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25th May 2011, 11:20 PM
Tuna, wasabi sauce, and rice...all rolled up in a seaweed wrap. This recipe probably best explains this love story. However, if you're still confused, you can always see it for yourself too.
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27th May 2011, 10:05 AM
What? I can't believe nobody's commented on this yet~ I just read this before falling asleep and I really think it's a great start. The styling of the speech bubbles and wording is wonderfully funky, and the detail and the shots are really cool! So far the characters are really good as well, thanks for the upload, it was such a pleasure to read!
27th May 2011, 11:16 AM
Oh god, your pictures are adorable xD I love the comic-like style.
27th May 2011, 11:56 AM
Interesting beginnings.. the screenshots are so perfect~~
Lot of questions to ask ;) Looking forward to read more
27th May 2011, 12:38 PM
Waaawww! I'm so glad you all liked it so much!
Happy, happy, happy me!
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27th May 2011, 11:52 PM
This is great! Your pictures are beautiful and your sims are amazing! Keep up the good work, I love it. :)
28th May 2011, 09:39 AM
Thank you! ^ - ^ I will!
28th May 2011, 09:46 AM
29th May 2011, 12:53 PM
Beautifully shot.. love the speech bubbles <3
30th May 2011, 01:46 AM
I love it! Good cliffhanger btw.
12th Jun 2011, 10:06 PM
Thank you both!
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12th Jun 2011, 10:27 PM
13th Jun 2011, 05:07 AM
Love the comic theme..
pictures are so beautiful and gorgeous <3
I loved it when they hugged.. so cute ;)
13th Jun 2011, 07:10 AM
I did too. : >
Thanks again, BTW!
13th Jun 2011, 08:20 AM
OMG Zoel - you make the most fantabulous sims. and your comic . . . shesh it's amazing. I feel like giving up mine now.
PS awesome Graphics card lol
15th Jun 2011, 08:04 PM
ZOMG! I love this chapter~! I be your zombie fan. Keep up the good work. Your shots are amazing.
15th Jun 2011, 08:11 PM
Love this :D
16th Jun 2011, 03:41 AM
Thanks so much you guys. You're all so incredibly kind!
Still, I wouldn't give up your story kaylarox, I think it's great, and I'd be really disappointed if you did.
I'll try to post the third chapter soon.
16th Jun 2011, 11:47 AM
Awwww thanks. I am awaiting the next chapter :)
16th Jun 2011, 02:48 PM
I'm impressed. The quality of your screenshots/images is superb, which is of the utmost importance with a graphic novel like this. And the story overall has a very professional feel to it.
One little bit of constructive criticism I can offer, though, is that you can make it a little more obvious who the speech bubbles are attached to. For the first few panels, I had a hard time figuring out which character was saying what lines.
16th Jun 2011, 03:01 PM
This story is fantastic! I love it - especially the way you cut away to other stuff in the scenes like the bird. So artistic and cool and gives the whole thing a great feel. I'll be watching this one! :D
16th Jun 2011, 06:29 PM
I love the detail in the scenes, it makes it look so much more real, and really original too. And you've got some beautiful shots and angles!
17th Jun 2011, 12:24 AM
Thanks so much you guys! I'm really overwhelmed by all your comments!
kaylarox: You're welcome! ^ ^
surfer85: Sorry to hear this. The reason why I try not to use arrow bubbles too much is because my main influence for this story is Japanese Manga, and Korean Manhwa, which probably seems obvious already. So I try my hardest to distinct the differences in the each character's way of speech to make it more easily evident to the reader who is speaking. Thing is, I'm also a big fan of newspaper funnies, which probably explains the horizontal paneling, as opposed to traditional vertical paneling, so it really cuts down on size, and room to position the bubbles properly.
Still, I'll try to use them more in the future, if they help.
17th Jun 2011, 04:55 AM
This is amazing! Please keep up the great work! Your pictures are beautiful and I love your Sims. : )
17th Jun 2011, 11:04 AM
I think is perfect the way it is... It does not hurt to use the brain a bit :)
21st Jun 2011, 07:57 AM
21st Jun 2011, 08:41 AM
lol hot stuff, she is.
21st Jun 2011, 07:15 PM
Wow. XD I didn't see that coming.
22nd Jun 2011, 10:23 AM
I will just go like his sister:
"O MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!"
say no, say no!!!!!
think about Suoh!!!
Thanks for this story....I am in love with!!!
22nd Jun 2011, 12:52 PM
I wonder what she decides to do...
the brother is going to be so humiliated if she turns him down ;D
22nd Jun 2011, 03:53 PM
I'm so glad you all like it so much. Especially since I was like half asleep the night I did it.
Thanks again everybody!
23rd Jun 2011, 07:02 AM
I love the pictures and the storyline looks so simple yet classy!! I'll be watching out for this one...:D
22nd Jul 2011, 03:44 AM
22nd Jul 2011, 03:47 AM
Thanks dark_jean! Thanks to everybody!
I'm sorry it took me so long to get this chapter up. This month's been crazy. I'm going to be moving in a week or so, so I'm really gonna try to put up the fifth and final chapter sometime this weekend, or next week. Since I probably will be without internet for a while.
Well, anyway, hope you all enjoy it! 'Til next time!
22nd Jul 2011, 03:55 AM
I just love your pictures. The colors are so vibrant! I haven't played TS2 in such a long time, but I don't remember my game ever looking nearly as nice.
23rd Jul 2011, 04:10 AM
Great update! Bummed to hear the next chapter is the last tho. Lol, Maki and Suoh are so cute! ^ ^ Hurry back! :D
10th Sep 2011, 03:57 PM
10th Sep 2011, 05:03 PM
Brilliant. I only wish there was more! Great characters, pictures. Great story! :)
11th Sep 2011, 06:50 AM
Thanks! I'm really happy to hear you enjoyed it so much! ^ ^
14th Sep 2011, 04:02 AM
I really like how everything is so bright, the detail in the images are really great, as is the story.
14th Sep 2011, 05:21 PM
Thanks to everybody that commented, and everyone who took the time to read my story.
Means a lot to me.
12th Oct 2011, 02:17 AM
OMFG ITS OVER!? NOOO!!! too short! MOARRR i need MOARR omg this is SUCH an amazingly done story. i absoutely LOVE it! i wish i had the time and talent to do something like this. beautiful story, beautiful artwork... just.. AMAZING!!!
12th Oct 2011, 05:55 AM
O . O
Thank you...^ ^
3rd Dec 2011, 10:16 AM
; A ; it's so beautiful!
And Dusk looks so cute after getting a haircut!
i was wondering where did you download Dusk's hair?
3rd Dec 2011, 09:12 PM
4th Dec 2011, 03:33 AM
I must take a moment to say I LOVE how you presented this story in a comic book style fashion. It made my inner nerd go squee! I enjoyed the story itself as well. You have a great talent and make lovely sims.
4th Dec 2011, 04:33 AM
Thank you both so much. I'm still amazed at how this story still gets messages, even though it's over and done. Makes me feel really accomplished. ^ ^
4th Dec 2011, 04:31 PM
Giving credit where it is due tis all :3
10th Oct 2012, 03:03 AM
I really am enjoying your story. I like how you have made it comic book style. Well done.
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