View Full Version : Heavyn's Dream- Finished (12/28/06)
14th May 2006, 4:46 AM
This is my first story that i am posting. I hope you guys like it. It started out as a project that Fexygurl and I was working on but i kind of took it over. Some of the content might be a bit Inappropriate so if you are offended by anything please feel free to contact me and tell me. Ok here goes nothing
Shake that laffy taffy, that laffy taffy. Girl shake that laffy taffy. Her cell phone rang. "Hello," a sleepy voice said. "Hey 'Quita." "Yeah." "I'll be there." "8:30?" "Ok." She hung the phone up and rolled over on her back. She started to fall back to sleep and her mom came in the room. http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j288/heavynsdream/snapshot_5171e7dd_11726f45.jpg
"Heavyn, come on down stairs. Your father and I rented that movie Ayliah wanted to see, and you promised her you would watch it with her." Her mom went back downstairs. She continued to lay there, thinking about the life she really wanted. She knew she could never live up to the standards her parents expected her to. She wanted to be like her cousin, TaQuita. "Alright now I already told you to get up. Don't make me come in there." Her mom said, this time with tone. She threw on her favorite jeans and tank top, grabbed her phone, and went downstairs. http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j288/heavynsdream/snapshot_5171e7dd_51726acd.jpg
Half way into the movie, her phone rang. Shake that laffy taffy, that laffy taffy. Girl shake that laffy taffy. "Hello." "What 'Quita?" "I'm watching a movie with Liah.." Her mom grabbed the phone.
"She'll call you back when the movie goes off TaQuita." "Ok, bye." She hung the phone up and turned it off. "I'll hold on to this until the movie is over." They finished watching the movie. Heavyn looked at the time, it was almost 7:00 pm. She ran upstairs to get ready for the party.
Her mom called her downstairs to see what she was wearing. She had on a mini skirt and a halter. "And where is the rest of your outfit? You know you can't leave this house looking like that." Heavyn sighed hard. Her dad came in the living room and examined what she had on.
"Heavyn go upstairs and change. No daughter of mine will dress like a hooker."
"No buts. Change or don't go. Now go."
"Yes sir." She walked up the stairs hard and into her room. I hate this, she thought as she changed. I can't wait to move out; no one will be able to tell me what to do. She put on a longer skirt and a sweater over her original outfit. She walked downstairs to get approval.
"Now that's better," her dad said. She gave them each a hug and kiss and went to get in her car. She drove to her aunt's house and immediately went to TaQuita's room to change.
"Girl what tha **** did you have on? You know I wasn't gonna let you come with me dressed like that." She was about to talk. "Oh, don't tell me. Your 'rents made you wear that hideous outfit. I knew it. Thank God my momma ain't like her sista, ****."
"I know, I wish they would ease up. I'm not a kid anymore. I can't wait to move out into my own place." TaQuita gave her 'the look'. "I mean our own place."
"Girl this party is bangin'. I know you see all these fine dudes checkin' us out, cause we the ****."
"Quita you crazy." They walked around and found some empty seats. TaQuita got up to go get something to drink. A fine dude came and sat next to Heavyn.
"Hey ma what's yo name?"
"Heavyn." She replied.
"Heavyn? That's a sexy *** name." He got a little closer to her.
"And you are?"
"My bad ma. I'm J, but you can call me Jamal." He gave her a once over, "Girl you lookin good in that skirt."
"I know right?" TaQuita came back with the drinks. She gave Heavyn 'the look'. "Oh, this my cousin Quita."
"I know ma. This my homegirl." He looked at TaQuita. "Why the **** you didn't tell me you had a fine *** cousin? Damn girl, she off da chain."
"My bad, J, damn. Don't jump on my case. Anyways, where is Devonte? He know he needs to come see me."
"He'll be here. But if you would excuse me I need to finish talking to yo cousin."
"Excuse me," Heavyn said, "but I need to be excused. Quita where is the bathroom?"
"Down the hall." She went to the bathroom while TaQuita and Jamal talked.
Heavyn sat there wishing TaQuita would hurry up. Jamel was talking her ears off. He was cute but Heavyn couldn’t help her eyes from scanning the room for more better prospects.
“Oh my god! Heavyn how my hair look?” TaQuita came running over to Heavyn. She was trying her hardest to fix herself up without a mirror.
“You good Quita. Who done came in here that’s makin you act like that?”
“Eww mad thirsty. You look real desperate right now” Jamel said while rolling his eyes. He just could not understand why girls always fell to Devonte’s feet, Jamel envied him so much. With these thought out of his head he walked up to Devonte. “Yo what up?”
“Nothin homey” Devonte said as they gave each other a pound. “Yo its mad weak in here. Where they get that DJ from?” Devonte and Jamel shared a chuckle.
“Come on let me introduce you to my baby daddy” Taquita said as she pulled Heavyn’s hand to go with her. TaQuita had liked Devonte for some time now but never knew how to break the ice. Taquita is far from shy but something about Devonte made her weak. “Hi Devonte, I thought you wasn’t gonna make it.”
Devonte caressed her face and said “Baby, and miss being with you?” Jamel and Heavyn bust out laughin. Devonte had to laugh himself and as he looked up he saw Heavyn. “Damn ma I aint never seen you before. You from around here?”
“Naw I’m live uptown” Heavyn said. She started blushing so hard. That she turned beet red. TaQuita saw this in Heavyn and knew it was time to get her away from Devonte. She wasn’t a blocker Heavyn knew that Quita liked Devonte.
“Yea that right. She live to far from you” She said to Devonte while rolling her eyes “Heavyn we need to get goin cuz you know how ya moms be trippin when you late”
“Yea you right” She turned to Devonte and Jamel “It was nice meeting the two of you, hope to see you again” She gave a little wink and walked out.
“Yo homes is that you? Let me know now before I make a move” Devonte said while rubbing his hands together
“Um yea I was tryin to get wit her. We had the convo thing goin for a while” Jamel said. He was a little nervous because this was not the first time Davonte took a interest in one of his girls.
“Aight I aint gonna mess with it. Do you!” Devonte said as he walked away.
Sorry its so picture heavy. I got a little too excited when i was taking pictures. Stay tuned for more!!!
14th May 2006, 6:26 AM
The language content is different and I like it, its probably going to take me a little while to get used to lol.
Very good, keep it going :)
14th May 2006, 7:11 AM
this story is straight from the hood laffy taffy is one of my songs
14th May 2006, 7:18 AM
Auroraspirit, sorry for the language. I tried to make it sound the way my friends in New York sound (lol). It's kind of like reading "Their Eyes Were Watching God" by Zora Neal Hurston. It took me until the 5th chapter to catch on to the language.
And yes islandprincess this story is straight from the hood (lol) I have read so many "ghetto novels" that i thought i would make one of my own. I hope you liked it though. :)
14th May 2006, 7:44 AM
Looking forward to the continuation, its nice to read something completely different and the language content was anything to worry, yo man as the hood say lol.
14th May 2006, 2:50 PM
I like the language content. It's cool and I luv the song laffy taffy and if you think about it it's a perfect cell phone ring. I luv it :D:):D
15th May 2006, 8:05 AM
About a three weeks later. Heavyn found herself still thinking about Devonte. But she knew he was off limits. Taquita would kill her if she went after him. Plus she was kinda dealing with Jamel now. He wasn’t as bad as she thought he was.
*Knock Knock* “Hey baby your dad and I are going out to dinner do you want to come?”
“No mommy, I’m a little sleepy.” Heavyn rubbing her eyes.
“Alright, but remember the house rules.” Eve said while giving her daughter a dirty look. “No boys in the house while we are not here. Tell that Jamel he can wait until tomorrow to see you.”
“Maaaaa, what I look like sneakin Jamel in here” Thinking to herself Jamel isn’t worth all the trouble.
“Ok, we’ll be home around 12:00 am, Call if you need any thing”
Heavyn sat in her room and waited until she heard her parents car pull out of the drive way. She sat looking at her phone for what seemed like hours. Finally saying to her self “You only live once baby girl, Take advantage” Dialing the numbers “555-3454” She took a deep breath “Told you I would call.” *giggles* “Yea, they left” … “ok 3453 Maple Drive”… “Yea”… “15 minutes?”… “Ok bye” A huge lump was forming in Heavyn’s throat. She had never done anything like this before.
30 minutes had passed and Heavyn was burning a hole through the floor, pacing back and forth. She peeked at the clock 9:30pm. She relaxed a little remembering he mom saying she would be home at 12:00. Just as she picked up the phone to find out what was taking so long a silver Jeep pulled into her driveway. She thought she was going to die. Her heart was beating so fast. “Ding Dong” the door bell rang. She opened the door to find Devonte standing there with a smile that seemed to brighten the whole sky.
“Hi, …I was just about to call you. I thought you stood me up.”
Devonte chuckled “Naw, aint nothing like that. I ran into traffic.” he looked around thinking to himself I got me a rich girl this time. “What time they comin home?”
Playing with her hair with her head down she said in a shy voice “12:00” She looked up and Devonte was about a inch away from her. Her eyes shined. He had never seen anything so beautiful. He whispered “What do you want to do” but before she got a chance to respond he had his lips on hers. When he pulled away she looked into his eyes and said “What ever you want”
Devonte took her hand and led her upstairs. They ended up in her room. He kissed her some more and said “Are you ready?”
Heavyn was a little unsure of herself now “I think so” she whispered. They made out and felt each other up for a while when Devonte looked at the clock. It was 11:00. He knew he had to hurry up and make his move. He went to take her shirt off when his phone rang.
“Hello?”… “Now? Homes I’m busy right now.” … “Jamel! Stop ******* me off I said I would be there at 11:30”… “Aight, one” He sat back and thought for a while.
“Baby I’ma catch you later” He said as he jumped off the bed. Heavyn was kind of stuck in her spot thinking oh my god that was Jamel, I’m caught.
She managed to muster up “Does he know?”
He turned to her and said “Naw shorty, he don’t know nothing”
After he left Heavyn laid in her bed thinking about what just happened. She couldn’t believe she was so close to losing her virginity. She already knew that he would be the one to take it.
Heavyn had been secretly seeing Devonte for about 2 months now. They still hadn’t had sex. She would try sometimes to get him in the mood but he always seemed to brush her off. Devonte had caught feelings for her. And he thought if he slept with her that he would lose interest in her like he did all girls. Devonte was falling fast. He loved this girl, and to be honest they both were tired of sneaking around.
“What up doggs” Jamel said as he embraced in a hand shake with Lamar.
“Nothin homie just chillin. Yo I been meaning to ask you if you and shorty was still together” Lamar said as he went to sit on the couch
“Of course, you think I’m going to give that up? That’s my boo. I aint never had no dyme like that” Jamel said boasting about Heavyn.
“I hear that” Lamar said now, he was trying to avoid eye contact with Jamel
“Why you asked my that question anyway?” Jamel was a curious because out of nowhere Lamar comes to his house and asks about his girl. It was a little weird.
“Naw, nothing” he laughed a little, trying to ease the tension that was now in the room “Naw I mean I saw Heavyn and Devonte coming out the movies together last night” He could see Jamel getting madder by the second. Trying to defend the situation he said “But yo, don’t all ya be goin out to the movies together?”
Jamel sat there with the only ice grill on his face. “Yeah what ever I gotta go” Lamar took his cue and left the apartment. Jamel was furious. He decided to go to Devonte’s house which was right up stairs. When he got up stairs he banged on the door like no tomorrow.
“Who the **** is bangin on muh door like dey da damn police?” Uniqua said as she put on a bathrobe to see who was at the door. She looked through the peephole and saw Jamel standing there. She swung the door open “Damn boy, you just about gave me a heat attack! Devonte in the back”
“I’m sorry Ms. Uniqua” Jamel said as he walked toward Devonte’s room. He opened the door to find Devonte sitting on the bed counting his money.
“What up?” Devonte said without even raising his head.
“Yo, when the last time you seen Heavyn?” Jamel said still standing up
Devonte lifted his head now and said “Doggs, you came over here with ya chest swelled to ask me some B.S. like that?” Devonte put his head back down “I aint seen that trick since that last time you had her at yo’ house” Devonte finally finished counting his money.
Jamel just kept looking at him. “Stay away from her homey. She’s mine” Jamel said real calm as he walked out the room.
Devonte started laughing, he knew that this little confrontation was nothing. And since he wasn’t going to stop seeing Heavyn he knew there was going to be more heat from Jamel. He was a little tight but when he remembered that he was taking Heavyn to the fair tonight a smile came to his face.
Shake that laffy taffy, that laffy taffy, Girl shake that laffy taffy. Heavyn answered the call. “Hello?…yea I’m on my way home now…ok just wait there, I’ll be there in like 5 minutes…aight bye”
Devonte looked over from the driver’s seat. “Who was that?”
Putting her phone away “TaQuita… ‘member I told you that she was stayin over at muh house tonight?”
“Oh yea” he said as he pulled into her drive way. He rubbed on her leg and they began to at it like wild cat, making out in the car. They accidentally hit the horn and Heavyn jumped out the car giggling. TaQuita was already in the house and wondered what all the commotion was about. So she went to the window and saw Heavyn getting out of Devonte’s car. She ran into the bathroom to get herself together. She could believe heavyn did this to her.
“Quita you up here?” Heavyn looking for her cousin
TaQuita hurried to compose herself. “I’ma fix that witch, watch and see” She said as she looked in the mirror. “I’m in the bathroom!, I‘ll be right out”
“OK!” Heavyn yelled. She was hoping that TaQuita didn’t see her out the window. She sat on her bed taking her shoes off thinking about an excuse in case TaQuita asked why she was in his car.
TaQuita came out the bathroom and went into Heavyn’s room. “Hey girl, how was the fair?” She said calmly as she sat at the computer desk.
“It was cool. That damn Shaunte had me ride every ride there” She said with a little nervous giggle. TaQuita just looked at Heavyn thinking about how well Heavyn was keeping up her lie.
That night TaQuita could not sleep. So many thoughts were running through her mind, when she devised the perfect plan to get her back.
15th May 2006, 9:05 AM
interesting.........wonders what Quita has plan for her cousin............great story........
15th May 2006, 9:12 AM
Great story cinnamin! I can't wait to read more. I hope Quitia gets her real good.
15th May 2006, 11:36 AM
Ooo, good storyline so far, I wonder what TaQuita has in mind and if the boys will ever stop fighting over Heavyn.
15th May 2006, 12:08 PM
she has my ringtone lol hah I luv this story~^^
15th May 2006, 8:20 PM
This is my kinda story! Shake dat laffy taffy...Oh great, I'm gonna be humming that for the rest of the day
15th May 2006, 9:46 PM
I Luv It!!!!!!!
15th May 2006, 10:42 PM
i also love ti where are you ogetting those clothes from and hair
15th May 2006, 10:54 PM
Well i made most of the teen clothes and i get my hair from peggy and XM sims
I'm so glad people like it so far. I'm going to take pictures for the next part tonight, So there should be an update a little later
16th May 2006, 2:22 AM
*Graphic Content in this part*
About a week later TaQuita was in her house thinking about should she do it or not. She finally convinced herself that Heavyn had to get what was coming to her. She put on some sweat pants and ran down stairs. She rang the bell softly and heard a deep voice from within.
“Who is it?” the voice answered. TaQuita could hear the foot steps getting closer.
“Its Quita, open the door” She said while trying to get her game face on.
“Oh what up” said the voice within. He opened the door and right in front of Quita was Jamel. “What you doin here?”
“We gotta talk Jamel. You in there alone?” TaQuita said while walking in the house
Two weeks later Jamel had made a date with Heavyn. They were going to go to the movies. When he got to her house her parents had already left to a dinner banquet.
Ding Dong the door bell rang. Heavyn had just got out the shower so she threw on a t-shirt and ran down stairs. “Hey baby, you’re early” she said as she let her hair down. Jamel walked in and went straight to her room. Heavyn walked to the bathroom and yelled “I’ll be just a minute, let me finish getting dressed”
Just then the bathroom door flung open. “Damn Jamel, I said I’ll be out in a minute!” Heavyn went to close the door but Jamel stopped her with one hand. With her hands on her hips she asked “What are you doing? I need to get dress”
He looked at her with disgust in his face. “You slut! I should have known I couldn’t trust you.” He said as he inched toward her.
“Boy what is wrong with you?” She said as she backed up further and further. Jamel said nothing. He just got closer to her and forced his tongue down her throat. “Jamel quit!” she said as she tried to get him off of her. But he was too strong and forced himself on to her.
After he was done raping her he felt kind of bad but convinced himself that she was the one who did wrong. He got up and looked at Heavyn crying in the corner. With blood all over the floor. He gave her one last look and ran out the house.
16th May 2006, 3:25 AM
Okay good update but do you know which one it is when she was whereing that blue dress
16th May 2006, 3:39 AM
Amazing Good work!
16th May 2006, 5:56 AM
Oh the dress that Uniqua is wearing. I dont remember where i got that from. I'll go on a search and hopefully i can tell you where to get it.
Okay good update but do you know which one it is when she was whereing that blue dress
16th May 2006, 6:14 AM
Great story. :beer:
16th May 2006, 6:49 AM
That update was wild girl. Good job.
16th May 2006, 10:48 AM
Wow, what an update.
16th May 2006, 2:49 PM
Heavyn finally managed to get herself together. She wanted to take a shower but was unsure if she should go to the cops or what. She felt so dirty and disgusted so she jumped in the shower. When she was finished he looked in the mirror and saw her face bruised and swollen. She couldn’t believe that this had just happened to her. She was still a virgin and Jamel had ripped her insides apart. She didn’t know what else to do but to call Devonte. http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j288/heavynsdream/snapshot_5171e7dd_1175b5d4.jpg
Ring ring Devonte’s phone rang. “Hello?” all he could hear was a crying voice on the other end. “Heavyn, you alright?” there was silence. “Baby I’m comin over now” He was out taking care of business but left his boss there to take care of the deal.
“Ay yo Ron! I gotta go. Somthin is up with my shorty” Devonte said while getting his things ready to leave. “I’ll catch up with you later” Ron just gave him a nod. Ron loved Devonte, he was so mature for his age. Only 17 and Ron was already training him to take over for when he retired.
Heavyn heard Devonte’s jeep pull up in to the drive way. She ran downstairs to meet him. She opened the door before he got a chance to ring the bell. She flew into his arms and started crying even more than before.
“What’s wrong baby?” he kept asking her. But Heavyn knew she could not say anything. She knew Devonte would do something crazy if he knew. He walked her into the living room and she laid on him crying herself to sleep. Devonte didn’t want to pressure her into saying what happened because if could have made her lock up and not say anything.
It was about 1:30 am when Heavyn’s parents pulled up. Devonte got a little worried because he had never been in the house that late. He could hear them talking about whose car was in the drive way, but he just kept his composure. He heard the key come through the door.
“What the **** are you doing in my house!?” Michael said as he looked around preparing himself to fight and defend his family. “Heavyn baby, where are you?”
Devonte pushed Heavyn’s head off his lap slowly and said “Excuse me Mr. Smith but Heavyn called me a few hours ago crying on the phone. I came over to see what was going on and when I got here her whole face was bruised and bloody. She didn’t tell me what happened but I told her that I would stay here until you guys came home” Devonte spoke to them with the up most respect.
“Who are you?” Eve asked. She was a little puzzled by the whole situation.
“I’m Devonte, a friend of Heavyn’s, Um I’m going to leave now but can you please tell Heavyn I’ll talk to her tomorrow?”
“Yea ok” Michael said as Devonte walked out. Eve slowly walked over to the couch and saw her baby crawled up with her face still bloody. She woke Heavyn up and they both cried.
“Did that boy do this to you?” Her mother asked.
“No mommy” Heavyn said as she got up to go to her room. Eve and Michael tried to put together pieces of the story to figure out what happened to their child. When they finally gave up Eve went upstairs to get ready for bed. She figured she would just ask Heavyn in the morning. She walked into the bathroom and saw blood all over the place.
“Michael!” They both stood there looking at what seemed like a scene from a horror movie. Eve ran straight into Heavyn’s room to find out what the **** happened to her baby.
]A week had past since Heavyn had gotten raped. Her parents rushed her to the hospital the night they found the blood in the bathroom. The doctor told Eve and Michael that their daughter was raped. And that it was pretty easy to tell because she was a virgin. But it was still a mystery as to who did it.
Since that day Devonte comes by everyday to see Heavyn. Every chance he gets he stops by, bringing her anything she might need. Heavyn had shut her phone off and had stopped going to school.
One day Devonte came by the house. And since he had been around so much, and was so helpful Michael and Eve decided they could leave him alone with Heavyn while they went to the store. When they left Devonte asked Heavyn if she needed anything. She just sat up in her bed.
“I love you Devonte” she said with her head down. “You mean the world to me. Thank you for being here”
He lifted her head with one finger. “I wouldn’t be here if I didn’t love you either” he took a big breath. “Girl you muh wifey. One day we gonna get married and have kids of our own” Heavyn could help but to smile.
She started kissing him and whispered “I’m ready, baby it yours” Devonte knew this was the moment. It was the first time they had ever had sex. And he thought he was in Heavyn. He was no virgin but he had never felt like this before. All of this confirmed what he had just said. She was the one!
16th May 2006, 9:59 PM
Okay raping her was a little over board but I still liked it cause it puts drama and I likeee the drama...:):):)
17th May 2006, 12:43 AM
Wow, chapter three was so scary. Quita is nwo being called "The B****inator". Jamel is an ***, too. Is Heavyn ever going to tell. Even thoguh I'm a guy, I know if you were raped and lived, you would fear reputution...(sp?)
17th May 2006, 1:25 AM
That's one of the best stories I've ever red. 5 stars
17th May 2006, 3:38 AM
great update they are so cute togethger
20th May 2006, 4:40 AM
The next day TaQuita invited Jamel and Devonte to come over so they can hangout and drink. Jamel got there first and he and TaQuita talked for a while.
“Quita? You really like Devonte like that?” He said while taking a sip of his henny.
“It aint even really about me likin him. But I mean Heavyn knew that I did like him A LOT and she still messed around wit him. I cant even trust that ho’ no more” she said this while getting mellow
Just then there was a knock at the door. TaQuita went to see who it was. She looked through the peep hole and saw Devonte standing there. She swung the door open. “Hey, you made it” She threw herself on him giving him a big hug.
Devonte didn’t really know what was going on because things were so weird lately, but had to come to get to the bottom of things.
“I’ll be right back. I have to make a phone call” TaQuita walked in the back to her room and called Heavyn.
Ring Ring “Hello” Heavyn said with a raspy voice. “Quita I don’t feel like comin over” She was now sitting up “Quita please, for real I done been through a lot of **** these past few days and I aint in no mood to come over” Now wiping the sleep out of her eyes. “Damn! 5 minutes then I’m leavin…Aight let me get dressed” Heavyn tried to figure out what was so damn important that she had to get out of bed to go all the way across town.
“Yo Doggs I made you a drink” Jamel handed Devonte the drink. Devonte looked him dead in his eyes and said “Thanks” Devonte guzzled the drink down. Things just didn’t seem right. All of a sudden he felt sleepy.
“Jamel? What did you put in my drink” he said trying to keep his balance.
Jamel got up in his face and said “Pay back!” just then Devonte collapsed. Jamel and TaQuita hurried to put Devonte in bed. Jamel left the room with TaQuita and Devonte alone.
TaQuita tried to get Devonte undressed as fast as she could. She then got undressed and forced herself on to him. She was raping Devonte. Just in the middle of things the door bell rang.
Jamel looked through the peep hole and saw Heavyn standing there. He opened the door. When Heavyn saw who was standing at the door. She got flushed with anger. Jamel looked at Heavyn and the scars on her face. He felt bad for what he had done. Heavyn stood there looking puzzled but just turned around to leave. She didn’t know what type of game TaQuita was playing but it wasn’t funny.
“You aint goin nowhere” Jamel said as he snatched her into the house. TaQuita in the back waitin fo’ you.”
Heavyn already inside, so she went to TaQuita’s room. But she wasn’t in there. “Naw the other room” Jamel said as he kept drinking his drink. Heavyn turned around to go into the next room and when she opened the door she saw TaQuita in the bed with Devonte. http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j288/heavynsdream/snapshot_51724386_717a68f2.jpg
“What are you doing?” She screamed. TaQuita turned to her with an evil grin. “Devonte! Get up!” Heavyn started screaming. But he was kinda of doozy. Heavyn looked at her cousin and pounced on her. Devonte woke up a little with all the commotion. He looked over and saw Heavyn and TaQuita fighting.
Devonte jumped off the bed to break them apart. “Heavyn what’s going on?” Devonte said still slurring his words.
“She raped you! I caught her. She was just on top of you!” Devonte was a little confused. He looked down and saw that he only had on his boxers. He couldn’t really compose himself and Heavyn saw that. So she just helped him upstairs and left Quita and Jamel alone. But right before Heavyn walked out the door Jamel yelled “That’s what you get slut! Oh yea and let me not forget. I slept wit ya’ cousin too.” Heavyn looked at him with slanted eyes but just kept it movin.
20th May 2006, 5:10 AM
OOOO drama drama this story is wats ^ keep it updated its good girl
20th May 2006, 8:06 AM
20th May 2006, 8:24 AM
Keep it comin'. I love this story :)
20th May 2006, 8:26 AM
Wow I cant believe how mean they are being
21st May 2006, 8:55 PM
man i luv this story
21st May 2006, 11:01 PM
I love it...:D:D:D
22nd May 2006, 9:59 PM
I can't believe OUR story is taking off so well, lol. Thanks Nikki for offering to finish the story for US. lol, girl you are doing so good. I can't wait to get my new story off, it's gon be off da chain anyway.
This story is turning out so well, just wait til yall read the next part.
23rd May 2006, 12:22 AM
Heavyn rung Devonte’s door bell. Hoping someone was home. “Who?” She could hear a voice say from far. “Heavyn! A friend of Devonte’s” Heavyn yelled. Uniqua opened the door. And saw her baby drugged up. She helped Heavyn bring him inside.
“What happened to him?” Uniqua said. “I don’t know Miss. I found him like this.” Heavyn said in a very soft voice. They put Devonte in bed and Heavyn stayed with him until he woke up. Meanwhile Uniqua made a call to Ron.
“Damn baby. What happened?” Devonte had finally woken up. He was still a little groggy. But he was awake.
“They found out about us.” Heavyn said while just trying to keep Devonte calm and cool. But Devonte wasn’t having it.
“Naw, I was messed up but I remember you saying that’s I was raped and I remember you fighting.” He said well trying to get himself up and dressed. He was acting a little too calm for Heavyn. He was putting his shirt on and said “Don’t worry ma. They gonna get theirs.”
“What are you gonna do?” Heavyn was a little scared to ask this. But she had to know.
“Don’t worry bout it” he said about to walk out of his room. He turned to look at Heavyn and saw her a little sad. “What’s wrong wit you?” he asked. He wasn’t in the mood for all of this mushy stuff.
“It was Jamel. He was the one that raped me” she started crying. “I didn’t want to tell you cuz I thought you were gonna do something crazy, but I cant hold it anymore” Heavyn looked up and saw Devonte’s face turn red. He stormed out the room to find Ron sitting there with his mother.
“What you doin here?” Devonte asked.
“Naw, the question is what are you gonna do?” Ron said as he stood up.
“I’ma handle mine. You know that.” Devonte said with his chest out.
“Be smart D. play ya cards right.” Ron said. “Come on boy lets talk” Ron escorted Devonte back into his room.
Heavyn was left in the living room with Uniqua. “How long you known my baby?” Heavyn was scared so she said very softly “almost 5 months… I’m with him all the time Miss, I love him so much”
“Baby I have my sources and I know he spends all his time with you. I also know the whole situation between you and your cousin. And all that Jamel has done.” She took a puff of her cigarette. “You don’t come from around here so you probably don’t know that in situations like this somebody ends up in a body bag” she looked at Heavyn. “And I’ll be damned if it’s my baby. That’s why I called Ron” She took a long hard sigh. “My son aint no angel. I have no idea what type of person Devonte is. He dabbles in a little of everything. He was a stick up kid, an apprentice to Ron- the biggest dealer around he and now I think he is messin around in contracts.”
Heavyn was thinking hard. “Excuse me but what are contracts?”
“Killin girl” she looked straight into Heavyn’s eyes. “Contract killin”
Heavyn had a hard time catching her breath. She could believe Devonte was what his mother was making him out to be. Just then Devonte and Ron came out the room. “Come on I’m takin you home” he gestured to Heavyn.
She quickly got up and walked out the house. Once he got to her house she turned to him “Don’t hurt my cousin” she was begging “Please Devonte. That’s my blood”
“Whatever… I’ll talk to you later.” He said while opening the door for her. He looked at her sad pitiful face and pulled her close and said “I love you baby” and he kissed her goodbye.
Heavyn stood there watching as he drove off.
He arrived back at his house. Ron and Darnell were waiting for him. “Ay yo, ya’ll ready?” he asked the two big dudes.
“Yeah mann. I got that heat ready fo’ you.” Darnell said. He was ready for some action. He was a beast. He loved fighting and killing. He was helping out for the fun of it.
“Yo, don’t body the girl. Mess her up but let her live” Devonte said while getting his piece together.
“Aight lets go D. I’m hungry” Darnel said.
They called Jamel’s house to see if he was there or still at TaQuita’s house. “Hello” they could hear as Jamel answered the phone. That was the cue. They all ran down stairs. And broke the door down. To get in.
“Who you thought you was messin wit?” Devonte said. Jamel was scared. He got on his knees and was pleading. Devonte started laughing. Not listening to a word Jamel said. All of a sudden he heard crying in the back. He went back there and heard TaQuita crying. Devonte pistol whipped her over and over. There was blood everywhere. She was still alive but was pretty much out of it. When he felt he was done wit her he went back out to the living room where his next victim was.
“Stand up!” Devonte yelled. Jamel did as he was told. “How many times I told you not to play wit me?” Devonte was getting angrier by the moment. Then he pistol whipped Jamel knocking a tooth out.
“Stop playin and handle yo B.I.” Ron told Devonte.
BANG BANG BANG it was done. Devonte ran back up stairs while Ron and Darnell cleaned up.
The Pink Power Ranger
23rd May 2006, 3:59 AM
no! i mean, jamal was a horrible rapist, but he shouldn't have gotten shot!!!
i love this story, though.
23rd May 2006, 4:07 AM
I love it it is very well written bro
23rd May 2006, 9:59 AM
Great :clap, I feel like I am reading one of my favorite books Nicki. You are doing an excellent job :)
23rd May 2006, 2:52 PM
i didn't like jamel but i didn't want him to die.
23rd May 2006, 3:10 PM
i didn't like jamel but i didn't want him to die.
Too late Fexy, he's not comin' back. Or is he??? Hurry with the next chapter I'm addicted to this story :) lol :P
23rd May 2006, 3:17 PM
Too late Fexy, he's not comin' back. Or is he??? Hurry with the next chapter I'm addicted to this story :) lol :P
Girl I already know what's gonna happen, but I'll let yall stay in suspence, hahaha. It's good now, but you just wait, it's getting better.
23rd May 2006, 9:26 PM
Wow this just gets better and better. Jamel and TaQuita deserved it
23rd May 2006, 10:10 PM
I never liked Jamal...:D:D:D tehe
24th May 2006, 4:37 AM
Wow, Jamel got shot. Eh, I didn't like him anyways. :anime:
25th May 2006, 7:32 PM
Wow I just sumbled upon this, it's great!
26th May 2006, 5:23 PM
Cinnamin, girl this story is off the chain. You are so creative, but I shoulda known. Can't wait for more.
27th May 2006, 3:57 AM
Too much drama! :anime: I was a little shocked by the violence at first (on a Sim site), but then I was pleased to see you stepped out the box and did your thing. I'm looking forward to reading more. :up:
28th May 2006, 8:42 PM
About a half hour later the building was swarmed by cops. A nosy neighbor reported they saw Devonte run out the apartment after she heard the shots. So the cops came and took Devonte.
“You killed Jamel Harris didn’t you. You were upset that he was seeing your girlfriend. Weren’t you?” Devonte laughed at the cops.
“Yall don’t know anything!” Devonte yelled. The detectives roughed him up a bit. But after an hour and a half of interrogation and getting no where they went to talk to the witness.
TaQuita was in the hospital being treated for blunt trauma toward the head. “Ms. Henderson do you know who did this to you?” TaQuita had heard what happened to Jamel and opted to tell the police nothing. She was happy to be alive “No sir I have never seen the person before.” The police knew she was lying but they left her alone. Instead they got a search warrant for Devonte’s house.
“Ha Ha. Mr. Rodriguez. We got you. We have found a Glock 37 .45 GAP under your bed. If we can match this gun to the gun that killed Jamel you are going down!” The cops were pleased with themselves.
“Yall think yall really got something?” Devonte just laughed. And sat there knowing that that gun had no bodies on it. I was sure to beat this murder rap.
Two days later the cops found out that the gun was clean. But Devonte was in possession of an illegal deadly weapon. In turn he was sentenced to 2 years.
“Heavyn, where you goin?” Eve asked while she watched her daughter get dressed and ready to leave out the house. “You didn’t get over that stomach virus yet” She was a little worried. Heavyn had been sick for days now, throwing up all over the place.
“Mommy, I have to go see Devonte. It’s been a whole 2 months since he has been in jail and these phone calls aint cutting it” Heavyn just continued to get dressed.
“Baby, you are only 17 they don’t let minors in by themselves. But look, I’ll make you a promise. If by next week you feel better I’ll drive you up there myself.” Eve knew how much Heavyn loved Devonte and she did not want to separate them. Eve was still under the impression that Devonte only had possession of an illegal weapon, and that he really didn’t kill anybody.
“Its ok, Ms. Uniqua is gonna go with me. I have to meet her at their house” She gave her mother a sad look like she was begging to go.
“Alright but ya’ll call me as soon as ya’ll get there” with that she gave her daughter a hug and kiss and Heavyn was on her way over to Uniqua’s house.
Ding Dong Heavyn rang the door bell. “Just a minute!” she could hear from the back. The door opened up. Uniqua gave Heavyn a long hard hug. They were with each other every step of the way. It was a long 2 month process and they had really bonded with each other. “I’m so glad you can make it this time” She said as she escorted Heavyn inside. “He asks about you all the time. He told me that he has to see your beautiful face” Uniqua smiling from ear to ear. She knew Heavyn going would make her son’s day.
“I had been meaning to go a long time ago but I have been soooo sick. I cant seem to shake this stomach virus off” Heavyn said as she took a seat on the couch.
“Hmph, are you bakin something in that oven?” Uniqua said joking around
Embarrassed and now blushing “Ms Uniqua!”
“Girl I gots to ask these things.” Uniqua lit up a cigarette. “I’m too young and I look too good for a grandbaby. You know I had Devonte when I was 15. I’m only 32 now. I don’t want to repeat this cycle” She got up and went to the bathroom. When she came back she had a pregnancy test. “Here lest be sure. Go take this”
“I’m not pregnant. Plus we need to get going” Heavyn said as she gathered her things.
“It only takes five minutes. Go on now” Uniqua pushed Heavyn in the bathroom
“Ok ok.” Heavyn went into the bathroom. Saying to herself “This is crazy. First of all I’m too young for this and second it was only once. You can’t not get pregnant on the first time. Everyone knows that” she peed on the stick and sat on the toilet seat to wait for the lines to appear. All of a sudden she felt a knot in her stomach. She looked up and saw two lines. She started crying. Uniqua came in and saw that she was pregnant.
“Awww baby.” Uniqua hugged her. Trying to comfort her.
Heavyn had decided to still go see Devonte. She was silent for the whole ride. Then these crazy thoughts came into her mind. What if the baby wasn’t Devonte’s, what if it was Jamel’s baby? She knew it was a possibility, and that killed her inside. For the rest of the ride she just turned over and slept.
29th May 2006, 12:05 AM
Awwwwwwwwwww...I hope it ain't Jamel's...
29th May 2006, 6:20 PM
I know who the daddy is hahahahaha
30th May 2006, 9:09 AM
I really really reeeaaally hope it isn't Jamal's baby
30th May 2006, 11:41 AM
Its going to make life difficulty for the two of them if the baby is Jamel's
30th May 2006, 4:30 PM
I want another update!! :D
30th May 2006, 8:04 PM
I'm gonna be REALLY mad if it is Jamel's.
30th May 2006, 10:22 PM
ok ok ok, i'll let you all know who the daddy is. the daddy is.....................................
ok, ok. the daddy is............... the person that it is, haha
7th Jun 2006, 8:31 AM
I'd be p*ssed if the baby wasn't Devonte's.
hey i just started reading your story and girllllll let me tell you this is soooo good i can't believe that fool jamel raped heavyn!!!!! boy..... i'll tell ya this is some crazy stuff but i love it don't stop writing
27th Jun 2006, 4:24 PM
Thank you for all comments and i'm sorry for the delayed update.
“Wake up. We here” Uniqua said nudging Heavyn. Heavyn opened her eyes to see a huge building with high fences. She had never been to a jail before and was quite frightened.
“Have your picture ID ready and please take all metal things out of your pockets and put them in this bin” A huge brawly man was announcing to the crowd of people have come to see loved ones. Heavyn looked at the man and did as she was told. She felt so sick to her stomach that her body started shaking. She wasn’t cold but she was shivering.
“It’ll be alright Heavyn. Don’t worry.” Uniqua’s voice comforted Heavyn. It made her feel as though she wasn’t alone.
“Visitors for Devonte Rodriguez” Uniqua got up instantly and pulled Heavyn with her.
“It’s about damn time, **** we been sittin her for over an hour!” The guard ignored Uniqua’s comment and escorted the two ladies to the visitation rooms. There were so many people here. Heavyn looked around and saw so many young boys. All she saw was lost dreams, young black boys that have been caught up in something. She turned her head to look forward and saw the most inviting smile.
Devonte was just standing there mesmerized. He kept looking at her and thinking about how much he loved her. He was quickly snapped out of his dream when he remembered that he was in jail and Heavyn was seeing him at his worst. He put his head down in embarrassment. Heavyn walked up to him and lifted his head with one finger.
“It don’t matter to me baby. I still love you like no other.” Devonte looked into her deep brown eyes and leaned in to kiss her.
“HEY HEY HEY!!!” The guard yelled. “You know the rules”
Devonte pulled back and whispered “no kissing”
“Come on ya’ll sit down. Let’s talk and catch up.” Uniqua was trying to break the ice. They all sat down and Uniqua filled Devonte in on what has been going on since he left. They were talking and laughing so much that they lost track of time. Uniqua looked up at the clock and saw that they had 15 minutes left. “I’ma go to the bathroom. I’ll be right back.” Uniqua got up and disappeared in the back.
“I’m so glad you came baby. This means a lot to me.” Devonte said as he rubbed her hand. “I know I messed up but don’t give up on me. When I get out we gonna get married, I’ma get a real job and we are gonna start our family. Just like we always wanted to.
Heavyn pulled her hand back slowly and said “What if that order was reversed? What if the baby came before the marriage and job?”
“What are you saying? You pregnant?” Devonte looked at Heavyn. She just had her head down and didn’t say anything. “Heavyn?” Devonte took a huge sigh “Damn … I didn’t want this to happen under these circumstances… You gonna keep it right?”
“I don’t know. I mean I have no way to support the baby and with you in here what am I supposed to do? I know when I tell my mother she is gonna flip. (sigh) They might even kick me out. And if they do that what am I gonna do?”
“Don’t worry bout all of that. I’ll make a few calls and have you set until I get out. I’ll do as much as I can. I’ll do anything.”
“Make a few calls *chuckle chuckle* At what price? What will you owe in return for these calls? Devonte all I want is to be with you. But I want the American dream. I don’t ever want to see you in this place again. If we decide that we will keep the baby, I’ll do what I have to do until you get out of jail. The right way. No short cuts.”
“Whatever we gotta do we gonna do it. I really want you to keep it. But I will understand if you choose not to. I mean I do have two years up here. But whatever you choose. We will do it your way. I promise.”
“Thank you baby.” They gave each other a quick hug. While Uniqua came back
“They kickin us out already. But you know I’ll be back next week right?” She said as she kissed her son on the cheek.
“Yea ma. Don’t forget to bring them Jordans next time either. You know I gots ta stay fly” Everyone let out a little laugh.
The whole ride home Heavyn sat and contemplated what Devonte had just said to her. She wanted to start a family with him but not so soon. And how would she tell her parents? What would they do when they found out? She decided not to think about it, she saw her baby today and that was enough to put a smile on her face.
Sitting on the couch watching TV Heavyn began thinking about the baby. If her calculations were right she slept with Devonte about 3 months ago. She knew she had to go to the doctor because whether or not if she was gonna keep the baby she still had to get checked out. She sat back and started crying. The thought that the father of the baby could either be the love of her life’s or the man whom she most despised. “What’s wrong with you?” Ayliah was standing there watching her big sister cry her eyes out.
“Nothing princess” Heavyn tried to muster up a smile. Ayliah was her little girl. She was 11 and was a little diva. She always made Heavyn smile.
“Well miss nothin’ someone is on the phone for you.” Ayliah said there with her hand on her hips. “Want me to bring the phone to you?”
“What you think? You know I aint getting up” Heavyn let out a little giggle.
“You see why I don’t be nice to you?” Ayliah giggled along. She came back in the room and gave Heavyn the phone but not before she stuck her tongue out at her.
Smiling from ear to ear Heavyn answered the phone. “Hello?” she said waiting for the person to respond.
“Um hi” a soft spoken person said.
“Oh hi quita”
“I know you probably never wanted to speak to me again but I just called to tell you that honestly from the bottom of my heart, I’m sorry. I didn’t think none of this would have went that far. Everything that I did was so stupid and I didn’t mean to hurt you that bad. I love you. You were and always will be my best friend. Tu eres mi prima, te amo mucho.”
There was a long silence.
“Heavyn? You still there?”
“Yea I’m here. Just thinking. You know I have been thinking about you since that day. I love you so much and I would have never thought you would concoct up such a plan that would scar me for the rest of my life. I mean exactly what you said tu eres mi prima. How in the world could you let someone rape me? I’m your blood Quita!”
“I didn’t know he raped you. Honestly. When I did that thing with Devonte I had no clue as to what had happened between you and Jamel. I mean I know ya’ll wasn’t talking but I didn’t know that he raped you. And he aint tell me until ya’ll left that day. I didn’t know…I really didn’t”
Heavyn could hear the sincerity in her voice. All of a sudden she could hear whimpers over the phone.
“I’m so sorry Heavyn. I didn’t mean for this to happen. I was so jealous of you and I let my jealousy get the best of me. I just want to be your friend again. I’m going through so much right now and you are the only person who I can think of to talk to.”
“I did have a lot of hate and anger towards you but a whole three months have past and I’m dealing with it. Devonte called me yesterday and told me about the letter you sent him. He still has some animosity towards you but not as bad as before. Both of us just want to put what happened the past behind us. I love you and miss you. I want to see you. My life has really got me on a roller coaster. I don’t know if I’m coming or going… um do you want to hang out tomorrow? Maybe get a bite to eat of something?”
“Sure, I would love to. Around 4 is good?”
“Yea 4 is perfect. Lets go to that McDonalds on fulton. I’ll meet you there at 4.”
“Ok I’ll see you there.”
Heavyn could not believe that he had just spoken to TaQuita. She was actually looking forward to someone she could talk to.
27th Jun 2006, 5:58 PM
Nice update, I'm glad they're at least willing to work things out :)
*side bar...where did you get Heavyn's hair in the last pic from?*
27th Jun 2006, 7:47 PM
Good update cinn. I love this story, Heavyn is so pretty. Breena the hair is a donation from rose sims.
27th Jun 2006, 9:09 PM
Thanks Zizism-...I mean Dee ;)
27th Jun 2006, 9:27 PM
She looks so pretty in that last pic. What a nice update
27th Jun 2006, 9:45 PM
Thank you Breena, Dee and Ladyswig. I glad you all like it. Hopefully i can get another update up before the end of the week.
30th Jun 2006, 8:18 AM
The next day Heavyn got to McDonald’s a half hour early so she could prepare herself. But when she got there TaQuita was already there. When they saw each other both of them started crying. TaQuita walked over to Heavyn and Heavyn just broke down even more. People were looking at them strangely but they didn’t care. They were ion their own little world. They sat down and talked about things that have been going on with them in the past three months. To them it seemed like three whole years had passed.
“I have something to tell you Quita. But you have to promise not to tell anyone.”
“I promise chica. What is it?”
“I’m pregnant. I think I’m around 3 months. But I’m not sure if it’s Devonte’s or if its Jamel’s. I told Devonte about the baby and he wants me to keep it. But I don’t want to raise Jamel’s baby.”
TaQuita just sat there quiet. She had no clue as to what to say. “Did you tell Devonte that there was a possibility that Jamel was the father?”
“No, I’m scared. I was gonna write it in a letter before its too late for me to get an abortion but I don’t know. I think he is gonna flip out.” Heavyn began to get worried.
“It aint like you cheated on him. He knows what happened between you two.” TaQuita was trying to sound reassuring.
“Yea I guess you right. Well let me get home. Mommy and Daddy ‘possed ta be goin out tonight. I have to watch that rugrat” Heavyn grabbed up her things. The two girls embraced and went their separate ways.
I can’t believe that is has already been 4 months since you have been gone. I miss you so much baby. I can’t wait until you come home. I really enjoyed our last visit and I’m sorry for not answering your phone calls or writing you back. I am kinda confused about things and I didn’t want to trouble you. But after thinking about it I have to come clean. I hope you don’t turn your back on us now and remember I think I still have a little time to get an abortion if you decide you don’t want it. But here it is. I was thinking and if I’m not mistaken the baby might not be yours. All of this happened around the same thing as the incident with Jamel. It makes me wonder if the baby could be his. I know this isn’t what was in our dreams and if you want me to I will get an abortion. I just want to live happily ever after with you and this baby might not allow that to come true. I need to know what you think of all of this.
Love your Wifey,
Baby girl, don’t you know I know everything. When you first told me that you were pregnant I knew there was a possibility that the baby wasn’t mine. But what did I say anyways, that I want it. It’s gonna be a part of you, and I love you. And who knows it might just be mine. I want a little ‘Vonte jr. runnin around. Don’t worry about nothing Heavyn, Everything will work itself out. Trust me.
Love you always,
*Ring, Ring* “Hello?” a groggy voice answered.
“Hi, Ms. Uniqua?” Heavyn said really anxious.
Sitting up on the bed now “Oh hi Heavyn whats goin on?
“I just came from the doctor and called to give you my weekly report.”
“I’m all ears…How is my grand child doin?” Uniqua was getting excited now. Heavyn was already showing and the reality of having a grandchild really intrigued her.
“Well, the doctor said that I’m 22 weeks and I’m doing great. The baby is healthy and all. And no I didn’t find out the sex. I want it to be a surprise.” Heavyn was secretly getting excited.
“Aww you just love keeping me in suspense. So have you told your mother yet?”
“No, I’m trying to find the right time. You have no idea how my father is. He grew up in a very religious Puerto Rican household. His mother instilled all of her values into my father.”
“Sweety, I understand that but you damn near about to have the baby. He will just have to get over it.” Uniqua was getting a little fed up with Heavyn. She could not understand why she was acting the way she was. Although Uniqua had never met Heavyn’s parents she could not imagine them to be that bad. And the way things were going it didn’t look like Heavyn was going to tell her parents at all.
“I am Ms. Uniqua don’t worry” Heavyn sat on the bed while still talking to Uniqua. All of a sudden her bedroom door flew open.
“Yo! Mommy wants you down stairs.”
“Where’s ya’ damn manners? I had mah door closed for a reason!” Heavyn turns around facing the window “I’ma have to call you later…ok…bye…yea tell him I love him too…ok” She hung up the phone. Then turning to her little sister “What I told you about knockin’”
“Oh pa-leeze you know mommy told you if you wasn’t payin no bills you aint supposed to have doors closed anyways”
“Well I don’t go in your room so don’t go in mine.” Heavyn sat there wondering “So what does mommy want?”
Sucking her teeth “I don’t know. She all upset, cryin and stuff.”
“Heavyn! Come here!!!” Evelyn screamed from the top of her lungs.
“I’m comin!” Heavyn rushed out the room to her mother. “What happened?”
“Quita told you she was pregnant?” Evelyn was standing there with her hands on her hips.
Heavyn just stood there dumb founded. She and TaQuita had been talking for about a month now and she thought things were back to normal. Why hadn’t TaQuita told her? “No mommy she aint say nothing to me” Heavyn couldn’t help but to wonder why TaQuita held this secret. Then she wondered who the father was? TaQuita wasn’t an innocent little girl and had a few partners in her 17 years living.
“Well Eve called me and told me she took that lyin heifer to the doctor and she in her second trimester. Can you believe that? She been hidin something like that. Girl I swear, if you ever pull some S*** like that I will kill you. And I aint playin.” Evelyn walked over to the kitchen she then turned around “And don’t hang out with her that much no more. Pregnancy is contagious. Knownin’ you, you would probably try and get pregnant on purpose so ya’ll kids can grow up together. I’m telling you now. Havin a baby aint cute and it aint no fun!”
“Dang mommy I know.” Heavyn started getting scared. She didn’t know what to do anymore. The way her mother was flipping she knew she could not tell her that she too was pregnant. “Well I’m gonna go to the store you want something?”
“No baby but hurry back” Her mother said as she began to prepare dinner. Heavyn walked out the house and started her way to the store. She didn’t really want anything from the store but she had to get out the house. She had to figure out a way to tell her parents that she was pregnant also. She couldn’t think of anything off the top of her head. All of a sudden she gets startled by her cell phone.
“Hello?” she answered with her voice still a little shaky. “Yea mommy, I’m on my way back now” She took a deep sigh. She knew that sooner or later her mother would find out her secret.
Heavyn had yet to realize that her stomach was steadily growing and her mother had taken very close watch of her. After dinner that night Evelyn went into Heavyn’s room to talk to her.
“You know what I hate Heavyn?” Evelyn sat on the chair trying to pick and choose her words carefully. “I hate it when my children keep secrets from me” Evelyn sat and looked at Heavyn as she was now squirming in her seat. She kept trying to calm herself, hoping that her suspicions were not true. “Have you ever kept something from me?” She looked at Heavyn. “If you don’t tell me I can’t help you. You know mommy is always here for you.”
Heavyn began to cry. She knew this was the chance to tell her mother. She was so scared; she just knew mother would hate her for the rest of her life. “Ma, you know what happened to Taquita, um what would you do if that was one of your kids?” Heavyn said as she rubbed her hands together.
“Ha! I would beat that a**! You know that. You tryin ta’ tell me sumthin? Why would you ask a question like that?” Evelyn was getting close to her answer but she wasn’t lying before. She really hates it when her children keep secrets. She feels as though she can’t trust them “Cuz the way you soundin I might assume that you are pregnant too”
Heavyn just cried harder. “I’m so sorry, I don’t know what happened. So many things were going on. And before I knew it I had missed my period…I’m so sorry mommy. I didn’t know what to do”
30th Jun 2006, 8:31 AM
Wow - Great update. I liked all the jail shots :)
30th Jun 2006, 9:45 PM
30th Jun 2006, 10:29 PM
Great update, Heavyn is so pretty and sweet...just hope Mommy tries to understand a little bit and not kill her! :P
1st Jul 2006, 9:00 AM
Aww I'm sure Heavyn will be alright
1st Jul 2006, 12:20 PM
Great update again! I loved the letter Devonte wrote her. It brought a bit of tears to my eyes, he's so sweet. :P
I hope Heavyn's mom will forgive her, and try helping her instead of getting angry with her. :)
1st Jul 2006, 6:38 PM
Great Story,Cinnamin316!!May I ask where you got these beautiful dark skintones?
1st Jul 2006, 7:00 PM
Thank you all for the comments. I'm working on the new pictures now. I have to build a lot and i need to find the right objects for it.
Kajefan- I got most of my skintones from Louis.
6th Jul 2006, 6:50 AM
I hope Heavyn's mom will forgive her, and try helping her instead of getting angry with her.
6th Jul 2006, 4:51 PM
I agree with islandprincess. I hope she doesn't kick her out cause she ain't gonna have anything to take care of the baby.
6th Jul 2006, 5:26 PM
awwh. this is a good story.
i hope everything turns out for the better!
7th Jul 2006, 7:13 PM
I just wanted to say how great this story is. I too am from the N.Y.C. and know what it's like to grow up in these situations. Keep up the good work and keep those updates comin'!
P.S. I also know what's it's like to grow up in a religuous Puerto Rican household.
11th Jul 2006, 10:58 PM
Thank you everyone for the comments. I hope to have an update up either tonight or tomorrow.
12th Jul 2006, 12:07 AM
Just read this from beginning to now and its really great. It all seems realistic and is done really good. I swear some of these sims seem like clones of my some of my friends without the killing and all lol.
22nd Jul 2006, 6:09 AM
Evelyn sat there biting her lip. She was furious. “How far along are you?”
“Huh?” Heavyn answered while lifting her head.
“Girl, stop playin with me! You know what the **** I just said” Evelyn was now standing up
“22 weeks” she said it so faintly but Evelyn heard it loud and clear.
“I know this heifer did not just say 22 weeks!” She was talking to herself and looking at the wall. She started pacing back and forth contemplating on what to do with her child. For about 5 straight minutes Evelyn did not say a word. When all of a sudden Evelyn walks right up to Heavyn and slaps her across the face. “Get the **** out my house” She said it so calmly as she looked at her crying daughter. “Don’t take none of your stuff. Just get out”
“Mommy, where am I supposed to go?” Heavyn looked at her with desperation in her eyes.
“**** if I care. Go to where ever you made that ******* child. …You know we tried to give you everything. And you just throw your life away for a piece of trash that’s in jail. I don’t get it. I have to get out the house. But you better be gone by the time I get back”
Heavyn watched as her mother walked out the room. She knew her mother was serious, so she gathered a little clothing in a duffel bag and went to Uniqua’s house.
“Who is it?” Uniqua said walking to the door. She opened it and saw Heavyn standing there
“Its me Ms. Uniqua” Heavyn was still crying
“What happened to you?” Uniqua said as she opened the door.
“I told my mother and she kicked me out. I don’t have anywhere else to go” Heavyn went inside the house to sit down.
Uniqua sure didn’t want Heavyn staying there but she saw it as a perfect opportunity to get some extra money. Uniqua wasn’t a bad person but she was always up to something.
“Yea, um ok. Go ahead and put your stuff in Devonte’s room.” Uniqua was grinning from ear to ear. She could not wait until the money started coming in.
About a week after first moving in with Uniqua, Heavyn began feeling uncomfortable. She really did not like her situation and Uniqua seemed to be asking for money all the time. She felt so much pressure; this week had been horrible for her. She has lost her parents, had been kicked out of school and was now being pressured to pay rent with absolutely no money.
“Um yea, so when are you goin’ have that money for me?” Uniqua asked while smoking a cigarette.
“I’m looking for a job Ms. Uniqua. Its not as easy as it seems. I’m only 17 and I have no prior experience. Not to mention I don’t even have a High School diploma.” Heavyn was at the verge of tears.
“Oh please child. Spare the crying. I ain’t the one who got you pregnant, I ain’t kick you out of school and I damn sure ain’t the mother that kicked you out the house.” She stood up so she could be face to face with Heavyn. “Now I let you stay here cuz my son ‘loves you’ but to be honest I don’t have to put up with this. If you don’t have the rent money by the end of the week you need to find some where else to stay. Food and rent don’t pay for it’s self little girl”
Heavyn could not believe her ears. She had grown to trust and care for Uniqua and now she was showing a whole new side to her. She managed to muster up “I’ll get the money”
The next day Heavyn left the house early. Her plan was to stay out the house all day and only go back to the house to sleep. She couldn’t stay with family because the only family that she knew was TaQuita and her aunt Eve. She couldn’t stay there because although TaQuita and her had lunch at Mc .Donald it does not mean that they are friends again. Walking down the street crying she looks up and finds her quick way to make some extra cash. She stood in front of this store front contemplating if she could really compromise her values and belief for a quick dollar. Tears were streaming down her face when a tall dark man began speaking to her.
“Can I help you?” He stood there looking her up and down
Bashfully shaking her head up and down she whispered “How can I apply for a job?”
With a slight chuckle the man said “Come on in to my office” Heavyn hesitantly followed the man into the ‘Get it Girls’ strip club.
22nd Jul 2006, 6:19 AM
what is she gunna do when she starts showing?
22nd Jul 2006, 6:37 AM
i want to know that so badd update soon i can't beleive her mother
22nd Jul 2006, 7:32 AM
yay you updated, lol. you need to hurry up and update again. lol
22nd Jul 2006, 2:30 PM
Aah I loved this update! Even though I'm not too fond of those mothers anymore. ;)
And if she does choose to get that job I understand... desperate times calls for desperate measures.
But... I want another update again!!! It's getting so interesting. :D
[sets up tent and eats cookies]
24th Jul 2006, 2:33 AM
can i have some cookies vinhou?:P
24th Jul 2006, 6:43 AM
It had been two days since she had applied for the job. She was so surprised that the owner didn’t even bother to ask her, her age. She was so nervous she needed some coaching. She had to vent out so she called TaQuita.
“Hi Heavyn, how you been?” She was still apprehensive about talking to Heavyn but she had truly missed her cousin and wanted things to go back to normal
“Um I just needed some one to talk to. I am having so many problems right now. I feel like I’m losing my mind”
“You want me to meet you some where so we can talk? This sounds like a face to face conversation” TaQuita was happy that Heavyn had come to her with a problem she knew that her aunt Evelyn had thrown Heavyn out and there were rumors that Heavyn was staying with Uniqua but no one had heard from her.
“Yea I need to see you. Um can you meet me at the park in like a half hour?”
“Yes of course, I’ll be right there”
Heavyn arrived to the park early. She couldn’t believe that later on tonight she would be taking off her clothes for money in front of strangers. She knew that she had to do what she had to do but this was no where in her plan. Plus she was beginning to show. She wasn’t big but she did have a little pudge. She figured that if things went well with this that she could move out of Uniqua’s house. She knew she was being taken advantage and she did not need that on top of the other things that were going on in her life at that moment. All of a sudden she felt someone standing over her. She stood up and embraced her cousin.
“Hey girl, look at you getting all big” TaQuita said trying to ease the tension
*chuckling to herself* “Look who’s talkin’, you bigger than me.” They shared a laugh.
“So whats been going on?”
“Well I don’t know if you know that I have been staying with Uniqua, but she turned out to be a witch. Tellin me she gon’ kick me out if I don’t pay her rent and stuff”
“Why you aint just come and stay with us?” TaQuita knew the answer for that but that was still her cousin and she couldn’t bear to see her family in a situation like this.
“I just have to do me right now. I have to be independent. So anyways I had to find a way to get some quick paper. So…I start tonight at ‘Get it Girls’”
“WHAT!!! Oh **** naw, Heavyn stop you know you are too good for that. Just come back home with me and we will work it out.”
“Quita, I’m not really trying to hear all of that right now. I just needed to talk to someone about what I’m going through right now. I’m not movin in with ya’ll, that’s for sure. I need to do this on my own. I got myself in this situation and I can get myself out of it. What I need from you is just a little encouragement. Just tell me that everything will be ok.”
TaQuita looked at he cousin in realized that this wasn’t the same person whom she was once best friends with. This person was so different, much less naïve than the old Heavyn. This girl was strong. “Well you want advice? I aint never been no stripper but I would think it is easier if you didn’t look them in the face. Remember when I used to spend the night at your house and we used to dance in the mirror thinking we would be the next video girl?” TaQuita had tears in her eyes but she said with a little chuckle “Drop it like it’s hot. And as Diamond from the Player’s Club says ‘Make that money but don’t let it make you’” With that the girl embraced and parted ways.
“All right now, It’s getting hot in here. Everyone close your eyes and think about that perfect girl cuz I’m about to take you to Heavyn!!!!” The announcer screamed through the loud speakers.
Heavyn peeked through the curtain as the music began to play. She saw all the men that were out there and quickly got a huge lump in her throat. She sucked it up and walked out onto the stage. She just listened to Jamie Foxx sing “DJ play this girl a love song” and did her thing. She had no idea what she was doing but whenever the crowd roared and threw more money on the stage she just kept doing that. When she heard the song beginning to end she quickly wrapped up and gathered her money. Once back stage in the dressing room she looked at the money and saw about $300 right there. One of the other workers walked by and saw all that money and said, “Don’t get gassed. You only got that much cuz you new” Heavyn did not care. The money was quick and easy, just what she needed.
By the time she got home she had made close to $1000. After giving the owner his 30% fee she was left with about $700. That was good enough. When she walked into the house it was 3:00am and Uniqua was fast asleep. So she just left $300 on the kitchen table and went to her room. She could sleep well that night, just the fact that so many strangers had seen her half naked bumping and grinding made her sick to her stomach. But she quickly put that thought behind her. With the four hundred dollars she had left she bought some clothes and put the rest aside. She was too young to create a bank account but she didn’t trust Uniqua. She knew she couldn’t leave money around in the house.
Heavyn had worked 4 days straight and had close to $2000 that she carried everywhere she went. Knowing that this was a lot of money she decided to go to her grandmother to see if she would open a bank account for her.
*ding dong *
Heavyn could hear the frail old lady from behind the door. “Abuelita, It’s me Heavyn”
“Ay dios mio, mi nieta” she opened the door and grabbed heavyn tight and close. “How you? Tu padre no puede encontrarte”
“’Wuela, English, you know I don’t know Spanish”
“Ay sorry, I forgot. Your father no find you. He call long time ago and dijo que you went away” The old woman stared at Heavyn not believing all the terrible things she has heard about her granddaughter. “Baby, you hungry?”
Heavyn didn’t have much of an appetite but it was a sure sign of disrespect if she didn’t that the food that was just offered to her. “Yes ‘wuela but only a little”
Dona Olga sat at the kitchen table watching her oldest grandchild eating when she said “Where ‘ju living?”
“With a friend” Heavyn responded quickly, but sure not to make eye contact.
“What friend? Why you no stay here?” Olga now had a very sad look on her face. She didn’t understand why her grandchild would not come to her first.
“I don’t know ‘wuela but I need your help with something.” Heavyn pushed the empty plate of food away from her.
“Si, whatever you need I help” She sat up a little more alert now waiting to hear what Heavyn had to say
“I need somewhere to keep my money. Like a bank account or something, but I’m too young to get one by myself.” Heavyn was interrupted by her grandmother leaving the room. Heavyn began to yell “Abuela I don’t need any money. I just need a place to keep the money that I already have” Heavyn plopped down in her seat. She thought her grandmother was upset with her because it seemed like she needed money, until her grandmother came out from the back room with a huge smile on her face with a little booklet in her hands.
“Here” Olga said as she gave the booklet to Heavyn. Heavyn looked down and saw that it was a bank book. “Its yours. I save money for you for long time. In case un dia tu nesecitas, y I think you need.”
Heavyn opened the booklet and saw that her grandmother had save $10,000 for her. She looked at the first entry date and saw that the first deposit was a week after she was born. “Oh my god! ‘wuela where did you get all this money?” She couldn’t believe that there was so much
“I save for you and jour sister, but don’t tell jour father” Olga went close and hugged Heavyn. “I love you”
“I love you too ‘wuela” Heavyn kissed her grandmother on the forehead and began to leave.
“Tenga cuidado nieta” Her grandmother said as she watched her to the door
“I will!!” Heavyn yelled as she got on the elevator
Heavyn sat at the bus stop thinking how she was given a second chance. She knew that the money wouldn’t last forever but for now it was plenty of money to find a little place by herself without Uniqua. The only problem was that she was still a minor. She knew it would be hard to find a place that did not do a background check. But she figured she would find some way. She wasn’t sure what to do next. She knew that the money could last her for a while so she had to contemplate whether she wanted keep stripping or to stop and just try to manage with what she had. She really hated exposing herself in front of people but it was easy and fast money she also knew that the money that her grandmother would not last forever.
24th Jul 2006, 6:51 AM
24th Jul 2006, 7:22 AM
Loved the updates girl. I wish my wuela was as generous as Heavyn's. :lol:
24th Jul 2006, 10:31 AM
Who knew Uniqua was like thar. I thought she was a kind mom. At least Heavyn has a nice abuelita
24th Jul 2006, 3:53 PM
that was really good!
i hope nothing bad happens, to where she doesnt get the money or something...
24th Jul 2006, 8:22 PM
this was really good ya know ..
*This is her cousin speaking*
25th Jul 2006, 2:11 PM
Wow. Nice updates.
26th Jul 2006, 5:28 AM
It has been almost 2 months since Heavyn stopped stripping and was now 8 months pregnant. During the day she would go to a teen mother center where they taught her how to care for her child. She only signed up because she did not want Uniqua to know that she wasn’t working. But to her surprise she enjoyed the classes and actually made a few friends. She was still looking for a place to stay; she was determined not to bring her baby home to Uniqua’s house. She had only a week left until she turned 18. Once her birthday came around she was going to be on her grind trying to find a place, but until then she just kept getting everything prepared for when she had the baby.
“Hey Heavyn! Wait up.” Jaime a girl from the classes had yelled.
“Oh hey girl, what happened?” Heavyn asked. She liked Jamie, on the first day that Heavyn entered the program Jamie was the first person she talked to. She was cool; but she had a hard life. She was raised in foster care and was abused by her caretakers until she got pregnant. On the day she found out that she was pregnant they told the social worker that they could no longer take care of her; and she was placed in to a group home for pregnant youths.
“The girls at the home are giving me a baby shower and you know I have to have my girl there. Plus you know I don’t like none of them people; who am I gonna crack jokes with if you aint there?” The girls laughed.
“Yea, ok. When is it?” Heavyn said through giggles
“Tomorrow night at 7:00” She was happy that Heavyn agreed to come. This was her best friend at the moment.
“Alright I’ll be there” Heavyn said as she leaned in to give Jamie a hug. When she looked up Heavyn saw that her bus was coming. “Ooh girl, my bus!” She yelled as she sprinted to the bus.
As she sat down she pulled the newspaper out of her bag and began looking at the classified ads, circling the apartments she thought would be good for her. She thought maybe she would go view a few of the apartments today, since the program let out at 12:00pm today. She couldn’t pay that much attention to the paper she was so excited. She was on her way to the hospital and the bus was just not moving fast enough for her.
She walked into room 606 and saw Taquita laying in the bed looking a mess. “Eww you need your hair done.” Heavyn said with a chuckle.
“Yea just wait until you drop that load. It aint no joke, and just my luck that little girl came out too quick and didn’t even give me a chance to get my epidural. Can you believe that? Au natural.” Taquita began to laugh.
“Well where is she? I want to see my god daughter”
“They about to bring her in for her feeding. So just sit down and wait”
“I am” Heavyn pulled a seat close to her cousin. “Oh *laughing* what’s her name?”
*Laughing* “I aint tell you? Raiyelle Heavyn Henderson”
“Aww that is so cute. But don’t be expectin me to name my baby TaQuita, shoot, you got a ghetto name” The two shared a laugh.
TaQuita sat up a little “You havin a girl?”
“I didn’t find out yet. I’m scared to know. It still doesn’t seem real. I mean I’m getting bigger and I feel the kicks but I don’t know it still hasn’t sunk in that I’m going to be a mother within a month.”
“Trust me it aint gonna feel real until you hold that baby in your arms. That feeling is crazy…and scary too. I now have to care and look after another human being. I aint even grown myself yet.”
“At least you got auntie…” She was cut off by TaQuita’s scared expression. “What happened” Heavyn asked as she turned around. Heavyn’s mouth dropped. Her mother was standing there with flowers in her hand.
“Heavyn!!!” Ayliah yelled as she ran to her sister. “I missed you” She was squeezing Heavyn so hard but Heavyn couldn’t take her eyes away from her mother.
“I missed you too princess” Heavyn focusing back on Ayliah and kissing her on the forehead.
Evelyn stood there in shock. She knew what she had done to her daughter was wrong but she was a stubborn woman and would never admit that she was wrong. She stood in the doorway with tears in her eyes. Looking at her daughter who looked like she was ready to have her baby any day now and realizing that at a time when Heavyn most needed her mother she was not there. Evelyn didn’t say anything to anyone in the room, she just put the flowers by the bed and ran into the bathroom. Through the door you could hear her sobs.
“She misses you Heavyn. Why don’t you come back home?” Ayliah was looking at her so pitifully. “We all miss you.”
“Its not that easy” Heavyn looked at her sister and tried not to cry in front of her. “I’m about to go Quita” She said as she leant over to give her cousin a kiss. “And bye big head” She looked at her little sister and pushed her playfully. They walked out the room, down the hall and to the elevator.
The following week Heavyn had an appointment with the landlord of an apartment building. She was so worried, she knew she was just about due any day now and still had no place to go.
“Hello Mr. Roberts, My name is Heavyn Ramirez. I’m here for the follow up interview for the apartment.” Heavyn said as she walked in.
“Oh yes, please take a seat.” He was doing some paper work and had yet to look up. “It say here that you are 18 years old. How do you plan on paying for the rent?” He lifted his head slowly and saw that Heavyn was pregnant.
“Well sir, my grandmother as agreed to co-sign with me on the apartment. Although I’m young I have been on my own for some time and I just want a stable home for my child. I’m not trying to plead a sob case but it’s the truth. I work hard with whatever I do and my grandmother has already agreed to help me out with the bills until I get myself together. I believe she signed all the paper work already.”
He looked at her and saw pain in her eyes. He was a man with kids and knew how hard it can be to raise a child and it seemed as if the young lady in front of him was all alone. “Were you applying for the one bedroom or 2 bedroom?”
“Just one sir. It’s only going to be us two” She was shaking from anticipation. Waiting impatiently for his response.
“Ok Ms. Ramirez lets take a look at that apartment once again.” He said to her with a slight grin on his face. He was a pretty good judge of character and knew Heavyn wasn’t going to be a problem.
They allowed Heavyn to move into the apartment that weekend. It wasn’t big but it was just what she needed, a place where her and her child could rest their head’s peacefully. As she was packing up Uniqua looked at her a little sad. She knew that this money that she was getting would be gone soon.
“So where is this place again?” Uniqua said with her hand on he hips.
“Its on the Southside. It’s ok, you know. At least its mine.” Heavyn looked at her with a grin.
Uniqua sucked her teeth and threw an envelope on to the bed. “Here! This came today”
Heavyn looked at the envelope and saw that it was from Devonte
Dear Mrs. Rodriguez,
How you been baby? I miss you so much. I know its been a while since I have written you but things are crazy in here. Damn, almost 2 whole months since I have spoken to you. I heard you have been trying to get in touch with me and everytime I call the crib Ma’ says you aint there. You creepin out on me shorty? Lol If you do I don’t blame you. I cant do anything to help you while I’m in this situation. Anyways, I don’t want to talk about that. I can’t think about you being with another *****. You mine and always will be. How is my baby doin? Vonte jr. should be born soon, shouldn’t he. Don’t play around girl, when he is born I need my pictures. Well I’m going to let you go. But write me back.
I miss you.
Your husband, Devonte
P.S. As you see I was transferred to the adult facilities, but it might be a goodthing they transferred me. There is a program called “Shock” that allows people who have less than 2 years to go to a boot camp kind of thing. I think I’ll try and get in if I can. But for now this is the new place to write me. I’ll be expecting a letter from you. Muah
The letter sent chills up Heavyn’s spine. She couldn’t believe it was him. She thought he had forgotten about her but this proved her wrong. The part that kept going over in her mind was when he said that when he called Uniqua would say that she wasn’t there. Uniqua had never told Heavyn about Devonte calling. But she didn’t let that get her spirits down. She was moving out and nothing could bring her down, first she could resist from writing back to Devonte. She wanted to give him her new address so there would be no more confusion.
Oh my god, I miss you so much. I can’t wait until my baby comes back home to me. I didn’t know you have been calling me. Me and your mother don’t exactly get along but as she probably told you, my mother kicked me out and I had no where else to go. But as of tomorrow I will have my own place. You would be so proud of me. I’m preparing for our future, so when you come home you have a nice place to come and rest your head. And if you can’t tell by now I haven’t had the baby yet. I can’t wait though. I am really excited. I have almost everything I need. But I still feel as though I’m not ready. What ever I’ll be ready, don’t worry about me just concentrate on getting out of there.
Love you forever
Heavyn’s first night in the apartment was scary for her. She had never been by herself in such an isolated place. She tried to ignore the fear by keeping herself busy. She cleaned the house top to bottom until she cleaned herself to sleep. She woke up in the middle of the night with an incredible urge to go to the bathroom. She had been sleeping on the floor since she did not have a bed yet. So as she pulled herself up she couldn’t hold her bladder any longer. She thought she had an accident on herself but she kept leaking. She looked down and realized that her water had just broken. She got so scared that she started crying. She didn’t know exactly what to do but the first person to come to her mind was Taquita.
“Hello” a groggy voice answered.
“Quita, my water broke” Heavyn voice was so shaky
“Heavyn?” Quita asked while trying to sit up. She had just fell asleep after dealing with her baby which was colicky.
“Yea, I’m about to call a cab to take me to the hospital. Can you meet me there?” Heavyn was a little unsure about asking her cousin to be there for the birth, but she really wanted someone to be there.
“Of course! Let me get mommy to watch Raiyelle.” She was already getting dressed. “Alright hang up and call the cab”
“Ok” Heavyn answered as she hung up the phone.
Taquita went to ask her mother to watch the baby while she went to the hospital to be there for Heavyn
“Tell Heavyn I’ll be there to see her tomorrow!” Evelyn had to yell to her daughter who was already out the door. As soon as she heard the door close she picked up the phone
“Evelyn” She was whispering “Heavyn just went into labor…ok…alright talk to you later bye”
26th Jul 2006, 5:31 AM
glad you updated
26th Jul 2006, 5:56 AM
Good update! It's very exciting!!! I hope everything goes well with the birth. And so good for her that she got her own apartment! :) :P
*Yawn* ... just got up. It's 5.52 AM here. :anime: :snore:
26th Jul 2006, 8:16 AM
Her mommies comming around yay Oh and devonte I missed him two was that her motther she called and is it a boy or girl so many questions make the next chapter real real long k
26th Jul 2006, 8:56 AM
Great update! I love your pictures...
26th Jul 2006, 10:59 AM
Ahhh I hope its Devonte's baby
26th Jul 2006, 1:09 PM
Her mommies comming around yay Oh and devonte I missed him two was that her motther she called and is it a boy or girl so many questions make the next chapter real real long k
I'm think she called her cousin, whose mom called Heavyn's mom.
Great updates Cinn.
26th Jul 2006, 2:06 PM
Wonderful update! More please! ;)
26th Jul 2006, 3:04 PM
I'm think she called her cousin, whose mom called Heavyn's mom.
Great updates Cinn.
Yeah that's what happened. On this part: “Evelyn” She was whispering “Heavyn just went into labor…ok…alright talk to you later bye”
I think she meant to put Eve instead of Evelyn. Evelyn is TaQuita's mom and Eve is Heavyn's mom.
26th Jul 2006, 3:06 PM
I'm think she called her cousin, whose mom called Heavyn's mom.
Great updates Cinn.
Yeah that's what happened. On this part: “Tell Heavyn I’ll be there to see her tomorrow!” Evelyn had to yell to her daughter who was already out the door. As soon as she heard the door close she picked up the phone
I think she meant to put Eve instead of Evelyn. Eve is TaQuita's mom and Evelyn is Heavyn's mom.
26th Jul 2006, 4:56 PM
Thank you everyone for the comments. I'll try and update tonight again.
Ok for the confusion. Thanks to Fexy Taquita and Heavyn's mother's name are almost the same. I get it confused when i write also. To clear things up- Eve is Heavyn's mother and Evelyn is Taquita's mother.
And when Heavyn went into labor she called Taquita and taquita told her mother (Evelyn) Evelyn called eve (Heavyn's mother) about heavyn going into labor.
*Sorry if i confused you guys even more.*
27th Jul 2006, 5:43 AM
Heavyn laid in the hospital bed facing the fact that she had just given birth to a 7lb 13 oz little girl. It was like a fantasy. She couldn’t believe that the baby was actually here. Taquita stayed with her the whole night. She was so happy to have TaQuita by her side. Everything was just like old times. She turned over to look into the bassinet and saw a bright eyed girl staring back at her. Her daydream was cut short when her mother walks into the room.
“Heavyn…um how are you?” Eve stood there looking at her daughter. She had missed so much in her life and felt like a total idiot. She looked right next to her daughter and saw the most beautiful baby in the world. She did not want to believe that she had let her pride stand in the way of watching the birth of her granddaughter.
Heavyn was caught off guard by her mother’s presence. “Hi mommy” she spoke very softly.
“I just came by to see how you were doing. Auntie Lyn called me and told me you had the baby.” She went to sit down next to her daughter. “I know things were rocky between the two of us but I just wanted to come and see my baby…I miss you pumpkin”
“Let’s not talk about this here ma. Let’s just enjoy this moment. I mean, you’re a grandma.”
Evelyn’s eyes were getting glossy. The way her baby was talking to her you would think that she was a ‘real’ adult. “I know this is supposed to be a happy occasion but I have to let this out.” She took a deep breath. “I’m so sorry Heavyn. I let my anger get the best of me. Your father has been trying to get me to call you for some time now, but I’m so stubborn. I love you so much; I just wanted more for you than what I had. I just knew that if you had a baby your life would be ruined. I felt like I had failed as a mother. We gave you everything, sent you to the best schools and you still got caught up. (She let out a little chuckle) ****, I had you fresh out of high school. My mother damn near threatened to kick me out too. I just want to tell you that I’m so sorry and I will never do anything like that to you again”
“You really hurt me ma. I mean you threw me out with nothing. I had no where to go or anything. You have no idea what I had to do to survive. But whatever, most of that is past me now. Without your help I have a small place and I’m planning on enrolling in school in the winter session.”
“I’m glad you didn’t get caught up in other things.” Evelyn had her head down and could not face her daughter. “Um…well your father and I wanted to give you your old car. I know it isn’t much but it’s yours and you really need it now.”
“Thank you ma, it would be a big help” Heavyn tried to muster up a smile, but inside she was still upset with her mother.
“Ok well I’ll let TaQuita bring the car by your house. Well I’ma get ready to leave. But I’ll talk to you soon. I really want to be a part of Miss Mahogani Alayna Rodriguez’s life.” Eve grabbed all of her things to leave. “I love you baby”
“I love you too mommy” Heavyn answered as she watched her mother walk out of the room. She lay in the bed and began to think how she was going to take care of a baby by her self. She looked over at the sleeping baby and began to smile. She couldn’t believe she was here. She made a vow to her self at that moment that she would do what ever she had to do to take care of her.
*2 years later*
“Ni Ni stop playin around and eat your food we runnin late!” Heavyn yelled as she got dressed. All of a sudden she heard a car honk for her down stairs. Heavyn stuck her head out the window and yelled “I’m comin down!” She picked her hair up into a pony tail, grabbed Mahogani and ran downstairs.
“What took you so long? I told you about havin’ me wait down here for you” Jerry said as he snatched the baby to put her in the car seat.
“Damn Jerry I came as fast as I could” Heavyn said while sucking her teeth. She threw the baby bag in the back seat and went to sit in the front.
Jerry is Heavyn’s “friend” she hooked up with him after she had the baby and he helps her out in anyway possible. After Heavyn had the baby the money that her grandmother gave her began to run thin. She didn’t have her high school diploma and had no way of making money. So she went back to work at the strip club while TaQuita watched the baby at night. There she met Jerry. He sort of “recruited” her in to the escort service. Jerry was a high class pimp and when he saw Heavyn he knew he had to have her. Stripping provided decent money but when Heavyn saw how much she could make with escorting she put everything aside and went straight forward into the game. But now that Devonte was coming out within a month she wanted out.
“Where’s Jerry” TaQuita asked as Heavyn walked through the door.
“He left…said he had business to take care of” Heavyn put Mahogani in Raiyelle’s room. “Girl you know he is stressing me the **** out. Wanting me to have like three last dates before I retire” I told him maybe two but you know how he is” Taquita was officially a welfare momma. Once she had the baby she got on every public assistance program she could and never turned back.
“I’m thinkin bout getting into the biz. Cuz Dre aint givin me money no more and you know I needs my money.” She let out a little chuckle
“Please girl, you know you aint doin this. You can’t let things get to you easily and you know you always ready for a fight.” The two laughed a bit, and talked while the girls played.
Devonte was a week away from coming home. Heavyn had already bought him a whole new wardrobe and bought him a little something to drive around in. She was so excited. She still visited him frequently and Mahogani surely knew who her daddy was. DeVonte knew about Heavyn’s profession but he is t he one who told her that she had to stop before he came home. He knew she was a soldier and had to handle hers while he was gone but since he was going to be back now there wasn’t a need for all of that.
Heavyn sat at Jerry’s house waiting for her last date to arrive. She sat there in her ball room gown thinking how happy she was to stop doing this.
“I cant believe you leavin me girl, you made me a lot of money.” Jerry sat down next to her.
“You know every good thing comes to an end sometime” She looked at him with her big eyes and sparkling smile. She was gonna miss him too. He had been her family for two years and he has always been good to her. He never made her do anything she didn’t want to. Heavyn was his baby girl.
Just then the phone rang and it was time for Heavyn to go. “Don’t be a stranger, call if you need anything” Heavyn smiled and gave him a big hug. Before she walked out of the apartment she took one last look at Jerry and the other girls. It was a bitter sweet parting but she was happy. She was finally ready and able to start her life
Heavyn sat in the car nervously. Mahogani was getting restless so Heavyn let her play in front of the car while she smoked a cigarette. She had a knot in her stomach the whole day. She couldn’t believe the day was finally here. Her body jumped when she heard the large gate open. She dropped her cigarette when she saw a tall, handsome, very muscular man come from within the gate. Heavyn started crying, it was him. She had waited so long for him and he was finally here. Heavyn ran to him and gave him the sloppiest, wettest kiss ever.
27th Jul 2006, 5:53 AM
good update *gives a brownie*
27th Jul 2006, 6:26 AM
Oooh what a great update! I really loved it. Although I had a fear that it wouldn't be so easy for Heavyn to stop working for Jerry. Sometimes these things are hard to get out of.
But, hey! Letting Mahogani playing in front of the car? That's pretty dangerous in my mind... :blink: Please don't let anything happen to the sweet little girl. :)
Waiting for another update while eating cookies - hands out cookies for other people that are waiting. :D
27th Jul 2006, 6:45 AM
I assure you Mahogani was safe. the car was parked and heavyn was just waiting for Devonte.
*Hmm was it really that easy fo heavyn to leave?*
27th Jul 2006, 6:48 AM
Oh, I meant, sometimes the 'pimp' won't let the girls leave. Well...
I was just thinking, if perhaps, well, this seems stupid, but if she was so caught up in DeVonte's return, she might forget about Mahogani and begin driving... aah, you probably don't just forget about your child though. ;)
27th Jul 2006, 7:23 AM
Nicole this very good giirl i like it so much ...
ur baby cuz
27th Jul 2006, 4:18 PM
Great update cinnamin
27th Jul 2006, 4:45 PM
that was really good!
i hope there arent many bad surprises coming up!!
28th Jul 2006, 12:24 AM
Great update mahogani is so cute ain't that how you spell her name hahaha to lazy to get up and look
28th Jul 2006, 12:33 AM
Great update cn't wait for the next
12th Aug 2006, 6:57 AM
I have created a short video to go along with the story. You can find it in the Sim Movies section. Hope you guys enjoy it
29th Aug 2006, 6:47 AM
"I love you too" He said as he embraced her into his arms "I missed you so much" He kissed her on the forehead. He looked around "Where's Mahogani?" Heavyn looked at him, smiled and moved out the way so Devonte would see his daughter in full view. When he saw the precious little baby sitting there smiling at him a huge smile came
across his face. He walked over to her to pick her up.
"Mommy!!!" Mahogani ran to her mother.
"Its ok NiNi, that's daddy." She looked at her daughter who was fidgeting in her arms. "Bo-Bo, remember we saw pictures of daddy?" Mahogani looked at Heavyn with a blank expression on her face. Heavyn turned to Devonte "I should have brought her to visits. She don't even know you"
Devonte walked up to Heavyn and held them close. "Its alright, she'll get used to me." He kissed Mahogani on the forhead and they got into the car.
They were silent on the drive home. Devonte looked out the window looking at everything. He felt strange being out. He had been in jail for two and a half years and everything was different. When they pulled up in front of Heavyn's Apartment He was a little taken back. It wasn't the best looking building but he decided to hold his toungue
and proceed into the apartment. Upon entering it was totally different. Heavyn may have lived in the ghetto but the inside of her apartment was nothing but luxury.
"This is nice baby" Devonte said as he walked around. He looked over at the big screen T.V. then over to the state of the art sound system.
"You like it?" Jerry helped me pick out everything.
Devonte bit his lip. "You don't work for him no more right?"
"Oh course not. I quit when I knew you were coming home." Heavyn walked over to Devonte. "I just did what I had to do while you were gone but all of that is over now" She ran her hand up and down his chest.
"You starting something?" He asked as he watched her hand disappear under his shirt. He took his hand and lifted her chin. He gave her a soft peck on the cheek, then on the mouth. Before they knew it he had her in the room on the bed.
"Oh wait!" Heavyn yelled as she jumped up. "Let me put NiNi down for her nap" She ran into the living room to find Mahogani curled up on the floor sleeping in the corner. She picked up her baby girl and put her into the playpen that she had in the living room. She went back into the bedroom to find Devonte waiting for her. "Now where were we?"
She crawled back up the bed. He kissed her long and hard. "I love you" She looked at him and smiled. She couldn't believe that he was actually there in her arm. She let back and savored every moment.
The next day Devonte woke up bright and early to find Mahogani climbing out of her crib. Just when he saw her about to fall out he ran to catch her. He looked into her green eyes and his heart melt. This little girl was a spitting image of him. “Hi baby girl, I’m daddy” He spoke to her. She looked at him confused. He held her for a minute and thought to himself for a second. He then put her down and walked over to Heavyn who was still sleeping. He bent down to give her a kiss. When she felt his soft lips against her face, she turned to look at him. She smiled when she saw him standing in front of her. “Good morning”
She sat up to the sound of his voice. “Hey baby. What you doin up so early?” She asked while wiping the sleep from her eyes.
He gently moved the hair out of her face. “I’m gonna take NiNi to the park. I want to have some one on one time with her. Plus it will give you some time alone.”
Heavyn sat up a little uneasy about it but she figured that Devonte was Mahogani’s father. “Ok, I need to do some shopping anyways”
“Good” Devonte said as he got up to get Mahogani dressed.
They got to the park around 10am and there was no one around. Devonte thought it was kind of strange but then realized that it was a Wednesday morning and people were probably at work. He went straight over to the swings and found a clean seat for NiNi. He pushed her in the swing and watched her giggle. For the first time he felt like he was really a father.
“Is that my little girl NiNi?” A man said as he approached Devonte and Mahogani.
Devonte looked at this man and could not place him in his mind. The man got closer and kept smiling at Mahogani without looking at Devonte. When he got close Devonte took NiNi out of the swing. The man looked at Devonte and sucked his teeth. “Who you? And how you know mah daughter?”
*Laughing* “Hmm you must be daddy. I heard a lot about you. Well, I’m the one that’s been playin daddy while you was locked up. You know someone had to do the job” The man continued to eye Devonte
Devonte was ready to kill this man. He didn’t know who he was but how dare he disrespect him like that? “Yo, how you gon step to me like that? Who the F**k are you?”
“Don’t act like you don’t know” The guy looked at Devonte dead in the eyes. “Oh and tell ya’ girl she needs to come check me. Tell her I miss that” He began licking his lips and grabbing his crotch.
Devonte put Mahogani down and went to swing on the man. But before he was able to do anything he was stopped by cold steel against his head. The man had come to the park with 3 big brawly guys. Devonte looked down at Mahogani who was now crying. He put his hands up as to say he surrendered “Aight, yo I got mah daughter here”
The man began laughing “You better understand who runs this sh*t” He looked at Mahogani and smiled “Bye NiNi, Daddy will be by later” He looked at Devonte who was now enraged with anger and gave him a wink. Devonte looked at him and nodded. The man laughed and instructed his guards to leave.
Once out of sight Devonte grabbed NiNi and went to the nearest pay phone. “Ay yo Ron. Whats good homey? I got some business to take care of…aight…you pick me up at the park, I need to drop NiNi off…hurry up its important.” Devonte hung up the phone and sat on the park bench waiting for Ron to pick him up.
30th Aug 2006, 5:24 AM
It seemed like it took forever for Ron to get there. “Yo, what took you so long?” Devonte said while pulling Mahogani out of the stroller.
Ron walked around him and folded the stroller and put it in the back seat. “I was with shorty, whats goin on?”
Positioning himself in the car with Mahogani in his lap he said “Yo, that dude Jerry gotta get laid out. Dude came up here talk sh*t and had the nerve to pull a burner out on me with mah seed standin right there”
Ron looked over at him “What you talking bout doin?”
“What you think?” Devonte looked at him with a matter of factly expression.
Ron gave him a nod and they drove off. Ron needed Devonte close to him so they could handle some business so he took Devonte to Uniqua’s house. “Yo, just chill up here so I can get some things together. I’ll call you in like a hour.”
“Yo, call on my mother’s phone. I aint get a cell yet.” Devonte said as Ron drove off. He turned to the building and took a deep breath. He went to walk into the building when he heard a voice.
“Yo, whats good homey?” a tall slim guy walked up to Devonte.
Devonte still upset. Turned around to find one of his former soldiers standing there. “Yo, what up, Black?”
“Chillin, when you got out?” Black went to help Devonte carry the stroller to the building.
“Yesterday. So how you holdin up?” Devonte asked while still trying to adjust NiNi on his shoulder.
“Thing been good. I been putting in a little work for Quan and them. Nah mean fam, we still gotta eat.” Black was a little ashamed that he went to work for someone else while Devonte was away
“Nah homes, you had to handle ya sh*t. But yo, I need you right now. I have to put a team together. You know, get back out there.”
“Whatever you need D. you know I got you.” Black placed the stroller down in front of Uniqua’s door. He smoothed Mahogani’s hair and said “She’s beautiful D.”
Devonte couldn’t do anything but smile as he took his key out to open the door.
Uniqua a little alarmed but the sound of the opening door. “Who dat?” She yelled from the top of her lungs. She put on her bathrobe and walked out into the living room. When she saw Devonte pulling a now awake Mahogani on the floor she began to cry. “Tae-tae is that you?”
Devonte looked up and saw a woman standing there looking a mess. Her hair was all over her head and her clothes looked filthy. “Hi Ma” He said as he walked his way to her to give her a hug and kiss. When he got close to her she smelled horrible. After he hugged her he pulled back and took a good look at his mother. She had more wrinkles than he could remember. Her front teeth were chipped and she stunk. He began to form tears as he realized that his mother was strung out.
She saw her son get a teary eyed so she tried to smooth her hair out and straighten her clothes. “You aint even tell me when you was getting home. I could have fixed myself up a little”
He forced a smile “Nah ma, its ok.” He took one last look at his mother and went over to the couch. He pulled NiNi onto his lap and turned on Dora.
Uniqua walked around the couch and looked at her son. She then looked at the little girl in his lap and couldn’t believe her eyes. It was her grandchild. She walked up to the little girl and went to grab her out of Devonte’s lap.
Devonte looked at his mother like her hands were alien and pushed her hand away. “Don’t touch my daughter”. He then turned back to the T.V.
“That’s my grand child Devonte. Let me hold her.” Uniqua was pleading with him.
Devonte stood up and held NiNi close to him. “Look at you ma. You dirty and you stink. You aint touchin my child.” He began to pack up NiNi’s stuff. “You strung the **** out! What happened?” he looked at his mother who was now crying.
“You were my better half. I fell apart when you left me.” She went to sit on the couch.
With no sympathy he responded “Yea what ever. Get yourself together and talk to me about seeing your grandchild.” He walked towards the door. “I’m out!” When he got down stairs he couldn’t believe what he had just seen. He wasn’t sure what to do while he waited for Ron to come back to he went over to his girl Keelah’s house. He walked up the stairs and could smell the smoke of what they had been smoking.
*Bang Bang Bang*
“Who?” Keelah yelled
“It’s D.! Open the door!”
“Whats good my homey” Keelah opened the door and embraced her long time friend.
“I’m good, you?” Devonte asked while walking into the house.
“Some ol, same ol. That’s you right there?” Refering to Mahogani.
“Yea Kee, this is Mahogani” He took NiNi out the stroller to let her walk around. While sitting down he said “Yo, I just seen my moms. Damn she look messed up.” He was shaking his head.
“Yeah, she been like that for a minute.” Keelah went into kitchen to pour NiNi some juice. “She ate?” she yelled
“Nah” D.yelled back.
“Aight, bring her in the kitchen and go ahead in the back with luke and dem.” Keelah said while getting the ingredients to make a sandwich.
When Devonte got to the back room he couldn’t hardly get into the room with all the smoke. When he opened the door he was greeted but all of his old friends. He sat down and drank while they all reminisced on past event.
30th Aug 2006, 7:24 AM
UGH!! Uniqua looks a hot d*mn mess. Nini is so cute.
30th Aug 2006, 12:12 PM
Weeee, updates! I loved them! :D
Though I'm not too fond of how things are going... I smell trouble! Exciting! More updates, please. :P
30th Aug 2006, 12:23 PM
cool update!but i see trouble ahead! :mag:
1st Sep 2006, 7:05 AM
Thank you. I'll try and get the story updated as soon as possible. I'm glad you guys are liking the story. There will sure be more drama to come.
18th Sep 2006, 12:49 AM
8th Oct 2006, 7:05 AM
When Devonte got to the back room he couldn’t hardly get into the room with all the smoke. When he opened the door he was greeted but all of his old friends. He sat down and drank while they all reminisced on past event.
About an hour had passed when there was a knock on the door. Keelah had just put NiNi down for a nap and had joined the fellas in the back. Everyone in the room was so relaxed that no one bothered to get up to get the door.
“Kee, get the door.” Luke said while lying back on the bed.
Sighing “I have to do everything. Ya’ll some lazy people” Keelah walked into the living room to answer the door. She peeked over on the couch to see if Mahogani was still sleep. When she saw that she was she went over to the door. She peeked through to see Ron standing in front. She swung the door open and jumped on Ron.
Ron picked Keelah up and twirled her around. He put her down and gave her a kiss on the forehead. “What’s good Kee?” He looked her up and down. “How you been?”
“I been good Ron.” She had a huge grin on her face. “You see D. here with his little girl” She said gesturing to Mahogani.
“Yeah, I was lookin for him.” He heard all the guys in the back laughing and began to walk in that direction. “Keelah?” He turned around “You still put in work?”
“What type of question is that?” She said as she patted her chest. Keelah was known for slicing people with straight razors that she kept in her bra.
*Chuckling* “Aight, we gon have to get up” Ron said as he went into the back room. Once in there he told Devonte that they had to leave to handle some business. Devonte packed up NiNi and left with Ron.
As Ron drove Devonte home they talked about what they were going to do to get Jerry back. By the time they had thought of a perfect plan they were already in front of the house. “Aight, yo I’ma catch up with you later this week. I gotta talk to Keelah and see if she down wit it.”
“Aight, take care” Ron said as he watched Devonte struggle to the door with Mahogani in his arms.
Devonte looked back at the car one last time and took a deep breath. He thought he would stay straight once he came home, but he couldn’t let someone disrespect him or his family. He looked at his daughter and made a vow to protect her any way possible. He walked up the stairs and in to the elevator. When he got in front of the door he went to search for his key when the door swung wide open. “Hey baby” Devonte looked at Heavyn who looked a mess.
“Where the hell were you?” Heavyn yelled as she snatched Mahogani out of Devonte’s arm. She looked at him with death in her eyes and turned into the apartment. “I cant believe I let you take her.” She put Mahogani in her crib and turned back around to Devonte who was closing the door and putting the stroller down. “I thought you was just going to the store. What happened? It’s 11:30pm” She said pointing to the clock.
“Yo, what you mean ‘let me take her’? That’s my daughter too!” He yelled at her. “I wouldn’t have been out so damn long if ya’ lil boyfriend didn’t get all up in mah face” He looked at Heavyn who now had a confused look on her face. “Oh you don’t know who I’m talking bout? Well ya boy Jerry rolled up on me while I was in the park wit NiNi.”
“Oh my god, what did you do? You don’t know him, he will hurt all of us” Heavyn was scared now. She began pacing back and forth. “Vonte, please if you see him again just walk the other way. I’ll handle everything”
“You real funny” He said very sarcastically. “Nah, you gone leave him alone. I better not see you wit him ever, don’t answer his calls or nothing.” He looked at Heavyn who was scared. He walked over to her and grabbed her by the chin “You hear me?”
She snatched away “Yea” She walked into the room to check on Mahogani. She looked at her daughter, she was an innocent participant in what she already knew was going to be trouble. She sat on the bed and cried until she felt a hand on her face. She looked up and Devonte was standing there. He pulled her up and hugged her close. “I’m sorry, I don’t know what to do.” Devonte didn’t say a word. He just held her close.
The next day Heavyn woke up early to make breakfast for her family. While making the eggs she felt Devonte come from behind and wrap his arms around her waist. “Mmm, that smells good.”
“Boy, you don’t know. I can burn in the kitchen” She began laughing
He rubbed her stomach. “So you gon give me a little boy?”
She turned around to face him “If that’s what you want” She had a smirk on her face. She noticed how cute he was when he smiled. He reached behind her to grab a piece of bacon. “Eww, you make me sick” she said as she playfully pushed him away.
About 6 months had gone by and there was no word about Jerry. Heavyn felt as though her life was perfect, she had her little girl who was turning three and was 4 months pregnant with the baby boy Devonte wanted. Not to mention Devonte was doing really good at the construction job Michael (Heavyn’s father) had lined up for him. She finally got TaQuita and Devonte on talking terms, things were just really good right now.
“Hurry up Heavyn you takin mad long” Ayliah yelled from the living room. “You gone make us late”
“Ya sister is gonna be late for her own funeral” Taquita said as Heavyn rushed out of the bathroom.
“Ya’ll tryin to make me look busted for my own parents anniversary party.” Heavyn said as she grabbed NiNi’s hand and walked out the house. The walked out the building and everyone stopped in their tracks. Heavyn almost fell on top of Ayliah because of the abrupt stop. “What the hell is your problem?” She asked her sister, but Ayliah didn’t answer so Heavyn looked in the direction that Ayliah was looking at to see what the hold up was. This was a sight that Heavyn surely did not want to see. Devonte was in front of the building hugging a female who was dressed provocatively. Devonte felt someone staring at him and turned around. He saw Heavyn there with tears running down her face. The scene didn’t look well and Devonte knew it.
13th Oct 2006, 12:11 AM
who is that damn tell me please :fly
13th Oct 2006, 2:22 AM
They is Kinda CLOSE! Don't make me have to cut somebody!
29th Dec 2006, 2:54 AM
It seems like i dragged this story out for so long and i apologize for that. I hope you guys enjoy the ending. Everyone looks alittle different because i dont have their skin tones anymore due to a system crash. Well here goes nothing.
Devonte quickly snatched away from the girl and ran to Heavyn. “Baby it not what you think”
“Not what I think?” She looked at the girl who seemed to have a worried look on her face. “What the hell is goin on?”
“C’mon let go inside to talk” He escorted Heavyn back in the building and gestured the girl to follow them. When they got in the apartment they all sat on the couch. “Baby, this is Keelah my best friend since diapers. I know I haven’t told you about her but that’s because right now we handling some business” Heavyn looked at Keelah who was nodding her head in assurance. “Well you know that dude Jerry been messin wit me ever since that day at the park. So Kee been workin for him so we can handle him right.”
“I thought all of this was over” Heavyn was confused. She thought the whole fiasco with Jerry just blew over.
“Naw, he still comes to my job and stuff messin wit me. One day when I went to pick up NiNi from day care and he was there claiming to be the baby’s father. Heavyn I know you didn’t want all of this madness but yo this has to stop.” Heavyn nodded her head knowing that something had to be done.
Heavyn sat there looking at Devonte. He was talking with so much passion, she thought to herself that what he was saying must be the truth. She wasn’t really feeling the plan but she also knew that everything Jerry was doing was wrong. In the middle of Devonte talking Heavyn got up and walked to the door. Before she opened it she stopped and took a deep breath. “I hope you know what you are doing” She looked Devonte in the eyes and walked out. When she got down stairs Ayliah was standing there with her hands on her hips.
“Who the hell was she?”
That statement caught Heavyn off guard, “Oh, just some hood chick he grew up with, C’mon let go before we really be late”
3 years had past and Heavyn had heard nothing about Jerry since that day. Devonte never talked about it and she had only seen that girl Keelah like twice after that. Her life was finally coming together. She was getting married tomorrow and everything was the way it was supposed to be. She looked over at her daughter and saw so much of Devonte in her. She loved Mahogani and was so glad that she was finally able to give Mahogani the life she always dreamed of for her. She had her perfect family A beautiful little girl and the son that Devonte always wanted Devonte jr. The time was finally here and she was so happy to complete her family.
“Mommy can I wear my hair down?” Nini asked her mother.
Heavyn looked at her mother and they both started laughing “Girl your hair is too thick for all of that” Evelyn looked at her grandbaby smiling in approval.
“Aw man, Raiyelle is gonna have her hair down” Nini crossed her arms and walked to her room
“She is growing up so nice” Evelyn said as she picked up toys from the living room. “I love you so much Heavyn. I’m really happy for you. I just wish your father could be here to see how far you have come”
“I know ma, I can’t believe its been a year since he died.” Heavyn started tearing up until she heard Jr. crying in the room. She went in grabbed her baby and sobbed a little.
“We out for tonight. Next week we gonna hit that dude Jerry hard.” Devonte looked at the crew he assembled. He wanted to take Jerry and his peoples out in one shot. It had been years in the making and now the time had finally come. Keelah had gotten in close enough to Jerry to know his whole operation. She found out where all of his money was and the plan was to clean him out.
“I can’t believe we almost done.” Keelah said as she poured her grey goose. She put the glass up to toast “This is to my dudes. I’ll ride for ya’ll and die for ya’ll” Everyone toasted in triumph.
“Yo, I’m out homes” Black stood up with his drink and walked over to Devonte “I’ll be there tomorrow”
“You betta be…Yo! And on time!” Devonte yelled after his friend who was almost out the door. Devonte stood up and walked over to Keelah and gave her a really long hug. “I love you Kee, we made it.”
“I love you too big head” Kee held Devonte tight. When she let go she gave him a soft kiss. She watched as he walked away.
“So what are you telling me? That little girl is planning an attack on me?” Jerry asked the person sitting in his office.
“That’s what I’ve heard around the hood. You’ve been nothing but good to me and its wrong to bite the hand that feeds you, Nah mean?” The person said to Jerry “I mean you gave me some work when I was down and now I’m repaying you”
“Thank you, I respect that. Trust me you will be well reimbursed for this look out” Jerry motioned to his guard by the door. “Carlos get everyone we need to have a meeting” He turned his attention back to his guest. “Very good work” He got up and walked over to them. He put his hand on their face and kissed their lips gently. “TaQuita, you came in handy. But like I said before I really didn’t want you to work for me but I know you would come to good use. Now that you have fulfilled your purpose I no longer need you.”
“What are you talking about? I did you a favor! I traded me family for you and in exchange you do this?” TaQuita was highly upset. She thought Jerry was going to pay her handsomely for giving him this info.
Jerry laughed in her face; he grabbed her to give her a hug and then stabbed a knife in her back. He watched as TaQuita’s body fell to the floor. “Carlos, I have some garbage in my office can you take it out!” Jerry yelled.
“Mommy wake up, It the weddin” Mahogani was jumping on Heavyn’s bed. “I get to look pretty today”
Heavyn opened her eyes and saw her beautiful little girl and couldn’t help but to smile. “Yes it is baby” Heavyn got up and went straight to the kitchen so she could call her mother.
“Hello?” a very anxious voice answered
“Hi, mommy?” Heavyn asked as if she was unsure she had the right number
“Yes baby. Has TaQuita called you?”
“No I aint speak to her since the day before yesterday” Heavyn went to sit down “Why is she missing?”
“Well she didn’t come to pick the baby up last night and when Eve calls her it goes straight to voicemail.”
“This what I hate about her. She gon play a no show on the day of my wedding?” She couldn’t believe her cousin was doing this to her. “Whatever, forget about her. I need you over here to help me”
“Heavyn, how can you be so cold.?”
“Cuz this isn’t the first time she’s done this. Remember last year for my birthday when she didn’t show up? Said she forgot. Mommy today is way too important for me to wait around on her.” Heavyn was getting tired of TaQuita’s childish ways.
“Yea you right, I’ll be over there in a minute” Evelyn hung up the phone.
Heavyn sat back and rolled her eyes. “I can’t ever do anything positive without her messing me up”
“Who?” Mahogani asked
“No one. Come on lets go take a shower” Heavyn said escorting her little girl to the bathroom.
“Ayliah, stop crying.” Heavyn pleaded with her sister.
“You look so pretty, I can’t help it.” She got up and hugged her sister.
“Wait hold on let me get this on camera…I can’t believe my baby is getting married” Evelyn said as she pulled the camcorder out of her bag.
“Ay bendito, ju look so pretty”. Olga has never seen her granddaughter so dressed up.
Heavyn began to tear up. “Stop cryin, ya’ll gon mess up ya’ makeup”. Eve said “Ya’ll a trip.” She went to go fix Mahogani’s dress. She looked up at Heavyn “I don’t know where my daughter is”
“I’m sorry auntie but you know I cant wait for her”
“No, I know baby.” This is your day.
“Come everyone. Places places.” The wedding planner said to everyone.
“Ready?” Evelyn asked her daughter
“As ready as I’ll ever be” Heavyn took a very deep breath and proceeded to walk toward the aisle. The song “Dangerously in Love” played by Beyonce. She looked down the aisle and saw Devonte standing there more handsome than she could remember. Everything was perfect until she saw Devonte’s smile turn to anger. She couldn’t figure out what was wrong.
All of a sudden Devonte yelled “Get the kids!”
Heavyn turned around and saw Jerry standing a few feet behind her holding something in his hand. He stood there with about 10 other guys. When she actually did focus on what he was holding she realized that it was TaQuita’s head. Before she got a chance to scream Devonte had grabbed her and were running for cover. Behind the alter Heavyn was able to see everything. There was blood everywhere with Ron, Black and Keelah doing their fair share of it. Heavyn turned to side to grab Devonte and he wasn’t there. Everything was moving in slow motion when it seemed like one gun shot seemed much louder than the rest. She looked out of the side of the alter to see Devonte’s body fall to the ground. Her eyes focused on Devonte then up to the person who shot him. It was Jerry. Heavyn ran from behind the alter over to Devonte who was now covered in blood. She held his head as she screamed to god. When she heard his voice
“You chose him over me, so this is what you get” Jerry said very coldly
Heavyn with her head still down closed her eyes very tight and slid the gun that Devonte had out of his hand. She was ready to die and figured she probably would. Without hesitating she reached up and pulled the trigger 3 times. She wasn’t sure if she hit him or not because she still had her eyes closed. When she finally did open her eyes she opened them to 5 police officers pointing guns at her.
“Lower your weapon ma’am” One officer said.
She looked down and saw Jerry lying in a pool of blood. She dropped the gun and started crying. The police picked her up and escorted her to the squad car. She looked out the window so she could watch as they lifted Devonte’s body from the ground and put him in an ambulance.
About two months had passed and it was finally the day the let Heavyn out of the mental ward of the hospital. After the day of the wedding she became violent and wouldn’t talk to anyone. About two weeks ago she began to come around talking and calming down a lot. She was more or less in her right state of mind now.
“Mrs. Rodriguez are you ready to leave?’ A nurse asked her.
“I can wait to get home and see my babies. I’ve been in seclusion from them for so long.” Heavyn had a huge smile on her face.
“All right then, your family is waiting for you.” The nurse grabbed Heavyn’s bag and walked her out the room.
As they turned the corner she saw her mom standing there with flowers in her hand. The sight was taken away she saw her children running toward her. She picked up her baby boy and began crying. He was a spitting image of his father. All she saw was Devonte and she couldn’t help it. She held the baby tighter and tighter
“What you cryin for Mrs. Rodriguez? Your family is all here for you”
Heavyn lifted her head. The voice was very familiar but it made her cry even more. She looked up and saw him there in front of her. The love of her life. She nearly dropped her son when she went to give him a hug “I thought you were dead” She held on to Devonte so tight.
“Nah, baby never that. I told you I’ll never leave you.” He hugged her a little tighter. “Oh not too tight babes, you know I’m still in rehab”
She just looked at him with a huge smile and nodded.
When they got home she walked around looking at everything, so thank full that the majority of her family made it through that horrible day. When TaQuita came to her mind she looked at Raiyelle.
“Raiyelle baby come here” She called over to her
The little girl came over “Yes Auntie?”
“You know auntie loves you right?”
“Uh huh. That why I live with you now” she said very innocently.
Heavyn was a little confused. Devonte looked at her and sat right next to her. He grabbed Heavyns hand “Well, when I got shot I needed a blood transfusion. They were told to test my daughter since she was the closest blood relative to me. The only thing was they tested Raiyelle instead.” He looked at Heavyn who was even more confused. “And it turned out that she was a match. Raiyelle is actually my daughter too.”
Heavyn looked at the little girl and remembered that night when everything started with TaQuita, the day she raped Devonte. She looked at the little girls and for the first time realized that they looked exactly alike. “I love you Devonte, as long as I have you I don’t care about anything”
29th Dec 2006, 8:52 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. I JUST found this story. It's awesome!!
29th Dec 2006, 9:34 AM
WOW, what an ending, that was so great, I am sad to see this end, but that was a pretty amazing ending.
29th Dec 2006, 3:09 PM
Awwwww...that was such a cute ending. Bravo Bravo!
29th Dec 2006, 4:01 PM
I'm glad you all liked my story. I had alot of fun writing it. I actually and writing another sim story that is almost finished. I'm still debating on whether or not i should post it. If i do post it I promise i will not let it drag on like this one. lol
30th Dec 2006, 6:12 AM
GIRL, i never thought this would end this way. That was so good.
31st Dec 2006, 9:10 AM
great GREAT story! I was so scared that Devonte was gunna end up dead! I'm glad they made & everything. Their family is so cute! i'm sad to see this end, even though it ended on a happy note!
13th Jan 2007, 8:31 AM
hey....great ending....i mean it was a blood bath and everything....but after that the ending itself was good....i'm glad that heavyn and devonte are happy now....i started reading it when you first wrote...but have stop and now just finished the story.....i had a suspicion that raiyelle was devonte's daughter....glad to find out i was correct...
13th Jan 2007, 2:18 PM
Oh, I hadn't even seen the ending - it was great! Wow. I'm glad it turned out okay. Me all happy now. :)
4th Jun 2007, 1:10 AM
I just read the whole thing. That dang on TaQuita was SOOO WRONG...so was Jamel. The two girls did look alike. I was wondering when they were going to notice. :) Good story... I loved reading it.
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