All Fall Down

[Naitsuusha]

This story contains adult themes, blood, and lots of suggested violence. It's also done in a more comic book form, film noir style, so the pictures are larger than average and may take a little longer to load.

This is updated weekly instead of sooner. It takes me some time to play it out in-game, take the pics, and then edit them to fit into a comic page.

The story is also posted here (http://naitsims3.livejournal.com/).

And so we begin....

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[DarkPhoenix]

Wow, this is pretty interesting and seems to have a lot of potential! I can't wait for the next update!

[dutch]

Aah, film-noir with red highlights, very Frank Miller. Reminds me of Sin City. The story's looking great so far! :) Definitely checking out the next chapter when it comes out. Keep it up!

[Naitsuusha]

Thanks!

It is indeed very Sin City inspired. I thought the style Frank Miller used would work well with the kind of story I wanted to tell.

[surfer85]

Very cool. The amount of work you put into this shows. I'm not sure I like the filter you're using, but that's a minor gripe.

[vhanster]

Great start so far, and the filter you used, whatever it is, adds to the "horror" theme. Thing is, the picture becomes too blurry and I can't really see what the characters look like. And I can't say I like those pictures in the speech bubbles from the game. It ruins the mood of the story.

[Lavaster]

This was really, really, REALLY good. I usually don't like stories like these (aside from the detective and mystery components of this story) but this is a big exception. I usually read a few lines of a story to see if it'll be of my interest, but this I couldn't stop reading. I'd like to say I couldn't put down the book, but this isn't a book, it's the internet. :duck: A duck for your reward! :P