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henryV111
29th Dec 2010, 05:40 PM
http://i670.photobucket.com/albums/vv65/TylerS123/snapshot_1a25e4ff_3a25e652.jpghttp://i670.photobucket.com/albums/vv65/TylerS123/Louise_de_Lorraine.jpghttp://i670.photobucket.com/albums/vv65/TylerS123/snapshot_1a25e4ff_5a25e664.jpghttp://i670.photobucket.com/albums/vv65/TylerS123/Louise_lorraine.jpg
I really butchered this one. Haha, Critique away! :faceslap:

Vampire_of_Death
29th Dec 2010, 08:33 PM
No, I don;t think you butchered her at all, pretty close actaully.

I would
- Bring the bridge of her nose to more of a slope, making it come straight down from her forhead.

-Mover her eyebrows up a click

-Lessen the pinch in the upper lip by 2-4 clicks.

-Chin moved upward 1-2 clicks.

henryV111
31st Dec 2010, 05:15 PM
http://i670.photobucket.com/albums/vv65/TylerS123/snapshot_7a29e20e_5a29e465.jpghttp://i670.photobucket.com/albums/vv65/TylerS123/Louise_de_Lorraine.jpghttp://i670.photobucket.com/albums/vv65/TylerS123/snapshot_7a29e20e_fa29e44d.jpghttp://i670.photobucket.com/albums/vv65/TylerS123/Louise_lorraine.jpg

Vampire_of_Death
31st Dec 2010, 10:38 PM
I can't really think of anything to improve her, she looks really good.

Maybe from the profile, make her eyes stick out a bit more.