Mod The Sims - Story Time Contest: Hero Edition

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�That�s the guy?�

�Yes, Governor. We caught him on the perimeter fence cctv the night of the red alert. Ray, er- Sgt Stannis confirmed it�s the same red who attacked him and kidnapped your daughter�.

�Are these being distributed city-wide?�

�Yes, Sir.�

�Good; I want every man and his slave to know the face of the man that sealed the Red�s fate forever. He�s gonna pay for embarrassing me like this.�

* * *

Somehow I knew that I wasn�t gonna walk out that door just yet: it just seemed too easy. The door was open, there were no shackles tying me down. Yet I hesitated; distracted by their words. If they�re to be believed I�m the Red�s only hope of survival. Why? Their fate is in my Dad�s hands and they think I can influence his decisions. I can certainly get close enough to him but would I want to interfere? Why would I side with a bunch of criminals and savages over my own Dad? No, this is all a bit far-fetched but they continue on in vain, trying to convince me otherwise.

�Jada. You wanted to know how we know so much about you...�

I sigh wearily but remain paused at the door, on the precipice of freedom, �cyber stalking?�

Olivia continues, ignoring my sarcasm. She probably has a lot of practice at that with Rurik, �Jada, we share the same blood�.

�Yeah, yeah. Look, I get it�, I�ve never been totally sold on the whole �reds are soulless demons theory� like a lot of the religious types are, �...they�re still human but even you have to admit Reds have more in common with Neanderthals than normal humans!�

Following my glare to Rurik she laughs softly, �No, that�s just men in general". Then she�s serious again, �...but that�s not what I meant. Jada-�

�Wait!� Rurik interrupts, �I wanna hear this; what is it you think you know about Reds that makes us so damn unbearable?�

Is he for real?! �Where do I start? ...You�re crazy, unpredictable, violent animals! You terrorised the city for years, looting homes and killing anyone who got in your way! If it wasn�t for the circle guards... Some even believe red hair is the stain of sin; proof that you sold your soul to the devil and that�s why you turn to vampires when-...� He�s laughing at me. Not a chuckle but a big, loud belly laugh.

My voice rises with my temper, �It�s historical. Have you ever heard of a ginger saint?! No! Do you know who was ginger though? Judas Iscariot; the biggest traitor of them all!� this isn�t coming out right, I sound ridiculous as I try to recall lessons I learned about Reds in school but he knows how to press my buttons and I�m too angry to think rationally. Frustration spurns me on, firing out one justification after another for out-casting Reds.

He wrestles to control his laughter long enough to interrupt, �You actually believe that? Bible stories and folklore? You got proof of any of this or do you all just go along with whatever Daddy�s little demonocracy tells you to believe? Can you even think of one civilian that was killed or harmed by ...what did you call us? �Crazy, violent animals?�

�Yes you asshole! Reds killed my mother when I was a baby.� His smirk fades to a frown.

Olivia gasps, �Oh Jada. That�s just not true! That�s what we�ve been trying to tell you...we,� she moves between us resting a hand on Rurik�s shoulder and offering the other to me, �we share the same blood: we�re family, Jada. I�m... your mother.�

...?!

It�s my own fault. I told them something about my personal life and they�re trying to use it to manipulate me. I let my guard down; forgot my training. Never give the enemy personal details because they will find a way to use them against you. Damn it! I swore I wouldn�t let her get to me; that I wouldn�t let her soothing voice and friendly eyes trick me into getting comfortable!

She eyes me tentatively before continuing softly, �...and Rurik ...he�s your twin brother.�

What? She honestly expects me to believe this crap?! Dad�s brunette, same as me and Rurik�s definitely a Red. If Dad really fathered him then he�d have to get his colouring from Olivia, surely. She�s lying about something: her hair colour or our blood ties, probably both. Jeez, why am I even entertaining the idea, it�s insane?! I realise then she�s still holding my hand so I yank it free.

�Jada?� Her voice is high and urgent. �Please-�

�No!� I growl. �That was a really low blow using my mother�s death against me like that but...to imply that I�m one of them!� I scowl at Rurik, two decades of ingrained hatred coming to the fore once more, �I�m not like him!� Tears threaten taking me by surprise.

Unbidden emotions are violently tossed aside when Rurik clamps my wrist in his bear like grip and yanks me out into the dingy corridor. Rage emanates from his body as he torpedoes me through gloomy walkways and up dank stairwells, climbing from the basement at speed. Olivia calls out something from behind us but all I can think is that he�s gone feral, showing his true colours; a true red! I struggle to free myself but he�s stronger than I am and resisting only serves to infuriate my healing wound.

We burst through a set of double doors and Rurik stops dead in front of me. I brace myself for his attack but he drops my wrist and slowly moves forward as if he�s lost his train of thought. Glancing around I realise this must be the ER of the �hospital�. They�re everywhere: Reds. Whimpering, sobbing, dazed, confused...dead. It�s like something you�d see in a field hospital on the edge of a warzone. I remind myself, 'we are in a warzone' ...but these casualties aren�t soldiers. They�re not part of any army; they�re defenceless, weak. An old man calls out his wife�s name in anguish but nobody answers. An infant with a tear soaked face stumbles past with blood spattered clothes; no parents in sight.

Someone with an old radio cries, �They got camp three...� he consults his radio once more and adds meekly, �...no known survivors�. Agonized wails of grief seep from every corner.

It�s not real, it can�t be real. Our enemies are rebel fighters, criminals, savages!!...Not frail pensioners and babies: harmless humans.

Rurik stops in front of a young woman who�s clutching a small, limp body to her chest.
�I�m so sorry, Rose...� his voice is soft; tender in a way I didn�t know Reds were capable of. He cups her cheek in his hand, brushing away a stray tear with his thumb.

She appears momentarily comforted as she leans into his touch then her gaze wanders over his shoulder and halts abruptly when our eyes lock. As recognition dawns her mouth quivers and twists, settling on a grimace. She lays the child on a gurney, ever so careful as if she might hurt the lifeless body, then refocuses on me with an icy glare. �Ru, what is she doing here?!�

�Rose-�he starts. She doesn�t wait for a reply.

�You have no right being here!� She seethes pushing past him, �This is yourfault: you and your kind,� she spits, �Do you know what you�ve done? How many babies you�ve killed? How many children you�ve orphaned, huh? ...You�re his daughter aren�t you? That evil bastard!�

�He doesn�t know... he can�t! He wouldn�t let this happen if he knew�. Even as I speak the words, my last conversation with my father haunts me,

�Jada, they�re nothing but vermin ...you know what happens to vermin�

�...Mass extermination?�

She laughs, a small hysterical giggle punctuated with a manic expression. I search Rurik�s face for some kind of reassurance that he won�t let this nut job tear me to shreds where I stand... a desperate hope given that moments ago I was certain he was going to kill me. Oh God! Is that why he dragged me here? To let them have their revenge on me?! He�s avoiding eye contact. He�s ...disgusted? No, more than that, he�s... ashamed. Of what? Of me?

Those in ear-shot who�re still able have already turned to gawp at the pariah. It�s Me. I�m the evil one; the monster. I�ve never killed anyone but I�m trained to hunt and kill these people. Perhaps more importantly, my whole life I�ve been trained to want to.

Oh, It was easy to want to when my enemy was a faceless monster but now... am I just weak? A better guard wouldn�t think twice about killing them all! What would Dad think of me now, would he be ashamed or proud? I repeat the words like a mantra, �He wouldn�t let this happen...� Would he?

Rurik�s wrestles with his temper, �Who�re you trying to convince, Jada?�

�I...I�m sorry. I didn�t know-�

�Sorry?! You�re sorry? Why didn�t you say?�. Rose turns to the growing crowd of spectators , �She�s sorry, everyone! You can all go back home now... she�s sorry!�

�Rose!� Rurik warns.

�It�s too damn late to apologize. Sorry�s not gonna bring back my little sister! Or their loved-ones�, she waves toward the crowd. �Sorry�s not gonna put out the fires, rebuild our camps. Two decades of starvation, living like animals in a barren wasteland...but you�re ...sorry?� Rurik pulls her to his chest as fury gives way to raw grief.

Radio cackle breaks the silence, �Camp four�s gone; they�re heading this way�, the operator solemnly announces, �20 minutes out�. Panicked murmurs ripple through the crowd.

Rose glowers at me as the room erupts in movement, �Your baby-killer friends are coming to rescue you... Hope it�s worth it!� She shunts my wounded shoulder as she pushes past me to help the orphaned kids find cover.

Rurik�s eyes burn into me, �You can�t change the truth, Jada...but maybe the truth can change you�. He extends his hand to me.

He�s offering me my GI. �You really think we�re twins?�

He retorts, �You really think we�re evil savages?�

~~~

Judges Info

Current Plot Point: Evil Twin (The role of the evil one switches from Rurik at the start through Jada�s eyes to Jada at the end through the eyes of the Reds).
Bonus Plot Point: Pride before a fall (Despite having her own misgivings about how far is too far when it comes to disciplining/controlling Reds, she remains fiercely loyal to her father and the guards. Even when Olivia and Rurik try to convince her that her whole life has been a lie she remains stubbornly resistant and outwardly offensive to Rurik. It�s only after Rurik forces her to confront the reality of what�s happening that she realises she might be one of �the bad guys� after all and really starts to ask herself some tough questions about her father.)
Previous Plot Points: Beware the Nice Guy, Kidnapped.
Word Count: 1698
CC Used: Yes (allowed and not-allowed)
Hero Type: Chosen One

Effects Used:

All pics - Custom light intensity and colours
Pic 1 � not photoshopped, the poster is cc I made which can be found here if proof�s needed.

7th Aug 2012, 04:09 PM	#226
Qnshr5 Test Subject Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 55 1 Achievements	Thought I would post this weekend until I realized I had somehow written 3909 words! I don't even know where that came from. Currently hunting down 1 word as I'm at 1701 words. Seriously.

7th Aug 2012, 05:21 PM	Round 3 #227
Qnshr5 Test Subject Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 55 1 Achievements	Previous Rounds Summary: While being robbed at gun point on her job, Helena Raye (a former superhero named Brio) thwarts the robbery when she saves Lorie Pierce's life with an energy blast. On camera, it appears that Lorie is the hero and she is heralded as such. It all seems harmless until Helena discovers her old arch-nemesis, the organization of Aron, is preparing a test that if Lorie fails will lead to the destruction of the city. Current Events: Embarrassing Rescue; Class Reunion Previous Events: Heaven Forbid; Mysterious Past Word Count: 1699, Pics: 17 CC Allowed: Custom skin, hair, store content (hair/clothing/objects), OMSP, poses Penalized: None
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7th Aug 2012, 10:10 PM	#228
LadyAwesome Scholar Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 1,367 Thanks: 233 in 4 Posts 8 Achievements	You know, I always have to try find enough words, gosh I am hopeless. I guess I just like to tell the story with pictures and can never think up enough describing words lol. My entry will deffinatly not be in until tomorrow. I have over 1200 words now though YAY, just need 8 more pictures.
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7th Aug 2012, 10:39 PM	Blood Red - Chapter 3 #229
missroxor Moderator Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 1,666 Thanks: 1865 in 19 Posts 13 Achievements View My Journal	Previously: Jada Greene is the daughter of the Governor and also a member of the guard force employed to keep the Reds subdued and out of the city. When her father declares war on the Reds he sends out teams to strike the suspected Red camps. Jada, however is involved in a shooting incident that resulted in her waking up in hospital days later. She is horrified to discover she�s been taken to a makeshift Red hospital, deep within enemy territory. Her �captors� claim that they had to take her there to save her life but she�s convinced it was intentional kidnap, and that they�re trying to recruit her to their cause which seems to be to over-throw the government. After making it obvious that her loyalties lie with her father and her city her �captors� Olivia (who says she�s not red but counts reds among her family) and Rurik agree to let her go. Just as she�s ready to leave, Olivia plays to Jada�s curious side, indicating that she knows more about Jada than she�s let on. Also, just as a reminder, GI = Genome Interrogator (the proximity detection device used to determine if someone has the red gene or not).
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7th Aug 2012, 11:32 PM	#230
missroxor Moderator Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 1,666 Thanks: 1865 in 19 Posts 13 Achievements View My Journal	Yay, I did get it finished yesterday like I said I would, just didn't get it posted :/ Just wanted to say that all the red "facts" that I mention throughout the story are real things written about gingers by people on the internet, lol. Some are obviously just bullshit but others are genuinely historical beliefs that people have held. I personally have not made up any of Jada's beliefs, they're all out there online, beliefs that other's have held or made up!

7th Aug 2012, 11:44 PM	#232
missroxor Moderator Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 1,666 Thanks: 1865 in 19 Posts 13 Achievements View My Journal	Oh, that's what it means?! lol Hey, I did say I'm starting to feel sorry for them! I even did a little holding hand smilie - if that's not proof that I'm calling a truce I don't know what is!

8th Aug 2012, 12:47 AM	#233
LadyAwesome Scholar Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 1,367 Thanks: 233 in 4 Posts 8 Achievements	What about my poor little red head ghosts? Do you wish to piss on them too hahahahahaha nice back story though :D
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8th Aug 2012, 12:54 AM	#234
missroxor Moderator Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 1,666 Thanks: 1865 in 19 Posts 13 Achievements View My Journal	woah, that was Aristotle's beliefs, not mine! lol I just thought it was bizarre, the amount of random stuff people have made up/believed about gingers and the fact that it's been throughout history, not just since SouthPark! For a minute there I was doubting whether my character's beliefs were to extreme to be believable but then I re-looked at some of my research and realised, nope...people are this fucked in the head!

8th Aug 2012, 03:31 AM	#235
Qnshr5 Test Subject Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 55 1 Achievements	My grandmother was a red head. One year when she was a kid her teacher would tease and humiliate her. He even paddled her every single day just for having red hair!

8th Aug 2012, 04:44 AM	#236
missroxor Moderator Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 1,666 Thanks: 1865 in 19 Posts 13 Achievements View My Journal	See, people aren't right in the head!! lol. Your poor Gran. Red heads nowadays think they have it bad but I think things were a hell-of-a-lot worse in the days when it was more acceptable to settle your differences/make your opinion known with violence :/ Out of curiosity, what country was your Gran's school in? Scotland and then Ireland have the highest percentage of red heads in the world but most of the craziest beliefs I've found online have come from outside of the UK and Ireland. Though I think in the UK they were generally seen as bad luck. PS Qnshr, you could very well have the red gene gets out her Genome Interrogator and silver-tipped, wooden flechette pistol

8th Aug 2012, 06:52 AM	#237
ForeverCamp Scholar Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 1,031 Thanks: 95 in 3 Posts 7 Achievements View My Journal	... Ahem. I think I may need an extension. I am going to try my damnedest to get it in in the next 22 hours, for Reya's sake. ETA (8/8/2012): Yeah. It's totally not going to happen. 11 hours to go and I'm going to be spending 9 of them at work (plus my father's Visa card has gone missing and I'm in charge of tearing the house apart looking for it). If the judges and heaven are all right with it, I won't ask for an extension (seeing as I know that Reya needs as much time as she can get for Round 4). I can submit the entry late for a points ding (or I'll swallow the 0...)
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8th Aug 2012, 06:58 PM	#238
Ghost sdoj Site Helper Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 5,617 Thanks: 77 in 1 Posts 6 Achievements View My Journal	Kylara, having been adopted in a blood ritual by Lord Alfric, was dragged back in time to recover the Crown of the Master before her professor, who is apparently not human, could use her class to disarm the traps around it. When they arrived, he dug up some "expendable" clothing for her to wear, and then gave her a flower and some jewelry which he said would mark her as his apprentice, and taught her a pass phrase and countersign. Just as they were leaving, he told her that someone was coming and then vanished. Current Events: What did you use this chapter? Finding Judas, Kidnapped, Previous Events: Makeover, Time Travel Word Count: 1696 CC Used: Allowed: Legend Isles Lyonesse world by Sookielee, Euphoria Skin by Fawkes, ear sliders by Cmar
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8th Aug 2012, 07:12 PM	#239
Ghost sdoj Site Helper Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 5,617 Thanks: 77 in 1 Posts 6 Achievements View My Journal	Remember last chapter when I had my ghost reading the contents of a locked safe by walking through walls? I didn't quite realize how accurate that was. Never try to hide a sleeping bag, martial arts dummy, or bookcase from a ghost by putting it on the other side of a barricade. It took me long enough to get the timing right on those pictures that I decided not to try re-doing them. (At least I have all the mooched food out of them.) (And speaking of mooched food, Kylara mooched a tv dinner from "Professor Greymane", a bowl of cereal from the living Lord Alfric, another tv dinner from the ghost, and then bowl of soup from the ghost. ALL autonomously, and all when I was trying to get her to do something else. And then her "stuffed" moodlet told ME not to make her eat when she is full!) BTW, I know I have the red gene. My hair is brown, but it has a lot of red running through it.
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9th Aug 2012, 12:02 AM	Ala: Move Heaven and Earth #240
LadyAwesome Scholar Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 1,367 Thanks: 233 in 4 Posts 8 Achievements	Previously � We found out that Ala is a Demon that can't keep tabs on her natural instinct , Lottie is a bubbly Guardian and can shape shift, sworn to protect Ala from.... stuff.. Ala and Verne had been bonded together a while back and had a child, but had to give him up. The Vampire Queen is out for Ala's blood. Ooops. The poor girl can't catch a break. Music for your ears Current Plot Point: Move heaven and earth, Family secrets. Previous Plot Points: The cake was a lie. Mind Over Matter. Picture Count: 10 Word Count:1383 CC Used: yes Allowed: no. Baka's Hawell Island. Half of the Avendale clan.... Some Harris tribe, some..... star legacy sims, and some others? CC from everywhere.... don't ask it was a rough night lol
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9th Aug 2012, 12:12 AM	#241
heaven Original Poster Princess of Procrastination Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 2,191 Thanks: 11620 in 27 Posts 25 Achievements	Okay, I'd like to know how many missing entries are people that are in need of an extension. By my count, we are still missing 5 entries. I can offer the same "deal" I did before: post in the next 24 hours, receive full marks, post in between 24 and 48 and lose one point off your compiled score. However, I will only do that if I know that most missing entries are working in good faith to get the round in. I don't want to hold everyone else up for only 1 entry.
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9th Aug 2012, 12:41 AM	#242
LadyAwesome Scholar Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 1,367 Thanks: 233 in 4 Posts 8 Achievements	I wish you said that before I stayed up till 3am and abusing people in chat >.< [Edit] Heaven, Maybe you could PM the people who want the next round on the deadline time, then the people who have not finished dont know the next round. But the people who got it done on time don't get put out either.
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9th Aug 2012, 01:54 AM	#243
ReyaD Alchemist Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 2,540 Thanks: 220 in 5 Posts 7 Achievements	I was the one to disagree with your post, Heaven. You already offered an extension for the last round, and I don't think its fair to those of us who worked extra hard to get our entries in on time. If you have to add any extension at all I think it should immediately have points off instead of a free day of no points deducted. To Camp: Thanks for the worry, hun, but even if I only get a day to write my entire round 4 entry I'll get it in. Worst case scenario I can write on the plane and post from a Starbucks before my ship leaves. ... They have Starbucks in New Orleans, right?
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9th Aug 2012, 02:06 AM	#244
heaven Original Poster Princess of Procrastination Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 2,191 Thanks: 11620 in 27 Posts 25 Achievements	After some consideration, I have decided that Reya (and anyone else thinking it but not saying it) is right about offering a "free" extension being unfair to those who have pushed to get the entry in on time. Therefore, no free extension will be offered. Therefore, you have until the end of the timer to get your entry in without a deduction in points. However, I -will- offer a 24 hour buffer for those needing the extra time but the -1 point will be incurred immediately. This is the 3rd round and the 3rd extension granted. On that note, I will not be offering an extension, points deducted or not for the next 2 rounds.
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9th Aug 2012, 04:39 AM	#245
Viva1994 Test Subject Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 17 1 Achievements	Previously on: After confronting the diabolical "Company", Suzanna Trench has indeed liberated her friend Bram Adams, but has also put herself way in over her head. Now, now only is there a secret plot to be had, her old friend is back to harp about her fashion sense. Good thing that Valentina Victor is also an informant or else our hero wouldn't be able to stand her long enough to hear what she has to say. Current Plot Points: Finding Judas, Meet Cute. Previous Plot Points: The Cake was a Lie, Move Heaven and Earth. Word Count: 1,634 Custom Content: You would be hard pressed to find something allowed... NOTE: The exert from the previous chapter (which is located above the first picture) is not included in the word count (which I managed to nail! Who knew cleaning up sloppy sentence structure could knock so many words off?

9th Aug 2012, 05:02 AM	#246
heaven Original Poster Princess of Procrastination Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 2,191 Thanks: 11620 in 27 Posts 25 Achievements	Okay, Round 3 is now closed for full scored entries. Any contestants still missing entries have 24 hours to submit got a one point deduction from their overall score. Any entries after the 24 extension will receive a 0 for Round 3.
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9th Aug 2012, 06:25 AM	#247
ForeverCamp Scholar Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 1,031 Thanks: 95 in 3 Posts 7 Achievements View My Journal	Thanks, heaven. Honestly, I have a feeling I may have to withdraw sometime in the next couple of rounds... cringes I'll still try my damnedest, but I'm on vacation and away from the gaming computer as of the 17th for a week, and I've just been handed the Sunday-Thursday night shift until further notice. Not sure that it's going to work out in combination with my judging duties for Q. I sowwy. I'll be sure to let you know ASAP.
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9th Aug 2012, 08:18 AM	Chapter 3: Sacrifices #248
Sabri5 Test Subject Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 9 Thanks: 85 in 4 Posts 3 Achievements	Previously on: While she's trying to patch things up with her sister Sarah, Elizabeth takes off after she gets a call from Headquarters. She goes to meet with her Captain who implements Operation Alpha, a dangerous plan to wipe out all the vampires in the city of Littlefield. Word Count: 1217 Pictures: 11 Hero Type: The Atoner Current Plot Point: Pride Before a Fall Previous Plot Points: Mysterious Past, Redemption Quest Song Lyric: �It's too damn late to apologize.� - NERD, Rockstar Poser Bonus: Second Plot Point: Last Chance CC: None

9th Aug 2012, 04:13 PM	#249
Prawler Field Researcher Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 228 1 Achievements	Ahhh! I completely forgot, I'm really sorry, I've been busy preparing for my holiday in 2 1/2 days. I feel like such an Idiot, i was gonna try and fit in chapt 4 before I left, and then I'd have time when i got back (in 2 weeks) to do chapter 5. If it was just writing I'd probably be able to do it but I'm such a novice at picture taking that it takes me ages. I'll try and do Chapt 3 & 4 in the next two days, but dont hold me to it. I'm really sorry. what I was going to do
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