22nd Nov 2008, 4:24 AM
Just started reading its a great story but it sure has been a while since theres been an update i hope we wont have to wait to much longer it would be nice to know what happens with sebastien i always thought they would last forever and now it seems like hes being an a**hole
cory_g
28th Nov 2008, 1:41 PM
I'm very sorry for all these long periods that I keep you guys waiting! :( Welcome to all new readers and please, everyone, bear with me because there's not much left until the end! That's all, enjoy the update! :D
cory_g
28th Nov 2008, 1:44 PM
Chapter 34
Pregnant … pregnant … pregnant…
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Shadee looked around her bedroom and it seemed like she was seeing it for the first time. A bubbly sensation that had started somewhere under her belly-button was slowly creeping its way up to her stomach. Was it actually possible to be happy about it under the given circumstances? Yet Shadee could barely suppress a grin at the thought that she was going to be a mother; nothing mattered at that moment, nothing besides her and the baby developing inside her.
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She drew a deep breath, closed her eyes and tried to envisage the changes that would happen over the next period of time. Much as she didn’t like to admit it, she was almost completely alone: her grandparents were long dead, Caleb was off on his summer camp and Sebastien… well… Sebastien was as if he didn’t even exist. The only person that could help her through those moments was Holly, who conveniently enough had experience with pregnancy and babies.
Still…she did wish Sebastien were there, next to her…
*
The following five weeks proved to be quite a difficult period in Shadee’s life. Suddenly its presence acknowledged, the baby was doing everything in its power to remind the people around it that it was there: Shadee barely had a few hours a day when she wasn’t throwing up or feeling too sick to eat something and she decided to spend them sleeping without risking to choke in her own puke.
Holly had indeed become an invaluable person in the young woman’s life: ignoring Shadee’s protests, she had given up her part-time job and resolved to practically come and live with her over the day, dragging the twins along with her when their grandmother couldn’t watch over them. The almost three-years old twins, Martin and Adrian, were the most adorable kids Shadee had ever seen but at the same time they were also quite a handful pair of toddlers, disappearing out of sight during the shortest lapse of attention.
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With all the attention and care she was given, Shadee didn’t have a lot of opportunities to think about the fact that she was going to be a lonely mother. She had even accepted the thought and tried to imagine her life around it.
‘Adrian!’
Shadee gave a start and refocused on her surroundings: she was in her bedroom, lying face up on the bed and one hand on her still flat belly. Holly was wearing a fierce expression as she squinted at the guilty looking Adrian, who had just attempted to squeeze through the unclosed door.
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‘I am going to go mad with these two!’ she sighed and turned back to face Shadee ‘I’m really sorry, you had fallen asleep, hadn’t you?’
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‘No, no worries, Holly. I was just thinking.’ The young woman smiled mildly, oblivious to the incredulous look on her friend’s face. Yes, she was dead tired not having slept properly over the last couple of days; yes, the stormy, thundery evening was perfect for a nap and yes she had closed her eyes, but she hadn’t actually been able to fall asleep.
Holly stood up from the armchair she had previously flopped onto: ‘Anyway, I think me and the two rascals had better left. You really could with some sleep, Shae, you look awful.’ She headed briskly for the doorway, lifted Adrian up with one arm, scooped the already eluded Martin from the hallway and put them both on the bed next to Shadee ‘I’ll go prepare a bubble bath and make you some chamomile tea to relax, then we’ll be off!’
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‘Jeez, Holly, I’m quite capable of preparing my own bath and tea, you don’t have to-’
‘Don’t you even think about protesting! You deserve to be spoiled like this, not to mention you’d probably end up throwing up all over your boiling tea!’ without waiting for Shadee to answer, she hurried out of the room and snapped the door shut.
‘She’s impossible, your mummy, isn’t she?’ the young woman looked from one small, round face to the other. The twins started to giggle and bounce up and down the bed, shaking Shadee like mad.
‘Guys, please, I really don’t feel like it right now!’
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Half an hour later, after the tub had been filled with hot water and lots of soap suds and the steaming cup of tea had been brought up next to it, Holly was finally ready to leave.
‘And don’t forget: whatever you need, no matter how small and what hour of night it is, just give me a call! I’ll be here in five minutes!’
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‘Ok, ok!’ Shadee shook her head, not admitting out loudly that she wouldn’t call Holly unless it was a matter of life and death.
Having locked the door behind her friend, the young woman trudged back up the stairs and prepared herself for the sweetly perfumed bubble bath. Just as she was about to get completely immersed, the doorbell rang.
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Sighing loudly and cursing Holly’s forgetfulness, she returned to the front door and opened it with a big grin. At the sight of Sebastien, standing there against the stormy background, her heart just seemed to stop.
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el_flel
28th Nov 2008, 6:45 PM
*lets out long audible gasp* OMG how can you leave it there?! I want to know what happens next! Looking forwards to more :D
Nanakon
29th Nov 2008, 12:07 AM
Oh yay an update! :>
And a really good update at that :D how could you leave us with such a s cliffhangerrrr? ;__;
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Ash1889
29th Nov 2008, 12:47 AM
Do you know how long I've been waiting for an update!!!?!? AHHH!! Soooo happy and glad to see Seb!!! Please keep updating!!!!!
lauratje86
29th Nov 2008, 4:41 AM
Well, I just started reading your story, it's awesome and I love it to bits! :-D I can't wait for an update! But it's 4:47am here, so I think I'd better head off to bed now :-) I so didn't mean to stay up this late!
Applekissis
29th Nov 2008, 6:45 AM
Do you know how long I've been waiting for an update!!!?!? AHHH!! Soooo happy and glad to see Seb!!! Please keep updating!!!!!
Yeah,what she said!
I have certainly missed the updates and now that im all caught up, all I can say is WOW!
Poor Shadee :-/
I just love Holly and her twins are adorable.
Spicycookies_SC
29th Nov 2008, 5:16 PM
Good update!
MrsNsh06
30th Nov 2008, 11:12 PM
OMG! That was so good but a cliffhanger? Why? lol It's going to be a difficult wait. :)
msp_teen
2nd Dec 2008, 3:43 AM
Gosh that was such a good update, and Seb should be ashamed of himself for leaving her like that!!!
Great Update Cory, can't wait for the next update!!!
Psycho_Bunny
2nd Dec 2008, 4:40 PM
the questions are though - why did he leave in the first place? and what made him come back?
Nirvana_SC
2nd Dec 2008, 5:36 PM
Well someone sure is looking petiful. :P I'm wondering why he finally decided to come back too.
jenny
3rd Dec 2008, 4:39 AM
ahh, great update! I just noticed that you updated....I wonder why he came back? can't wait to see what happens next..:)
White Queen
4th Dec 2008, 5:57 PM
Hey, great to see an update! He's got some explaining to do... ;) Can't wait to see what's next!
onsenmark
6th Dec 2008, 12:25 AM
*starts tearing out hair*
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH MOAR MOAR MOAR.
*goes off to play Lost Odyssey*
puddlejumper_SC
6th Dec 2008, 1:27 AM
I love your story! Great update by the way, can't wait to see what he has to say!:)
Psycho_Bunny
6th Dec 2008, 1:31 PM
*deep breath*
MOAR
ColorfullSocks
22nd Dec 2008, 6:11 PM
After spending hours reading this.
I DEMAND MORE!
I might die without a update! D=
Anonomé
9th Jan 2009, 10:23 PM
I've been a silent reader foreverr.
But I finally want to just say that I love your writing style.
PUHLEASE update soon =)
leighthesim_SC
17th Jan 2009, 3:37 PM
wow i havrn't been on here in sucha long time, i can't wait to hear more it is amazing
sassy1010101
23rd Jan 2009, 12:26 PM
EEK! I read most of this last night and the rest this morning. MUST HAVE UPDATE!!!!
:yippee:
Olivejuice
26th Jan 2009, 8:40 PM
OOOO! yay! I can't beleive i missed this update. It's so nice to see that shadee is getting what she wanted, and an even bigger surprise that Sebastien is back! :D
adiready_SC
28th Jan 2009, 2:38 AM
Holy cow!
took me two hours to read through all the chapters (and a few other "posts")
I am looking forward for the update?
I have a few things to say and ask.
a) A tight slap to Seb.
b) Seb made the wrong decision by cheating on her.
c) Seb should feel guilt about it.
d) Seb should feel the worst when Shadee tells that she is pregnant.
e) Will she forgive Seb, if seb asks for forgiveness. If she does then on what grounds?
f) I hope you haven't brought Seb back with divorce papers. He is not a thick head, don't make him one.
g) If you do bring him back with divorce papers, or in anyway break them up. I would fry you! ( No, not really. It's just a joke) =D
Well that's it for now. Good update. Nice photos. Beautiful sims.
I have my eyes on you! (watch out!)
-Adi
sweetsweetie85
28th Jan 2009, 4:08 AM
I cant believe youve left it at this for over a month AHHHHHHHHH we need more so many unanswered questions. :weep:
sweetbabyhnd
28th Jan 2009, 11:50 PM
Plz update soon. Im goin crazy
cory_g
8th Feb 2009, 7:42 PM
Hello, everyone and yet again welcome to the new people who commented! :)
I just wanted to let you know that I'm (still) alive and I continue to read your opinions and requests.
I am currently cramming for my end of semester exams, a thing that is virtually taking all of my already limited free time... The next chapter is almost completely written, I just have to tie a few loose ends and take the pictures, so the update will come sometime in the near future.
Having said that, I also wanted to let you know that we're nearing the end of the road with the story as I am almost finished...
keeping my fingers crossed to survive the exams with my head held up high... :D Best wishes to everyone!
TheBoyFromMars.
17th Feb 2009, 6:21 AM
i like this story its cool
cory_g
23rd Feb 2009, 2:53 PM
Chapter 35 - Part I
‘You!’ the wide grin on Shadee’s face was immediately replaced by a savage expression. Without even thinking, she lunged forwards and gave her husband a ringing slap across the face ‘How dare you? How dare you come back here after all you’ve done?’
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She was breathing heavily, her chest heaving up and down; her hands had clenched to fists, but she did not attack again. Sudden awareness of the fact that it had been proved to her she did not know the man standing on her porch made her retreat a couple of steps. The situation could get violent and she could not conceive the idea of harming or even losing her baby.
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But Sebastien’s thoughts seemed far from starting an offensive. He was just standing there, rubbing the side of his face which had taken a deep red colour in the shape of a palm.
‘I guess I fully deserved that.’ He mumbled, eyeing his wife apprehensively.
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‘You damn right deserved it!’ the young woman answered back coolly ‘And if you had some sense in that head of yours you’d turn on your heel and go back where you came from!’ struck by a sudden stroke of inspiration she added quickly ‘Don’t even think about trying something funny because Holly’s upstairs and if anything happens-’
‘Don’t try to fool me Shadee, I’ve been watching the house for quite some time, I know Holly just left.’
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Shadee’s insides freezed instantly. She was fearing for her life and was momentarily unable to move or think, let alone elaborate a plan to get rid of her husband. All these feelings seemed to show on her face, as Sebastien added hastily:
‘I’m not here to do you any harm. Even though, after all that has happened, you might very well feel otherwise…’ he looked down at his feet, shifting uncomfortably ‘I know I have made some very bad choices in the manner of handling this situation, but I -’
With a quick swish, Shadee had taken advantage of Sebastien’s vivid interest for his feet and had dashed back inside the house, locking the door behind her.
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‘Oh, come on, Shadee! Don’t be like that! I know I did wrong, but-’
‘If you don’t leave right now, I’m calling the police! I mean it, Sebastien!’ the young woman’s slightly muffled voice came from the other side of the door.
‘I have as much a right to be here as you do, Shadee! This is still our house! But I don’t even want to go there, all I need is for you to listen to what I have to say. Please! I didn’t come here to hurt you, I’ve never done that and I never will. I just want to talk.’
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‘It’s a little late for talking things out, don’t you think? Anyway, I’m not interested in what you have to say. If it’s your house as well, you can sleep on the porch, ‘cause I’m not letting you inside.’ There was a dismissive tone in the young woman’s voice; from her point of view, the talk was over.
‘Shadee, don’t leave, please! Don’t judge things before you’ve heard the whole story! Give me a chance, at least for old times’ sake!’ Sebastien had fallen on his knees in front of the stubbornly closed door. He had gone too far… he had created too deep a chasm between the two of them and all that just to protect her…
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It seemed that his wife had had her say and left him there. His perfect plan, his only plan had failed horribly. There was no chance of making things right again under these circumstances. But, at that time, he had seen no other way out. Had he acted in a different way, the situation could have been so much worse. At least she was fine and had been spared of all the misery he had had to go through in the course of the past month.
cory_g
23rd Feb 2009, 2:55 PM
Then suddenly, just when Sebastien had lost all hope, a metallic click announced the unlocking of the door. Sitting on the floor, Shadee opened the door slightly, still keeping the safety chain on.
‘Ok, start talking.’
Glowing with happiness, Seb edged towards the door on his knees and sat down on the floor as well. He drew a deep breath and started the story he had kept to himself for quite some time:
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‘Everything started approximately six weeks ago, on the day of Caleb’s departure for camp with that phone call that interrupted our…umm…fight.’ He threw Shadee a furtive look, but her expression was unreadable ‘I was announced that my father had passed away. I was quite aware that this moment was approaching because my dad was a regular client of Glenwood’s, he was being treated by a friend of mine, so I had quite a good insight into his medical condition. You see, he had developed cirrhosis because of his excessive drinking, that’s what killed him in the end, as expected. With all his mistakes and everything, my father wasn’t, or at least didn’t use to be, a bad person. I haven’t told anyone any of this, but it’s important that I tell you now, it’ll help you understand.
In his young years, my father was a good man and he married my mum out of love. They were both quite poor, but hard working and were leading a decent life in their trailer. Then they had me and continued to lead a happy, fulfilled life until my mother’s schizophrenia set in. There was no sign, no nothing, she just started showing severe symptoms. I think that’s about the same time that my dad started hating me. Having started to show signs of her condition just shortly after my birth, I guess he linked the two together, even though scientifically there was no tie between them. My mother was getting worse by the day and there were many moments when you just couldn’t talk to her, she was insane, she could hear voices, had vivid hallucinations. My father was torn, I don’t think he had ever loved anyone as much as he had loved her and seeing her become something so different from her usual self was too much for him. He wasn’t a strong man and we didn’t have enough money for her to get professional help, so my dad started drinking.’
It was a sad story, Shadee could feel her eyes getting a little wet as this was the first time Sebastien mentioned his family. She had never imagined that he had gone through so much more than what she had already witnessed and known. Even though she had no idea where this story of Sebastien’s background was leading, she kept listening intently to what he had to say.
‘And then, when I was about five and a half, my mum ran away from home during one of her episodes. We knew nothing of her for one whole week and then she was returned to us in a body bag. She had drowned in a river. Due to her condition, everyone assumed she had killed herself; I never doubted that, as she had already made a couple other attempts while she was still home.
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Of course, in my father’s eyes, I was the one guilty for her death, I was the one guilty for everything, so he treated me accordingly ever since. The rest is history, you know it. He already hated me, I grew to hate him. But then, after I had left his house, after we had entered college, I kind of thought things over and realised I cared for him, in a weird, twisted and unselfish way I cared for that brute of a father. I don’t think you’ve ever noticed, I tried to hide it so I wouldn’t have to tell you, but I kept calling him ever since. Not to talk him, I was too proud for that and he surely wouldn’t have talked to me, but just to hear his voice and know he was okay. It’s the fact that he loved my mother so much that redeemed him in my eyes. I don’t think there is any person out there who is purely evil, we’re so much more complex than that.’
He paused, staring for a few seconds at the rug in front of the door and Shadee took the opportunity to stand up and open the door properly. There was something in his story, in the tone of his voice that made her do that; the real Sebastien must have still been somewhere inside him.
‘Come inside, it’s getting quite cold out here and your clothes are all wet.’
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She held the door open for him, then they both walked upstairs in the bedroom they had once shared. Sebastien changed his clothes in silence, rubbed his hair dry with a fresh towel, then sat down on the floor again, followed by his wife.
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‘Like I told you, it wasn’t a surprise that my dad died, but it still hurt. It was a dull feeling of pain because he was the last of my living relatives, I had absolutely no one else related to me, still living…I know it might sound foolish…but it was a very weird feeling. I was in shock the whole day, it made me realise just how important family is in a person’s life. I wanted to come to you, to apologise and make everything ok again, but I wasn’t acting properly, both my mind and my body were on autopilot. I needed time to think. I don’t even know what I thought about, it was just a dire need of solitude.
Anyway, the next day I went to prepare things for his funeral, take a look at the old trailer, things that had to be done. I took my day off from work. But that’s when the situation really got out of control.’
Sebastien buried his face into his hands and rubbed his forehead wearily. Shadee realised just how tired and thin he looked. He could have very well lost a few pounds.
‘My dad had a very badly paid job, that could barely secure him money for his food, let alone all the booze he was throwing down the drain. He started borrowing money from various people. And he borrowed and borrowed and borrowed until the sum rose to quite a big amount. Then he started hiding and stopped going to work; he was simply unable to pay his debts. He lived on the streets because he couldn’t risk being caught by the gang of the mobster he owed money to. Lucky for him, he died only three days after going into hiding. The problem is you don’t mess with these people and leave unscathed. They don’t guide their lives under rules and principles. They don’t care about anything. This is why I, as my father’s only child and living relative, had to pay his debts or else…’ he looked deeply into Shadee’s eyes and the young woman felt a cold shiver go down her spine.
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‘They cornered me right after I had buried my father. Their request was simple: pay 100 000 or me and my family would never see the daylight again. My one and only stroke of luck was that Minnie, the mobster’s girlfriend had the hots for me. She followed me home after the gang had left, you saw her that evening: the blond woman in the red dress. She asked me about you, my wife, and I had the brilliance to tell her how much I hated you and how I had only married you for your money; how we were going through a divorce and I was leaving the house that very day with the prospect of taking everything you had, in the near future. It was the best plan I could come up with, as I assume you’ve had no problems after I had left. You weren’t worth being tortured if you didn’t mean anything to me, heck – from my story they would have considered harming you a favour to me.’ Shadee looked away for a few moments in order to give her husband the opportunity to dry his eyes undetected. His story…it all seemed to fit together…but what if he was lying just to save his own skin?
‘I could have told you the truth, it probably would have been easier on your psyche, but I was afraid we both wouldn’t have played our parts well; we would have probably met secretly and I was being watched the whole time. It would have been a critical mistake that would have meant the end… Believe me Shadee, it was the toughest thing I had ever had to do, saying those awful things to you, leaving you on your own. I almost threw all caution out the window the next day, when I found out…’ he drew a deep breath and his face cracked into a heartfelt smile ‘about the baby!’
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Shadee took a few moments to study his facial expression, looking into his eyes and searching for the truth. The Sebastein she knew had never been a good liar, she had always been able to read him in a moment and, judging by the look in his eyes, he was telling nothing but the truth…
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sweetsweetie85
23rd Feb 2009, 8:29 PM
Yay im so glad he had a good reason and that he wasnt just being a complete a-hole. Great update.
alliemarie2323
24th Feb 2009, 5:58 AM
Amazing update! I'm quite relieved that he actually had good intentions--I always knew he wasn't a bad guy :)
White Queen
24th Feb 2009, 8:16 PM
Yay, update! I'm glad that things turned out OK for them somehow. I was quite disappointed with Seb at first... ;)
KyleTheArtist
24th Feb 2009, 9:59 PM
Amazing!
I have to live to school now though. I only got to chapter 6(id get further if i had no distractions such as dad-in-law) i have to go now but so far ev erything is awesome :D high school building just like what i downloaded just i have newer version. Where did you get the bikes in fromt of the school?
Nice story I can't wait to get home in few hours and read more
EDIT:for the sake of double posting. i edit this: awesome story i read through and i simply cant wait till the next chapet keep it up :D
Nirvana_SC
25th Feb 2009, 9:28 PM
I'm glad he had a good reason also. I was wondering why he decided to leave the way he did.
I have to say I was very psyched to see you updated your story! :D I'm dreading the day it ends.
Olivejuice
1st Mar 2009, 9:04 PM
I"m so glad you updated! It seems the story is comming to a close. But what an amazing turn of events, i never would have expected that. I wanna find out if he is actualy ok! Please update soon!
:D
sweetbabyhnd
1st Mar 2009, 10:07 PM
i cant wait for the next update. :)
cory_g
2nd Mar 2009, 3:05 PM
Thank you everyone for commenting! :)
If my calculations are correct and I won't get too carried away while writing the next part, I am pretty sure there will be only one last update and the story ends. Gee...I said it... I feel awful, having started the story back in 2006 (!!!)
I am gonna miss writing it and talking to you all about your ideas or hunches about what's gonna come next. :D
PS. Kyle: the bikes are from Modthesims2, I don't have the links on me right now, but if you do a search, you'll surely find them
jenny
2nd Mar 2009, 4:50 PM
yeah an update Cory! great one at that.....I love those two as a couple and can't wait to see the baby:D...
simsFanatic4eVa
2nd Mar 2009, 8:19 PM
i love this story so far it is awesome!!!! and this part of te story was so0o0 surprising n omg i really hope he doesnt hit her!!! :((
noanos
3rd Mar 2009, 10:21 PM
Cory, thank you for a great simmified story. I think utilizing sims for storytelling is a great idea. I was up til late, trying to read this from start to finish but it was worth it. Keep up your good work. I will be looking forward to your next update. After this finishes, I hope you can continue to entertain. Lotsa love <3
KyleTheArtist
4th Mar 2009, 2:10 AM
PS. Kyle: the bikes are from Modthesims2, I don't have the links on me right now, but if you do a search, you'll surely find them
Thanks I will look for them :D
You need to make a new story :D you have an amazing lay out
simsFanatic4eVa
4th Mar 2009, 4:19 AM
this is great but i really think you should add on to this story because you are an awesome writer an i think you should add onto it!! :)
MrsNsh06
6th Mar 2009, 4:14 AM
Awesome update! I can't wait to see how it all ends :)
Mrs.Kuma
6th Mar 2009, 7:11 AM
i'm glad he didnt turn out to be a jerk, great update! Cant wait to see how it ends!
verbashka_SC
7th Mar 2009, 9:12 PM
I like pics in this story :)
NewbieLove_SC
13th Mar 2009, 6:10 AM
Yes! I just now figured out how to post comments!
I came in to this story when you were typing 34.
The funny thing is I was looking for a cheat code when I found this story. I stayed up all night that first night reading it! It's an amazing story and I'm glad to see you updated. Great job.
Raindrops757
14th Mar 2009, 1:13 AM
Wow...this is an awesome story, the writing and the pictures are both done really well.
I can't wait till the next update!
fredcrugar
22nd Apr 2009, 1:36 AM
The beginning was sad :(
But things are starting to look up for her by the time you put up the next post :)
I can't wait to see some more of it :D
sweetbabyhnd2007
23rd Jun 2009, 6:20 AM
when is the next update gonna be ?
Captain THPS4
6th Jul 2009, 11:08 PM
Wow, I completely forgot about this! I was starting grade 12 when I last read it and now I'm done my first year of college! I'm glad to see that this story was not abandoned after all and finally I got to find out what Sebastien was up to. I'm looking forward to the conclusion of this awesome story, it's definitely one of my all-time favorites on this forum. :)
KSpiffy
6th Jul 2009, 11:21 PM
:) I've been following this story since the beginning, too, and can't tell you how much I'm looking forward to reading the end. It's been a fantastic read; one of my favorite stories, by far.
3hannah3
7th Jul 2009, 4:26 PM
This is amazing can't w8 till next chapter!!! XD
ChemicalCaitlin
15th Sep 2009, 5:44 AM
I've lost track of this story several times, and each time I come back and reread it from the beginning, I'm even more amazed than the last time. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
magicklovah
6th Oct 2009, 1:47 AM
Wow! This has gotta get an update soon! This is an amazing story!
KyleTheArtist
16th Oct 2009, 6:18 PM
same here. I can't wait for an update :D
austin316hockey
19th Oct 2009, 7:35 PM
Aaaaaah, revenge IS a dish best served cold... Good for Shadee, putting Brandon in his place. Loving your story, been a fun read.
BabyGirl250185
5th Apr 2010, 7:39 PM
I hope u will finish your story
cory_g
29th May 2010, 10:39 PM
Epilogue
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Shadee sighed, looking in the mirror, observing the creased face of a still beautiful old woman staring back at her. Time… such an unusual entity, that flies by without really giving a meaning to all things it changes. It seemed to the elderly lady that just yesterday had that fateful episode happened, the episode in which she had welcomed Sebastien back into her life, where he had finally come to remain for good.
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Smiling reminiscently, she turned her back to the mirror and walked towards the small bookcase, retrieving a thick family album covered in a thin coating of dust. Yes, time did fly by and the collection of photographs gathered in the album was proof of that fact. She flicked open the first page and smiled still wider at the sight of her wedding photographs. It was incredible that she had ever looked so young, that her skin had ever been so smooth…yet there she was: at the age of 24, beaming widely at the camera and letting herself be kissed on the cheek by her husband.
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Shadee turned another few pages, all covered in memories of her wonderful wedding, before reaching the photographs of another big moment in her life: the birth of her first child, a beautiful baby boy named Lucas.
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She caressed his picture lovingly with a thin, slightly trembling finger, watching him grow up with every page she turned: Lucas in his parents’ arms, at only 3 months; Lucas being fed with a bottle by Sebastien at 7 months, Lucas making his first shaking steps towards his mother’s outstretched arms at the age of 11 months; Lucas playing with a toy giraffe at 1 year and a half… all the little joys of seeing your baby during his progress through life. Lucas’ photos stopped for a few pages at his sixth birthday to be mixed with those of the newest family member: Danielle, Shadee and Sebastien’s second and last child.
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Both kids had grown up beautifully and none of the many photos crammed in the photo album could do justice to the fine adults they had developed into: Lucas, 45, with his own horde of no less than five children and two grandchildren, and Danielle, 39, still not married, but enjoying every minute of life.
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The other dear member of Shadee’s family, her “uncle” Caleb ( now at the venerable age of 61) had also found a soulmate, in the person of his old friend Fiona, that had moved away from town when he was quite young.
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They had been reunited in one of the summer camps Caleb used to attend and they decided not to let each other slip away ever again. They had since formed an inseparable couple and got married, having a family of their own with three children and twice as many grandchildren. Both Shadee and Sebastien could not have been happier for them.
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As a mother, grandmother and recently, a great-grandmother Shadee could honestly say she felt fulfilled. Even with all the ups and downs she had been through, her life could have easily been described as wonderful.
There was no moment that she wouldn’t thank the Heavens for having helped her find the wonderful man that was her husband. Sebastien had proved to be the best choice she had ever made: ever since the faithful day he had come back, he had been the perfect model of a husband and father.
The red beams of sun streaming through the window grew deeper and darker as night swiftly crept in. With another sigh, Shadee clapped the photo album shut, a small cloud of dust swirling in the air before her.
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Yes…she was fulfilled, yet tired…so, so tired!
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Moving carefully and trying not to make a sound, she approached the bed where Sebastien was already asleep. Shadee smiled: she was still deeply in love with him, as though time had flown by. Again trying not to disturb him, she crawled into bed and nestled close to him, smiling affectionately at the pleasant warmth.
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Not long afterwards, the rhythmical breathing of the two intertwined beings became shallow and slow. Like a flutter of wings, they both breathed one last time, then stopped, still in each other’s arms.
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cory_g
29th May 2010, 10:42 PM
I am very sorry for the humongous amount of time it took for me to finish this story :D But alas! It is finally here...the end. I hope you have enjoyed reading this as much as I did writing it and thank you for the patience :)
DigiMigiScrap2
2nd Jun 2010, 7:50 PM
I love this story from the begging. I'm sorry it's end it. Great job! BTW what happed to Holly?? Do you have a new story in plan?
Jeniveve
3rd Jun 2010, 3:57 PM
that really was a lovely way to close off the story, I'm sad that it's finished but it really was a joy to read. ^_^
cory_g
5th Jun 2010, 1:53 PM
Thank you very much for the kind words, DigiMigiScrap2 and Jeniveve! I'm glad you enjoyed the whole story :)
I think I may have ended it a little too briskly, as I did have some other ideas to include in the story, but the lack of time convinced me it was better to end it like this, than drag it for years on end updating once in a blue moon.
As for Holly, her life continued just as perfect as Shadee's: she got to see her twins grow up and get married, having children of thier own. Both she and her husband, Steve retired and moved to a quieter place in the countryside. Nothing special really, just blissful life for them ;)
Hanhula
7th Jun 2010, 7:10 AM
Am I the only one who cried when Shadee and Seb died together? I hope not!
Beautiful story, absolutely loved it.
LadyAwesome
7th Jun 2010, 12:34 PM
Awww I just read this whole story tonight I had a wee cry a few times lol...absolutely beautiful!!
el_flel
9th Jun 2010, 1:46 AM
I really enjoyed this story so I'm sad that it's over, but the ending was lovely and wrapped everything up so well. I'm glad Shadee and Seb didn't have to try and live without each other, that would have been too sad!
cory_g
10th Jun 2010, 5:23 PM
Hanhula: That is such a lovely compliment! Making someone tear up with my writing is a great accomplishment for me. Thank you very much!
klarox: Wow, you read the whole thing in one go! Thank you for the wonderful compliments, they go straight to my heart! ;)
el_flel: I am very happy you liked the ending! I was kind of hesitant in front of the quite corny idea of having them die together, but like you said I couldn't bear having them live with the loss of the other, si I went ahead with it. Thank you for making my day brighter! :)
LadyAwesome
11th Jun 2010, 9:35 AM
I have a reading addiction!!
KyleTheArtist
11th Jun 2010, 8:55 PM
what a beautiful ending indeed! I love how you ended it and I actually shed a tear!
Well done, I'm sad this is over. It inspired me to do my stories :3
cory_g
15th Jun 2010, 11:35 AM
klarox: that's quite a handy addiction ;)
Kyle: Thank you! :) I'm really proud for having inspired you to write stories. This is how I actually started as well, being inspired by others :D
Gefremede
28th Jun 2010, 10:24 AM
Oh my gosh, what a great story! I stayed up WAY too late reading it tonight... I had to know how it ended! I only discovered the story a few days ago and I'm so glad I didn't have to wait longer than a few days to finish :) I teared up a little at the end when they died together. And your pictures!!! Your pictures are AMAZING. I wouldn't even know how to start making pictures that are so perfect. They create a mood, and the composition in some of them is really great. Well done! And thank you!
Solventpost
30th Jun 2010, 10:49 AM
I just finished reading the whole story, it was Beautiful. When I first started reading it my first thought was, "Oh another teenage drama story, Lovely." But something compelled me to continue reading, and I am So glad I did. Its almost six in the morning and here I am tears in my eyes happy and sad at the same time. You did an amazing job writing this story. I also must add that Sims 2 still has a special place in my heart, and that it Definitely conveys much more emotion then Sims 3. Once again Beautiful story Cory.
Edit: I wanted to add that stories like this make me love those in my life even more. My boyfriend and little girl (1 year old puppy) are sound asleep behind me. I just fell in love with them all over again. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story. Now if you excuse me I need to go cuddle.
cory_g
3rd Jul 2010, 7:00 PM
Gefremede: Ah, thank you very much! I did try to make the pictures as good as I could, it always took me at least 2 hours for each update. I'm really glad you enjoyed and thank you again for taking your time to let me know! :)
Toddler430: :)) I find it quite funny that those were your initial thoughts! And that's becase you are right: I did start the story thinking about teenage drama and everything sort of came up along the way. I've recently reread it from scratch and I just couldn't believe how my writing actually changed, but that's quite understandable, as I started to write it approximately 4 (!!!) years ago. I can't really put into words the feeling that I get when I read such lovely comments like yours, I'm very happy to have influenced you into living this wonderful emotional state! You are of course welcome and thank you for reading! :D
Roxy882
7th Jul 2010, 8:53 PM
Such an amazing story.....^-^
cory_g
12th Jul 2010, 11:20 AM
Thank you, Roxy882! :)
Captain THPS4
15th Jul 2010, 3:08 PM
Came by this story again completely by accident to see it now has an epilogue, and a great one at that! I remember looking forward to those updates way back when. Even though I was still in high school when it started and have also moved onto The Sims 3 since then, I'm glad you still took some time to complete something I enjoyed back when I was a teen. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us cory_g. :)
cory_g
22nd Jul 2010, 9:16 PM
Hey there, Captain! Long time, no see! ;) I'm really glad to see you have managed to finish reading my story, as I too remember "the old times" :D Thank you for dropping by to leave me a comment and you're very welcome! :)
Malaygirl93
25th May 2011, 5:59 AM
I remember I started reading this story wayyyy back when I was still a kid, still in junior high . now i've already finish my high school . .___. wow xD This story grew up with me lol :P could not believe this story finished last year ! xD OMG xD this story going on for 5 year ! man talking bout long o_____o but it worth every single chapter ! I was wondering the story is still going (well, it should be :P ) but it seems you cut it short,( i know you already bz and all, well, time changes arent they :/) but I'm impressed with the ending and all xD good job cory ! I adore your story till today ! xD and I've read form page 1 until 70 . :P and looking back my old post, making me wanna eat cookie, drink milk and some lychee pudding . .____. lol xD :P
haricots
26th Oct 2011, 5:38 PM
THIS. IS. TOUCHING.
Sorry, it's just a great story, and I spent more than 3 hours to read it. Thanks! A great story! :D
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