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16th Mar 2012, 8:24 PM
The doorbell rang and Lily's heart sank...
16th Mar 2012, 8:36 PM
as she opened it to Grandmother Squack. "HEY Kiddo how's it goin' babe. I'm chillin' and I think you need a hot night out on the town.." Her grandmother fell slightly into the door.. "Woaaahh... kid, I'm drunk."
23rd Mar 2012, 12:02 AM
Grandma S. dragged Lily out the door to her red car and shoved Lily in. "Grandma! don't drive! Where are we going?" Grandma said,
23rd Mar 2012, 2:59 AM
"Where do you think kiddo?" Lilly thought for a few hours and said "Wait...wait..wait no."
24th Mar 2012, 1:58 AM
Lily tried to pry the door open, but Grandma S. shoved her back and stepped on the gas and they sped off.
25th Mar 2012, 5:37 AM
She screamed and finally opened the door leaping onto the highway ground and almost being hit by a car.
25th Mar 2012, 5:19 PM
Her grandmother stopped the car in shock.
25th Mar 2012, 6:38 PM
Her grandma pulled Lily back in and sped off to where they came to the place. It was a...
25th Mar 2012, 10:14 PM
vampire club filled with attractive men. Lily gasped and turned bright red. "Grandma! I don't need you to set me up with anyone!" Grandma S. turned to her with a teasing smile:
25th Mar 2012, 10:16 PM
"Sugar, you're mine. They're mine. They ar-- bleh ugh...." Her grandmother passed out and fell down.
26th Mar 2012, 2:25 AM
Lily gasped and then she felt a yank on her arm. A handsome man was tugging her and said...
26th Mar 2012, 5:28 AM
"Have I met you love?" Her heart jumped as she wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed him. "I missed you Sam."
27th Mar 2012, 2:25 AM
He returned the kiss. "Me too. Is..is your Grandmother alright?"
27th Mar 2012, 2:26 AM
"I'm dead." The grandmother said.
27th Mar 2012, 2:33 AM
Lily looked at her like she was crazy, while Sam said, "Don't worry about her, babe. Everything will be all right." Until I rape you, Sam thought.
29th Mar 2012, 3:16 AM
He smiled and Lily could see his fangs, but she didn't care. She kissed him again and he said...
29th Mar 2012, 3:40 AM
"Look, babe, Imma gonna take you over to my house. You wanna come?"
"Sure," Lily replied.
That evening Sam...
29th Mar 2012, 7:14 PM
That evening Sam told her he needed a beer. (That Florence was just a spammer I reported last night and Delphy banned I guess, thanks Delphy!)
29th Mar 2012, 11:36 PM
"Get up your lazy ass and get it yourself." She murmured after hearing his plans to violate her. "Fuck you!" A voice called from the street.
30th Mar 2012, 12:07 AM
Lily looked out the window. She saw that the voice came from the cops, pointing their guns at Sam's house. Lily thought, What the heck?
She ran outside and asked the cops what was going on. All they did was question her about Sam, such as, "Why are you here?" or, "Did you know this man has been spotted robbing a bank?" or, "You live with him?"
Lily didn't know what to say. She just starred for a moment and said, "I have the right to remain silent." With that, she ran away.
30th Mar 2012, 2:52 PM
The cops went inside the house but little did they know Sam jumped out the window. He caught up to Lily in a forest and tackled her there. He said...
30th Mar 2012, 10:41 PM
"Fuck you, babe! We couldv'e gotten arrested together!"
"Arrested?" Lily shrieked. "Are you out of your mind?"
"No, babe, just listen and Imma go get you a cup of coffee."
"No!" Lily turned away. "Just leave me alone!"
She disappeared and...
31st Mar 2012, 1:01 AM
She wondered if she would ever find love again. Even though she didn't want to be with him, she still loved him. She felt something on her shoulder. she reached up and felt...
31st Mar 2012, 2:32 AM
A giant, harry spider that bit her hand!
Lily was transported into a colorful warp that didn't end for hours. When Lily got to the place the warp was taking her to, she saw...
1st Apr 2012, 2:18 AM
Her grandma shaking and falling down while a shadowy person said "get away you have no chance" Lily woke up and then...
3rd Apr 2012, 11:07 PM
She discovered she was in Sam's bed. There was vomit all over the bed, plus a bunch of beer bottles. Lily decided that Sam made her drunk and she broke up with him. So Sam...
4th Apr 2012, 3:11 AM
Was plotting revenge. He planned to first kill Lily's grandma and then
4th Apr 2012, 3:38 AM
Realized that her grandma was ALREADY dead. So he then
4th Apr 2012, 4:06 AM
Plans to kill Lilly...
4th Apr 2012, 10:50 PM
Meanwhile Lily was walking along a winding road. Sam got up to her in his car and was holding a gun while he said, "Say one more word and I'll kill you!"
5th Apr 2012, 3:29 AM
Then Lily started to run. She ran until...
6th Apr 2012, 3:46 AM
There was a comic book in front of her! It was floating in the air, and then Take On Me by A-Ha started playing and a hand came out of it! Since Lily was trying to escape she grabbed the hand and she was sucked into the comic book!
And then she became that girl in the music video...
(I was watching that video when I posted this)
7th Apr 2012, 1:15 AM
She sang and then she was pulled by another hand. She goy back to the real world. Then she saw...
7th Apr 2012, 5:42 PM
Some 7-year-old girl with dark brown hair. Her hair was short, and moving along with the wind. She turned to Lily. "Hello."
"Uh, hi," Lily said and laughed a little, then hesitated.
"I'm Bel. What's your name?" Bel pulled a gun out of nowhere and pointed it at Lily. She edged closer to her, so slowly and silently you could hear a clock ticking. Lily kept backing up until her back hit a brick wall of a building. She shut her eyes, shaking until...
7th Apr 2012, 9:06 PM
Lily could feel like her mind was being searched by someone. She opened her eyes and...
7th Apr 2012, 9:10 PM
She was in bed. Her mind didn't have the weird feeling anymore. She sighed in relief, glad that it was all just a dream...until she looked into the mirror and she saw
8th Apr 2012, 3:04 AM
Bel's face pressed against the glass, trying to break though. Her face was covered with blood and then Bel said...
9th Apr 2012, 4:34 AM
"Come into this mirror or you will burn in hell!" Lily decided to...
9th Apr 2012, 11:45 PM
Walk in. As she did, Bel started to melt away. Lily saw a figure. He got up close and then...
10th Apr 2012, 3:47 AM
There were two lab mice planning to take over the world!...And then Bel reappeared and said to Lily, "Those two figures you just saw are now trapped in this bottle." She held up a bottle and two mice were squeezed inside it.
"This hurts, Brain! ZORT!" One of them cried.
"I know, Pinky. We'll get out of here as long as this 'Bel' chick will set us free." The other one replied. "That is...if she ever will."
"If you want these two free," Bel said and paused for a minute, pulling a key out of her pocket and showing it to Lily, "Unlock it with this key and--"
"STOP!" A voice screamed. It echoed for a moment and then...
10th Apr 2012, 10:30 PM
Lily saw a handsome man. He dove for the bottle. Bel dropped the bottle in her shock. It broke. The handsome man said...
11th Apr 2012, 4:54 AM
"I've come to rescue my daughter," the man said.
"Wha-I have a father?" Lily asked.
The man laughed. "Why, yes, dear. Your mother and I broke up 11 years ago."
"Like, when I was a baby?"
The man nodded, and LIly broke into a smile. Then, after a few seconds of silence and the two family members rejoining, one of the mouse who were stuck in the bottle said, "Can we please get this over with?"
Bel scowled. She glanced at the two mice, then back at Lily and her dad. "Fine. You guys can go on without me! I'll always be a loser!" She burst into tears and ran away.
11th Apr 2012, 3:20 PM
"BEL!" He yelled. Then he sighed. "She always thinks because she is my other daughter that she is better than you." "What?"
13th Apr 2012, 9:25 PM
Lily's dad turned to Lily. "Look, I'm sorry sweetie, but...but..." He sighed once more. "Okay, here's the story. Remeber your mother?"
"Yeah?" Lily asked.
"Well...you see, a few years after we broke up...I married another woman...and had Bel with her..."
He paused for a moment and saw Lily crying.
"...Well, look, Lil. I know you don't like the fact that Bel's your sister but...I'm sorry! Your mother...she cheated on me and...oh, can't you at least let me tell Bel some things? I bet you she's really a sweet little girl, she can just be a little...jealous of things."
"Good girl. Now, do you want to come over to my house? I'll fix up a bedroom for you so you can sleep over tonight--it's 10:40 already."
Lily nodded again; she was a little tired.
14th Apr 2012, 12:56 AM
Sam was stalking her. (As he always is) "Dad!" Lily yelled. "A dude is stalking me!" "What?" "He's a dude from my past." "What happened?" "Well Sam...
14th Apr 2012, 1:45 AM
"...is this guy who I've dated before, and he tried to get me drunk. And he's about the reason I met Bel."
Sam speaks up and says, "Who's Bel?"
"GO AWAY!" Lily cried.
So then Sam...
14th Apr 2012, 5:46 PM
Tried to kill her. Lily's dad couldn't get to her. Then out of nowhere Bel...
15th Apr 2012, 2:22 AM
(I don't know what else to write)
15th Apr 2012, 4:07 AM
Sam smiled at Bel. She slowly backed away. Lily's dad came into the room. Sam was striping Bel. (Planning to rape her. Typical Sam.) Then..
16th Apr 2012, 3:28 AM
Lily's dad screamed and ran into a wall. "Who the hell is he?" Sam asked. "My dad, you moron." Bel then...
16th Apr 2012, 3:40 PM
kicked sam in the face. Then Bel shot him. Then...
17th Apr 2012, 2:25 AM
...and then Bel said, "That doesn't go with the story at all." She shot the ghost who was running away and threw the camera recording everything in a nearby dumpster. To avoid being arrested.
However, Bel went back inside the house and noted what just happened here. Her father...is dead? She bent down to him with tears in her eyes, kissed him on the cheek, and ran away from this bloody mess. ...
17th Apr 2012, 2:42 AM
As Lily somehow stood up. Then she teleported to Bel and she was at...
18th Apr 2012, 12:03 AM
some weird highway in the middle of nowhere. Then the sky got all bright and Jesus came out of it! He said...
(I'm starting to think you don't really care for this thread anymore. Some of your posts don't make sense. No offense, just saying.)
18th Apr 2012, 12:17 AM
(It's fine. I just don't know what to write. Plus I usually don't make sense in real life. ) "I warned you a long time ago to try not to trust anyone but one person that was special," He said. "Well who the hell am I supposed to trust?" He melted away. (Man Jesus you need to work on helping Lily a little more) Then...
18th Apr 2012, 1:25 AM
(Okay. I understand. Just wondering. :) ) Then Lily told Bel, "You know, if that was Jesus, then why am I studying religion anyway?" Bel said, "I know that let's just continue on the plot!"
19th Apr 2012, 1:01 AM
(Thanks for understanding :) I have other reasons but I chose not to tell them.) "Yeah let's go," Lily said. They walked into a forest. When they got to an opening they saw...
19th Apr 2012, 1:47 AM
The mice who were trapped in the bottle! The big-headed one pointed at Bel and said, "You! Oh, you! You made us get trapped in there for so long that now it just isn't--"
"Hey Brain, what's this hole for?" The other mouse said, who was taller and skinner than the big-headed one. He was holding up a golden ring and looking at it.
The smaller one bopped him on the head. "Ha ha! NARF!" The taller one said.
"Anyway," the smaller one continued, "you shall NOT enter the woods. And if you do, you will be my slave!"
LIly and Bel...
19th Apr 2012, 3:19 AM
Took a step back. Then out of nowhere...
19th Apr 2012, 3:12 PM
My avatar smacked Lily and Bel with a mallet! And then...
20th Apr 2012, 1:18 AM
The mice somehow squeezed their fat buts out of the bottle. Then the mice turned into humans. Lily looked at them while Bel shot your avatar. (Heh Heh) Then Lily said...
21st Apr 2012, 12:53 AM
"I never knew mice could turn into humans."
"I didn't either," one of the used-to-be-mice said. "But still..." He looked at his new body, smiling. "Pinky, are you pondering what I'm pondering?"
"I think so Brain, but if it took three days to give birth in real life everything would be so much easier," The other one said.
Brain bopped him on the head again and said, "No! With our new bodies we could take over the world in an instant!"
"Aw, but I liked being a mouse," Pinky answered and frowned.
"Wait a second," Lily asked, "You guys were mice who wanted to take over the world?"
At hearing this, Bel pointed her gun at the two guys in front of her.
22nd Apr 2012, 3:22 AM
"Shut it and put your hands in the air before I stuff you back in that bottle," Bel said. "Oh you shut it!" Brain said. "But if we get stuffed back in the bottle we'll become mice! It'll be fun!" Pinky said. Then Brain slapped Pinky. Then...
22nd Apr 2012, 4:16 PM
Bel edged her gun closer to them. Pinky was shaking and managed to shout out loud, "ZORT! Don't hurt us!" And Brain said, "Don't shoot and we'll do anything! We beg of you! Please!!!"
Bel squinted her eyes, ready to shot but then Lily blurted out, "THAT'S ENOUGH!" Everyone turned to look at her. "Don't shoot them! Honestly! He just said he'll do anything for us!"
"Aw shit," Brain muttered.
"And besides, I'm tired of seeing dead--what the heck!" Something had just landed on her head. It was...
24th Apr 2012, 9:15 PM
The same spider that had bit her! She screamed and tried to bat the spider off. Then...
25th Apr 2012, 12:14 AM
Pinky grabbed it off the ground and said, "Look, Brain! A yummy spider!"
"Don't eat that that's--" Brain cried.
But it was too late--Pinky had already stuffed it in his mouth.
"Oh great," Brain said.
The spider made Pinky...
25th Apr 2012, 2:29 AM
Throw up all over the place. Then Pinky passed out. A bunch of colors swirled around Pinky. Then... (Is Pinky a girl? I know it's a girl name, but I met a guy named Pinky once)
27th Apr 2012, 1:51 AM
(He's a boy) There was John Lennon! Then...(I'm bored of this, can we stop?)
28th Apr 2012, 7:33 PM
(Same with me) Bel took out a bazooka and yelled "This matter is over!" She shot killing everyone but Lily and her. Then they walked home.
THE END! (I couldn't think of a good ending)
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