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#51
26th Jun 2014 at 5:36 PM
Posts: 2
Im In
I'm in doing Romance. GIRLY GIRL XOXO
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#52
26th Jun 2014 at 6:10 PM
Posts: 377
lolsmileyface
i'm looking forward to read it
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i'm looking forward to read it
:*
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#53
27th Jun 2014 at 2:32 PM
Posts: 50
I'm set; I'm doing a romance about the male form of the fox god, Inari and a moody death dragon. It's kinda cute also very dark humorey-esque sometimes.
NOT ENOUGH ROMANCE!(Insert pretentious hashtag)
NOT ENOUGH ROMANCE!(Insert pretentious hashtag)
#54
27th Jun 2014 at 5:02 PM
Last edited by leefish : 30th Jun 2014 at 7:06 PM.
Reason: Merged posts: 4426815, 4427618
Posts: 73
Ugh...getting my set stuff done took way longer than I thought it would...now I have to find poses
This is a lot more work than I had thought it would be...
Alright, how does the insert pictures option work? I'm so confused...:P
This is a lot more work than I had thought it would be...
Alright, how does the insert pictures option work? I'm so confused...:P
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#55
28th Jun 2014 at 2:22 AM
Posts: 89
Thanks: 334 in 2 Posts
I lost my Sims 2 disc, so I can't do this, unfortunately. . . as soon as I hit the post count, though, I can judge. Both entries look great so far.
#56
28th Jun 2014 at 3:34 AM
Posts: 220
Thanks: 39 in 1 Posts
I tried telling myself I don't have time for this, but I accidentally picked up my notebook with all my bits from Heaven's story contests and now I'm even more tempted.
#57
28th Jun 2014 at 6:35 AM
Posts: 377
Quote: Originally posted by Rin_of_Water
Alright, how does the insert pictures option work? I'm so confused...:P |
to advanced post on this page
there is a part named attachments
then be aware that your upload is less than 800kb
after uploading, write (spoiler) /but with '[' not '('
then go to attachments, click on files names, they will show up on other tabs, copy the link,come back,
double click on image part,then paste the link there
then do this for all files
after you've done it to images,
tag (/spoiler) \ but with '[' not '(' \
preview to see if there is a spoiler button
like: [spoiler]
pic + story
then[ /spoiler]
Test Subject
#58
28th Jun 2014 at 6:01 PM
Last edited by random_name : 1st Jul 2014 at 2:58 PM.
Posts: 12
Finito! Here, it is; my finished story. Looks like me and Frenchyxo have both had the same stroke of genius with our voodoo ideas. Wonder if, like me, she's been watching too much Princess And The Frog with the awesome Dr Facilier..? Anyway, here it is. Romance, 2000 words (the first draft was 2900, meaning I had to crop so much out) and 20 pictures: I Can Grant You A Miracle. Enjoy!
Story Title: I Can Grant You A Miracle
Genre: Romance
Synopsis: Benevolent voodoo apprentice Brad Gordon has spent the majority of his teenage years assisting the spirits set out the true destiny of the world. Now, he is finally ready to use his powers to enhance people’s lives but does not count on falling in love on the way. However, the spirits he’s been helping all these years tell him, that this time, love is not an option. Now Brad has to decide what’s more important - love or destiny.
Requirement: “It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.” Pride and Prejudice, Jane Austin (Romance)
Bonus: “No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream.” The Haunting of Hill House, Shirley Jackson (Horror)
Word/Picture Count: 2000 words, 20 pictures - Perfection, ladies and gentleman
Entry:
I wrote the first half of my story from Timothy's point of view because I thought it would be more effective to capture Brad's abilities through the eyes of someone else - So, Timothy's role really is to introduce Brad through the eyes of the audience. Also, the three main colours of voodoo will be incoporated into this story: purple symbolizing Brad's powers, gold symbolizing the good changes in Brad's life (a la the gold marking's on the girl (who's still not been named)'s clothes and green (still to be shown) will represent Brad's obstacles. Also, I did totally not reuse the same models for the background shots in the school scenes... Okay, I did but doing otherwise would lag my game so yeah...
Story Title: I Can Grant You A Miracle
Genre: Romance
Synopsis: Benevolent voodoo apprentice Brad Gordon has spent the majority of his teenage years assisting the spirits set out the true destiny of the world. Now, he is finally ready to use his powers to enhance people’s lives but does not count on falling in love on the way. However, the spirits he’s been helping all these years tell him, that this time, love is not an option. Now Brad has to decide what’s more important - love or destiny.
Requirement: “It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.” Pride and Prejudice, Jane Austin (Romance)
Bonus: “No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream.” The Haunting of Hill House, Shirley Jackson (Horror)
Word/Picture Count: 2000 words, 20 pictures - Perfection, ladies and gentleman
Entry:
Chapter 1
Ever heard of voodoo? You most likely have. It maybe unsettles you. But don’t fret - not all voodoo is harmful. Many of its practitioners actually use voodoo for good. Of course, while voodoo often only exists in the towns of Louisiana or the depths of Africa. Sometimes, it may be found elsewhere.
Timothy couldn’t believe his eyes. In a cloud of purple smoke, the bedroom had completely transformed. In fact, it was most certainly a completely different room. A room that was more home in a storybook than 21st century Britain. A room galore with gothic purples and reds, a small circular table with an idle glass ball planted on top lay in the centre. He looked up at his best friend - the one who‘s bedroom he was in a minute ago, the one who “had something important to show him.” He was smiling. A little smug smile that read, ‘yeah, that’s right.’ Timothy watched Brad elegantly stepped forward into the middle of the room. The room unsettled, no, it straight out terrified him.
“Speechless, huh? Come, come to the table.” Brad gestured the hesitant boy to the table then dropped down on the furthest away seat.
Timothy slowly stepped up to the table and reluctantly plucked down on the seat parallel to Brad. His smile was still there. That wide, boasting smile that made him shiver whenever he caught sight of it.
With a click of the fingers, another purple cloud exploded on the table. Timothy almost flew out his seat in fright, Brad barely budged. As the cloud dissipated, a small array of cards appeared. All Timothy could do was blink in disbelief.
Brad presented the cards in a showmanship-like manner. “Observe, Timothy. The story of your life lies in these very cards.”
Timothy ogled the cards. He sure didn’t see anything.
Brad pointed at the first card. “The card of solitude. You have journeyed down the path of isolation, though not by choice. No, you’ve always felt like an outcast, like there’s no one who really understands you. Your mother and father neglected you for other things. Your fellow students have always looked down on you, sneered behind your back. You just want to be accepted, right?”
Timothy’s puzzlement quickly faded into dismay. He still couldn’t look Brad in the eye and admit it. He always figured that Brad had known that Timothy was unhappy anyway. He always did have a keen eye for observation.
Brad shifted to the next card. “The card of consistency. Things are now as they were then. You want excitement, company, happiness. But there is hope. All lies in the next card.”
“The what? Wait! What are you talking about? What is this place?” Timothy had finally come to his senses and now it was time for answers.
Brad’s smile faded. “I thought you would have guessed by now, Tim. This is my parlour. This is where I practice the ancient art of… voodoo.”
“That’s ridiculous! There‘s no such thing as voodoo!”
“That attitude will not do at all.” Brad spoke with calmness and charisma. “For voodoo, you must believe. Otherwise it won’t work. Faith is the key.”
Timothy’s face was as hard as stone. Brad sighed. “Then explain how you got here. How do you explain the cards? All of this?”
“This is some kind of trick,” Timothy frowned.
“What did you say to me this morning? Did you not tell me you had a crush on Becky? I came here to help you with that. Do you not want my help?”
Timothy sank in his seat. “I would never have a chance with her anyway.”
Brad slammed his fist on the table. “My friend, what have I told you about that attitude? Only positivity can ignite the marvels of voodoo. You say voodoo can’t possibly be real. Bah! No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream. But today is the day I make your dreams come true. Trust me. What do you have to lose?”
Brad possessed the words and the mannerisms of a lawyer and Timothy was now starting to believe. After all, what did he have to lose?
“Fine,” the boy muttered.
Brad smiled again. The same smile as always. He pulled out a necklace from under the table with a single ruby gemstone and presented it in front of his client. “This is the answer to your prayers. Wear this charm around your neck and the one you desire will be yours.”
Timothy let Brad drop the charm into his palm. He gazed at it in wonder, trying to unlock its secrets. In the corner of his eye he noticed the final card. It pictured a magnificent red stone, identical to the bead that rested in his hands.
Brad grinned at him. “Satisfied?”
Timothy nodded silently, still confused by the whole ordeal.
“Very good. But you must be off. I have some dealings to attend to. But remember, you must believe for your wish to become reality. I trust you know the way home.” Brad clicked his fingers and Timothy was engulfed in purple mist before disappearing entirely.
Brad smiled to himself in satisfaction. His first customer. Hopefully, Timothy would find all the happiness he had wished for. Then he would grant more wishes. All Brad ever wanted to do was enrich a few lives. He wanted to make a difference. And of course, he had the spirits to thank for that.
Suddenly, flashes of light purple flew across the room. Before him stood an army of five lavender ghostly figures. The middle one smiled at Brad.
“Did he like his gift?” the ghost asked, his voice slithering like a snake.
Brad shrugged. “I think so. We’ll find out tomorrow for sure though. Now, do you have something for me?”
“Not as of yet, everything is well,” the centre phantom hissed.
“Very good. Well if it would please you, I would like to get some sleep. Long day.” Brad got up from his seat.
“Of course.” the spirit smiled.
In a puff of smoke, Brad was back in the comfort of his own bedroom. Today, he had finally shared his secret with someone, something he had always been excited for. Smiling to himself, he crashed down on his bed. Then he grimaced. School tomorrow. Ugh. And the major’s daughter would be starting tomorrow. That’s exactly what he needed - another popular girl. Brad groaned then closed his eyes. He wasn’t going to let someone he didn’t even know ruin his sleep.
Break time was usually Brad’s favourite time of the school day. But not today. He had spent the last ten minutes listening to Timothy brag on and on about his date with Becky. He was proud for his friend, he truly was, but he lost all his excitement 5 minutes ago and the guy was just getting tiresome.
Finally, Brad gestured for his friend to stop. “That’s great, Tim. Glad I could be of service but I really gotta take a whizz.”
Twisting round, he crashed into someone and fell to the ground with a yelp. Groaning, he turned angrily to his offender. A girl, no older than him, was clutching her head in pain down on the linoleum beside him. Instantly disregarding his pain and anger, he focused on her. Thick blonde hair pressed down on her silky crimson cheeks. The fluorescent lights dangling above her bounced off her glowing skin radiantly. Brad had never seen her before but there was something about her face that made him feel like he had known her for years.
Eventually, he regained himself and hoisted himself up off the cold floor. He then handed a gentle hand to the golden maiden still squatting on the ground. “Sorry.”
The stranger accepted his hand. “It’s alright. I wasn’t looking where I was going.” Redeeming her balance, she brought her head up and beamed at Brad, her amazing aqua eyes heaving Brad in towards her.
Strangely feeling nervous, Brad gulped. “Um, you okay?” He managed a small smile.
The girl smirked. “I’m fine.” She looked down at his chest. “Oh my. I didn’t burn you, did I?”
“What?” Brad looked. He noticed a dark, humid stain that had attached itself to his shirt. Instinctively, he rubbed at it with his fist. “Erm, no, no. I’m fine. It’s nothing.” He let out an unconvincing laugh as he patted the creases out. The girl smiled at him again, her huge blue eyes as magnetic as ever. Breaking a sweat, he avoided her eye and began scanning for a distraction. His eyes fixed on the lonely coffee cup lying on the floor. Bending down, he picked it up and examined it. He held it in front of her helplessly.
“Um, there’s still some left if you want it.”
The girl giggled. Every nerve in Brad’s body held back a blush. She looked back up at him with her steel eyes. “You’re funny.”
Now the struggle was even tougher. He was definitely going to blush this time. His brain panicked. So many thoughts dizzying round his mind. ‘Say something! Anything!’ His brain frantically shouted.
He found himself talking again. “Um, how about I get you another cup?” After school? We’ll go down to that coffee place on main street.”
Wait, what did he just say?
The girl’s smile grew bigger. “I’d like that. Meet here after school?” she suggested, her voice delicate like a field-mouse.
Lost in his thoughts, Brad could only manage a meagre nod. She slipped past him, still with that alluring smile on her face. Brad was confused. Very confused. He never felt the way he did just then ever in his whole life. Did one of his spells backfire or something? Ah well, never mind, it probably wasn’t that important anyway. What was he going to do again? Ah, right, the bathroom. He couldn’t even remember if he even had to go in the first place but he did have to get that coffee stain off.
Walking the short distance to the boys’ bathroom, he slid the door open and stepped inside, almost gagging at the gruesome, vile aroma that invaded his nostrils. He strolled over to the sink and examined his shirt in the mirror. He frowned. That was going to be pretty tough to get out.
Suddenly, a gust of wind filled the room and a team of ghostly shadows slid out from under the bathroom door and took place in the centre of the room. Brad’s spirit guardians. But this time, each one sported a deadly serious face.
Brad rolled his eyes when he saw them. “Oh, what have I done now? Did I step on a future-changing bug? Did I accidentally summon something? Is it that I stole one of Jerome’s pencils today in English? It can’t be that, can it? What could a pencil do? Nothing life-changing, surely?”
The spirits‘ expression unchanged. Brad sighed. “What?”
“The girl,” the leader hissed.
“What girl?
“You’re going to have coffee with her.”
“Oh, right, that girl,” Brad held back a blush. “Yeah, that was just being friendly.”
“Stay away from her.”
Brad’s smile disappeared. “What?”
“That girl is important in our plans.” The spirit’s words were calm and firm. “You cannot talk to her. She is destined for another.”
Brad bottled up his frustration. “Who?”
“Gavin Cochlea.”
“Him?!?” Brad erupted. “Gavin’s a bully! An ignoramus! Plus he’s super rich!
“Ha!” one of the female spirits jeered. “I thought it was a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife or at the very least a female companion.”
“He’s the nastiest jerk in school! He doesn‘t deserve anything!”
“That may be,” came the ghostly whisper of the leader spirit. “But our say is final.”
The spirit’s eyebrows narrowed. “Do not get in the way of our destiny.”
Ever heard of voodoo? You most likely have. It maybe unsettles you. But don’t fret - not all voodoo is harmful. Many of its practitioners actually use voodoo for good. Of course, while voodoo often only exists in the towns of Louisiana or the depths of Africa. Sometimes, it may be found elsewhere.
Timothy couldn’t believe his eyes. In a cloud of purple smoke, the bedroom had completely transformed. In fact, it was most certainly a completely different room. A room that was more home in a storybook than 21st century Britain. A room galore with gothic purples and reds, a small circular table with an idle glass ball planted on top lay in the centre. He looked up at his best friend - the one who‘s bedroom he was in a minute ago, the one who “had something important to show him.” He was smiling. A little smug smile that read, ‘yeah, that’s right.’ Timothy watched Brad elegantly stepped forward into the middle of the room. The room unsettled, no, it straight out terrified him.
“Speechless, huh? Come, come to the table.” Brad gestured the hesitant boy to the table then dropped down on the furthest away seat.
Timothy slowly stepped up to the table and reluctantly plucked down on the seat parallel to Brad. His smile was still there. That wide, boasting smile that made him shiver whenever he caught sight of it.
With a click of the fingers, another purple cloud exploded on the table. Timothy almost flew out his seat in fright, Brad barely budged. As the cloud dissipated, a small array of cards appeared. All Timothy could do was blink in disbelief.
Brad presented the cards in a showmanship-like manner. “Observe, Timothy. The story of your life lies in these very cards.”
Timothy ogled the cards. He sure didn’t see anything.
Brad pointed at the first card. “The card of solitude. You have journeyed down the path of isolation, though not by choice. No, you’ve always felt like an outcast, like there’s no one who really understands you. Your mother and father neglected you for other things. Your fellow students have always looked down on you, sneered behind your back. You just want to be accepted, right?”
Timothy’s puzzlement quickly faded into dismay. He still couldn’t look Brad in the eye and admit it. He always figured that Brad had known that Timothy was unhappy anyway. He always did have a keen eye for observation.
Brad shifted to the next card. “The card of consistency. Things are now as they were then. You want excitement, company, happiness. But there is hope. All lies in the next card.”
“The what? Wait! What are you talking about? What is this place?” Timothy had finally come to his senses and now it was time for answers.
Brad’s smile faded. “I thought you would have guessed by now, Tim. This is my parlour. This is where I practice the ancient art of… voodoo.”
“That’s ridiculous! There‘s no such thing as voodoo!”
“That attitude will not do at all.” Brad spoke with calmness and charisma. “For voodoo, you must believe. Otherwise it won’t work. Faith is the key.”
Timothy’s face was as hard as stone. Brad sighed. “Then explain how you got here. How do you explain the cards? All of this?”
“This is some kind of trick,” Timothy frowned.
“What did you say to me this morning? Did you not tell me you had a crush on Becky? I came here to help you with that. Do you not want my help?”
Timothy sank in his seat. “I would never have a chance with her anyway.”
Brad slammed his fist on the table. “My friend, what have I told you about that attitude? Only positivity can ignite the marvels of voodoo. You say voodoo can’t possibly be real. Bah! No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream. But today is the day I make your dreams come true. Trust me. What do you have to lose?”
Brad possessed the words and the mannerisms of a lawyer and Timothy was now starting to believe. After all, what did he have to lose?
“Fine,” the boy muttered.
Brad smiled again. The same smile as always. He pulled out a necklace from under the table with a single ruby gemstone and presented it in front of his client. “This is the answer to your prayers. Wear this charm around your neck and the one you desire will be yours.”
Timothy let Brad drop the charm into his palm. He gazed at it in wonder, trying to unlock its secrets. In the corner of his eye he noticed the final card. It pictured a magnificent red stone, identical to the bead that rested in his hands.
Brad grinned at him. “Satisfied?”
Timothy nodded silently, still confused by the whole ordeal.
“Very good. But you must be off. I have some dealings to attend to. But remember, you must believe for your wish to become reality. I trust you know the way home.” Brad clicked his fingers and Timothy was engulfed in purple mist before disappearing entirely.
Brad smiled to himself in satisfaction. His first customer. Hopefully, Timothy would find all the happiness he had wished for. Then he would grant more wishes. All Brad ever wanted to do was enrich a few lives. He wanted to make a difference. And of course, he had the spirits to thank for that.
Suddenly, flashes of light purple flew across the room. Before him stood an army of five lavender ghostly figures. The middle one smiled at Brad.
“Did he like his gift?” the ghost asked, his voice slithering like a snake.
Brad shrugged. “I think so. We’ll find out tomorrow for sure though. Now, do you have something for me?”
“Not as of yet, everything is well,” the centre phantom hissed.
“Very good. Well if it would please you, I would like to get some sleep. Long day.” Brad got up from his seat.
“Of course.” the spirit smiled.
In a puff of smoke, Brad was back in the comfort of his own bedroom. Today, he had finally shared his secret with someone, something he had always been excited for. Smiling to himself, he crashed down on his bed. Then he grimaced. School tomorrow. Ugh. And the major’s daughter would be starting tomorrow. That’s exactly what he needed - another popular girl. Brad groaned then closed his eyes. He wasn’t going to let someone he didn’t even know ruin his sleep.
Break time was usually Brad’s favourite time of the school day. But not today. He had spent the last ten minutes listening to Timothy brag on and on about his date with Becky. He was proud for his friend, he truly was, but he lost all his excitement 5 minutes ago and the guy was just getting tiresome.
Finally, Brad gestured for his friend to stop. “That’s great, Tim. Glad I could be of service but I really gotta take a whizz.”
Twisting round, he crashed into someone and fell to the ground with a yelp. Groaning, he turned angrily to his offender. A girl, no older than him, was clutching her head in pain down on the linoleum beside him. Instantly disregarding his pain and anger, he focused on her. Thick blonde hair pressed down on her silky crimson cheeks. The fluorescent lights dangling above her bounced off her glowing skin radiantly. Brad had never seen her before but there was something about her face that made him feel like he had known her for years.
Eventually, he regained himself and hoisted himself up off the cold floor. He then handed a gentle hand to the golden maiden still squatting on the ground. “Sorry.”
The stranger accepted his hand. “It’s alright. I wasn’t looking where I was going.” Redeeming her balance, she brought her head up and beamed at Brad, her amazing aqua eyes heaving Brad in towards her.
Strangely feeling nervous, Brad gulped. “Um, you okay?” He managed a small smile.
The girl smirked. “I’m fine.” She looked down at his chest. “Oh my. I didn’t burn you, did I?”
“What?” Brad looked. He noticed a dark, humid stain that had attached itself to his shirt. Instinctively, he rubbed at it with his fist. “Erm, no, no. I’m fine. It’s nothing.” He let out an unconvincing laugh as he patted the creases out. The girl smiled at him again, her huge blue eyes as magnetic as ever. Breaking a sweat, he avoided her eye and began scanning for a distraction. His eyes fixed on the lonely coffee cup lying on the floor. Bending down, he picked it up and examined it. He held it in front of her helplessly.
“Um, there’s still some left if you want it.”
The girl giggled. Every nerve in Brad’s body held back a blush. She looked back up at him with her steel eyes. “You’re funny.”
Now the struggle was even tougher. He was definitely going to blush this time. His brain panicked. So many thoughts dizzying round his mind. ‘Say something! Anything!’ His brain frantically shouted.
He found himself talking again. “Um, how about I get you another cup?” After school? We’ll go down to that coffee place on main street.”
Wait, what did he just say?
The girl’s smile grew bigger. “I’d like that. Meet here after school?” she suggested, her voice delicate like a field-mouse.
Lost in his thoughts, Brad could only manage a meagre nod. She slipped past him, still with that alluring smile on her face. Brad was confused. Very confused. He never felt the way he did just then ever in his whole life. Did one of his spells backfire or something? Ah well, never mind, it probably wasn’t that important anyway. What was he going to do again? Ah, right, the bathroom. He couldn’t even remember if he even had to go in the first place but he did have to get that coffee stain off.
Walking the short distance to the boys’ bathroom, he slid the door open and stepped inside, almost gagging at the gruesome, vile aroma that invaded his nostrils. He strolled over to the sink and examined his shirt in the mirror. He frowned. That was going to be pretty tough to get out.
Suddenly, a gust of wind filled the room and a team of ghostly shadows slid out from under the bathroom door and took place in the centre of the room. Brad’s spirit guardians. But this time, each one sported a deadly serious face.
Brad rolled his eyes when he saw them. “Oh, what have I done now? Did I step on a future-changing bug? Did I accidentally summon something? Is it that I stole one of Jerome’s pencils today in English? It can’t be that, can it? What could a pencil do? Nothing life-changing, surely?”
The spirits‘ expression unchanged. Brad sighed. “What?”
“The girl,” the leader hissed.
“What girl?
“You’re going to have coffee with her.”
“Oh, right, that girl,” Brad held back a blush. “Yeah, that was just being friendly.”
“Stay away from her.”
Brad’s smile disappeared. “What?”
“That girl is important in our plans.” The spirit’s words were calm and firm. “You cannot talk to her. She is destined for another.”
Brad bottled up his frustration. “Who?”
“Gavin Cochlea.”
“Him?!?” Brad erupted. “Gavin’s a bully! An ignoramus! Plus he’s super rich!
“Ha!” one of the female spirits jeered. “I thought it was a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife or at the very least a female companion.”
“He’s the nastiest jerk in school! He doesn‘t deserve anything!”
“That may be,” came the ghostly whisper of the leader spirit. “But our say is final.”
The spirit’s eyebrows narrowed. “Do not get in the way of our destiny.”
I wrote the first half of my story from Timothy's point of view because I thought it would be more effective to capture Brad's abilities through the eyes of someone else - So, Timothy's role really is to introduce Brad through the eyes of the audience. Also, the three main colours of voodoo will be incoporated into this story: purple symbolizing Brad's powers, gold symbolizing the good changes in Brad's life (a la the gold marking's on the girl (who's still not been named)'s clothes and green (still to be shown) will represent Brad's obstacles. Also, I did totally not reuse the same models for the background shots in the school scenes... Okay, I did but doing otherwise would lag my game so yeah...
#59
28th Jun 2014 at 10:09 PM
Posts: 73
Quote: Originally posted by cherry4567
to advanced post on this page there is a part named attachments then be aware that your upload is less than 800kb after uploading, write (spoiler) /but with '[' not '(' then go to attachments, click on files names, they will show up on other tabs, copy the link,come back, double click on image part,then paste the link there then do this for all files after you've done it to images, tag (/spoiler) \ but with '[' not '(' \ preview to see if there is a spoiler button like: [spoiler] pic + story then[ /spoiler] |
Ok...I didn't see that part of the page, I thought it was the insert image thingy at the top of the box...thanks for the help
Test Subject
#60
28th Jun 2014 at 10:09 PM
Posts: 7
Can i do horror!!!!!!!!! I think it will be good
#61
29th Jun 2014 at 12:34 AM
Posts: 73
Story Title: Spirit Dreams
Genre: Romance
Cover Picture:
Synopsis & Recap: Elizabeth Mays was a writer who had grown up in a wealthy household, with a gift for speaking to the dead and an independent disposition. Andre Jefferson was the annoyingly charming man she was betrothed to. She would have never guessed that he was important to her until he was gone.
Entry
Dear Diary,
Instead of seeing it my way, Grandmother wants to get me committed. Typical of the old, miserly woman! She acts perfect, and pristine, and—and noble! She acts as if she doesn’t have her own troubles and stresses! No living organism can continue for long to exist sanely under the conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream!
Hell, maybe that’s all this is; a terrible nightmare. I’ll wake up and be fine.
No, I’m fine now. I have to stay fine until I find him. Then, he’ll pull me to his chest, I’ll start crying and he’ll say, “Everything is alright now, bella mio. I may be dead, but I’m still here.”
…Bella mio…for the longest time I had hated that name…now I wish I could hear him say it one more time.
Oh Andre, where are you now?
~6 Months Earlier~
Elizabeth entered the cottage that would be her new home. Now that she made enough in royalties that she could support herself, her grandmother had given it to her as a ‘gift’. Normally, the young woman would feel bad about someone spending so much money on her. However, when it came to her grandmother, she would expect something in return. Now, the blonde was trying to figure out the catch.
Suddenly, the room temperature dropped. That could only mean one thing.
Elizabeth resisted the urge to rub her chilled body as she said, “It took you long enough to catch up.”
An ephemeral laugh filled the corridor. “Even I can’t keep up with a car!” came a voice.
“Weren’t you the one who said that you could beat a car, Andrea?” Elizabeth pointed out.
The ghost of a teenaged girl appeared before her. Most would run away in terror if they saw any kind of spirit, but for the writer, it was just another day in her strange life.
“Sure…that was before I actually tried it!” Andrea’s face broke into a big grin.
“I knew it,” Elizabeth muttered.
“It was awfully nice of Roslyn to give you a house, wasn’t it?” the ghost commented.
“It was…but my grandmother didn’t get rich from philanthropy. She firmly believes in ‘equal exchange’,” the blonde stated. Andrea rolled her glowing eyes.
“You’re such a cynic,” she observed.
“Realist,” the writer corrected.
“In an optimist’s eyes, perhaps. Sadly for you, it’s really hard for a ghost to be an optimist,” Andrea said mournfully.
Elizabeth had to stifle her own eye roll. “Why not explore a bit. We’ll be staying here a while.”
“The ghost’s pouting face mad her have to stifle a chuckle, as well.
“You’re trying to get rid of me! No fair, Liz!” she whined, but disappeared, never the less.
It was just in time, too; Roslyn chose that moment to strut through the front door. Her grandmother did not approve of her connection to the afterlife, and the blonde was in no mood for a lecture on how she had to ‘let go of those childish apparitions’, and that she ‘was a young woman of twenty-six, not a schizophrenic teenager’. Andrea had always hated the latter comment.
Elizabeth pushed the less serious thoughts out of her mind. After all, Roslyn demanded absolute decorum in her presence, with no exceptions.
The elderly woman pulled her into a stiff embrace, which Elizabeth returned awkwardly.
“Hello, dear,” she greeted as she pulled back.
“Grandmother,” the blonde responded in kind.
Roslyn smiled politely. “I trust that the house is to your liking?” she asked.
“Yes…it’s lovely. Thank you,” the writer responded blandly. It wasn’t that she didn’t like the house, she was just leery of the mysterious condition.
“Good, good. You’re an adult, after all, and you need a home of your own,” her grandmother nodded approvingly.
“I appreciate it,” Elizabeth murmured.
“As a grown woman, you should also consider finding a suitable husband,” the elderly woman continued, “someone you can continue our line with.”
Not this, again… “I’ve already told you that I’m not interested in family, Grandmother,” the writer pointed out, stifling a groan.
A flicker of anger crossed Roslyn’s face, but a calm mask soon replaced it.
“You are the sole heir to my estate. Would you render my life’s work moot for the sake of stubborn defiance?” she accused.
Yes. “No, of course not. I’m…just not ready for a mother’s life, yet,” Elizabeth soothed. Dammit. She would have to stand up to her grandmother one of these days. Not today, though.
Roslyn sighed mournfully. “The same excuse you have given me for the past nine years. It seems that if left in your hands, you will never be ready.”
Elizabeth had a feeling that she wouldn’t like where this was going.
“I can’t make you find a young man to court, so I found one for you. His parents seemed more than happy to agree to a betrothal, now you two are set for marriage in six months’ time.”
The blonde abandoned all pretenses of ettiquete as she sputtered out, “What?”
This wasn’t happening. This wasthe twenty-first century, not dynastic England! She was supposed to have a choice in the matter!
“You said I would be allowed to choose my would-be husband!” Elizabeth pointed out heatedly.
“You never made a choice! I don’t have the luxury of time to wait on you! Now don’t like it’s the end of the world!” Roslyn snapped.
“What’s stopping from leaving my betrothed at the altar?” Elizabeth snarled.
“You said yourself that you liked the house!” the old woman reminded her, “You’d be losing it and more if you stepped down from you duty!
“If you two are just awful for each other, the wedding can be called off. But you will be giving this boy a shot. This is for your own good, Elizabeth!”
That was the catch. She knew it was too good to be true. She would lose either the only life she had ever known, or her freedom. It wasn’t a charming conundrum. Of course, she could always pretend to give the man a chance then dump him later, but that would take careful manipulation, though that wasn’t any better than what her grandmother did. Arranging a marriage behind my back, without my consent or knowledge…
Elizabeth sighed, knowing that she didn’t have the time she would need to think it out.
“Fine,” she groaned, hoping that she wouldn’t regret it later.
Roslyn beamed. “Excellent! I knew you would choose wisely, child!” She moved to the front door, and then stopped. “Before I forget, he should be arriving today, so you two can meet each other. Bye now, dear.”
She strode out the door. Today? The same day she got this house? Not a coincidence.
“Well, Liz,” she muttered to the air, “this is a fine mess you’ve stumbled into.”
…
Andre looked around at the lot that would be his home from now on. It was nothing like the rolling, sun-kissed hills of his native land, but it held a certain fairy tale charm. It seems that he could have done much worse.
He had wished to stay home, though; he could do as he pleased, where now he would have to attend to a woman. Also, it was cold here, and the sun could only be seen in the occasional gap in the clouds. However, his mother, who was ever the bookworm, simply told him, “It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of good fortune must be in want of a wife,” which was mother-speak for “suck it up and get over it.” And his father’s only response to his protests was, “Talk to your mother.”
The family needed an heir, sadly, and if said heir could increase the power and standing of the family, even better. If a child had to be sent halfway across the globe to these ends, just as well.
But there was no point in delaying the inevitable, was there?
Andre took a deep breath, and then knocked on the door. A cool wind blew through his hair as the door swung outward, revealing the lady of the house; Ms. Elizabeth Mays.
He studied her, and he suspected that she was studying him, as well.
The man was instantly drawn to her eyes; whiskey brown that spoke of age belied by her appearance. His mother had always said that eyes like that bespoke of a life of hardships, at best. He risked losing himself to those eyes.
And here I thought my parents had set me up with an old crone, Andre thought as he roamed her face, trying to memorize every detail. Bopper blonde hair and a delicate disposition, though the way her brows knit together marred an otherwise lovely face.
Finally, she sighed impatiently, and he was unsure if that was a bad sign or not. “Are you going to stand there gawking like an idiot, or are you going to come in?” she asked.
Well, she wasn’t afraid to speak her mind, at least.
She moved aside to allow him entry, then swooped past him to lead him to the living, before she sat down on a plush-looking loveseat.
He took that as his cue to sit beside her, but before he could, the blonde said, “Not there. Andrea’s sitting there.” Who was Andrea?
“Well, she’s not here yet, is she, bella mio?” he pulled out an arrogant smile that usually made women weak at the knees. This woman, however, simply regarded him with a look of disinterest.
“My name is Elizabeth, not Bella. Don’t call me that from now on,” she stated. He suddenly felt chilled, despite his jacket. “And about Andrea, she’s right behind you.”
There was no one in this room but him and his would-be lady. But why did it feel cold?
This town has a reputation for the strange and supernatural, maybe this Andrea and my betrothed are examples of this?
He didn’t inquire or press the issue. He simply sank down onto the other couch and focused on the first part of her comment, rubbing himself for warmth.
“Elizabeth does not suit a beautiful woman such as yourself. Where I come from, bella is ‘beautiful’. Much more fitting,” he explained.
A blush slowly crept up her face. However, he wasn’t sure if it was due to embarrassment or anger, because her response was to snap at him.
“Don’t toy with me! You don’t want to be here any more than I do,” she stated tersely.
He sighed. Hell hath no fury like a woman’s scorn, and hers was quick to flare, apparently.
“Who said I didn’t want to be here, bella?” he pointed out.
She turned a deeper shade of red. “So you like having your life arranged for you?” she demanded.
Not particularly. “I like pretty women, and behold! A goddess of beauty stands before me,” Andre said, hoping that he sounded charming.
She pushed herself out of her seat, and he flowed suit. If she was angry before, she was pissed, now. What an odd woman.
“Oh, so it’s about my looks, is it? Well, there’s more to a person than a nice ass, pretty boy!” she growled.
At least she appreciates my looks, if not me, he observed.
“Of course, of course. But a pretty face gives me something to admire as I get to know you, no?” he responded, unperturbed.
She had apparently reached her breaking point. “Damn you! Get out!” the woman screeched.
“Suit yourself, bella mio. I will see you in the morning,” he said.
As he moved to leave, he planted a kiss on her cheek.
This enraged her more. “Out!” She growled again, pointing to the door.
…
She stayed on the porch for a while after he left. This man was a handful, so why was she so interested in him. He wasn’t charming, it wasn’t that…yes it was.
“Damn you,” Elizabeth said softly touching the cheek that he kissed.
Requirement: “No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream.” The Haunting of Hill House, Shirley Jackson
Bonus: “It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.” Pride and Prejudice, Jane Austen
Word/Picture Count: 1999/18
A/n: Ok, first off, I know that we aren't really supposed to put captions on our pictures unless it's cover art, but I thought it would be cool to end out the chapter with 'to be continued' on a picture...more creativity or what have you. If that gets me points taken off, then I won't do it in the next rounds.
Next, my photography is atrocious, I am perfectly aware of that. I at least hope my writing made up for it. However, since I was one word off the max limit, I had to cut stuff, so hopefully that doesn't lower the quality at all, but we'll see...(sometimes, word limits are a real pain to work with...) Also, All the pictures are noticeably photoshopped because that decreases file size. From there, I thought, "Hey, this makes the pictures look washed out like they're old or something, and since these are memories, it works wonderfully! Let's do that to all of them!" I probably got a little balance happy...I'm still experimenting with Photoshop Express, so...yeah.
Now, to my thoughts on what's actually important; the story! *cheers and clapping in the distance* I like the 'let's explore most of the plot like it's a memory' type story-telling, I always have, and that style seemed to fit with what I eventually came up with to match the contest. Beyond that, paranormal stuff is cool, so I made Lizzy a medium, because why not? XD Seriously though, it will play an important part to the plot, I hope (we'll see how it fits with the other round requirements...). So, yeah. This is my (probably lame) entry. I'm not a master writer, but practical experience can help, I hope.
FUN FACT: Andrea and Elizabeth, the paranormal duo, are kind of inspired by Dolce and Pico from Rune Factory 4, albeit with a friendlier relationship.
Genre: Romance
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Synopsis & Recap: Elizabeth Mays was a writer who had grown up in a wealthy household, with a gift for speaking to the dead and an independent disposition. Andre Jefferson was the annoyingly charming man she was betrothed to. She would have never guessed that he was important to her until he was gone.
Entry
Dear Diary,
Instead of seeing it my way, Grandmother wants to get me committed. Typical of the old, miserly woman! She acts perfect, and pristine, and—and noble! She acts as if she doesn’t have her own troubles and stresses! No living organism can continue for long to exist sanely under the conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream!
Hell, maybe that’s all this is; a terrible nightmare. I’ll wake up and be fine.
No, I’m fine now. I have to stay fine until I find him. Then, he’ll pull me to his chest, I’ll start crying and he’ll say, “Everything is alright now, bella mio. I may be dead, but I’m still here.”
…Bella mio…for the longest time I had hated that name…now I wish I could hear him say it one more time.
Oh Andre, where are you now?
~6 Months Earlier~
Elizabeth entered the cottage that would be her new home. Now that she made enough in royalties that she could support herself, her grandmother had given it to her as a ‘gift’. Normally, the young woman would feel bad about someone spending so much money on her. However, when it came to her grandmother, she would expect something in return. Now, the blonde was trying to figure out the catch.
Suddenly, the room temperature dropped. That could only mean one thing.
Elizabeth resisted the urge to rub her chilled body as she said, “It took you long enough to catch up.”
An ephemeral laugh filled the corridor. “Even I can’t keep up with a car!” came a voice.
“Weren’t you the one who said that you could beat a car, Andrea?” Elizabeth pointed out.
The ghost of a teenaged girl appeared before her. Most would run away in terror if they saw any kind of spirit, but for the writer, it was just another day in her strange life.
“Sure…that was before I actually tried it!” Andrea’s face broke into a big grin.
“I knew it,” Elizabeth muttered.
“It was awfully nice of Roslyn to give you a house, wasn’t it?” the ghost commented.
“It was…but my grandmother didn’t get rich from philanthropy. She firmly believes in ‘equal exchange’,” the blonde stated. Andrea rolled her glowing eyes.
“You’re such a cynic,” she observed.
“Realist,” the writer corrected.
“In an optimist’s eyes, perhaps. Sadly for you, it’s really hard for a ghost to be an optimist,” Andrea said mournfully.
Elizabeth had to stifle her own eye roll. “Why not explore a bit. We’ll be staying here a while.”
“The ghost’s pouting face mad her have to stifle a chuckle, as well.
“You’re trying to get rid of me! No fair, Liz!” she whined, but disappeared, never the less.
It was just in time, too; Roslyn chose that moment to strut through the front door. Her grandmother did not approve of her connection to the afterlife, and the blonde was in no mood for a lecture on how she had to ‘let go of those childish apparitions’, and that she ‘was a young woman of twenty-six, not a schizophrenic teenager’. Andrea had always hated the latter comment.
Elizabeth pushed the less serious thoughts out of her mind. After all, Roslyn demanded absolute decorum in her presence, with no exceptions.
The elderly woman pulled her into a stiff embrace, which Elizabeth returned awkwardly.
“Hello, dear,” she greeted as she pulled back.
“Grandmother,” the blonde responded in kind.
Roslyn smiled politely. “I trust that the house is to your liking?” she asked.
“Yes…it’s lovely. Thank you,” the writer responded blandly. It wasn’t that she didn’t like the house, she was just leery of the mysterious condition.
“Good, good. You’re an adult, after all, and you need a home of your own,” her grandmother nodded approvingly.
“I appreciate it,” Elizabeth murmured.
“As a grown woman, you should also consider finding a suitable husband,” the elderly woman continued, “someone you can continue our line with.”
Not this, again… “I’ve already told you that I’m not interested in family, Grandmother,” the writer pointed out, stifling a groan.
A flicker of anger crossed Roslyn’s face, but a calm mask soon replaced it.
“You are the sole heir to my estate. Would you render my life’s work moot for the sake of stubborn defiance?” she accused.
Yes. “No, of course not. I’m…just not ready for a mother’s life, yet,” Elizabeth soothed. Dammit. She would have to stand up to her grandmother one of these days. Not today, though.
Roslyn sighed mournfully. “The same excuse you have given me for the past nine years. It seems that if left in your hands, you will never be ready.”
Elizabeth had a feeling that she wouldn’t like where this was going.
“I can’t make you find a young man to court, so I found one for you. His parents seemed more than happy to agree to a betrothal, now you two are set for marriage in six months’ time.”
The blonde abandoned all pretenses of ettiquete as she sputtered out, “What?”
This wasn’t happening. This wasthe twenty-first century, not dynastic England! She was supposed to have a choice in the matter!
“You said I would be allowed to choose my would-be husband!” Elizabeth pointed out heatedly.
“You never made a choice! I don’t have the luxury of time to wait on you! Now don’t like it’s the end of the world!” Roslyn snapped.
“What’s stopping from leaving my betrothed at the altar?” Elizabeth snarled.
“You said yourself that you liked the house!” the old woman reminded her, “You’d be losing it and more if you stepped down from you duty!
“If you two are just awful for each other, the wedding can be called off. But you will be giving this boy a shot. This is for your own good, Elizabeth!”
That was the catch. She knew it was too good to be true. She would lose either the only life she had ever known, or her freedom. It wasn’t a charming conundrum. Of course, she could always pretend to give the man a chance then dump him later, but that would take careful manipulation, though that wasn’t any better than what her grandmother did. Arranging a marriage behind my back, without my consent or knowledge…
Elizabeth sighed, knowing that she didn’t have the time she would need to think it out.
“Fine,” she groaned, hoping that she wouldn’t regret it later.
Roslyn beamed. “Excellent! I knew you would choose wisely, child!” She moved to the front door, and then stopped. “Before I forget, he should be arriving today, so you two can meet each other. Bye now, dear.”
She strode out the door. Today? The same day she got this house? Not a coincidence.
“Well, Liz,” she muttered to the air, “this is a fine mess you’ve stumbled into.”
…
Andre looked around at the lot that would be his home from now on. It was nothing like the rolling, sun-kissed hills of his native land, but it held a certain fairy tale charm. It seems that he could have done much worse.
He had wished to stay home, though; he could do as he pleased, where now he would have to attend to a woman. Also, it was cold here, and the sun could only be seen in the occasional gap in the clouds. However, his mother, who was ever the bookworm, simply told him, “It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of good fortune must be in want of a wife,” which was mother-speak for “suck it up and get over it.” And his father’s only response to his protests was, “Talk to your mother.”
The family needed an heir, sadly, and if said heir could increase the power and standing of the family, even better. If a child had to be sent halfway across the globe to these ends, just as well.
But there was no point in delaying the inevitable, was there?
Andre took a deep breath, and then knocked on the door. A cool wind blew through his hair as the door swung outward, revealing the lady of the house; Ms. Elizabeth Mays.
He studied her, and he suspected that she was studying him, as well.
The man was instantly drawn to her eyes; whiskey brown that spoke of age belied by her appearance. His mother had always said that eyes like that bespoke of a life of hardships, at best. He risked losing himself to those eyes.
And here I thought my parents had set me up with an old crone, Andre thought as he roamed her face, trying to memorize every detail. Bopper blonde hair and a delicate disposition, though the way her brows knit together marred an otherwise lovely face.
Finally, she sighed impatiently, and he was unsure if that was a bad sign or not. “Are you going to stand there gawking like an idiot, or are you going to come in?” she asked.
Well, she wasn’t afraid to speak her mind, at least.
She moved aside to allow him entry, then swooped past him to lead him to the living, before she sat down on a plush-looking loveseat.
He took that as his cue to sit beside her, but before he could, the blonde said, “Not there. Andrea’s sitting there.” Who was Andrea?
“Well, she’s not here yet, is she, bella mio?” he pulled out an arrogant smile that usually made women weak at the knees. This woman, however, simply regarded him with a look of disinterest.
“My name is Elizabeth, not Bella. Don’t call me that from now on,” she stated. He suddenly felt chilled, despite his jacket. “And about Andrea, she’s right behind you.”
There was no one in this room but him and his would-be lady. But why did it feel cold?
This town has a reputation for the strange and supernatural, maybe this Andrea and my betrothed are examples of this?
He didn’t inquire or press the issue. He simply sank down onto the other couch and focused on the first part of her comment, rubbing himself for warmth.
“Elizabeth does not suit a beautiful woman such as yourself. Where I come from, bella is ‘beautiful’. Much more fitting,” he explained.
A blush slowly crept up her face. However, he wasn’t sure if it was due to embarrassment or anger, because her response was to snap at him.
“Don’t toy with me! You don’t want to be here any more than I do,” she stated tersely.
He sighed. Hell hath no fury like a woman’s scorn, and hers was quick to flare, apparently.
“Who said I didn’t want to be here, bella?” he pointed out.
She turned a deeper shade of red. “So you like having your life arranged for you?” she demanded.
Not particularly. “I like pretty women, and behold! A goddess of beauty stands before me,” Andre said, hoping that he sounded charming.
She pushed herself out of her seat, and he flowed suit. If she was angry before, she was pissed, now. What an odd woman.
“Oh, so it’s about my looks, is it? Well, there’s more to a person than a nice ass, pretty boy!” she growled.
At least she appreciates my looks, if not me, he observed.
“Of course, of course. But a pretty face gives me something to admire as I get to know you, no?” he responded, unperturbed.
She had apparently reached her breaking point. “Damn you! Get out!” the woman screeched.
“Suit yourself, bella mio. I will see you in the morning,” he said.
As he moved to leave, he planted a kiss on her cheek.
This enraged her more. “Out!” She growled again, pointing to the door.
…
She stayed on the porch for a while after he left. This man was a handful, so why was she so interested in him. He wasn’t charming, it wasn’t that…yes it was.
“Damn you,” Elizabeth said softly touching the cheek that he kissed.
Requirement: “No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream.” The Haunting of Hill House, Shirley Jackson
Bonus: “It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.” Pride and Prejudice, Jane Austen
Word/Picture Count: 1999/18
A/n: Ok, first off, I know that we aren't really supposed to put captions on our pictures unless it's cover art, but I thought it would be cool to end out the chapter with 'to be continued' on a picture...more creativity or what have you. If that gets me points taken off, then I won't do it in the next rounds.
Next, my photography is atrocious, I am perfectly aware of that. I at least hope my writing made up for it. However, since I was one word off the max limit, I had to cut stuff, so hopefully that doesn't lower the quality at all, but we'll see...(sometimes, word limits are a real pain to work with...) Also, All the pictures are noticeably photoshopped because that decreases file size. From there, I thought, "Hey, this makes the pictures look washed out like they're old or something, and since these are memories, it works wonderfully! Let's do that to all of them!" I probably got a little balance happy...I'm still experimenting with Photoshop Express, so...yeah.
Now, to my thoughts on what's actually important; the story! *cheers and clapping in the distance* I like the 'let's explore most of the plot like it's a memory' type story-telling, I always have, and that style seemed to fit with what I eventually came up with to match the contest. Beyond that, paranormal stuff is cool, so I made Lizzy a medium, because why not? XD Seriously though, it will play an important part to the plot, I hope (we'll see how it fits with the other round requirements...). So, yeah. This is my (probably lame) entry. I'm not a master writer, but practical experience can help, I hope.
FUN FACT: Andrea and Elizabeth, the paranormal duo, are kind of inspired by Dolce and Pico from Rune Factory 4, albeit with a friendlier relationship.
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29th Jun 2014 at 12:47 AM
Posts: 293
Whew! Finally home so I can update.
@clairebear: Sorry about your disc. Hope you find it so you can still play the game. Let me know when you hit 20 posts, will be glad to have you as a judge.
@random_name: Alright! Our first romance! Added you to the entry list. *bows to your perfection*
@Rin_of_Water: Romance #2! Glad to see the picture attaching got figured out. Adding you now!
@Tamlyn:
Memory Games A Sims 3 Thriller Mystery
@clairebear: Sorry about your disc. Hope you find it so you can still play the game. Let me know when you hit 20 posts, will be glad to have you as a judge.
@random_name: Alright! Our first romance! Added you to the entry list. *bows to your perfection*
@Rin_of_Water: Romance #2! Glad to see the picture attaching got figured out. Adding you now!
@Tamlyn:
Memory Games A Sims 3 Thriller Mystery
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#63
29th Jun 2014 at 4:51 PM
Last edited by LucyBorgia : 29th Jun 2014 at 11:14 PM.
Reason: Add 'age' to the second spoiler tag and try to make it not stretch my phone screen so much as it must be doing it for others too and it's untidy ;-) + accuracy about 1995's P&P
Posts: 252
Story Title: Falling for the man next door
Genre: Romance
Cover Picture:
Synopsis: Serena Carpenter, a widow with three children (twins Daisy and Dan and toddler Lily) moves back home to Appaloosa Plains to live with mum Amanda Harris (also widowed) and Amanda’s two dogs. Her late husband Dax was a fire fighter in Bridgeport and died rescuing junkies from an abandoned warehouse inferno. Serena meets back up with her childhood best friend who is now the man next door…
Requirement: “It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.” Pride and Prejudice, Jane Austen
Bonus: “Nobody was really surprised when it happened, not really, not at the subconscious level where savage things grow.” Carrie, Stephen King
Word/Picture Count: 1978 words/14 pictures including cover picture
“Are we nearly there yet?” whined Daniel, kicking Serena’s car seat.
“You’re so stupid Dan,” jibed his sister, “Didn’t you see that sign said 200 miles to Appaloosa Plains? Oh, I forgot, you were too busy nearly being sick!”
Serena sighed, wishing she’d been able to fly back home. “Daisy, stop teasing your brother, he can’t help getting car sick. Dan, about another 3 hours, honey, that’s why we just stopped for drinks and to use the toilets”
“And change Lily’s stinky nappy!” interrupted Daisy. “Mummy, can I have my sweets now?”
“No, sweetheart, no sweets in the car, remember?”
“It’s not fair! Just because Dan gets sick-!”
“Daisy, that’s enough! No sweets in the car because I said so, all right?” Serena had reached the end of her patience for saying calmly ‘No sweets in the hired car, no sweets for Lily in case she chokes, if you’re not sharing the sweets your friends gave you as a moving away present you can’t eat them till Dan has something…
Lily started to cry, trying to reach down for her doll that had slid into the foot-well as Serena drove out of the motorway services. Drawing a deep calming breath, she popped the children’s favourite CD back into the CD player and let the strains of jolly phonics * fill the car, reached down for Lucky and passed it to Lily before indicating to pull out and overtake the lorry crawling in front.
Eventually she pulled up the car outside her parents’ – no, her mother’s house and the tired children tumbled out to hug Granny while Serena unstrapped Lily.
“Dinner’s ready, love,” Amanda hugged her daughter as she spoke, “Let me take Lily while you go and wash your hands. I've reminded Daisy and Daniel where the bathrooms are, though Daisy assured me her hands were clean…”
“Hmm, and I bet you paid as much attention to her saying that as you did to me,” Serena grinned wryly as she put her handbag and coat on the coat rack and went to use the loo and wash her hands while Amanda wiped her younger granddaughter’s sticky hands and helped her onto her booster seat at the table.
“I’ll get the sleeping bags out of the car after dinner – we all need early bedtimes tonight.”
“There’s no need, Serena, I got the beds put together and cosy bedding on all of them,” reassured Amanda.
Daisy piped up “Lily doesn't need early bedtime, she slept in the car and I don’t want to go to bed, me and Dan want to explore, don’t we Dan?”
“Bedtime after dinner, Daisy and no arguments. There’ll be plenty of time for exploring! But you've both got school in the morning and I've got work. Anyway, mum, how could you put the beds together? “
“Maybe Meg and Floss helped, Mummy? You said they help Granny on the farm?”
Amanda ruffled her grandson’s hair as she and Serena gently laughed. “Meg and Floss are good farm dogs, you’re right Daniel, but not so good with tools! Our next door neighbours helped me, sweety. Peter Croft is an old friend of Mummy’s and he and his big boy, Dominic, put the bed frames up, and then Eliza, who’s about your age, helped me put the sheets on.”
“I didn't know Peter was back in Appaloosa Plains, mum? I thought his wife had some awesome film job out in Starlight Shores.” Serena had missed her best friend when he became more interested in his girlfriend than his old friend.
“Mm, I think she found the job more awesome than family life… Peter brought the children back a couple of years ago, and they’re all settled here well now. Well, let’s get the plates washed up and you children all in bed before busy days tomorrow.”
“Mummy, I want a story before I go to bed! Please…” Daisy remembered her manners after a stern look from Granny.
After snuggles with Lily and tucking her into the old cot and reading to Daisy from the first book Serena pulled off the shelf, she and Amanda relaxed with camomile tea.
“Thank you, mum, just what I needed,” Serena sipped from the steaming mug, “I've had so much caffeine over the past few days to keep me going through the packing and driving, I'm not sure when I’ll want coffee again!”
“You’re welcome, love. Daniel didn't want a story before bed, then?”
“No, he loves his bed! He does like stories usually, but when they’re over –tired, Daisy needs a story to keep her relaxing in bed long enough to settle down to sleep, but Dan just scrambles into bed, pulls the covers over and drifts straight off. And Lily off course can’t get out of her cot yet, so sits and sings to herself till she goes to sleep.”
“How did the twins feel about leaving Bridgeport? I know Dax’s family have moved away, but it’s still where their daddy came from,” Amanda asked.
“Yes, but they don’t remember him, mum,” sighed Serena, “They were only Lily’s age when he died and of course Lily wasn't even born then. Dax’s mum didn't want to see them even before she moved away, she said they were too much of a reminder that Dax had gone, especially as Dan takes after Dax so much. I don’t understand that! They were all right about the move, Daisy will miss her friends but she’ll soon make new ones, Dan had 2 or 3 close friends that he can easily keep in touch with as they Skype while playing Minecraft, once I've got us a computer. And I'm glad to come home,” reaching a hand across the table to squeeze her mother’s hand, “I've thought hard about what you said, and you’re right, it’s not fair to the children to grow up with only one adult. But the ‘singles’ scene in Bridgeport is all about clubbing till the early hours, and that’s never been my idea of fun! Finding a new partner isn't as easy as you think when most men are just interested in having a ‘good time’.”
“But remember, darling, “It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.” I've been reading the paper and there are at least five single rich men in town-”
Amanda was interrupted by Serena’s explosion of laughter. “Mum, I hardly think I'm going to go to any more balls in Appaloosa Plains than in Bridgeport! And though I'm very happy to watch Colin Firth getting his shirt wet ** I'm pretty sure the only thing I've got in common with Bridget Jones is that big knickers are now my underwear of choice***! Anyway, I’d better be off to bed too, I've got to be up early in the morning. Are you sure you‘ll be all right with Lily? I can look for a child minder for her.”
Amanda rose to hug Serena goodnight. “Don’t be silly,” she smiled, “I'm looking forward to it! Soon she’ll be in school too and I’ll have no more babies to spoil. Unless you do get re-married and -”
“Goodnight, mum!” Serena went to check on Lily before turning in, and found her little girl wanting a last cuddle before sleep.
She sat in the old rocking chair to nurse her before getting into the lonely double bed.
After work the next day, Serena lent a hand with harvesting the apples in the orchard till she heard a half familiar voice.
“Hey, it looks like you overcame your dislike of gardening in the end, Ree? I remember in school how you hated getting your hands dirty!”
“Peter! You made me jump. Oh, that was so long ago, I think it was in protest at mum and dad having me do so much to help on the farm. But how are you? Thank you for helping mum fix the beds, I dread to think of her trying to do it on her own.”
“No problem, that’s what neighbours are for! Besides, it was a good bonding thing for Dom and I – he finds it hard sometimes with me teaching at Crestview so seeing me do ‘dad’ things as well as ‘serious Mr Croft’ stuff was good.”
“Oh, I didn't know you’d become a teacher! You always wanted to be a footballer,” Serena put the basket of apples down as she walked nearer Peter.
“Yeah, but then I realised that I wasn't quite as good as Gary Lineker****, so being a PE teacher was a better option,” Peter explained. “And it worked well while we were out in Starlight Shores as I was off with the children over the summer while Lacey was on location… I guess Mrs Harris told you Lacey decided it was better for her career to be single?”
“Mum did say something… I'm sorry Peter. You and Lacey seemed like a golden couple when we were young.” Serena searched her mind for a diversion. “Um, come in and meet my children and have a cup of tea.”
“Mr Croft, Ethan said you’re the Scout Leader as well as a teacher?” Dan asked diffidently. “Akela gave mum all the papers about what badge work and things I've done already so I’d be ready to start a new Scout Troop here .”
“Hello Daniel, I had an email from your old Akela to say you were coming to Appaloosa Plains! We look forward to you joining us, and have a space for you in the Wolf Patrol*****, with Ethan,” Peter looked at the earnest little boy in front of him.
“Oh, that’s the best patrol! ‘Cos there are wolves in Minecraft, so it’s like Scouts and Minecraft are the same thing, but really they’re nothing alike except I did a project about Minecraft and talking to people online and internet safety for my IT badge!” Dan enthused.
“So, Daniel likes Minecraft, huh?” Peter sat next to Serena on the porch after meeting the children.
Serena laughed. “Yes, he was quite happy to leave his friends because they can still spend as much time online together as they did in Bridgeport! I’m hoping he’ll start to get more confident about being outside now though. And I know Daisy will be safe coming home from ballet on her own here…”
“You didn’t feel safe in Bridgeport?” asked Peter.
“Umm, not really, especially after what happened to Dax… You know that was my husband’s name?” It was hard for Serena to talk about it, but she continued after Peter’s nod. “He was a fireman, and had been saying the old disused warehouses were a fire trap, but there’s too much lack of public interest in Bridgeport for anyone to be interested in pulling them down unless they can use the land for profit. He got a shout one night to a warehouse that everyone knew junkies used… So he knew he had to try to get them out. Well… he did get some out while the rest of the crew where trying to get the fire under control… But then one of the walls collapsed onto him, and, by the time they got him out, it was too late… And then the ruins just stayed there because no-one would admit to owning the building in case it meant they were also admitting liability for the fire… “
“That’s awful,” Peter’s face showed his distress. “But wasn't there a public outcry?”
“Oh,” Serena’s voice showed her bitterness, “Nobody was really surprised when it happened, not really, not at the subconscious level where savage things grow. Just not prepared to accept responsibility. It took a while before I could pay off the mortgage so we could come back home. But now it’s time for a new life for the children and me.”
*Click here for the ambience of 3 hours of Jolly Phonics
**A]Clip from BBC drama series of Pride and Prejudice of 1995
***What Wikipedia says about the films of Bridget Jones' Diary
****Who is Gary Lineker?
***** I’m fully aware that in terms of UK Scouting, I have a contradiction here between using Akela as Dan’s Scout Leader, putting him in Cub Scouts, and putting him in a Patrol, which puts him in Scouts. You could take it that he and Daisy are now ten and a half, so it makes more sense for him to start Scouts rather than join a new Cub Pack for a few months before he needs to go up to Scouts. Or you could take that Sims’ Scouts have Akelas and Patrols.
Genre: Romance
Cover Picture:
Synopsis: Serena Carpenter, a widow with three children (twins Daisy and Dan and toddler Lily) moves back home to Appaloosa Plains to live with mum Amanda Harris (also widowed) and Amanda’s two dogs. Her late husband Dax was a fire fighter in Bridgeport and died rescuing junkies from an abandoned warehouse inferno. Serena meets back up with her childhood best friend who is now the man next door…
Requirement: “It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.” Pride and Prejudice, Jane Austen
Bonus: “Nobody was really surprised when it happened, not really, not at the subconscious level where savage things grow.” Carrie, Stephen King
Word/Picture Count: 1978 words/14 pictures including cover picture
“Are we nearly there yet?” whined Daniel, kicking Serena’s car seat.
“You’re so stupid Dan,” jibed his sister, “Didn’t you see that sign said 200 miles to Appaloosa Plains? Oh, I forgot, you were too busy nearly being sick!”
Serena sighed, wishing she’d been able to fly back home. “Daisy, stop teasing your brother, he can’t help getting car sick. Dan, about another 3 hours, honey, that’s why we just stopped for drinks and to use the toilets”
“And change Lily’s stinky nappy!” interrupted Daisy. “Mummy, can I have my sweets now?”
“No, sweetheart, no sweets in the car, remember?”
“It’s not fair! Just because Dan gets sick-!”
“Daisy, that’s enough! No sweets in the car because I said so, all right?” Serena had reached the end of her patience for saying calmly ‘No sweets in the hired car, no sweets for Lily in case she chokes, if you’re not sharing the sweets your friends gave you as a moving away present you can’t eat them till Dan has something…
Lily started to cry, trying to reach down for her doll that had slid into the foot-well as Serena drove out of the motorway services. Drawing a deep calming breath, she popped the children’s favourite CD back into the CD player and let the strains of jolly phonics * fill the car, reached down for Lucky and passed it to Lily before indicating to pull out and overtake the lorry crawling in front.
Eventually she pulled up the car outside her parents’ – no, her mother’s house and the tired children tumbled out to hug Granny while Serena unstrapped Lily.
“Dinner’s ready, love,” Amanda hugged her daughter as she spoke, “Let me take Lily while you go and wash your hands. I've reminded Daisy and Daniel where the bathrooms are, though Daisy assured me her hands were clean…”
“Hmm, and I bet you paid as much attention to her saying that as you did to me,” Serena grinned wryly as she put her handbag and coat on the coat rack and went to use the loo and wash her hands while Amanda wiped her younger granddaughter’s sticky hands and helped her onto her booster seat at the table.
“I’ll get the sleeping bags out of the car after dinner – we all need early bedtimes tonight.”
“There’s no need, Serena, I got the beds put together and cosy bedding on all of them,” reassured Amanda.
Daisy piped up “Lily doesn't need early bedtime, she slept in the car and I don’t want to go to bed, me and Dan want to explore, don’t we Dan?”
“Bedtime after dinner, Daisy and no arguments. There’ll be plenty of time for exploring! But you've both got school in the morning and I've got work. Anyway, mum, how could you put the beds together? “
“Maybe Meg and Floss helped, Mummy? You said they help Granny on the farm?”
Amanda ruffled her grandson’s hair as she and Serena gently laughed. “Meg and Floss are good farm dogs, you’re right Daniel, but not so good with tools! Our next door neighbours helped me, sweety. Peter Croft is an old friend of Mummy’s and he and his big boy, Dominic, put the bed frames up, and then Eliza, who’s about your age, helped me put the sheets on.”
“I didn't know Peter was back in Appaloosa Plains, mum? I thought his wife had some awesome film job out in Starlight Shores.” Serena had missed her best friend when he became more interested in his girlfriend than his old friend.
“Mm, I think she found the job more awesome than family life… Peter brought the children back a couple of years ago, and they’re all settled here well now. Well, let’s get the plates washed up and you children all in bed before busy days tomorrow.”
“Mummy, I want a story before I go to bed! Please…” Daisy remembered her manners after a stern look from Granny.
After snuggles with Lily and tucking her into the old cot and reading to Daisy from the first book Serena pulled off the shelf, she and Amanda relaxed with camomile tea.
“Thank you, mum, just what I needed,” Serena sipped from the steaming mug, “I've had so much caffeine over the past few days to keep me going through the packing and driving, I'm not sure when I’ll want coffee again!”
“You’re welcome, love. Daniel didn't want a story before bed, then?”
“No, he loves his bed! He does like stories usually, but when they’re over –tired, Daisy needs a story to keep her relaxing in bed long enough to settle down to sleep, but Dan just scrambles into bed, pulls the covers over and drifts straight off. And Lily off course can’t get out of her cot yet, so sits and sings to herself till she goes to sleep.”
“How did the twins feel about leaving Bridgeport? I know Dax’s family have moved away, but it’s still where their daddy came from,” Amanda asked.
“Yes, but they don’t remember him, mum,” sighed Serena, “They were only Lily’s age when he died and of course Lily wasn't even born then. Dax’s mum didn't want to see them even before she moved away, she said they were too much of a reminder that Dax had gone, especially as Dan takes after Dax so much. I don’t understand that! They were all right about the move, Daisy will miss her friends but she’ll soon make new ones, Dan had 2 or 3 close friends that he can easily keep in touch with as they Skype while playing Minecraft, once I've got us a computer. And I'm glad to come home,” reaching a hand across the table to squeeze her mother’s hand, “I've thought hard about what you said, and you’re right, it’s not fair to the children to grow up with only one adult. But the ‘singles’ scene in Bridgeport is all about clubbing till the early hours, and that’s never been my idea of fun! Finding a new partner isn't as easy as you think when most men are just interested in having a ‘good time’.”
“But remember, darling, “It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.” I've been reading the paper and there are at least five single rich men in town-”
Amanda was interrupted by Serena’s explosion of laughter. “Mum, I hardly think I'm going to go to any more balls in Appaloosa Plains than in Bridgeport! And though I'm very happy to watch Colin Firth getting his shirt wet ** I'm pretty sure the only thing I've got in common with Bridget Jones is that big knickers are now my underwear of choice***! Anyway, I’d better be off to bed too, I've got to be up early in the morning. Are you sure you‘ll be all right with Lily? I can look for a child minder for her.”
Amanda rose to hug Serena goodnight. “Don’t be silly,” she smiled, “I'm looking forward to it! Soon she’ll be in school too and I’ll have no more babies to spoil. Unless you do get re-married and -”
“Goodnight, mum!” Serena went to check on Lily before turning in, and found her little girl wanting a last cuddle before sleep.
She sat in the old rocking chair to nurse her before getting into the lonely double bed.
After work the next day, Serena lent a hand with harvesting the apples in the orchard till she heard a half familiar voice.
“Hey, it looks like you overcame your dislike of gardening in the end, Ree? I remember in school how you hated getting your hands dirty!”
“Peter! You made me jump. Oh, that was so long ago, I think it was in protest at mum and dad having me do so much to help on the farm. But how are you? Thank you for helping mum fix the beds, I dread to think of her trying to do it on her own.”
“No problem, that’s what neighbours are for! Besides, it was a good bonding thing for Dom and I – he finds it hard sometimes with me teaching at Crestview so seeing me do ‘dad’ things as well as ‘serious Mr Croft’ stuff was good.”
“Oh, I didn't know you’d become a teacher! You always wanted to be a footballer,” Serena put the basket of apples down as she walked nearer Peter.
“Yeah, but then I realised that I wasn't quite as good as Gary Lineker****, so being a PE teacher was a better option,” Peter explained. “And it worked well while we were out in Starlight Shores as I was off with the children over the summer while Lacey was on location… I guess Mrs Harris told you Lacey decided it was better for her career to be single?”
“Mum did say something… I'm sorry Peter. You and Lacey seemed like a golden couple when we were young.” Serena searched her mind for a diversion. “Um, come in and meet my children and have a cup of tea.”
“Mr Croft, Ethan said you’re the Scout Leader as well as a teacher?” Dan asked diffidently. “Akela gave mum all the papers about what badge work and things I've done already so I’d be ready to start a new Scout Troop here .”
“Hello Daniel, I had an email from your old Akela to say you were coming to Appaloosa Plains! We look forward to you joining us, and have a space for you in the Wolf Patrol*****, with Ethan,” Peter looked at the earnest little boy in front of him.
“Oh, that’s the best patrol! ‘Cos there are wolves in Minecraft, so it’s like Scouts and Minecraft are the same thing, but really they’re nothing alike except I did a project about Minecraft and talking to people online and internet safety for my IT badge!” Dan enthused.
“So, Daniel likes Minecraft, huh?” Peter sat next to Serena on the porch after meeting the children.
Serena laughed. “Yes, he was quite happy to leave his friends because they can still spend as much time online together as they did in Bridgeport! I’m hoping he’ll start to get more confident about being outside now though. And I know Daisy will be safe coming home from ballet on her own here…”
“You didn’t feel safe in Bridgeport?” asked Peter.
“Umm, not really, especially after what happened to Dax… You know that was my husband’s name?” It was hard for Serena to talk about it, but she continued after Peter’s nod. “He was a fireman, and had been saying the old disused warehouses were a fire trap, but there’s too much lack of public interest in Bridgeport for anyone to be interested in pulling them down unless they can use the land for profit. He got a shout one night to a warehouse that everyone knew junkies used… So he knew he had to try to get them out. Well… he did get some out while the rest of the crew where trying to get the fire under control… But then one of the walls collapsed onto him, and, by the time they got him out, it was too late… And then the ruins just stayed there because no-one would admit to owning the building in case it meant they were also admitting liability for the fire… “
“That’s awful,” Peter’s face showed his distress. “But wasn't there a public outcry?”
“Oh,” Serena’s voice showed her bitterness, “Nobody was really surprised when it happened, not really, not at the subconscious level where savage things grow. Just not prepared to accept responsibility. It took a while before I could pay off the mortgage so we could come back home. But now it’s time for a new life for the children and me.”
*Click here for the ambience of 3 hours of Jolly Phonics
**A]Clip from BBC drama series of Pride and Prejudice of 1995
***What Wikipedia says about the films of Bridget Jones' Diary
****Who is Gary Lineker?
***** I’m fully aware that in terms of UK Scouting, I have a contradiction here between using Akela as Dan’s Scout Leader, putting him in Cub Scouts, and putting him in a Patrol, which puts him in Scouts. You could take it that he and Daisy are now ten and a half, so it makes more sense for him to start Scouts rather than join a new Cub Pack for a few months before he needs to go up to Scouts. Or you could take that Sims’ Scouts have Akelas and Patrols.
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#64
29th Jun 2014 at 5:23 PM
Posts: 3
I'd like to do romance!
#65
29th Jun 2014 at 10:03 PM
Posts: 293
With LucyBorgia's entry we officially have reached the minimum required entries to keep this contest going! Now all we need is 2 more judges and we'll be set. Can't wait to see what stories everyone else has brewing. Hope you had/are having a good weekend!
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#66
29th Jun 2014 at 11:10 PM
Posts: 31
i will do it but im not sure which genre,i will tell u later but probably romance lol
#67
30th Jun 2014 at 1:42 AM
Last edited by justJones : 30th Jun 2014 at 2:17 AM.
Title: Charlie and the Terrible Day
Genre: Horror
Synopsis: Charlie was living the good life. He had it made. He was happy. Until he had his happiness ripped from him. He may never recover from the horror that occurred that day.
Requirement: "Who am I? And how, I wonder, will this story end?" (Romance)
Bonus: “No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream.” (Horror)
Word/Picture Count: 1009 words, 10 pics
It started like any other day; if only I had known the events that would soon begin to unfold. I would have stayed in bed...no...that wouldn't have been enough...I would have run away to hide. You are probably asking yourself, "Who am I? And how, I wonder, will this story end?" Well, as to how this story will end, I guess you'll just have to stick around, if you can stand the horror that will come. Who I am, I will tell you shortly.
First, let me tell you a little about my life. I am living the good life, or at least, I was until that fateful day. I live in a nice house in the suburbs. Middle class family, living the American dream.
Dad is a business man. I'm not sure exactly what that means, other than he carries a briefcase. He always smells of paper, so I guess maybe he does a lot with paper. Also has a faint smell of the perfume his secretary wears too much of.
I only met her once, at a cookout Mom and Dad hosted, but one whiff of her and my nose burned for a week! I could still smell her in the yard for weeks after. So it's no wonder the stuff clings to Dad, I don't know how he can stand it, but he doesn't seem to notice.
Mom doesn't have a job, other than being a mom, which seems to be a pretty tough job. She always smells so clean, probably because she is always cleaning something. Or cooking. Cooking stuff that smells so good I can't help but sit at her feet and drool. She just shakes her head, tells me I'm silly and that I'm not getting any. But that's ok, she always makes sure I have enough to eat, just not the yummy smelling stuff she's always cooking.
Billy is just a normal kid. He goes to school, smells like dirt and sweat, and loves to play ball. Which is also my favorite thing to play.
I'm Charlie. Mom always tells me I'm a "silly pup", whatever that means.
____________________________________________________________
My mornings are spent lounging around the house, eating, playing with my toys and hanging out with Mom. Then in the afternoons, after Billy finished his homework, he and I play outside till dinner time. I go to bed every night snuggled up next to Billy; then wake up the next day and do it all over again. That morning started just like all the others. Mom woke Billy up for school, we went down and had breakfast and Billy headed to the bus stop. As I watched him walk down the driveway from the back of the couch I was happy. I yelled goodbye
as he turned out of sight, and then hopped down to go play with my wiggly rope. As I laid gnawing on the knot, Mom walked past with a fresh basket of wonderfully filthy smelling clothes. I don't know why she insists on washing them, I prefer them before they've been washed.
"Oh, Charlie, you stink. We really need to clean you up, silly pup," she said casually as she passed. I just looked up and thumped my tail in acknowledgement. "Definitely have to give you a bath before we go later."
...before we go later, I pondered excitedly. I love riding in the car! I wondered where we were going. I began to hope it was the dog park, or maybe Grandma and Grandpa's farm. I had no idea of the horror that would await at the end of that car ride. For the time being, I was blissfully ignorant. I wish I could have stayed that way. I wish I had run away. But instead, I decided to take a nap. I dreamt of running through the fields at Grandma and Grandpa's, blissfully chasing Billy as he held a beautiful stick out in front of me.
No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream. So why shouldn't I dream? I'll tell you why. Because such pleasant dreams only make the terror of reality all the more horrific.
I woke up from my nap with pleasant thoughts of the farm, blissfully ignorant of the horror that awaited me. A delicious smell greeted my nose. Cookies! Mom was baking cookies! I never got any, but man, did they smell good! Mom says chocolate is bad for me, but that's a risk I'd be more than willing to take.
I sauntered into the kitchen to sit pleadingly at her feet. But no luck. Once the cookies were on the rack to cool, Mom said "Time to give you a bath and scooped me up and headed down the hall. I hate baths. I wiggled and tried desperately to get down, but she had a very firm grip on me. So I gave in. I don't know why Mom insists on everything being clean, I like everything nice and dirty.
Once we got to the bathroom, she set me down to run the bath. I tried to make another escape, but she had shut the door completely. I pawed at it a bit hoping it might open, but I was unsuccessful. So I tried to squeeze behind the toilet, but Mom foiled my attempt by grabbing me too quickly. She’s very fast. As she put me in the tub, I switched tactics, whimpering and whining as pathetically as I could, and she just laughed at me! She can be real sadistic at times.
“You are getting a bath, silly pup, whether you like it or not.”
Well, I don’t! It’s so humiliating to have all the dirt that I worked so hard to get all over me washed off so quickly. I think baths should be outlawed! Yet still, as much as I hated the bath, it was really one of the high points of my day, compared to what would follow later.
Yes, I know the pics are not traditional. But as the story is told by a dog, the pics are (mostly) from his PoV. Also, that's why they are so desaturated; dog's don't see color well.
Genre: Horror
Synopsis: Charlie was living the good life. He had it made. He was happy. Until he had his happiness ripped from him. He may never recover from the horror that occurred that day.
Requirement: "Who am I? And how, I wonder, will this story end?" (Romance)
Bonus: “No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream.” (Horror)
Word/Picture Count: 1009 words, 10 pics
It started like any other day; if only I had known the events that would soon begin to unfold. I would have stayed in bed...no...that wouldn't have been enough...I would have run away to hide. You are probably asking yourself, "Who am I? And how, I wonder, will this story end?" Well, as to how this story will end, I guess you'll just have to stick around, if you can stand the horror that will come. Who I am, I will tell you shortly.
First, let me tell you a little about my life. I am living the good life, or at least, I was until that fateful day. I live in a nice house in the suburbs. Middle class family, living the American dream.
Dad is a business man. I'm not sure exactly what that means, other than he carries a briefcase. He always smells of paper, so I guess maybe he does a lot with paper. Also has a faint smell of the perfume his secretary wears too much of.
I only met her once, at a cookout Mom and Dad hosted, but one whiff of her and my nose burned for a week! I could still smell her in the yard for weeks after. So it's no wonder the stuff clings to Dad, I don't know how he can stand it, but he doesn't seem to notice.
Mom doesn't have a job, other than being a mom, which seems to be a pretty tough job. She always smells so clean, probably because she is always cleaning something. Or cooking. Cooking stuff that smells so good I can't help but sit at her feet and drool. She just shakes her head, tells me I'm silly and that I'm not getting any. But that's ok, she always makes sure I have enough to eat, just not the yummy smelling stuff she's always cooking.
Billy is just a normal kid. He goes to school, smells like dirt and sweat, and loves to play ball. Which is also my favorite thing to play.
I'm Charlie. Mom always tells me I'm a "silly pup", whatever that means.
____________________________________________________________
My mornings are spent lounging around the house, eating, playing with my toys and hanging out with Mom. Then in the afternoons, after Billy finished his homework, he and I play outside till dinner time. I go to bed every night snuggled up next to Billy; then wake up the next day and do it all over again. That morning started just like all the others. Mom woke Billy up for school, we went down and had breakfast and Billy headed to the bus stop. As I watched him walk down the driveway from the back of the couch I was happy. I yelled goodbye
as he turned out of sight, and then hopped down to go play with my wiggly rope. As I laid gnawing on the knot, Mom walked past with a fresh basket of wonderfully filthy smelling clothes. I don't know why she insists on washing them, I prefer them before they've been washed.
"Oh, Charlie, you stink. We really need to clean you up, silly pup," she said casually as she passed. I just looked up and thumped my tail in acknowledgement. "Definitely have to give you a bath before we go later."
...before we go later, I pondered excitedly. I love riding in the car! I wondered where we were going. I began to hope it was the dog park, or maybe Grandma and Grandpa's farm. I had no idea of the horror that would await at the end of that car ride. For the time being, I was blissfully ignorant. I wish I could have stayed that way. I wish I had run away. But instead, I decided to take a nap. I dreamt of running through the fields at Grandma and Grandpa's, blissfully chasing Billy as he held a beautiful stick out in front of me.
No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream. So why shouldn't I dream? I'll tell you why. Because such pleasant dreams only make the terror of reality all the more horrific.
I woke up from my nap with pleasant thoughts of the farm, blissfully ignorant of the horror that awaited me. A delicious smell greeted my nose. Cookies! Mom was baking cookies! I never got any, but man, did they smell good! Mom says chocolate is bad for me, but that's a risk I'd be more than willing to take.
I sauntered into the kitchen to sit pleadingly at her feet. But no luck. Once the cookies were on the rack to cool, Mom said "Time to give you a bath and scooped me up and headed down the hall. I hate baths. I wiggled and tried desperately to get down, but she had a very firm grip on me. So I gave in. I don't know why Mom insists on everything being clean, I like everything nice and dirty.
Once we got to the bathroom, she set me down to run the bath. I tried to make another escape, but she had shut the door completely. I pawed at it a bit hoping it might open, but I was unsuccessful. So I tried to squeeze behind the toilet, but Mom foiled my attempt by grabbing me too quickly. She’s very fast. As she put me in the tub, I switched tactics, whimpering and whining as pathetically as I could, and she just laughed at me! She can be real sadistic at times.
“You are getting a bath, silly pup, whether you like it or not.”
Well, I don’t! It’s so humiliating to have all the dirt that I worked so hard to get all over me washed off so quickly. I think baths should be outlawed! Yet still, as much as I hated the bath, it was really one of the high points of my day, compared to what would follow later.
Yes, I know the pics are not traditional. But as the story is told by a dog, the pics are (mostly) from his PoV. Also, that's why they are so desaturated; dog's don't see color well.
#68
30th Jun 2014 at 4:09 AM
Posts: 218
justJones, your pictures are amazing! You have a real eye for angles and details. Well done!
"Passion makes no accommodation for self-preservation."
Field Researcher
#69
30th Jun 2014 at 6:12 AM
Posts: 252
Just Jones, I'm pretty worried for Charlie with your cover picture! She looks a bit scissor happy!
#70
30th Jun 2014 at 3:28 PM
Funny you should say that LucyBorgia, you should actually be more worried about her, lol. I forgot she was still running with scissors as I was setting up another shot, till out of the corner of my eye I saw the reaper So that was an "exit without saving" day, lol.
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#71
30th Jun 2014 at 3:41 PM
Posts: 3
I would love to enter but I'm a bit of a noob and this is my first contest so uhm.. please explain what a round is to me? Sorry...!
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#72
30th Jun 2014 at 3:52 PM
Posts: 12
JustJones, are you like a genius because that was one of the most surprising moments I've ever read in any story...
I feel a bit duped, but I love it!!!! I'm impressed. That takes serious writing talent, man!!! If you don't get top marks for this entry, I'm calling shenanigans!!!
I mean, Charlie was the dog!! Up until he was introduced, I thought he was the kid!
I feel a bit duped, but I love it!!!! I'm impressed. That takes serious writing talent, man!!! If you don't get top marks for this entry, I'm calling shenanigans!!!
#73
30th Jun 2014 at 4:03 PM
Thank you very much, random_name! I was a little concerned it wasn't so good Makes me happy to hear, as well as Freelala's praise of my pics, which I was also worried about. Since as far as the content of the pics goes, they are very simple, but believe me, a few of them, the bath for one, were very difficult to get the right angles and such :D
#74
30th Jun 2014 at 6:07 PM
Posts: 73
Hey, other people that are working on entries at the moment and feel like their photography skills are lacking! Apparently there's a trick to get more interesting pictures or something called the 'Rule of Threes'. I asked someone I knew who studies photography, and she says that it works like this;
Split the screen up into a 3X3 grid, (like a hashtag or something...I don't know much about social media...:P) then pick a focal point from one of the corners of the center square. I don't know if it would work for Sims, I haven't tried it, but if you aren't confident in your photography skills or whatever, it might be worth trying. I'll be trying for the next round, since I already did my pictures...yeah. *awkward silence*
Split the screen up into a 3X3 grid, (like a hashtag or something...I don't know much about social media...:P) then pick a focal point from one of the corners of the center square. I don't know if it would work for Sims, I haven't tried it, but if you aren't confident in your photography skills or whatever, it might be worth trying. I'll be trying for the next round, since I already did my pictures...yeah. *awkward silence*
#75
1st Jul 2014 at 3:29 AM
Posts: 293
Quote: Originally posted by Chqcqlatelqver
I would love to enter but I'm a bit of a noob and this is my first contest so uhm.. please explain what a round is to me? Sorry...! |
Think of a game show. A contestant goes onto a show and answers trivia or sings or must beat the clock doing silly antics, etc. If they do well, they move on to the next level (or round). Video games usually have many levels (rounds) you have to go through before you can beat the game and win. That's what a contest round is. It's a progression, the levels, the series of events to go through to reach the end. In this contest each round is the progression of your story. The first round is the beginning, the next two rounds will be the middle, and the last round your story's conclusion. Unlike a game show, though, there aren't any eliminations and you don't have to worry about dying like in a video game!
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