My Sim, The Moron (Chapter 6, final chapter, now up)

[kristalshyt]

Okay, so I've finally worked up the courage to post a story here. Now this is my first story & it's rather short (I don't think there'll be more than one or two more chapters), so I hope that doesn't bother too many people. Additionally, my graphics card at the moment bites (& the motherboard too), so I apologize in advance for the awful pictures, but until I can afford to upgrade, they're all I have. :(
So here is my story:


My Sim, The Moron
Chapter One

Hello there. My name is Pathos, and I am a cat. You idiotic humans & sims are completely unaware of this, but you guys do not own us. We own YOU! Now, my sim is Lynn Adams, who is particularly stupid, even for a sim, but I love her and she is MY sim.

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I share Lynn with two other cats, Logos (a tomcat *shudder*) and Ethos (another female *purr*). I put up with Logos because Ethos is my friend, & she has been going on & on about how she's in love with him & wants to have his kittens. Ugh. Why on earth would any cat want to have kittens? I mean we have a serious problem with overpopulation already, no thanks to the sims & humans. Besides, kittens are so annoying & needy... kind of like dogs. Ew.
I have digressed too far from the point of my story, however: Lynn is a moron.

*author's note: kudos to you who know where I got the cats' names*

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Now you may be asking (in all your inferior intelligence) exactly what makes Lynn so stupid. Well, dummies, that's what I'll be explaining to you very soon, so keep your seats. Now for the back story, which is important, as all cats know, in our superior intelligence. When Ethos, Logos, Lynn & I moved to Pleasantview, we were pretty happy, but Lynn (that dummy) had to go and mess everything up. Well, at least she feeds & cuddles us, but she subscribes to this ridiculous notion of loving "all" animals. Yeah... except roaches. Phaw! I have never understood sims' & humans' moronic attitude towards canines. They're even less intelligent than you! Why would you want to associate with such a creature, when it doesn't even feed you? Needless to say, (well, I do need to say it, or you stupid humans will never understand) Lynn began allowing canines into our small condo. They destroyed the couch. Idiots. At least Lynn was smart enough to replace the thing after they demolished it.

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The "normal" canines, however, I could put up with, but what does this idiotic sim do, but let a WOLF into the house. I mean, the wolves are least a bit more intelligent than other canines, but they're DANGEROUS! Only the dumbest of the dumb would let one in.
Well that's my Lynn - the dumbest of the dumb.

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Now, now. I know what you stupid people are thinking. Well, maybe you're not. Who knows what goes on inside your tiny minds? Either way, this crazy wolf did NOT turn Lynn into a werewolf. In this one case, her luck (which probably rubbed off on her from Ethos, Logos & I) managed to outweigh her stupidity.

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*Coming Soon: Chapter Two!

[cappyboy]

Not sure what I think of this story. On the one hand, I think Pathos may be the wrong choice of narrator. She's entirely misnamed and possesses an ego far too large for her feline body. However, her assessment of her owner's intelligence may not be that far off if Lynn's wearing that purple bustier top with so many animals about.

[skylark]

Now cappyboy - don't be mean!

Pathos may or may not be misnamed (after all, Pathos is a term original developed by Aristotle to describe argument through creating emotion - and Pathos does speak very emotively; you can feel her anger, annoyance, etc.). Besides, how can you blame the cat? Her Sim, the moron, named her. :)

Anyway kristal, I think its definitely inventive and a different perspective. I wonder if the other 2 will be narrating at any point? The story doesn't quite seem to have much meat to it yet, but its just the introductory chapter so early days. :)

I look forward to seeing what you do with it.

[Lollipop_Girl]

:) Well its an interesting perspective, a story from a cats view. And cats do seem to give off this strange superior impression (or is it just me? I have two cats...) Lets see how it develops.

[kristalshyt]

To be honest, Pathos was based off of a real cat, who belonged to myself & my ex-husband. Perhaps misnamed. I added Ethos & Logos because their names were complimentary to hers. Thank you for the feedback.

Um, about the purple top... lol I hadn't thought about that, but it's funny, which works. I chose Pathos as the narrator (after a lot of thought on it) because I thought it would be more humorous that way, rather than having Lynn narrate, or go with 3rd person. (It's not meant to be a serious work.) :)

[cappyboy]

Who's being mean? I was just giving an honest reaction. Mean would be just be attacking stuff at random and possibly include getting personal. Things that are not in my nature. I can't stand purposefully mean people. Granted, this is just a beginning and things may shape up once they get going in earnest. Still, this doesn't feel like the hook it could be to me. Just gonna have to look back and see how things shape up I guess.

[kristalshyt]

A more in-depth reply, this time:

cappyboy - I didn't think you were being mean. It was good constructive criticism. It would just be strange, I think, to change narrators in the middle of the story. I might, but I just think perhaps no one is "getting" the sense of humor I'm trying to use in this story. Oh well... *sigh* I figured if I posted a story it would be crap. Others suggested I shouldn't feel that way, but perhaps my first instinct was right.

skylark - I wasn't intending to have the other two narrate, but now you've given me an idea to chew on, since cappyboy suggested Pathos was not the best choice of narrator. Having the cat narrate was certainly intended to be something different, which is part of why I chose to do so. Well, that and the idea of what a cat would think of all this was what really got me giggling to myself when I was coming up with this story. I thought it would be less interesting from Lynn's perspective. :)

Lollipop Girl - Yes, cats give off a superior impression, which is why Pathos' attitude is such. Actually, the real cat she was based off of seemed to have the typical cat's superior attitude times 100. lol

To all of you: I'm glad you read it & responded. I hope the next chapters will not disappoint. :)

[cappyboy]

Thank you, Kristal. It did seem that Skylark's reprimand was a mite harsh. Glad you understand where I'm coming from. And I'm not knocking the idea of using of one of the cats as narrator. Just personally I'd have liked hearing more from Ethos than Pathos. Although since Skylark brought it up, having each of the cats give their input on their owner could be fun. With the snotty attitude Pathos has, I can see an all-out narrator brawl happening at some point.

[Montridge]

kristalshyt I'm really glad that you put this story up. It's really kind of scary at first, but you'll be glad you did. Great concept! I'm hooked and can't wait to see what happens next. :)
P.S. I'm owned by two felines, Boss and Brusier.

[ooshinaynay]

I have a thought. Perhaps one of the less egotistic cats could narrate! Maybe not Logos, but maybes Ethos? That way she could talk about Pathos's attitude and joke about it etc. . . there might be some more story. how she's torn between an alley cat and Pathos *insert mini violin* or something . . . .ladadadada you get the picture! Just a suggestion!
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[wicked_t0y]

cool, a cat narrating a story.. this is something i definitely have to read.. and i find quite HUMUROUS the way that tiny cat speaks with such ego... i like the story, waiting for chap 2
wicked

[Loco]

Haha, you've written Pathos just perfectly, very... cat. :D I like it, it's a good start! It might be interesting, as others have suggested, to have all three cats taking it in turns to narrate or something, but it's really up to you - it'll be good either way. :)

[kristalshyt]

Aw... thank you all for your comments. :D

cappyboy - To be honest, I haven't developed Ethos or Logos as main characters, just secondary ones, so that would delay updates, but I'll think about it. :)

Montridge - Thank you. I think cats are a way of reminding us humans that we are not the gods we think we are. lol

ooshinaynay - Hmmmm.... What makes you think either of the other two cats would be less egotistical? lol Again, I haven't really developed them, but this is definitely something to chew on before I put up another chapter.

wicked_t0y - Thank you for your kind words. :D

Loco - I will be mulling over that idea for the rest of the day. I'm trying to figure out how to develop the characters of the other two cats, as I really only focused on Pathos to begin with. :)

[kristalshyt]

My Sim, The Moron
Chapter Two

Oh no. I see Pathos has started telling you about Lynn. Well, I am Ethos, and I'm here to give you a better perspective. First I need to change the title:

Our Sim Is Misguided

There! Much better. Now Lynn, you see, may not be blessed with the amount of intelligence that cats have, but Pathos has completely misrepresented her. You see, in her mind, there was nothing wrong with bringing wolves & dogs into the house, as they did no harm to her. Although, they did rip the couch to shreds. *sniffle* I loved that couch. Logos & I used to sit on it all the time.

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Well, I think perhaps I should actually pick up where Pathos left off, since she got most of the facts right. I just disagree with her opinion about Lynn.

Well eventually Lynn finally took a break from letting the canine neighbors in, and started trying to get to know the sim neighbors. She met this rather interesting fellow named Ed Hoobajoob. What an interesting name - Hoobajoob...

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They ate some really odd smelling food in these strange white boxes, and talked about sports (not an interest I particularly understand, but to each his/her own). Then a couple of days later she met Mr. Smith. This sim just SMELLED WRONG. Now normally I disagree with Pathos on her opinion of sims, but this guy just wasn't right. He seemed like a possible threat to Lynn's safety. I tried to warn Lynn, but since we don't speak the same language it didn't work quite so well. She came to consider him her "best friend."

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One day, while Lynn was off visiting Mr, Smith, Logos & I asked Pathos to give us some alone time in the pet house. She wasn't very happy about that, and replied with "Ew... gross... Just keep the kittens AWAY from me!" *sigh*

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Oh, my, I've strayed off the subject. Sorry for that. Lynn went to visit Mr. Smith... and apparently he attacked her while she was there! No wonder he smelled so strange. Unfortunately, even with our sense of smell, we cats were unable to understand what the true extent of all this was.

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*Author's note- I hope you all liked it. I'm still deciding if I should go on to Chapter 3 for the next update or have Pathos revise this chapter the way SHE would want to write it. Any suggestions?

[skylark]

Ooooh - interesting update. I like how Ethos's mind wanders a little bit - very cute, reminds me of my cat. :). I'm sure that whatever you do it will be good for you and your story - do what you feel comfortable with.

cappyboy - I'm sorry that that sounded harsh! I hate how you cannot get tone of voice across on forums, and unlike people who know me you won't realise that I only use that phrasing for a gentle jab! Perhaps a ;) would have helped?

[wicked_t0y]

lol, nice update, its good to be another cat's erspective of things...wonder whats the deal with the guy.. that guy.. hmm Mr Smith.. tho, will Pathos ever narrate again? i just love when she does..

[kristalshyt]

Thanks, skylark & wicked_t0y! :yippee:
I was actually hoping for a little more help from you all, the readers, on whether to go on to chapter 3 with Pathos as narrator, or do a "part 2" to Chapter 2, with Pathos' version (either way Pathos will be coming back). Opinions on whether or not you'd like to see a "part 2" or just skip on to Chapter 3 would be greatly appreciated, from everyone. :D

I'm so happy! I can't believe that people are actually enjoying my story. :jaw:

I thought for sure it'd be a total flop & I'd be booed off the site or something. lol

*hugs for all of you*

[Loco]

Heehee, I love it - their personalities are very different, but still both very 'cat'. Hm... I'd like to hear from Logos (tis only fair!), but I'd like to hear from Pathos again too... maybe you could do chapter 3 as Pathos, but she could quickly recap on her version of the last chapter? Or something, I'm terrible at decision making...

[cappyboy]

Ooooh - interesting update. I like how Ethos's mind wanders a little bit - very cute, reminds me of my cat. :). I'm sure that whatever you do it will be good for you and your story - do what you feel comfortable with.

Agreed. I like Ethos too. Despite the wandering mind, she seems like a more rounded personality than Pathos. I like how she agrees with Pathos on some things and totally shreds her perspective on others. Hearing from Ethos has made me looking forward to hearing from Pathos again. I'd love to hear her take on Ethos' editorializing.

cappyboy - I'm sorry that that sounded harsh! I hate how you cannot get tone of voice across on forums, and unlike people who know me you won't realise that I only use that phrasing for a gentle jab! Perhaps a ;) would have helped?

Not to worry. It's casual. I've often made the same lament on how inflection and tone of voice are so hard to put into text. Usually what I do in IM's about this is to post the smiley after the fact. And then start griping about the smiley's sense of punctuality. People seem to like this approach.

[Waterflame]

Well, in my opinion, we still have another cat to hear from... *smile* Good story so far. Can't wait to read more!

[impaledhead]

that is very funny

[kristalshyt]

No worries, all. We will eventually hear from Logos, but I need more time to figure out his character. :)

Thank you all SO much for the feedback. :yippee:

Hopefully I'll have an update for you all by the end of the day. :D

[kristalshyt]

My Sim, The Moron
Chapter Three

Oh no, Ethos has had a go at MY story. Well, she's too nice to you stupid humans & sims. I'll just leave it at that, but at least she got the basics of the story right. So, anyhow, after Lynn returned from creepy old Mr. Smith's place, she was furious at him for attacking her, and rightly so. What kind of psycho just attacks his "best friend" for no reason? That's even more stupid than Lynn! Well things seemed normal after that, and Lynn went to bed, but the next night Ethos & I were treated to a most horrifying sight!

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That creepy old man was a WEREWOLF! No wonder he smelled wrong! And what's worse yet, he turned my precious, yet idiotic, Lynn into a werewolf too! Well, I was outraged! But, Lynn showed that she could still give love & food to me, Ethos & Logos, even as a werewolf, and that's all that matters... even if she does stink a lot worse now. Go figure, being a werewolf still didn't do much for her lack of hair. Hehehe...

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So, how could my moronic sim possibly make things worse for herself, you might ask. Well trust me, she did, but I will leave that for another chapter. For now let's just leave it at this: she continued hanging out with wolves and she forgave that stinky... creature... that made her look & smell like him. Ugh, what a moron.

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*Coming soon: Chapter 4 (Wow! This is going on longer than I thought it would. lol)

[Shenanigans_SC]

Hee hee... a cats world view. They are usually known to believe themselves superior than us. I give you kudos for doing something new. I love how their attitudes shine through.

[Loco]

Heehee, I love seeing different their personalities. A werewolf with cats, that could be interesting... werewolves rock, though. :D Nice update!

[kristalshyt]

Thanks for the feedback. *hugs all around*

I think I'll be posting chapter 4 today, but you all won't be hearing from Logos till at least chapter 5 (I'm still trying to figure out WHO he is). :)

[kristalshyt]

My Sim, The Moron
Chapter Four

So, I'm sure all you ridiculously stupid humans are just dying to know what Lynn did to make things worse for herself. Well, lucky for you that I've finally decided to tell you. She made more friends. It was not the making of friends that was her downfall, however. In fact, that Ed Hoobajoob guy wasn't so bad, even if he did have a dorky name & spent WAY too much time playing Lynn's bass.

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But Lynn, being the idiot that she is, decided to look for more "interesting" friends. Who does she decide to befriend, but these guys....

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Boy, what a moron! Not only did she befriend these guys, but she fell IN LOVE with one of them. As I've said before, that's my Lynn, the dumbest of the dumb.

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*Coming soon: Chapter 5.

[cappyboy]

Oh good grief. First a werewolf. Now vampires. I'm starting to think I may have been a bit rough on ole Pathos. Was Lynn born on Halloween or what?

[Julieth]

Ha! what an original idea, and you have the tone of the cats down perfectly! I wonder if lynn can be a vampire AND a werewolf...

[Loco]

Haha, Vampires too? So cool!

[kristalshyt]

Thanks for the comments everyone. :)

I expected Pathos' attitude about everything to be humorous as the story went on, but now there's more to it, since the other cats are being thrown into the mix. Hopefully I'll have the next chapter up for you guys in next day or two (maybe even tonight, depending on how quickly I can figure it out).

[kristalshyt]

My Sim, The Moron
Chapter Five

Allow me to introduce myself (please no jokes about "Sympathy for the Devil"). I am Logos. Recently, Pathos has taken to attacking me & Ethos. I'm not sure why. Perhaps we've bruised her ego. As a result of injuries Pathos has inflicted on Ethos, I've decided to take over the telling of this story. Well, another pressing reason is Ethos' pregnancy. I'm going to be a daddy!

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Now, I know there is this common saying about "curiosity killing the cat." How humorous it is that you all seem to have forgotten where this saying came from. A human actor by the name of Errol Flynn coined the phrase, but other humans apparently cut off the second half of it! The full phrase is this: "Curiosity killed the cat, but satisfaction brought him back!"

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Now I agree with good old Mr. Flynn, may he rest in peace. Curiosity is a wonderful trait, and while we cats seem to possess an inordinate amount of it, humans & sims possess it in great abundance as well. Now Pathos seems to enjoy painting Lynn as some sort of idiot. That is simply not the case. She is merely curious; even more curious than most cats. However, her curiosity landed her in a rather unsavory predicament, as Pathos' aggression did to her (below: a purely gratuitous shot of Pathos' failed attempt to beat me up).

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Now perhaps it was ill-advised for Lynn to have fallen in love with the object of her curiosity, but how many of us can really control who we fall in love with? Nonetheless, the results were nearly catastrophic, at least for us cats.

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Yes, that's right. Lynn was, of course, bitten. She became what is known as an "abomination of nature" - half werewolf, half vampire.

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Now you may be asking "how did this affect the cats badly?" Well, when your sim can't get out of her coffin in the daytime, she can't fill your food dish. We were starving!

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**Author's note: As soon as I had Ethos narrate in chapter 2, Pathos spontaneously started attacking Logos & Ethos in-game for no apparent reason. lol
Oh, and just in case any of you are confused: Pathos is the black cat & she is a female; Ethos is the gray cat & she is a female; Logos is the white cat & he is a male.

[Shenanigans_SC]

Hee hee... I like Logos. You've done a great job defining him. Life shall be intresting for their sim, the moron. lol

[DiamondX]

*Author's note- I hope you all liked it. I'm still deciding if I should go on to Chapter 3 for the next update or have Pathos revise this chapter the way SHE would want to write it. Any suggestions?

I just caught this story and it may be a bit late buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut I think *YOU* should write the story the way you orignally intended!! People should stop making "suggestions". This is YOUR story, write it how YOU see fit. No offense but to hell with tryin to please everyone!! I honestly am a little upset that you've changed your story to suit OTHER people. It's not that serious!! Let YOUR creativity flow!! :)

[kristalshyt]

First of all thanks to everyone for all the comments & feedback that have been given from the start. I know I've already thanked profusely, but I can't say how much I appreciate it. I was very worried no one would be interested in this story at all. :D

I just caught this story and it may be a bit late buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut I think *YOU* should write the story the way you orignally intended!! People should stop making "suggestions". This is YOUR story, write it how YOU see fit. No offense but to hell with tryin to please everyone!! I honestly am a little upset that you've changed your story to suit OTHER people. It's not that serious!! Let YOUR creativity flow!! :)
Thank you DiamondX. Actually, I think that the suggestions really did help make the story a bit more interesting. It was challenging & I still did what I wanted with the story (so far; I'm not sure where to take it from here). I even added things that the cats did autonomously (like fighting) which were never intended to be part of the story. I understand where you were coming from though & thank you. :)

[Annique]

'Wants to have his kittens...' OMFG that line cracked me up!! :smash:

[lonelydoowoop]

This story is hilarious!

[Loco]

*giggles* Woo, Sympathy for the Devil. Appropriate, with the Vampire-ness, huh? Anyways, I love this story, it's very funny and cute and interesting. (And I didn't know the proper 'Curiosity killed the cat', that's really cool!)

[kristalshyt]

Thanks for the comments, everyone! I am so glad you all found it funny. That's what I was going for, after all! :D

Loco, you know I hadn't even thought about the link between that & the "Vampire-ness"! lol

It may be a while before my next update, unfortunately, since I'm not really sure where to go from here. :(

[Montridge]

Can't wait to see what happens next. Poor kitties.
I have to admit I agreed with DiamondX that you should just write the story the way you originally intended, but I did enjoy hearing from the other cats.
You have an original and highly entertaining story here. I'm glad you decided to share it with us. :) Please update soon. The suspense is killing me. LOL!

[Waterflame]

Hey, if your half-werewolf, half-vampire chick dies, and someone brings her back, she *can* come back as a zombie, and be all 3!!! *smile* I can't wait to see what you do with this story!

[kristalshyt]

Thanks for the comments! :D

Hmmmm.... zombie too? I dunno about that... I'm pretty much done, the next chapter will be the last chapter, I think (MAYBE one more after that, but it's pretty much done). Maybe for some other story I'll do that though. I like the idea. :)

[kristalshyt]

My Sim, The Moron
Chapter Six

Why won't those two just leave me alone and let me tell MY story? I started this story, and yet they decide to take over! Ergh! Anyhow, Lynn the moron couldn't feed us properly after becoming an abomination of nature. We were absolutely starving by the time she got out of her coffin. She dealt with this problem by buying three extra food dishes & filling them all every evening. It worked, but then we ended up starved for attention. I couldn't care less about Ethos' & Logos' needs anymore, but not getting attention from my sim whenever I want it really stinks, especially when I'm constantly fighting with Ethos & Logos.

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Shortly after the food dish fiasco, Lynn decided to give herself a makeover. It seems she still hated how she looked afterwards, though. What an idiot!

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Now what does this dummy do after becoming an abomination, but bite some other idiotic sim. I thought Ed Hoobajoob had a stupid name, but Goopy Gilscarbo takes the cake!

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THEN, she made him into an abomination, just like her. Was her brain liquefied or something???

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The next night however, Lynn surprised the heck out of me with an amazing turn of intelligence, she bought two potions from the gypsy matchmaker, one to cure her of her vampirism & one to cure her of her lycanthropy. Amazing! She drank the vampirism cure first!

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I didn't think it worked. She still looks like a vampire. However, the next morning, there she was, walking out in the daylight! Strange!

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Then, the next night, she decided to drink the lycanthropy cure. What on earth is happening? Is my moronic sim finally growing a brain?

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So, now Lynn is back to normal again, even if she does still look weird & can play with me any time I want her to, although I am now an animal actress, so I'm giving her the cold shoulder in favor of my career, but she is at MY beck & call, which is all that really matters. Oh, and those disgusting cats I have to share space with had KITTENS!! Three of them! Lynn gave one of them to some guy named John Burb as a gift for his daughter (thank the Creator!), but I am now devoting my energy to avoiding the other two. Ew.... kittens.

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So, that's the story of what my sim put us all through by being so stupid. Thank goodness she had a momentary lapse of idiocy so she was able to put things right.

She's still a moron, but I love her & she's MY sim.

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THE END
Just in case you stupid humans didn't take the hint.

*Author's note: Lynn's continued vampiric appearance after being cured is some kind of weird glitch I experienced. I don't know what caused it or how to fix it, but I thought it made things more interesting, so I'm not too worried about it. :p

[DejAng3l]

omg.....i love this story....simple and sweet....i love the way you had the cats narrate the story....I actually enjoy pathos' narration...she's just too halarious for words...i love her dry sense of humor and her high and mighty attitude....you did a great job and i'm glad that you decided to share your talents with the rest of us...i'll be looking forward to seeing more work by you....

[Loco]

Aw, I'm glad it ended okay. (The kittens are adorable!) And I really, really love the cats' narration, especially Pathos (like DejAng3l said). It really makes it come to life. Lovely story! :)

[kristalshyt]

Thanks for the comments. I am SO glad you liked it. :D
I was debating how to end it for days. I guess I chose the right ending! :p

I'm now working on another story, but I'm not sure if it'll be as good... It's really just a record of the sim I'm using for a challenge, but she did just have what seems to be one of the worst sim days ever! So, it might be interesting. lol

I learned from this one that with my procrastinating nature, I'd better just complete the next story before I even post it. :)

[Montridge]

*Applauds*
Great story! I enjoyed seeing one of my fave Sims (Goopy) make an appearance. (He used to be the stunt Sim in my game. LOL!)
Looking forward to you next story.
:beer:

[kristalshyt]

Thank you Montridge. I am SO glad you liked it. :D

I know Lynn will be making a cameo appearance or 2 in my next story. Maybe Goopy will too. :P

[wicked_t0y]

hey
what a nice enth, i really enjoyed the whole story, short yet very interesting, because it was narrated by cats. Are you sure, kristalshyt, puppet, you aren't really a cat with evil world domination plans behind that screen? lol lol lol you did an awesome job on this one.
wicked

[kristalshyt]

hey
what a nice enth, i really enjoyed the whole story, short yet very interesting, because it was narrated by cats. Are you sure, kristalshyt, puppet, you aren't really a cat with evil world domination plans behind that screen? lol lol lol you did an awesome job on this one.
wicked
Ummm... not being mean, but what is "enth"? Is it another word for end? :dolt:
Thank you! I'm very glad so many people liked my first story!! :D

Ummm... and... no cat with evil world domination plans.... though my kitty (who looks rather like Ethos) sat on my lap while I wrote some of it, but he's dumb & thinks he's a dog. lol

[wicked_t0y]

yep, enth end.. actual name for one of linkin park's song.. sorry for confusion

[kristalshyt]

No worries, wicked. :D
I don't listen to much Linkin Park... more of an Ozzy Osbourne fan, myself. (Hey, I found an Ozzy sim on the exchange!)

[AxelValentine]

I enjoyed this. Very much so. :D
I love the 'Eww. Kittens.' *giggle*

[kristalshyt]

I'm glad you liked it, AxelValentine. I've been enjoying your story, as well, so far. :)

[Waterflame]

This was a wonderful story, and it ended wonderfully. i just wish it wasn't over already! Now you have to start a new story!!

[kristalshyt]

Awww... thank you, Waterflame! I'm so flattered you liked it enough to say I "have to" write another. :D

I had actually started on one & then realized, when I had to reinstall, that all the precautions I'd taken to preserve the sims, lots, etc. were useless without saving the pics I'd already taken (about 14 chapters worth)! :doh :weep:

Maybe I'll start another one sometime, but I doubt it will be soon. That was quite the setback & turned me off of story-writing for a bit. But again, I am VERY flattered you liked it that much. Thank you so much for that compliment. :yippee:

[Jenna_Cide]

Oh I can't believe its over. I enjoyed it greatly though. Really cute. <3

[kristalshyt]

Thank you Jenna_Cide. I'm glad you liked it. :)

[Jenna_Cide]

Well krstalshyt I hope you write more soon! <3

[kristalshyt]

Thank you. You made me blush. :)

I may write another story in the future... probably not near future (though you never know)... got a lot of real life stuff going on. :(

[Jenna_Cide]

Awww. Good luck. <3

[Seiza]

This was really cute, with a "typical day in the life of a sim cat" feel to it. I giggled everytime Lynn was called an idiot, since, well... "Lynn" is my name. :lol:

I usually like a bit more detail when it comes to narration, but making it short and to-the-point seems to work for this fic. A nice, light-hearted read. :D