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Weeaboo
16th May 2010, 2:54 AM
I've been working on a TS2 Kingdom Hearts Eyes series. So far, I have an almost perfect Ansem the Wise.

I was wondering, from what you can see, is there anything else needed to make them better?

Here are some comparison photos:
(the second one is different due to it being taken from a cutscene)
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r96/1love1riku1/Screenshot.jpghttp://i40.tinypic.com/wcbzly.jpg

If the TS2 picture is not good enough, I will try to get a better one when I am able to play.

Vampire_of_Death
16th May 2010, 6:22 AM
Yea, a close up shot of the eyes will be a lot more helpful to us.

ILoveHaydenP
16th May 2010, 8:31 AM
from what i can see, even though like Vampire of death says, it would be better with a close up, I think you need to shadow the eyes. So make the corners of the white and the top edge slightly more shadowed and darker, this will make them look a little less maxis. But other than that they look pretty good so far.

Weeaboo
17th May 2010, 1:06 AM
Yeah sorry, I hadn't realized they looked bleh.

Okay I'll add some shadows to the left a little and to the right.

Maybe that will help?

chidori.para
23rd May 2010, 3:46 PM
You should make the line between the first and second rings of his iris more defined.
Also, you could make an eyeliner or the actual eye to include that heavy line around his eye that stands out the most to me.