#2
5th Apr 2015 at 3:48 PM
Last edited by Tigerdyhr : 6th Apr 2015 at
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I think it has lots of potential
So...
Exterior: I really like the area in the back, with things having turned to junkpiles. But perhaps they should be smaller piles?
I *love* the paint on the parking lot - I think it looks awesome! However, I'm not a fan of the green spiky grass thingies. Perhaps try to remove them and just leave the other one? I don't even think there has to be more - let the cracked asphalt show, I think it might work
I'm not really a fan of the doors - and yes, I think there should be windows. Aren't there some shuttered ones in game? (Seriously, I need to start playing some more, I keep forgetting stuff).
I'm wondering if the fence should perhaps match the main building better? (The stone one - the metal seems fine to me.)
Interior:
Generally, I like the rooms - but I don't know if they look quite worn enough. Could there perhaps be some dust/rubble from WA in the debug, that you might place? Perhaps throw in a loose carpet in an "off" location or something? I like the dead plants - nice touch
I do hope you'll continue - I look forward to it