That looks better, although the windows seem a little odd to me at first glance as they're archetypal Georgian windows. But then the back of the house looks very Colonial Revival in style so they look very in-keeping on that side. It's almost like your house has two personalities. I'd orient/landscape around it so that the back can also be used as the front too.
Will we get to see a floor plan soon?
Also, my cropped country house now has the beginnings of its service wing, along with a cfe'd screen to shield visitors to the front door from having to look upon those below stairs.