View Full Version : Sweet Revenge? (Updated, Chpt 14/Epilog up!)
13th May 2007, 04:03 AM
This is the second part of Naive Ambitions. I tried to write this as an individual story, filling in as much of the background information as possible from the first one. If you want to find out more background information please read the first story Naive Ambitions.
As always if you read this story, comments are appreciated and if you really
like it feel free to rate. Enjoy!
13th May 2007, 04:05 AM
13th May 2007, 08:14 AM
Hmm, I wonder if Kaitlyn's pregnant. And I also wonder if Gerome will come back somehow. Great update!!!
13th May 2007, 03:20 PM
Stormy you changed your avatar. I like it.
13th May 2007, 05:08 PM
14th May 2007, 01:52 AM
I'm going to update tonight because I'm not sure if I'll have time tomorrow.
Thanks for the comment.
14th May 2007, 02:21 AM
I knew she was pregnant! At least she has everything she needs to raise the baby. Oh yeah, is she going to have more than one baby? Because in the second to the last picture, you said, "She would raise her babies in a new home." Just wondering. Great update!
14th May 2007, 01:13 PM
Not telling....screwed that up though didn't I. :D
14th May 2007, 04:21 PM
Lol it's ok.
14th May 2007, 08:08 PM
I liked your first story, this looks like it's going to be good too. :)
15th May 2007, 01:15 PM
Thanks romyhorse. Hope to update sometime today.
16th May 2007, 01:46 PM
Sorry this update took a little longer than planned. Enjoy!
16th May 2007, 04:16 PM
Wow, I hope they find Jayna! Another great update!
17th May 2007, 01:21 PM
Thanks for the comments everyone.
17th May 2007, 04:42 PM
Aww twins! Yay! I have to say you're a very creative writer! Keep it up!
17th May 2007, 11:59 PM
Thanks Stormy appreciate it.
19th May 2007, 06:34 PM
27th May 2007, 02:54 PM
Hopefully updates this week. Been painting my home.
28th May 2007, 08:41 AM
This is too good. Love the layout. I can't wait for an update! :D
::subscribes and rates a 5::
28th May 2007, 09:12 AM
Whoa the daughter of Gerome and Latasia? *Squels with excitement* I need another update asap! Awesome job!
29th May 2007, 01:25 PM
Thanks for the rating and all the comments everyone. I plan on taking pics tonight so hopefully update tomorrow.
29th May 2007, 03:15 PM
Eeeee, I can't believe I only just noticed this! Yay, twins! Yay, Fantasia! Yay, this story rocks! :D Can't wait for more!
29th May 2007, 03:46 PM
:howdy: Thanks Loco!
31st May 2007, 03:15 PM
I have the lair created and can begin taking pictures. I've been working on update it's just taking longer than I thought. Lifes' interuptions. Thanks everyone for reading and commenting.
1st Jun 2007, 07:00 PM
Here's an update....thanks everyone for being soooo patient.
1st Jun 2007, 08:01 PM
Oooh, love it! Go Fantasia (which is such an awesome name :D)! Great update, can't wait for more!
1st Jun 2007, 08:13 PM
An update! Great, can't wait to see how it turns out.
1st Jun 2007, 08:36 PM
Really, really nice update! I feel so bad for Fantasia.
5th Jun 2007, 07:09 PM
Since both chapters are shorter..I doubled my update, chapters 7 and 8.
Oooooo poetic. Thanks for reading everyone.....don't forget to leave me a comment. I enjoy reading everyones' thoughts.
5th Jun 2007, 09:26 PM
Awww! That last line made me smile. It's all very tense... great update, it's great how things are progressing! :D
5th Jun 2007, 10:09 PM
Aww the two giggle worms! *Cries* I got a giggle worm inside of me, too. Great update!
5th Jun 2007, 10:11 PM
Uber Cool Will Be Reading This, Your A Goos Writer ;)
5th Jun 2007, 10:12 PM
Thanks stormy and loco and randomness. I appreciate you all reading, we're almost done with this story. Update probably tomorrow.
6th Jun 2007, 12:28 AM
Looking forward to seeing how it all turns out. Great update :)
6th Jun 2007, 02:53 AM
6th Jun 2007, 08:48 PM
Ok here's another update. Enjoy!
6th Jun 2007, 09:25 PM
*Gasp* She's going to take her babies from her?! Why? Did I miss something?! That's terrible! Omg update asap please!
7th Jun 2007, 12:25 PM
Oooh, scary... but it sounds like their plan's going to work. And yay, ickleuns! :D Update soon, that was awesome!
7th Jun 2007, 12:27 PM
Looking forward to see how it's all going to turn out :)
7th Jun 2007, 07:51 PM
7th Jun 2007, 07:54 PM
7th Jun 2007, 08:14 PM
EEEEE! YAY! But... Fantasia... :( Ah, well, Latasia's gone! ... I hope... Absolutely wonderful update! :D
7th Jun 2007, 08:30 PM
Thanks Loco. Glad you liked it. A few twist and turns left, then it's over. Not sure if I'll add another book or not.
11th Jun 2007, 01:10 PM
One more update and it's ended. Thanks everyone for reading.
11th Jun 2007, 04:05 PM
EEEEE! HE'S BACK! That actually made me grin so much. YAY! It's all okay again! :D Fantastic updates! :D
11th Jun 2007, 04:24 PM
Yay he's alive! *Runs around the room screaming "he's alive!"*
AWESOME updates!! I really enjoyed this story!
11th Jun 2007, 05:07 PM
Thanks. I have two more chapters, probably be up tomorrow. I just couldn't leave Gerome dead. Not with the twins. :thumb:
12th Jun 2007, 01:36 PM
Thanks to all the creators who make the fabulous things for all of us to use.
Thank you to all the readers. This was fun and I learned so much.
12th Jun 2007, 03:14 PM
I like your story. I have been reading for sometime. This story did sound interesting by the title, but this story is beyond interesting.
12th Jun 2007, 04:12 PM
Thanks, it's always good to hear from people who are reading.
12th Jun 2007, 04:36 PM
YAY! Awww, they're all so cute! Love the names, that's so clever. ;) And eeee, Fantasia! Yay! Aww, it's such a shame that that's the end... but it was worth every minute of it. :D :D Thank you so much for sharing this lovely story with us!
12th Jun 2007, 04:44 PM
You are more than welcome, thanks for reading.
12th Jun 2007, 05:27 PM
:popcorn:.....What? It's over? :blink:...It can't be over! I was enjoying this so much! Oh well. Awesome, awesome, awesome job, cari!!! :clap:
12th Jun 2007, 05:57 PM
Thanks Stormy....waiting for your sequel.
12th Jun 2007, 08:43 PM
Ooh, I just got caught up! I was so happy when Gerome appeared :) Great story, I loved the ghost at the wedding.
12th Jun 2007, 08:48 PM
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