19th Oct 2009, 8:13 PM
this is basically a dragonball fanfic. it is a little different than all of them first it is based on my own character sparrow. i added the charcter of dragonball to the story to make things interesting, and this is the result. you don't have to read it. but i will ignore comments like:"you suck". this story is a personal triumph for me because i was in the hospital from a serious illness that sidelined me from the writing world. i had been meaning to write this story. i ntended it to make it six-part series here is the address to it: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1369962/sparrowfromplanetastos. feel free to give me constructive feedback.