View Full Version : Lillie Brown's Oh so tragic legacy - Discontinued - Read inside :(
5th Nov 2006, 1:36 PM
This is not for any points, I'm doing this because I enjoy legacys and I enjoy posting them here. So if I cheat, Im sorry but i'm not following the rules (accept the basic ones :p)
Childhood. What can I say about my childhood? I guess I can't really say anything about it actually. I was Cute, adorable, innocent. I guess what you could say was that I was a blond haired, blue-eyed angel. I guess I was. Lillie Brown, the angel – the beautiful smart girl – the darling daughter. That was me..
Until my parents died. My whole life got turned around. But for the bad, instead of the good. I am an only daughter, and it was me who had to arrange the funeral. I was just 14 at the time, my gran helped me a bit, but was diagnosed with breast cancer, and couldn't do much help. She died after 3 weeks. My life just kept going down hill.
I still lived in the house that my parents had left me, a two bed roomed cottage. Everything is still in place, even my old nursery hasn't been touched, well it has, since it's Charlotte's room now.
It's nice and a great place to start a family. The thing is though, I guess fate was against me and I was just another trap. I fell pregnant, with Don Lothario‘s baby. Heard of him? Yep, I actually thought he cared about me. Turned out he was just another loser with a number of pregnant girlfriends. I was one of them. I had a baby girl. Called her Charlotte and we stayed put in the cottage. The thing is I’m a lesbian, and I live in one of the roughest parts of town. Typical aye? I know what your thinking, what the h*ll is a cottage doing in a town. Simple. It’s right on the edge of it. After I dropped school rumors spread around like butter on toast. I guess you could call me smartish, but after I was left with no one, education just didn’t seem important to me. So now I’m a 17-year-old lesbian, with a 3-year-old daughter.
Don’t get me wrong, I love Charlotte, I just wish…. Just dam wish that I was older, or had someone to take care of her while I do my work. I hate leaving her alone so much but I have to if we need food. But just when things cant get any worse, a light at the end of the tunnel appears.
Hope you stay put and read my updates, I do like comments aswell ^^
5th Nov 2006, 1:42 PM
Yay, a new legacy by Jasmin! I like it, sad though.
5th Nov 2006, 1:46 PM
Ohh I love the child room and Lillie is cute. Interesting story, keep it going. :)
5th Nov 2006, 1:46 PM
Yay, new legacy! :D
Looking very promising! Beautiful pics, as usual!
5th Nov 2006, 2:14 PM
Wow, 3 comments already :) Thanks so much guys, I wanted it to be like a funny/serious legacy, it will get funnier as you'll find out Lillie's personality :)
5th Nov 2006, 2:34 PM
aww that nursery is so cute :) love the big bunny by the wall.
really good start too, love the pics :)
5th Nov 2006, 2:38 PM
love pics amazing introduction :)
5th Nov 2006, 6:28 PM
great pics Jasmin:D..love your stories!...funny thing, Don made her a lesbian...LOL...he-he
5th Nov 2006, 7:35 PM
LOL, yeh she was so put off don, which completley put her off male sims, hehe ^^
5th Nov 2006, 11:00 PM
ooh, nice start!
[ subscribes ]
5th Nov 2006, 11:39 PM
Really great start..I like it already!
7th Nov 2006, 5:45 AM
i love it!!! Lillie is a very cool character. Nice house for being on the bad side of town ^_^
ill be waiting for updates
7th Nov 2006, 5:53 AM
PLAGARISM OH NOES!!!
Not really, I guess. I'm working on a lesbian-centric Legacy, too, in addition to my real one! Only mine's probably going to propogate by adoption instead of the normal heir system.
7th Nov 2006, 7:56 PM
Lillie's hormones go overtime.
I keep thinking that mom is just gonna wake up, come in and flash her big cheesey smile. The one she always used to do. But the grimmy had to take her, he is a stupid... poo. Sorry Charlotte's first word was poo. How proud am I. But she is just a cutie. I love her, it's like she hasn't got any of Don in her.
I finnaly had the time and effort to go and study cooking, I guess I'm lucky to not have to furnish this home, i would be dead by now. Me and Charlotte have been living off milk, mac and cheese and take-aways. I spent all extra money I had on Charlottes dinner. Thank god microwaves where invented.
I was surprised when I got a knock at the door, I expected it to be some bill man, or social services or something, but at the door was a beautiful girl. She had blonde hair, fair skin and looked beautiful. Oh crap hormones going crazy.
"he.. he.. heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy" i managed to splurt out.
Thankfully she laughed and smiled. Oh dear, heart .. melting.
"Can I borrow your phone?" she said,
I nodded and let her in, she gazed around my kitchen and blinked back tears.
"Are.. are you okay?" I asked, I look a bit over-concerned but meh.
She nodded slowly, and picked up the phone. I gave her some privacy and sat down on the sofa, i kiked off my heels and sighed heavily. Thank god Charlotte was asleep. The call ended and her head appeared round the door. Her soft cheeks where tearstained but she was smiling.
"Thanks, i .. i better be off."
"Wait don't go!!"
She blinked twice and I quickly regretted saying it. I made my way over to her and disaster. I tripped over some of Charlottes toys and hurdled into her.
We ended up on a heap on the floor, she was laughing while I was cringing my forhead off, I was embarresing myself by saying sorry about 300 times in a second. She giggled and stood up.
"My names Jane, Jane Cho"
"Cool, my names Lillie,"
We exchanged numbers and kept in touch. I went to bed that night feeling very happy.
Can you belive Jane is a townie?! She's a nightlife townie madeover if your interested ^^ Thanks for reading so far guys!
7th Nov 2006, 9:10 PM
ohh yay ^_^ a potential girlfriend!!
where did you get Jane's outfit by the way, it's verry pretty.
good updates, cant wait for more
7th Nov 2006, 9:22 PM
wow, nice chapter!
that townie really is pretty!
7th Nov 2006, 9:27 PM
Yes I love Jane's outfit too so cute where did you get it?:D
7th Nov 2006, 9:33 PM
Very nice, I love legacies. The only contructive critism I can give is that it seemed as if your spelling and grammar went down hill after a while. But I'm so keeping an eye on this! Keep updating :)
8th Nov 2006, 6:10 AM
oh my! I just found this! Yay!!!
I love your legacies Jasmin
This one seems very awesome so far.:)
8th Nov 2006, 6:26 AM
"Oh crap hormones going crazy" just about sums it up for me, too. Makeover Townies are win, and Jane is hot. (I AM a female, by the way) Where did you get her hair?! I love bangs-in-the-face hair!
8th Nov 2006, 6:33 AM
woah this is great i love your stories! cant wait for an update XoXo loz
btw where did you get lillies and charlottes hair from... i bet they are peggy sims donations arnt thay... that'd be right..... damn the lack of a credit card!!!!
8th Nov 2006, 4:36 PM
Right, thankyou everyone, :)
Janes outfit is free from - http://www.simparadies.de/home.htm
Jane's hair is free from - Here (http://www.thesimsresource.com/artists/sims2sisters/downloads/sims2/sets/369487/)
Lillie's hair is www.rosesims2.net It's donation though.
Lillie's Outifit is Jeans made by simplyelau and the top is made by me.
11th Nov 2006, 6:28 PM
hey jasmin i love your stories and this legacy has started off good, i just hope it doesn't get messed up, but anyways good start.
12th Nov 2006, 1:28 PM
Mission Impossible, is actually possible!
Meet Petal. Petal Brown, isn't she just the most cutest baba ever! After months and months and months I finnaly proved everyone wrong. That you can have kids with the one you love.
Jane and I became the best of friends, and although I nearly wrecked our relationship when I leaned into kiss her, she stayed by my side until her feelings where sorted out.
Do you know Benjamin Long? I think thats his name, well turned out he had plastic surgery and was really fit, so jane made a move on him and found one of his old photos, I know what your thinking, the outside doesn't matter, but trust me....... no one wants to be with Ben. I still waited for Jane, I was a women on a mission, a mission of love, (okay.. chee--esey) Jane moved in. Turned out she had quite a bit of bob, and she gave me 14 thousand simoleans, we didn't need it though, so we are investing it when our children (hopefully) go to private school, or when they become teenagers. Of course at that time Jane had mixed feelings, so i kept my distance and we remained best friends. I was reasonably content with that, even though I just wanted to kiss her face off. After two happy years together, I announced my feelings to Jane. I expected her to do a runner, but she said she had them aswell. I could of danced until I couldn't no more. We celebrated with a kiss.
Charlotte grew up into a b-e-autiful child. She isn't all that smart, I feel bad because I was so determined to make Jane mine that I didn't pay all that attention to Charlotte. But now that me and Jane are an item, I will repay all lost time. Thats a promise.
I was feeling a little low, so i treated myself to a haircut, cool aye?
Charlotte adores Petal. Jane and I where both shocked at my pregnancy, and she didn't beleive that I could be pregnant. Our relationship was on the brink, but when she was born, Jane knew she was ours. After months of researching if there was any other way of having children without adoption, we did it ourselves. I am truely thankful. Petal is tiring, and keeps me up most nights but I feel well and truley blessed.
12th Nov 2006, 1:42 PM
wow!! i love this legacy.
12th Nov 2006, 3:41 PM
oooh, cool legacy!
12th Nov 2006, 5:35 PM
"OMG BABIES YAY!!!! *squee, tackle, love and kisses, etc.*"
12th Nov 2006, 6:28 PM
great update, I am confused though...she had the baby with Ben Long right?..:)
12th Nov 2006, 6:36 PM
Nope, I didnt want to adopt kids, so I used Boolprop to make Lillie and Jane have a baby together. :) Hope that clears things up a bit, thanks for the lovley feedback :)
16th Nov 2006, 5:51 PM
Petal is six months old now and is celebrating her first birthday soon, I swore to myself that i'd give Petal a better ... toddlerhood when she grows up. Time moves so fast! I'm pregnant AGAIN, and I feel even more blessed then ever. I am so happy. And with all the extra money Im earning, bills are no problem at all.
Jane is the most beautifuly creative women I know, she just stands there and paints. Im supposed to be sleeping and she doesn't know I watch her. I can watch her for hours how she uses her brush and paints delicatly like the paint brush is a child. She has already maxed out her creativity.
I can safley say that me and Charlotte are as close as any other mother and daughter. She is so excited about the new baby, and she adores Petal aswell. We study together, play together and everynight I read a story to her, Jane reads to her on saturday and makes up fairy stories as if she got A* degree in them.
Speaking off charlotte, she is already an A+ student. I nearly cried with joy when I saw her happy face beaming as she bounced off the bus. She is an incredibly popular girl and every day she'll bring home girls and go off to her room.
I asked Jane to marry me, She said yes of course, and I can't wait till the wedding.
She is so proud of the ring i got her she flaunts it off everywhere, It has a pure gold band engraved with I love you with a white crystal in the middle, it cost over 8000 simoleans but she was worth it.
Thats about it at the moment, Charlotte is a tad to young to understand that me and Jane are together, its very complicated and I'll tell her when she gets a bit older. Every saturday I make chocolate fudge cake and we sit down together while Petal is napping. Just like a real family.
Im having so much fun with this legacy, I hope you are all enjoying it too :)
16th Nov 2006, 6:00 PM
YAAAY!!They're married I dont know why but i feel sorry for Charlotte:confused:.... amazing story cant wait to see other chapters :D
17th Nov 2006, 3:11 PM
Cute story! Where did you get Charlottes nursery?!?
17th Nov 2006, 5:38 PM
Oh I love this, like all of your stories. They put me in the mood to go off and play sims2, after I've finished reading, of course..
But i have a feeling when Charlotte is a teen she won't like the fact her mums with Jane, & it might start some trouble..
18th Nov 2006, 12:32 AM
wow, this legacy is really.. different.. in a GOOD way, im enjoying it a lot :) please update soon, cant wait to see Lillie´s wedding :P
18th Nov 2006, 3:12 AM
oooooo...Nice legacy! can't wait for updates!!! :)
18th Nov 2006, 11:53 AM
Punkd; Thankyou, I can see where your coming from with Charlotte, You'll just have to read on :)
Maiv; I've got the from a load of different websites, when I have time I'll Pm you some.
Crisis; Thankyou for the feedback, Like I said, you'll just have to read on :p
Wicked; Wow, thankyou for the lovley feedback.
Sims2addict; Thanks for the comment, glad to see your all enjoying my legacy.
I dont mean to be mean but Im going cornwall for two days, so I'll hopefully update sunday night or monday :)
18th Nov 2006, 3:57 PM
I have just been ungrounded so I just wanted to let you know that I absolutly love this story
19th Nov 2006, 6:04 PM
Hey, Jasmin! :D I've been reading your legacy stories for quite some time, but was too lazy to sign in and comment! :giggler: I really like how write and manage to make every single one of them different. Hope you update today (it's sunday evening here...)!
19th Nov 2006, 6:09 PM
yeh same, Im still in cornwall on my nans incredibly slow comuptor (it took about 10 minutes just to get into sims discussion!!) So maybe i'll be able to update tonight. If not defiantly tommorow, I have a hospital oppointment at 10 and i'll miss the school morning so I'll update then :)
21st Nov 2006, 3:09 PM
Has to be a teenagers dress.
Time is flying by very quickly, why, it was just last week that my beautiful baby son, Logan was born,
Petal is a beautiful toddler, Seeing as we had so much leftover money we did up her nursery a little bit, since it was getting a teeny weeny bit shabby.
And since not much needed to be done, we re-decorated our bedroom aswell, I adore our comfy new bed!!
Jane doesn't talk to me much. She is far to busy with Petal to notice me, when I leaned in to kiss her, Petal ruined the moment and wet the bed. She is probably just hassled, what with a bawling toddler, tiny baby and a nearly teenage girl, she just needs some time alone. So I havn't mentioned the wedding to her, Oh I've already picked out my dress, Its a secret from Jane, I will show her one week before the wedding, I know she'll love it. Of course, I'm a size 12, so I'll have to loose all the baby fat, but that wont be a problem............................ I hope..
Petal is going to be wearing a glittery red dress, wich she looks beautiful in. Me and Jane chose it two months after we got engaged, although we won't be married soon, well actually four months, Charlotte refused to be bridesmaid unless she was a teenager. You see she saw a dress shop with strapless dresses, flowing ones and glittery ones, and she hated all the dresses her size, so me and Jane decided to wait until Charlotte was old enough, why does she want to be a teenager so quickly? Hormones and puberty.. great. Charlotte still thinks i'm getting married to "Mystery man" as she calls "him" but I will tell her soon.
Charlotte spends all her free time on this thing called MSN, have you heard of it? Its this web chat thing, I give her all the details, and she swore not to give out any adresses. I just hope she wont, ... no, what am I saying? I know she wont.
Petal and Charlotte are like any other sisters, Petal is always smiling. Isn't My little petal just adorable? Jane is so proud of her.
I'm already counting the days till the wedding, it feels like christmas!!
21st Nov 2006, 4:05 PM
Great Update!! I feel sorry for Charlotte though...
21st Nov 2006, 5:02 PM
Yeah, I feel sorry for her too. :[
But great updates! This is a really good legacy.
21st Nov 2006, 5:48 PM
Thankyou for the really nice feedback :)
21st Nov 2006, 6:01 PM
great update jasmin, cute babies!
22nd Nov 2006, 5:47 AM
good story! I am going to follow it! Your family is beautiful!<3
22nd Nov 2006, 6:51 PM
Those oval eyes.
It has been 8 months since Little Logan was born, I take care of him but Jane .. well Jane just isn't Jane anymore, she spends all her time with Petal and she barley gives Logan a second glance, can't say I'm worried though, she loves Petal so much. I'm sure she'll adjust to Logan in the same way. I sure am tired, Logan is a little screamer and keeps me up most nights, but me and Logan have a high bond, and I can't believe it'll be his first birthday soon.
It has been nearly a year since i have been to work, and Jane only works Mondays, sundays and wednesdays. So someone has to bring home the bacon and that person is me, since I've had a lazy year off I'm fresh and new and rearing to go. Aw bless, Jane has layed Logan on the sofa and she is gazing into his eyes, they are a light blue with a twinge of silvery grey, lighter then mine anyway, prehaps he inherited them from his grandad, but I dont like to think about it. Anyway I'm off!
Those eyes, those eyes arn't mine.
Neither are they Lillie's.
I'm sorry, but I know your not mine.
Im sorry, i really am..
Jane took a soft pillow from the corner of the couch and hovered it over Logan. His howling grew louder as a shawdow lurked over his head. Jane closed her eyes and thought about what she was doing. It was the right thing, she knew he wans't hers, and she couldn't accept that. He was not hers.
Jane breathed heavily, her eyes widened as she noticed the motionless baby, she picked him up and took him to his cot. Washed her hands and took a bath.
what have I done...
It was the right thing..
I arrived home with a whole stack of props, Oh I didn't tell you did I? I work in the acting carreer and I have a job as a prop designer, It's a pretty awsome job, but I have to keep up the good work, Im in such a happy mood!
I walked into the Petals bedroom, she was having her usual afternoon nap, I smiled and tucked her in, stroking her soft skin and brushing away the loose strands of hair that fell down her delicate face.
I made the bed and asumed Logan was asleep, until I saw him. He was limp and still. I screamed.
"JANE, JANE WHAT THE H*LL HAPPNED, CALL A DAMN AMBULANCE!!!"
I took my baby boy and began begging him to wake up, splashing a little cold water on his face and trying to listen for a pulse..
There was none.
Jane came out with hazy eyes, staring upwards, as if she was fascinated in the ceiling.
"I did the right thing Lillie, you where so miserable,"
"Jane, CALL A DAMN AMBULANCE! PLEASE!!"
"You where so tired, so very tired.."
"JANE YOUR NOT MAKING ANY SENCE!!"
Jane looked from the ceiling to the floor and flashed a smile.
"I did it Lillie, I have rescued you from that little ... "
"YOU DID THIS TO LOGAN!!!"
"I had no choice Lil, we where so happy before hehh .. heehh. hheee arrived"
I looked at my dead baby, his arms flopped and he looked so peacefull.
"Your a murderer.. i can't marry a murderer, NOW GET OUT!"
Jane's head shot up, her eyes alarmed.
"GET OUT JANE!"
Sorry for such drama :lol: I hope your enjoying the story, it was just getting a bit repetive so I decided to you know, spice it up a bit :D
22nd Nov 2006, 6:55 PM
Wow! That's so sad, I hate Jane :(
22nd Nov 2006, 8:03 PM
Gyah!... I've lost any and all resemblance of a crush I had on Jane. *goes off somewhere and loses lunch* Thank GOD my Legacy sims aren't like that, has it ever occurred to Jane that he -might- have inherited a grandparent's eyes??? Both my Generation 3-ers so far have traits from their grandmother that weren't present in the second generation... *shudders*
OH F*CK. Is Jane going to go after CHARLOTTE? (because Charlotte isn't hers, either, she's from an affair with Don Lothario...)
22nd Nov 2006, 8:16 PM
Aww poor thing... I hope Jane will get the punishment she deserves, or at least treatment.. she sounds very mentally unstable/ill. ]: Shocking. Jane seemed so nice.
22nd Nov 2006, 8:28 PM
all your comments make me smile, Ooh the charlotte thing is a good idea!! :p
Thankyou all so much for your comments, it's sortof a legacy drama :p:p Im gonna go have a bath and think about what could happen in the next chapter.
23rd Nov 2006, 2:23 AM
Oooo...Jane has truely gone off the deep end! :gonemad: Let get her! :mob
23rd Nov 2006, 3:21 AM
O_O scary bananas!!
i never liked Jane.
23rd Nov 2006, 3:51 AM
Oooh, awesome story, although its sad what Jane did to poor Logan, I can't wait for the next update! :)
23rd Nov 2006, 9:50 AM
*gasps* Noooo! Poor baby Logan, that's so horrible! Jane is eebil and must be destroyed. :mob
(Great story, by the way! :D)
23rd Nov 2006, 6:02 PM
Awwwwwww poor little logan :(
I love this story btw
23rd Nov 2006, 6:32 PM
yes, indeed, tragic, I'm really not sure what to say....:(..that can be a sensitive subject matter for some.
24th Nov 2006, 5:18 AM
24th Nov 2006, 2:09 PM
OMG love the updates! *hug*
24th Nov 2006, 3:14 PM
I hate Jane...why didn't she just blimmin ASK Lillie about Logan's eyes...why?....I', sorry...getting a bit emotional...
24th Nov 2006, 4:59 PM
Aw, I didn't mean to upset anyone, :p I'm glad your all following the story x Jane has been safley locked up in- oops don't wanna give the next update away :p
24th Nov 2006, 5:08 PM
So... what did you do with Logan? Hahaha.
27th Nov 2006, 8:18 PM
Reality still hasn't sunk in yet.
Jane got 9 years in Jail. Thats pathetic, was 9 years all my sons life was worth? People have been really sympathetic, but my next door neighbour said that I should just move on, I still have my home, my money and my daughters. And do you know what, she was right. I burried my son in the back yard underneath the blossom tree, His coffin was tiny and I dressed him up in his favourite mellowed yellow baby grow. It was a sad day, and I visit him everytime I'm upset.
Petal is nearing her fifth birthday soon. Time just flies by. Oh, I forgot to tell you, Charlotte is 15 years old! Can you believe it! She's only been 15 a month, and after I finnaly let her have a boyfriend she snapped her fingers and boys where begging at her feet. Well, I guess Don had to give her a bit of his personality, she's a romance sim, don't get me wrong, I protested and whined and whinged and begged her to change it, but trust me, Charlotte should be a lawyer, she argued till my ears exploded. But, what can I say? It's her life, not mine, I'm just there to support her.
I have taught Petal all the life skills she needs, like pooping, and talking and stuff, I'll read to her every night until she drifts off, I'm not as good as jj... jjjjjaaaannnnnnnneeee..... ahem.. but I am learning. I dont want to ever say you know whos name again. I really pictured growing old together, but turned out she was just a physco murderer. I can never forgive her. Even Charlotte saw her as a second mum (after I explained all the birds and bees with her) and she loved her too, It really was just heartbraking.
I re-decorated Charlottes room, it was apparently too babyish, and with all the leftover money I couldn't say no. She just loves it!
Oh, and meet her new boyfriend. Jonathon, .. or was it Kyle?? Anyway he came over for dinner and it wasn't horrible, he doesn't have a nose ring, he doesn't wear trakkies, and he doesn't sit in the corner writing suicide notes. Well, he's halfway there. After Charlotte harshly dumped his brother, she moved onto him. Sigh . Oh well, she's just a gorgeous teenager having fun, with .. well nearly every boy in the neighbourhood.
It's my 50th birthday soon!! I am absaloutly mortified. I have stocked up on Olay and hair dye, I'll just let mother nature do the rest. I am so miserable.. I am old. But I am one sexy old person -grins-
There isn't a day that I dont think about Logan, but I'm a reasonably happy-go-lucky girl, and I can't sit around mooching and wishing I can change the past. As harsh as it is, and as hard as it can be to accept, Logan is gone. Nothing can change that. But moving on, I have met a new women, and she is wonderful. Her name is Maralyana, she isn't the prettiest women, but she'll do just fine for me, she loves dogs, children and painting, so we kicked off straight away, and she is a family sim, so she wont do anything to my children, I think i'm slowly falling in love.
Hope your enjoying the story :)
27th Nov 2006, 9:07 PM
I am enjoying the story !! Very good job, it's so unpredictable and clever.
27th Nov 2006, 9:38 PM
Yaaaaay update! :D Another brilliant addition! :P
28th Nov 2006, 12:13 AM
YAY, Marylena! I keep looking for an excuse to get her hitched with someone, but none of my sims seem interested in babymaking with her... You've definitely jazzed her up, though! She's gorgeous!
*pays respects to Logan*
28th Nov 2006, 1:45 AM
9 years?! Hmmm. Poor Logan =(
28th Nov 2006, 4:36 PM
I wanted to throw in a bit of reality, and I did my homework and looked up some justice and law sites :p I do really have to much spare time :lol: Thankyou for the wonderful feedback, unfortunatly, Lillie will not be babymaking anymore ... babies, Marylena is just someone she wants to grow old with :P
29th Nov 2006, 12:00 PM
where did you get the hairstyle in the first chapter:))?
29th Nov 2006, 5:01 PM
Its at rosesims2
But it's donation :)
30th Nov 2006, 1:39 AM
Woo! Nice upate! I'm glad to see that Lillie's moved on.. :]
30th Nov 2006, 10:54 AM
hey, i have been reading this story as a guest and love it!! I am rateing you 5 stars!!:read:
2nd Dec 2006, 2:09 AM
oo that was so unexpected! great job... jane a murder.. poor little logan :(
2nd Dec 2006, 6:19 PM
From noses to grandchildren.
I am furious. I am about too blow up. I really am. Look at what is sticking out of MY beautiful daughters nose. A disgusting peircing. I didn't give any permision either!! How dare she.
Okay I'm over-reacting a little bit, but do you know what, I thought we had a whole trust thing going on. I really did. We argued till our throats where raw.
I found a pregnancy test in her bin the other day. I was more upset then angry and confronted her about it. She wasn't pregnant, but it proved something. She was crying by now, and I felt a bit guilty. She explained that it was her friends.
Then she stormed off to her room shouting at the top of her lungs, about how she didn't trust me, and how I obviously didn't trust her. I was tearful, but I believed her. So i just sat and cuddled Marmar. Oh sorry, thats Maraylana, its my pet name for her!! (I'll pass you the sick bucket....)
On the bright side, My little Petal grew up! Me and MarMar still have the job off re-decorating her room, but with no extra cash at the moment, it's proving to be a diffucult job. Her party was private and she grew up knowing too walk, talk and poop.
Here she is as a child. She has teen beauty queen stamped on her forehead.
It's my birthday tommorow. Praise the lord. Oh wrinkles .. oh wrinkles how happy you must beeeeeeeee... ergh. I feel like crap.
Oh, we have a new member of the family, she's big and hairy and quite aggressive (no I dont mean Mrs Crumplebottom) And she's called Abbey, we adore her, and slowly she is becoming more friendly. She would of been put down because of her aggresion if we didn't save her, she is part of the family and everyone loves her.
Well, thats it for now, i'm reasonably happy I'm not a grandma just yet, but meh, atleast I'll look the part tommorow.
2nd Dec 2006, 6:51 PM
Lovely, I love it and god Charlotte is beautiful and Petal is so cute. Lovely update and I can't wait for the next.
2nd Dec 2006, 8:02 PM
Aw thankyou Vengeance :)
2nd Dec 2006, 9:13 PM
I really appreciate you Jasmin for having such pretty pretty kids in all your legacies! :D Looking forward to the next update!
2nd Dec 2006, 11:49 PM
Okay, I'm with Lillie on that one, Charlotte. Nose piercings are NOT sexy. A few tastefully-placed lip piercings, maybe. Nose piercings, not unless you're an alien spawn and don't have a nose otherwise.
3rd Dec 2006, 12:43 AM
Petal is a stunner! Nice chapter, twas a very cool update. :D
3rd Dec 2006, 1:15 AM
OoO! I like! Petal is Beau-ti-ful!!
3rd Dec 2006, 5:04 AM
Love this story! Logan's death is sad but it's a nice break from those damned "happily ever after" stories... 8D
3rd Dec 2006, 5:09 AM
Okay, I'm with Lillie on that one, Charlotte. Nose piercings are NOT sexy. A few tastefully-placed lip piercings, maybe. Nose piercings, not unless you're an alien spawn and don't have a nose otherwise.
I looked quite lovely with mine. And no, I am not alien spawn. :D
3rd Dec 2006, 11:03 AM
:D Thankyouu x I really appriciate all these amazing comments ^-^
3rd Dec 2006, 11:07 AM
Petal is so gorgeous! And I for one love Charlotte. !!
Can't wait for the next update. :D
5th Dec 2006, 6:19 PM
My beautiful angel.
Cancer. I am going too loose my beautiful Charlotte to cancer. It is unreal, it has been 4 months since her diagnosis. At first doctors gave her chemotherapy and radiotherapy to control it. But it was on stage 4, the most aggresive and slowly it is taking away my daughters life. Her hair is short and almost gone, yet she still trys to smile. But she is almost too week to even lift her arm. Turned out Don's mum had lung cancer and Don had it aswell. I guess it's just a horrible HORRIBLE gene. The thing is, Don's life was saved. Charlottes can't be. I dam wish I had reasearched into Don's health a long time ago, prehaps if I had then, well who knows. Petal is close to Charlotte and copies her, so she cries all the time.
Although it's october, we are celebrating christmas early. Charlotte went from a beautiful, bright, attractive girl, too a weak, poorley girl in a matter of months. She should be out dressed in her devil costume for halloween, but she is home, watching me put the decorations on the tree.
She sits silently. Her lips move and open slowly, but no words come out. Only a hushed whisper is all I can hear. Her eyes dart around the room, until she nods her head towards a stack of paper. I give it too her, and I give her a pen. She uses all her might to lift her arm, and very very slowly writes something. It is scribbled and I can hardly understand it. It says.
"Christmas. Im not goin stay. Love u & petl"
Tears well up in my eyes. I stroke her head and brushed away the loose strands of hair that keep falling into her eyes, she has no strength, no energy. Her eyes shut. My beautiful angel.
Slipping away from me like melting ice.
I call Petal and we gather around her.
My beautiful daughter is gone.
Loosing one child is enough. But loosing two.. WHAT HAVE I DONE, HAVE I CURSED THE HEAVENS SO MUCH THAT THEY TAKE TWO INNOCENT LIVES ON MY BEHALF.
Broken. Christmas.. no, life... wont be the same..
Authors note;- Sorry for a very depressing chapter, but in actual fact, Charlotte did actually die of food poisening in game!! I was so shocked!! I hoped it was a mad glitch, but it was just too weird. Hope your enjoying the story, and sorry for such an emotional outburst.
5th Dec 2006, 6:23 PM
CHARLOTTE!!!!!!!!! How could you do this to us, Jasmin?
5th Dec 2006, 6:24 PM
ahh, that really sucks!!!!!!!!!!!! why soooo sad:(......crazy how the game kinda leads the story huh?......children dying, even in a game strikes a cord with me....boohoo....well i hope they can all find some happiness, poor Lillie.
oh, pst...where are her outfits from, Lillie's.......thanks
5th Dec 2006, 6:29 PM
Oh wow, I was so incredibly nervous about comments because I thought everyone would hate me for such a depressing story :D I hope you stick by it!! It will get happier I promise, I just had writers block and I didnt want to write..
Charlotte died of food poisoning
:lol: so you know, I wanted to .. mm ... emotionalize (is that even a word?) it :D
5th Dec 2006, 6:30 PM
You know Jasmin, You have inspired me to write my own story. It'll be up in a few days (If I actually post it, that is!).
5th Dec 2006, 6:35 PM
Emmzi;- Oh wow, -is very happy- thankyou so much Emmzi!!
Jenny;- I'll look up from where the outfit is from.
5th Dec 2006, 7:03 PM
*cries* Aw, that's too sad! I can't help thinking two down, one to go... ouch, that ain't nice. Still, a very good chapter - I really like the picture of Charlotte watching Lillie decorate the tree, nice and subtle...
5th Dec 2006, 7:10 PM
I looked quite lovely with mine. And no, I am not alien spawn. :D
I don't like nose rings. I shouldn't like lip rings, either, as those chafe the inside of the mouth something terrible, but I definitely don't like nose rings. But all my aliens look good with nose rings, so they're my exception.
5th Dec 2006, 7:59 PM
I just read the legacy through, so sorry I couldn't comment earlier. I really like this story - its different and very good to read! I hope there is less tradgedy in Lillie's future!
5th Dec 2006, 8:24 PM
Oh god, how could you, you evil Sims. How could you kill off such a precious child and such a fantastic character in this Legacy. Dam you Sims. Great story however, it's up to you Petal, don't go near any electroical items or gone off food or anything. You are precious ever so precious now.
5th Dec 2006, 10:45 PM
awwwsz, thats so sad that she died! i would`ve never expected!
5th Dec 2006, 11:30 PM
::Tear::: Aww, poor Charolotte...great update! :]
6th Dec 2006, 4:01 AM
no way! poor charlotte! still, its a great legacy so far.
6th Dec 2006, 6:29 PM
Stick with you.
Her funeral was short. It was on a cold saturday in december. We wore black and burried her next to Logan. I kept a dry eye because I didn't want to upset Petal. I was being brave for her, but inside I was fighting a loosing battle with my tears, a couple slipped out but I remained calm. It was only after the service did I go and see her privately, and I let myself cry until I could no more. It had just started snowing. A thin layer covered the ground. I hope the flowers survive.
But that was three months ago. I took elexier of life so I could post pone my birthday so I could fit into my wedding dress. I took out the one I was going to marry Jane in, and burned it. My new one is long, sleek and simple. Not a dream dress but with lack of money it was my only choice.
Me and Mar married on a january morning beside a lake with Petal, her dad and a couple of tramps watching. To me It was perfect anyway. Well almost perfect. Accept for Charlotte's absence.
I slipped the ring on her finger and I felt the torn in my heart had just got a bit smaller.
Even Petal looked a little bit perkier, she loved choosing the dresses.
An empty silence lingered over us once we had gone home. I'm surprised Maraylana has stuck with me. She asked if I was ready and such, but she looked beautiful and I'm glad I didn't. My hair was long and cascaded down my back in a row of perfect ringlettes, while hers was up do and not a strand out of place. Petal is becoming a teenager soon. Her party will be private like Charlottes and she'll move into her room. Not a thing will be touched and thats the way Petal wants it. Christmas was lacking something. It wasn't the same at the dinner table without Charlotte yabbering on about her latest boyfriend. But the tree was decorated, presents where placed underneath and Petal reluctantly agreed to wear the sweater Mar knitted her. Lets say we Petal was overly spoiled this year... :p she had opned over 10 and there where still nearly 20 left, but the smile on her face, was worth it.
My birthday is tommrow, no more elxier, it is far too expensive. I want it to happen naturally. No parties, no expensive gifts, (although I do want some choccies!!) Just me, Petal and MarMar. It's going to be hard getting used to just the three of us.
Authors note ;- Sorry about shortness off this, but I had some perfect pictures and I wanted to write about them :] Comments are always welcome!
6th Dec 2006, 11:33 PM
Yay!!! Great Update!!!
7th Dec 2006, 10:26 AM
Aw, bittersweet update... I really like the picture of Petal with her presents!
7th Dec 2006, 10:41 AM
i love it!
8th Dec 2006, 4:42 PM
Thankyou for all the loveley comments guys ^0^
8th Dec 2006, 5:18 PM
MORE!! MORE!!!! MUST HAVE MORE!!!! Your story is awesome, jas! What really happened to Logan? With him, like, dead, wouldn't they [social workers] have taken Petal, too? That's so sad that charolette died of food poisoning. But you could include a part when charolette comes back to life with that ressurect-o-nomitron thingy. Now THAT would be a shock! When the next update?!
8th Dec 2006, 6:25 PM
cute update! lets hope Lillie and her family have some happiness:)
9th Dec 2006, 12:41 AM
yeah what happened to logan how did he die?
9th Dec 2006, 12:54 AM
:cry: poor Charlotte! good chapter after it though. *sniff*
9th Dec 2006, 11:29 AM
Awww, I'm so sorry for poor Lillie for loosing two kids... :( She really needs a break from all the horrible stuff that happened to her. Petal, take care of yourself, you're the heir now! :D
9th Dec 2006, 5:34 PM
I used Rodneys Death creator on Logan because he grew up having a bug with his skin, and I tried for a whole hour to fix it, but decided to kill him off, Im mean :]
9th Dec 2006, 6:07 PM
Most definately! Update soon, please! Will be watching!
11th Dec 2006, 1:29 AM
I have JUST* started a sims finds site, it is under serious construction but I would like you to know that I put your story under my story finds. Check it out! :) www.lindsayssimsfinds.piczo.com
*Just as in like an hour ago haha!
11th Dec 2006, 4:29 AM
awwww. oh and lindsey, I clicked on the link and it said the page wasn't found.
11th Dec 2006, 5:18 AM
jaz, how did loagan die in realllife im curious
11th Dec 2006, 6:19 AM
I used Rodneys Death creator on Logan because he grew up having a bug with his skin, and I tried for a whole hour to fix it, but decided to kill him off, Im mean :]
11th Dec 2006, 8:09 AM
11th Dec 2006, 3:02 PM
:D There should be an update tonight, although I dont know, Im going hospital now to have hydrotherapy and nerve injections so I should be back around 4ish. :)
Lindsay, it says the page can't be found :blink:
12th Dec 2006, 6:38 AM
good luck jaz
14th Dec 2006, 7:10 PM
She would be proud.
About 5 months after Charlottes death we decided to adopt a cute little guinea pig called Mizzy, she is easy to take care off, safe from Abbey and completley cute! Petal loved her as a kid...
And still loves her as a teen! Petal is really into cute little fluffy animals and adores Abbey aswell, at first she hated Abbs, saying she was like a massive fluffball but after Abbey's anger went down and she became more gentle, Petal became more involved, as in taking her out for walks, rubbing her belly and even when she could be bothered cleaning her food dish. But Mizzy is easy peasy to look after and Petal does her cage whenever it needs doing.
This is my beautiful teenage daughter. 5ft 4, slim, blonde hair and cute freckles. She grew up a master chef, her cooking ranged from muffins to apple pie. She could be the next female Gordan Ramsey if she puts her mind to it! I'm happy to say there is no nose peircing yet... which I am glad about. If she wants it done I'll accept because quite frankly it is her body and if she wants to staple it with a permanant peircing then thats her choice - not mine.
She has already got a job! She works as a dishwasher for the local resteraunt, and being paid 130 pounds an hour is ok. I guess you gotta start somewhere. Oh I forgot to tell you, im a granny now! Being old, wrinkles and white hair is okay...It is very depressing, I promised myself I'd never dye my hair, but I soon got bored and dyed it anyway. I wanted a change and dyed it a rich chocolate brown, according to my hair stylist it really suits me! Not too shabby aye?
Mar still has 2 weeks to go, I like to tease her about it sometimes. But actually I can't say much due to the fact that I'm old anyway. We sold everything in the nursery, as much as I wanted to hold onto the past we had to clear it out for future grandchildren (much to Petal's annoyance who refuses to believe she is the heir) but you know, thinking ahead!! Me and Maraylana are still very much in love. Charlotte would be proud of Petal. Petal already has a boyfriend! Petal is a family sim and loves him so much, she keeps saying he is her soul mate, but only time will tell. His name is Jonathon something something, it's really a mouthfull! But they look really happy together.
I like to indulge myself in painting. I enjoy sketching and painting with watercolours best, its a great way too pass time when Mar and Petal are at work. I also like to keep neat and trim by doing yoga! Sounds stupid, but look at me!
Well, thats all about it for now, love from the coolest gran on the block,
14th Dec 2006, 9:29 PM
She does look pretty hot for granny, why is she not all hutched over like most grannies, how did you do that. And she hasn't got massive hips, I'm jealous.
14th Dec 2006, 9:29 PM
Awww, cute chapter Jasmin! Petal grew up so pretty,where's her teen outfit from?
14th Dec 2006, 9:33 PM
Aw, Petal's so sweet, and her boyfriend's pretty cute too. :D Lovely (happy!) update, thanks!
14th Dec 2006, 9:36 PM
Things are looking up. Please update soon. Love Petal, she is beautiful.
14th Dec 2006, 11:11 PM
lol..nice update!! :]
15th Dec 2006, 5:50 AM
nice update! i noticed a wedding ring on her finger?
15th Dec 2006, 3:20 PM
She's married to Maralyana(sp?) :DShe did a couple of chapters ago :) Thankyou everyone for the nice feedback :) PennyTheCorgi, I'll look next time i'm in game.
15th Dec 2006, 5:24 PM
Im with Vengeance on this one. How the hell did you make a granny look so damn hawt?
15th Dec 2006, 11:51 PM
Certain elder outfits use a bodymesh to make them look better aka less saggy boobs, smaller hips etc.
16th Dec 2006, 6:13 PM
New family member!!
Petal's relationship with Jonathon didn't go far. She refused to sleep with him, thus ending their going steadyness. (If thats a word) At first Petal was distraught, mooching around the house like a shadow, trust me, she cried so much that Niagra falls would be jelous.
But after I told her how much I loved her, and taught her about all the other fish in the sea, and blah blah blah. She finnaly did some yoga with me, and found her inner peace - watering the flowers. Beats me why it calms her but for some reason she says it makes her happy. Oh well, atleast I dont have to break my back over it now!
Petal became alot perkier by the time the weekend was over, she treated herself to a new top and wore it too school. There is no such thing as private area where we live, it's public school or you get your house egged. She looked very pretty, she is so slim, it amazes me, considering she eats her own home-made chocolate cake and omelettes nearly everyday.
I mean seriously, even Abbey likes her omelettes!! And considering Abbey is probably THE most fussiest dog in the whole world, it really is a compliment. Petal soaks up all the attention as per usual and tells us all how to make it without slipping her secret.
Talking about Abbey, she is having puppies! The leader of the wolf pack, Kai met her and a spark flicked on. I think Abbey missed male company so I let her out, not exactly knowing, but aparently she is pregnant! She loves having her buldging belly rubbed, and her chin tickled. She really is a sweet dog.
With all the lonley days, what with Petal at school or work, and Mar working her butt off to pay the bills I feel very lonley and very guiltey, So I took up a hobby of painting! I have got really good now, maxed out all my creativity skills!
I'm getting a bit concerned about Petal. It was just this morning she had lightmedium blonde hair, and once she came back from work it was honeyblonde and way past her bust. Her clothes had designer lables on them, they looked beautiful on her - but incredibly expensive, but her job didn't pay this much and I knew it. I waved slightly to her as she began watering her beloved flowers.
I'd never doubted my daughter before but I went inside and checked my purse. All my creditcards where still there, I went and checked Maralyana's bag, but her purse was full aswell, it was really strange.. I decided then and there to go behind my daughters back...
16th Dec 2006, 6:19 PM
Ohh, drama! I wonder how she got all that money! Great update, Jasmin! ^^
16th Dec 2006, 8:05 PM
*gasps* No, Petal can't be doing anything bad! She's too sweet for that! ... Right? Nice update!
16th Dec 2006, 9:47 PM
oh, I wonder what she is up to!
16th Dec 2006, 10:12 PM
Lol....I wonder! Nice Update! :]
16th Dec 2006, 11:12 PM
17th Dec 2006, 5:27 AM
Jasmin! Awesome update! Petal..hmm..I wonder whats up.
You've inspired me to write my own legacy....:O Thanks! :D
17th Dec 2006, 5:42 AM
Something's fishy... veeeeerrryyy fishy. She must have a new boyfriend. It's the only logical explanation. Or, she robbed a bank, killed some rich person for their money, robbed a rich person of their money, bla bla bla.... Sorry, I can ramble sometimes! But awesome update, jaz. You've got a great plot going, and I hope to see more!
ps. It would be creepy, if, like, Charolette came back to life, on haloween! *supresses shivers* :wow
18th Dec 2006, 11:43 AM
Nora; Thankyou :D
Loco; Thanks, you'll just have to find out :D
Jenny; Thankyou -evil laugh- I love tourturing you lot, (only joking!)
sims2addict01; Thankyou :)
Vanillacream; Aww, i feel very happy, I look forward to reading it.
P$ycho$immer; Your comments always make me smile, thankyou :)
Pennythecorgi; Petal's teen outfit is from Milkazen.net
I love all this feedback :valentine
18th Dec 2006, 6:03 PM
Jasmin, now why would you want to torture me.....hehe....? I read all your stories and support you sister..:D....
18th Dec 2006, 6:12 PM
19th Dec 2006, 11:28 AM
Jenny; I want to torture you because your story is too awsome :D
Emmzi; Thankyouuu :) There will be an update today (hopefully)
19th Dec 2006, 1:44 PM
Petal is gorgeous! I hope she's not doing something illegal to earn some money
23rd Dec 2006, 1:58 PM
A year on
Christmas is less then a week away. It seems like yesterday that everything was normal, that Charlotte was still here. But now the house is as hectic as a zoo. Ah you lot don't have a clue what I'm talking about do you? Well get comfy and I'll start.. It all started on a friday afternoon, Petal came off the schoolbus with a smile that touched her ears. I asumed it was just a friday thing, but she held a slip of paper. Petal got an A+.
I hated to rain on her parade but that day was the day I was going to confront her about her neverending wardrobe of clothes. I cheered her and told her I was proud of her, She tied her har in a ponytale After she was done admiring herself in the mirror I then sat her on the our beautiful new sofa. (Our whole house, apart from the kitchen got a makeover!)
"Petal, it's about the clothes, where do you get the money?"
She fidgeted and her mouth twitched. Her cheeks flushed a shade of pink, but she said nothing.
"Petal, I think you and I both know your job, does not pay this much!"
"it... it.. it doesn't...."
"then where the h*ll are you getting all this money?!"
I kept asking her how, where and when but she refused to answer me. I remained calm but I could see she was getting adgitated.
"HE BUYS THEM FOR ME!" she suddenly blurted out.
Questions spun around my head like a cartoon charactor. I didn't say anything though. She looked down at her unusaly curvier body and began to cry.
"He buys me things, in exchange for kisses, and .... "
"oh god, Petal, no!!"
"I'm sorry mum, I really am not a prostitute!"
I raised my eyebrows and sighed heavily.
"okay maybe I am but I love him mum, he has no one else but me, his parents died two months ago, he has no over relatives, I'm sorry.."
I needed to get out of there. So I went for a walk. It explained why she was so happy all the time, the posh clothes and fancy haircuts. I began to cry, how could she do this to me?
When I came back I noticed a figure in the doorway. He had messy brown her, olive skin and was about 5ft 9. Petal awnsered the door and let him in.
I felt an intence anger over come me and I ran as fast as my worn out legs would let me. I was about to storm in there and give him a peice of my mind when I heard a conversation.
"You told her then?"
"Yeh, she wasn't happy."
"And the baby?"
"No, she stormed out before I could tell her"
"Okay, I love you Petal, don't ever leave me"
I stepped in the room. He was generally shocked to see me. He smartened himself up and stepped towards me.
"You must be Mrs Brown?"
I ignored him and jerked my neck. Petal looked at me and sighed. She followed me into my bedroom.
"Baby?!" I spluttered.
"Yes mum, i'm sorry. It's what me and Tyson both want."
"DON'T THROW YOUR LIFE AWAY PETAL! HOW COULD YOU BE SO STUPID!"
I slapped her.
"IT'S WHAT I WANT MUM, AND IF YOU CAN'T BE HAPPY FOR ME THEN SCR*W YOU!"
"YOUR 17 PETAL, 17!"
"YOU WHERE ONLY 15 WHEN YOU HAD CHARLOTTE!!"
"that was different.."
"IT'S EXACTLY THE SAME!"
And thats where the conversation ended. Neither of us said anything more of the subject. I was there when she pushed my grandson into the world. I was there when she chose his name. I couldn't make her give her son up. How could I? So now, although I do have regrets. I'm content being a grandmother. Re-decorating little Joey's room was great fun, and me and Tyson are getting along well aswell. I can't say I'm the best mum in the world. But I can't say I'm the worst either.
My little grandson, Joey.
This is Lillie's last update ;) it's over to Petal now!
23rd Dec 2006, 4:22 PM
Oh know, I'm gonna miss how Lillie, she's made her us laugh and cry and now that she passing over her Legacy it just makes me want to cry. However maybe Petal with have better luck and Tyson doesn't look to bad.
I also commend you on how you go into deep every day subjects and do them so well, the feelings that we recieve are down to the nail. Wonderful, wonderful story. Keep it up!
23rd Dec 2006, 8:18 PM
aw, Thanks Vengeance ;) Lillie still has another .. uhm i think its 17 days before she keels over though, so yeh :p I managed to squeeze an update in before Christmas, so Im happy there :p I just had writers block and thought, hey I need Petal to be saying this!
23rd Dec 2006, 9:18 PM
oh, thamx for the update jasmin! it was great.
oo ooo OOO! omg, petal! next update please! im going to miss lillie aswel.
23rd Dec 2006, 10:55 PM
Wow, dramatic-ness! Joey's very cute. (So's Tyson, but that's not the point!) Aw, I'm sad that this is the last of Lillie, though, it feels all weird... fantastic update, though. :D
23rd Dec 2006, 11:02 PM
Gosh-Darn! Petal has a child!
Amazing update! :]
24th Dec 2006, 12:12 AM
awh wow. i didnt expect a boyfriend, i expected shoplifting O_O
24th Dec 2006, 2:19 AM
awh wow. i didnt expect a boyfriend, i expected shoplifting O_O
haha lol :smash:
24th Dec 2006, 7:53 AM
I love your story. When it gets too predictable, BOOM, dramatic part. It's probably my favorite on here. =]
24th Dec 2006, 11:22 AM
Wicked_t0y; Thankyou! :P There will be an update somewhen after christmas, I'm having family around and helping mum cook today so you know :p Busy busy busy!
Loco; Thankyou, I agree Tyson is very cute! (his name was actually george but I have about 10 georges in my neighbourhood and changed his name!)
Tixi; Thanks! I didn't want to make it all really predictable so I had a bit of writers block and discussed ideas with myself ^^; I'm not crazy I promise!!
Sarahdarling; Oh wow, thankyou ^^ That makes me feel very happy :p
24th Dec 2006, 1:28 PM
I agree with Sarah, this is one of the best stories on here and is very much my favourite. You have filled my void, after Sim Sagas's Simville finished I thought nothing could. Bravo.
24th Dec 2006, 1:31 PM
;') you'r comparing ME! to sim sagas!! -blinks- Wow, that is .. just ... wow. That has made my day, thankyou.
24th Dec 2006, 2:07 PM
That's all right, you deserve it. You are a fantastic writer and you explore some many topics, most writers here wouldn't dream of going.
24th Dec 2006, 2:08 PM
-blushes- your making me smile like mad ^^
24th Dec 2006, 8:50 PM
Jasmin - Your is by far one of the best stories on this site, I love it! and all you sims are so gorgeous! Where did you get Petal's ponytail? :)
25th Dec 2006, 1:03 AM
Omg - great update! Sorry I didnt respond sooner! Every chapter gets better and better! :D
25th Dec 2006, 11:05 AM
Pennythecorgi; Thankyou ^__^ Im so happy! Her Ponytale is the newest at peggysims2.
Vanillacreme; Thankyou :) I'm loving all this amazing FB.
25th Dec 2006, 11:41 AM
i love it soo much! thanks for making such a great story. anyway.. when is the next Update? and oh.. may i ask.. where did you download those cool items. i mean objects?!
i really really love this !!!!!!!!!
25th Dec 2006, 2:26 PM
Thanks Jas! *skips off to peggy for cute hair*
25th Dec 2006, 9:47 PM
Great update Jasmin....I guess the rest of us don't need to do our stories now....since yours IS the best.....hehe, kidding....I like the little twist:D
26th Dec 2006, 11:05 AM
emopunk; Thanks, any specific objects?
Pennythecorgi; It's okay :P Thanks again x
Jenny; :D Thankyou hunny, there might even be an update today to thankyou lot for being the best.
(if not, don't take it personaly, it's just my mum has planned, kareoke, cards, Pictionary and this weird game thing.. :p)
26th Dec 2006, 1:23 PM
haha, Im still loving this story. :D
Ooh, pictionary?! I got that for xmas. :p
26th Dec 2006, 3:32 PM
like charlotte's nursery. the wine thingy on the first chapter. and lillie's bed. the blue one.
:) thanks. when's the next update?
26th Dec 2006, 7:39 PM
Wow. The update is amazing. I love sim drama. Don't know why but I love it.
26th Dec 2006, 8:16 PM
This update makes me wonder what Charolette would have thought of her sister's...um... dealings. What about Marylena? What happened to her? Is she still alive, or will she die tragically in a kitchen fire? :rofl: *chuckle* sorry, I just love this story! Great job! :up:
27th Dec 2006, 8:16 PM
I just read the entire thing beginning to end and I loved it, Jasmin.
27th Dec 2006, 9:14 PM
*dancing around, waiting for the next update :)* hurry, i cant dance forever!! lol
27th Dec 2006, 11:28 PM
Great update.. :D You never cease to amaze me, everytime you think that it's going great, then there's a new twist to this story... It's just amazing, and you're such a good writer.. Whoever compared you to Sim Sagas is right, you are really great.. :D
28th Dec 2006, 4:16 AM
I love this story it is so good. I think it should be published or something, but keep up the good work and please continue!!!!!!
28th Dec 2006, 12:49 PM
It wasnt working.
Dropping from school was probably one of the hardest things I had too do. Not just on my behalf, but on mums aswell. Her beautiful house is constantly being egged and newspapers stolen. "slut" and "slapper" are being shouted at me, even at 12 in the night. I don't retaliate to them because thats just daft, I hope they go away soon. Mum is more dreamier then ever. She doesn't talk to anyone and mumbles to herself. She spends every second of free time painting portraits of me, where does she think I'm going?
I don't drink, and I definatly don't smoke on Joey's behalf. So I don't know whats actually going on in her mind. Maraylana is an elder now, my lezbian grannies are as weird as eachother, mooching around and painting. It's all they do, I'm lucky if they actually say hi to me. They canoodle up with eachother and mumble and say little weird names, maybe they're predicting my future kids? ............... creepy...
Me and Tyson split up. It just wasnt working, I think i'm cursed with boys, because whatever relationship I get myself into, it never works. I did actually think about being a lezbian but me ending up like my mother just completley put me off. So I'm happy being straight for the minute. Anyway, Joey is a very complicated baby, because he has autism. He screams all the time and I'm lucky if he'll settle for an hour, Tyson was always out and I couldn't put that amount of responsibilty on my poor old mother, as tempting as it sounded I had to prove I was responsible for my sons actions. Tyson would scream at Joey, and shout and whatever little thing I asked him to do he would make a huge fuss and do it cursing under his breath. Thats why we broke up.
I got fired from my job. But I promise you I'm getting my life back on track. I have a set routine for Joey, and I have a lot of supplies and art pads. I want to be a fashion designer, I have everything I need and I can sell my samples. It's more convenient because I can work at home where I can keep an eye on Joey. I'm only small but I hope one day I can be big.
I know it's a huge journey, and with an autistic son It's going to be a difficult one, I know it will be hard and I'm prepared for it. Life is not going to get any easier. I have about 20 books on autism and I think i'm prepared for him. I'll love my son. I promise myself I will. I just hope it's a promise I can keep. I really do. He'll be a toddler soon. I don't know whether to look forward to it, or dread it. But I will try. Whatever he throws at me, whatever hurdles I have to leap over, I dam promise, I will try.
28th Dec 2006, 1:05 PM
Awwww. Good first post of Petal!
28th Dec 2006, 2:22 PM
Oh more tragic parts, poor Joey and I suppose poor Petal too. I was hoping she was going to have a tragedy free life, unfortunatly it must run in the family. Great update.
28th Dec 2006, 5:50 PM
Aww..poor Joey..and Petal. Nice Update! :)
28th Dec 2006, 6:28 PM
I loved the update, I feel so bad for little joey, not having his father around all the time, I believe when he gets older the feeling will really sink in if another man has not already stepped in as father, I know the pan he'll feel if he doesn't have some kind of father figure there. Once again great Update, and I hope that things work out for petal!!!!!
28th Dec 2006, 7:15 PM
Love the update, hope there is tons more to come
28th Dec 2006, 7:28 PM
nice update Jasmin:)
30th Dec 2006, 6:18 PM
Eeep, poor Petal - it's gonna be very hard for her and Joey, aye? Great update, though! :D
4th Jan 2007, 3:27 AM
Ohh. Poor Petal and Joey! My bro has autism so it will be a big journey for her! *Gives Petal a huge hug* She's only seventeen! *Hugs Petal again*
So that means...AWESOME UPDATE! :D:D
4th Jan 2007, 3:44 AM
nice update jaz!
4th Jan 2007, 3:51 AM
upppdateeee please. It will make my...week!
4th Jan 2007, 1:13 PM
Whoot! I LOVE it.
Okay, So I don't love the fact that stupid Tyson (I KNEW he was trouble from the start) and Petal broke up. Poor Darling. Or that little Joey has autism and it was hard for her. Poor soul.
OMG I sound like my Mom. :(
4th Jan 2007, 4:31 PM
Oh my, sorry guys I've been so busy, handeling 4 contests and judging one, keeping a story and trying to decorate all of pleastentview is actually really hard :D Conisdering i have about 4 hours after school to get it all done, and this saturday is going too be busy, what with my birthday party and everything :) so pleease bear with me, If I have time I'll update today, but be warned, it may be short!
By the way, thankyou all for the amazing comments, I love you guys ;)
4th Jan 2007, 8:17 PM
okay. good luck with all of that!
4th Jan 2007, 8:55 PM
Yeah, good luck with everything - and enjoy your birthday party, happy birthday for... *counts* 4 days ago! :D
5th Jan 2007, 12:41 AM
Great story. So little Joey's autistic huh? Man that sucks, I should know cos I'm autistic, lol! Seriously, It would be interesting to see how you pull it off. Keep writing ;)
5th Jan 2007, 7:26 PM
Life with Joey is a lot less harder then I imagined it. At the moment Joey is a normal toddler, he can't talk, or walk but he'll sit and play with his train track for hours on end.
He sleeps through the night and has about 1 tantrum a day. They are serious tantrums, I'm talking about smashing toys, head banging and hair pulling, but with all the wasted energy he'll nap straight after he has calmed down. I love him, just like I promised I would. He has only just learnt to smile, and when I ever feel like crawling into a hole, I think of his smile, and I don't feel unhappy anymore.
Mum and Maraylana are still very much in love. It inspired me and I tried to write a short story on it. Apparently it's good, but I dont actually think it is. My samples have sold and I'm working as an assistant designer in a local wedding boutique. It brings in a load of money and I enjoy doing it. I spend every single second of time that isn't on Joey or sleeping making samples, drawing, sewing and studieing wedding fashion. I get about 6 hours sleep a night which is really quite good considering it was about two hours when Joey was a baby.
I still like too cook, but Maraylana does most of the main meals. I cook every saturday for everyone and we sit at the dinner chatting away like a normal family. Sunday lunch is usualy done in scilence, everyone does their chore and we sit and eat. Joey only eats strawberrys, dried cereal, carrots, raisons and rich tea biscuits. I try to get him to eat baby mush but if it passes his lips he'll throw up. I did try, and I still am, I'm trying to ween him into drinking milk, but he'll only drink Banana smoothie and Lemon and Lime Highjuice. I can't say its the most healthiest diet but atleast he doesn't have a sweet tooth. My doctor says I'm doing the best I can and with all the extra effort he said Joey would be making more progress as the years go on.
Don't think I have regrets, because quite frankly I do. I sometimes wish I'd never had Joey, that I was still a normal teenager, with boyfriends and homework, not lifting my finger and mum making meals for me. But all that changed, it was so dramatic that I actually thought about adoption. But I wavered and didn't give it another thought. Mum said she'll support me whatever I do, she doesn't really care what happens, and said it's my choice. She's really old now, and she always hugs me, telling me shes proud of me whatever I do. I love my mum, I love her new chestnut hair tickling my face, I love her soft voice and I love her lavender scent, even if it does make me sneeze, although I dislike her in a normal teenage "you ruin my life" way, I do secretly love her.
I can't say much is happening for my love life, with no free time I dont go out. And any boys that have been remotlely interested in me suddenly remembered that they had a girlfriend once I told them I had an autistic son. Sometimes life isn't fair. But I have got slimmer! I am very proud of my figure and I am glad to get rid of all my baby flubber.
I guess thats it for now,
5th Jan 2007, 7:56 PM
She's so pretty now! It's good her mom supports her. =)
5th Jan 2007, 9:01 PM
How cute is Joey? He got his Mommys good looks!
5th Jan 2007, 9:21 PM
Lovely update, Petal seems to be coping okay! Joey is adorable, and Petal's so pretty too. :D
5th Jan 2007, 10:08 PM
Awesome Update! Petal looks amazing! :]
6th Jan 2007, 9:19 AM
awww how cute!
7th Jan 2007, 7:34 PM
Joey = cutie pie! (= His freckles and smile are priceless!
7th Jan 2007, 8:47 PM
Where did you get their skins?
9th Jan 2007, 6:51 PM
ARGH. My wordpad/paint/notepad is not working? I have the writing and it's all not loading saying the file does not exist, I don't know whats happening? I was going to post an update today but I can't access wordpad and I don't have time to write it out again. PLEEAASEE bear with me on this, and thankyou for all the amazing comments, i love all u guys.
Branwen; their skin is Louis default.
9th Jan 2007, 11:00 PM
Aw, Jasmin, that really sucks! I hope you get it working again, good luck!
9th Jan 2007, 11:18 PM
Just gotta say I'm like in love with this story! It's so erm, inspirational I guess...if that makes sense? :rofl:
12th Jan 2007, 1:58 PM
Alot has happened in the last couple of years. Joey is gone now, his toddler age ended and he grew up knowing to sign language like a pro. He didn't talk, and he could only just walk.
I sometimes wish he didn't have such a high stage of autism, but I'm just thankful it's not the highest one, I don't really remember what stage of autism he was at, he was my son and I loved him either way, so I didn't listen to what the doctors had too say. But that was back then, this is now, and I had to listen to the doctors telling me how ill my son was, I had to. Joey was vomiting daily, his chest came out in a rash and he could hardly move, it was very frustrating for me because I didn't know when he was in pain, I took a week off from work and sat by his bedside. Eventually after a week of cleaning up sick, I took him to the hospital. It was not good news. Joey had a hole in the right side of his heart, my little baby was going to have to have heart surgery. Mum sat by my side and told me everything was going to be ok. I just cried.
That was 2 years ago. Joey had 4 operations, he was just an 8 year old little boy. I love him very much. His hair had turned a thin blonde and there are a couple of whisps on his head. I kept thinking that prehaps a miracle would occure, that he'd have a happy long life. But .. I am wrong. Prehaps I have the family curse and things always go wrong. I didn't want my little baby to suffer anymore. So I got him a load of books, and asked him what he wanted to do, he didn't understand of course so I sign languaged it too him. I needed to fufill his last wishes. I didn't tell him he was going to die. I hugged him tightly and tried not too let the tears slip out. Do you know how hard it is for a mother too arrange a little boys death? He is sleeping with the angels now. Joey loved angels, he loved the one we put on the christmas tree, it had a golden gown and a little delicate tiara. Joey didn't understand christmas, he would stare at all the wrapped presents, and fiddle with the tinsle on the tree. But he'll happily open his presents, if everyone else is. Mum and Maraylana was at his bedside., Tyson was there and I was there, I held his hand and stroked his head until he drifted off. Do you know how hard it is too imagine that? No. I hope no one else has too. Unfortunatly for me I had too, I feel a slight relief because he was in so much pain and I ended it. Thats why I feel guilty also.
I can happily say I have completed Joey's last wish. Meet Amerie Brown. Joey's little sister. I met a new boyfriend, who loved Joey like he was his own. His name was Chad and he was perfect. Joey's last wish was to have a brother or sister, he pointed to a baby in his books for weeks on end. And eventually we gave in.
I had Amerie 2 years ago, and Joey loved her. Amerie has soft rosey cheeks, long blonde hair and her daddies eyes. When she grows up, I will tell her about her brave big brother.
He would sit so still it's like he's not breathing and will admire her for hours, gently stroking her hair like I do to her. Watching her every movement. Joey only smiled too her and when she cried, he'd cry. It was very moving to watch, Joey's was in a lot of pain, he wore nappies so he didn't have to get up. His whole body shivered in the morning, and you have no idea how tired I was. My little baby had suffered enough, I was being cruel to be kind.
My little boy, love you forever.
Authors note; Gah. I hate writing depressing chapters, but I had too write my way out of joey because he completley vanished? He kinda froze and then my screen froze and when I refreshed it he was gone? No memories off him, no family tree links, it was so weird. I have moved them into another house because i think that house was bugged, it was like everyone was dying. I apologize for another depressing chapter, but next chapter will be happier :) Isn't Amerie gorgeous? I can't believe her dads a townie. Anyways hope you enjoy reading, :P
12th Jan 2007, 2:13 PM
Aww.. That's so sad.. Poor Joey.. :( I feel for the family, thy have gone through so much..
Little Amerie is sooo adorable.. :) A little angel.. She's be really gorgous when she growns up! :)
As always.. Great update, you are such a great writer.. It's just a joy to read.. Looking forward to the next amazing update... :D
12th Jan 2007, 3:20 PM
Aww.. poor Joey.. I had tears in my eyes. ): Hehe, you know you're a good writer when you can make your readers cry. <3
Amerie is beautiful. I'm jealous, you really have the best townies in your game! Mine are all ugly. :giggler:
Looking forward to the next update :)
12th Jan 2007, 3:34 PM
That was so sad... :( Poor ickle Joey, poor Petal. This legacy really is tragic, it's kinda funny that half of it is the game's doing... 'I guess some people are just born with tragedy in their blood'. Anyway, Amerie is gorgeous! Thanks for the update, I missed this. :)
12th Jan 2007, 4:11 PM
That happened to me all the time when I used boolprop! But they always came back sooner or later.....
Edit: I almost forgot! Such a sad update. =(
But it was exelent.
12th Jan 2007, 4:27 PM
*Sniff* Poor Joey, thats soo sad! Amerie is gorgeous though. :cry:
12th Jan 2007, 5:28 PM
JASMIN! How could you? :( :( :(
Amerie is cute though.
12th Jan 2007, 10:18 PM
I'm going to agree how ironic it is that half the tragedy in this story is the game's doing.
13th Jan 2007, 3:06 PM
~Squash-buddy-ven~ - Thankyou very much, I love reading your comments :anime:
Dorka - Heh thankyou! Amerie was hideous actually, I just put some lashes and some better hair and she looked amazing, she has her daddy wrapped round her little finger in game.
Loco - Thanks! I always update really late, got so much going on at the moment, thanks for the lovely comment :duck:
lonelydoowoop - Yeh, I think it is boolprop so I have stopped using it, thanks for the comment =]
PennyTheCorgi - Aw, thankyou, I just love Amerie aswell, =]
Emmzi - I didn't get much of a choice :p he just vanished :lol:
proxian_girl - Since i've moved them there hasn't been any ilness or deaths... yet, thankgod.
Thanks for all the wonderful comments!
13th Jan 2007, 3:38 PM
But is was awesome! :]
14th Jan 2007, 6:20 PM
Life without Joey is a lot less harder then I imagined it too be. Although I keep waking up at five and expect to see Joey watching the sun rise. Although, he isn't there and I feel empty and watch it myself. I miss my little baby I really do. Although I expected myself to mooch around the house and cry all the time for a lot longer then I orgininaly did. Being lazy and depressed just isn't how I roll. I need to be doing something, so I worked on a few more designs and fabrics. I've even made my first Bridesmaid dress.
Chad is a lot happier aswell, as much as he loved Joey, I knew he didn't feel comfortable around him, becuase Joey would often feel him and smell him and look at him for long periods of time. I think Chad was a tad freaked out by it all. But me and him have been getting along great, we have more time too spend together.
He does his fair share with Amerie also. He loves that little girl, he changes her nappies and plays with her all the time.
Amerie is very spoilt, what we me, Chad, Mum and Maraylana looking after her, fussing with her, giving her loads of toys and dresses, lets say my little Amerie is a very lucky little girl.
I get to go out a lot more aswell. Before I had to schedulde when I needed to go out, and It's just nice to look around shops without a care in the world. People still tut me when I go out with Amerie but I'm almost a grown women now and I don't care what others think. Amerie is my little girl, and she makes me smile. Me and Chad are always in photobooths... NO I DON'T MEAN DOING NAUGHTY THINGS.. although that does sound fun.. anyways off topic, we get loads of goofy photos done for my little collection.
And at the end of the day Amerie is usualy knackered so she'll drop right off. She wets the bed nearly every night but me and Chad take it in turns too change the sheets and things. Thankfully Amerie is a night baby and will sleep through it. I love my little Amerie.
Life is good at the moment. Chad doesn't work yet but he's training to become a footballer for our local team. Hey maybe i'll be a footballers wife! I get too kiss him and snuggle up too him, and he doesn't feel tense like he used too. God. A kind, protective, amazing boyfriend with a scrummy body. What more can a girl want in a boy?
Don't hate me and think that Joey made my life hard, because he didn't. I go out and talk to him about everything and I think of him everyday. He was my first born and nothing can change that.
14th Jan 2007, 6:51 PM
Wow i love this story! Amerie is so pretty!
I sent you a private message Jasmin too.
14th Jan 2007, 7:06 PM
Aw, sweet, uplifting update. Amerie is so cute! I'm glad Petal's coping.
14th Jan 2007, 7:22 PM
Aww.. *whips tears from face* beautiful, this is the only story I'm reading right now, I can't bring myself away from it. Nicely done and I can't wait for the next chapter.
PS: Petal looked rather amusing in the picture with her and Chad, one I shut and all.
14th Jan 2007, 7:43 PM
Aww.. What a great update.. :) It got me quite emotional even though it's a happy update.. It's just nice to see the family having some good times... *Does a happy dance*
14th Jan 2007, 7:59 PM
Great update! Amerie is a cutie pie! =]
16th Jan 2007, 4:58 PM
Like it lots. Very sweet.
17th Jan 2007, 3:07 PM
Awww, sweet chapter! Amerie is such a cutie, Chad's not bad either... :lovestruc :nod:
21st Jan 2007, 11:38 AM
Hey, Where is everyone?
21st Jan 2007, 6:00 PM
We're waiting for the next UPDATE!!
23rd Jan 2007, 6:39 AM
amerie = Love.
i'm also in love with your decorating style.
24th Jan 2007, 6:16 PM
Thankyou so much for all the feedback, sorry for all the waiting, god I'm SO un-organized!! I love all your comments, and I'm getting the next chapter up as we speak.
24th Jan 2007, 8:38 PM
The letter format is only temporary. Just thought I should say that ;)
So much has happned in the last three years. And I just got your letter in the post. I felt kinda sad reading it, but It's nice to see you still care. I'm all grown up now mum. Me and Chad are getting married soon. Maybe you could come? We are very very very much in love, I love how he always has time for the girls, even though he's having very rough training sessions.
The twins are fine before you ask. Angelique is very girly and Kyla is very quiet. They both love playing in the sun, Although they are incredibly different, they still love eachother. Even if the do have their Hairpulling, bottle stealing, doll head biting off moments. They both love the slide, they're both dare devils, not even I would go down it, but they are there whizzing down it and laughing and giggleling.
Kyla is beautiful. She has a very loveable attitude, she is quiet and loves dolls, I love my little Kyla.
Angelique is loud and noisy, she craves attention and is always a bit of a brat, she makes everyone giggle and I love her loads aswell.
Like I said. I'm now an adult! I don't have too feel ashamed (not that I ever did.. but you get where i'm going) about going out with my daughters. Me and Chad have never been so happy here in Madrid. It's hot and beautiful all the time, and I'm a footballers wife! We had a picture taken with all the family just for you.
Chad doesn't have any family left. His mum died of a stroke and his dad left when he was 13. Shame isn't it? I think about you all the time. How are you and Maraylana? Listen mum, I didn't move too spain becaused I wanted too, if anything all I wanted too do was stay at home with you, I was a child wanting nothing but your protection, but now I realise it's good too have freedom and independence. Anyway, I moved because I loved Chad. Chad has been promoted top of the leage and his manager says he could be the next David Beckham. How awsome would that be? I say my prayers everynight. Me and Amerie are fine. She grew up into a stunning little girl. She has Little Miss Madrid stamped on her forehead let me tell you.
Leaving my buisness was hard too mum, I don't work much these days, but I have too admit the house does get lonley. I want too be an artist, but my creativity skills are seriously lacking. Although I inherited your beauty mum, lets just say I didn't inherit your creativeness aswell. Well, don't want too be picky would we? So all I do is lounge by the pool. Kind of boring really.
You would love the house mum, It's not modern but it's not old fashioned, It's beautiful, big and has loads of little quirks. The twins share a bedroom and Amerie has one of her own. I guess thats all mum. I really miss you. I hope you don't throw this letter away, and I would love a reply back.
Petal, Chad, Amerie, Angelique and Kyla.
And Crispie the cat.
24th Jan 2007, 8:47 PM
Wow, I just read the story, I really like it!!
24th Jan 2007, 8:47 PM
Oww, Madrid! Next David Beckham! Fancy :)
25th Jan 2007, 3:41 PM
Oooh, coolness! The twins and Amerie are beautiful, they're so sweet. Lovely update!
25th Jan 2007, 4:34 PM
Ixi the great; Thankyou for the awsome comment ;)
Bad kay; Yeah, At the moment their house has cost me over 4 hours decorating (it kept crashing) and 74 thousand simoleans :p
Loco: Thankyou I think Kyla is the new heir because her personality has changed since the last update, she's now the brat :p
Thanks for comments guys =] Keep em' coming!
25th Jan 2007, 8:15 PM
I have to say this, they are such a beautiful legacy!
26th Jan 2007, 5:20 PM
Really good Jasmin! Kyla and Angelique are two little sweeties!
27th Jan 2007, 3:52 PM
Lovely, more soon please.
27th Jan 2007, 6:17 PM
jasmin, you always haff stunning sims, i wish i had them in my game, but then again id feel the urge to make them goth... :err: :rolleyes: anyways, im really liking this legacy, keep it up :D
29th Jan 2007, 7:32 PM
Oh god, thankyou all for the amazing comments, it's what I needed too read after today. God, i've been in hospital for half the day and I have not found the time too update. There will hopefully be an update tommorow, sorry guys :p
29th Jan 2007, 7:41 PM
Jasmin, sorry to hear that you have been in hospital. I hope you are okay..
BTW, this is such a great story.. I can't wait to the next update.. :)
30th Jan 2007, 7:43 PM
Being in Spain and having money has taught me something. Money does not bring happiness. I've had another baby, a little boy called Dylan, Chad was thrilled and is already talking about him taking after his dad. But I don't know, I can't connect to Dylan as well as the others. I just don't feel myself around him.
The twins are kids now, and beautiful ones they are. Angelique is still snobby and her behavior upsets me sometimes. Although she is cute and always sorry I just get sick to death of her tantrums. I do love her smile though. She's a pretty girl.
Kyla on the other hand is hardworking and an angel. I never show favourtism but Kyla is just everything I would want in a daughter. I don't know, I guess I just feel more closer to her.
I had to have an emergency cesarean due to complications with my womb. I always wanted a huge family, and now I can't have any more children. I guess I should be grateful that I have three beautiful daughters and a son, but what can I say? I wanted more kids then four and now I just don't feel complete. Angelique ignores Dylan. But Amerie and Kyla shower him with affection. Always planting huge kisses on him, and gently stroking his hand.
Amerie is doing well, can you believe she'll be a teenager next week? Time has flown by so fast. Me and mum are still in contact, she finnaly got off her arse and got a computor that wasn't 100 years old, and has installed MSN I talk to her all the time and send thousands of photos to her. She wants me to move back, or move closer too them, but I can't do that too Chad, and the girls are already speaking spanish.
Days go by faster here then back at home. The girls still love that slide as much as they loved it when they where toddlers. I don't have much energy so I just sit and work on my tan. Watching them silently until Dylan starts screaming again. I havn't told mum about my relationship with Dylan but what do I say that wont remind her of Logan. It upsets me just saying his name right now, I'm trying to get better, I am trying to love my little boy, it's just taken a little longer then expected.
I guess thats all. I am a good mommy, I promise I am.
30th Jan 2007, 8:26 PM
Wow! Kyla is so pretty!
30th Jan 2007, 9:35 PM
Kyla's gorgeous! She up for download at any point? I can tell she'll be one heck of an adult!
30th Jan 2007, 10:07 PM
I agree with the posters above me, Kyla's so gorgous..!! This was a really sweet update.. :)
30th Jan 2007, 10:50 PM
Aww I hope everything turns out well with Dylan! He is such a gorgeous baby, he seems to glow!? <-- not literally...obviously ^_^ lol :anime:
30th Jan 2007, 11:21 PM
nice update jasmin! may i ask where did you get angelique's skin? thanks
31st Jan 2007, 12:08 AM
Bravo! Nice updates!! :]
31st Jan 2007, 1:04 AM
Looks like she's getting a bit of a beer belly in the last picture! Haha! Great update!
31st Jan 2007, 10:33 AM
Aw, nice update! Kyla is beautiful. Aw, it's sad Petal can't have more children... could she adopt? Then again, she should probably work on her relationship with Dylan first... tis triste...
31st Jan 2007, 4:36 PM
All their skin is the Louis Simcribbling default. Her freckles are an old sera sims file, which I don't think are avaliable to download.
Thankyou so much for all your fabulous comments, they meen so much too me!
I never though of uploading Kyla, mm I might take a trip to sim PE, I admit, she is probably the most beautiful legacy child born in game in all my legacys put together, I don't want her to grow up!
31st Jan 2007, 5:51 PM
Kyla is breath taking!
We haven't seen much of Amerie... :(
2nd Feb 2007, 5:01 PM
Don't worry Emmzi ;) Amerie's teen life is coming up :p
2nd Feb 2007, 8:38 PM
Kyla is really, really pretty. Looks so natural, I hope she isn't wearing any makeup, is she?
Love the story, still my favourite. More soon.
2nd Feb 2007, 8:39 PM
Great update!! :)
We all love Kyla, <3
I sense drama comming on..
5th Feb 2007, 5:17 PM
Aw, thankyou everyone :valentine with a bit of luck, the next update should be tonight. If not, don't throw cookies at me it'll be tommorow.
6th Feb 2007, 6:29 PM
I have just read the full story its one of the best ive ever read! A definate 10 out of 10 for this great story! By the way where did you get Amerie's hair from (child hair)???
6th Feb 2007, 8:56 PM
Being married has meant that I have had some of the best moments in my life. Mum flew over and she and a couple of my friends where my witnesses. It was tearful seeing mum, and she explained that she was on her own. Maralyana died of a stroke and mum had spent most of the last month talking to me and sleeping. I felt sorry for mum, but my kids have made friends here and they are whats important.
She helped me do my hair and makeup. She fitted me into my dress and fiddled with everything. I was very bored but just glad mum was there to help. If it wasnt for her I doubt I wouldn't be married! It was a beautiful day and I was literaly sweating buckets in my wedding dress but it was all worth it. Chad's manager came and wrote some cheesey best man poem but apart from that it was perfect. I even saw mum crying at one point which got me very emotional.
Amerie grew up three months before the wedding, she died her hair chestnut brown and chose her own dress. Angelique and Kyla wore identicle soft pink dresses and had their hair up for the occasion. Dylan even wore a little tuxedo which I had to admit, he looked adorable in it. I had to get tons of photos. Chad was very emotional to see his children looking so beautiful. And me aswell of course.
We exhanged vows, and went for a very simple gold band wedding ring. It had Everlasting love written on it and I was close to tears. It was a beautiful day, for a beautiful couple. (How corny..)
Me and Dylan are so much better, at one point I had a breakdown and became a wreck. I eventually told mum and she was supportive, I got counseling and after four months I started to love Dylan as a son. Me and him are very close now. I feel bad that I missed out on all this time, but lets say we are repairing it now. Dylan has fuzzy blonde hair and Chad's green eyes. He loves his toys and hates that slide, so he sits and plays in the paddeling pool for hours. I am thinking about returning back to Britain, where I'm closer to mum. I worry about her, but unfortunatly it's not an easy desicion, I'll have to discuss it with the kids, and Chad, and gosh. I just don't know. Right now, it my kids I have to think about.
I guess thats all. Life is good.
6th Feb 2007, 11:07 PM
Another excellent update! I <3 this story!!!!!!
BTW can you please put Petal up for download? She is the most beautiful sim ever! :)
6th Feb 2007, 11:33 PM
Awwz! Ah-mazing update! :D
7th Feb 2007, 11:02 AM
Aw, yay! I love all the wedding photos, they're all so beautiful! (The twins are so cute, and Amerie is stunning too!) I'm so happy she's fixed her relationship with Dylan, I was worried about that. Lovely update!
7th Feb 2007, 3:07 PM
This story gets better all the time, good work! Chad is gorgeous, where did you get his hair?
7th Feb 2007, 5:09 PM
Awwww! They all looked fabulous. Very nice. Amerie is beautiful.
7th Feb 2007, 5:21 PM
Aww -blushies- Thankyou all so much, Petal might be put up for upload but because she was born in-game I'll have to take a trip to sim Pe. Chad's hair is donation from Peggy. Thankyou again for the amazing comments. I have to admit myself that Dylan looks evil in the portrait photo! I'll get some better photos of him next update.
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