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LadyAwesome

Originality = 10	Excerpt = 10	Characters = 10	Events = 10	Creativity = 40	Pictures =10	Mood = 10	Staging = 10	Scene = 30	Flow = 20	Rules = 5	CC = 5	Total = 100	Bonus = 10	OVERALL TOTAL
7	10	7	7	31	10	7	10	27	16	5	5	84	10	94
8	10	8	9	35	10	8	9	27	16	5	5	88	10	98
11	8	8	8	35	10	8	10	28	16	5	5	89	10	99

This story has really changed from it's original direction and lead me to somewhere entirely unexpected. I feel slightly that the ghost element of the story is almost forgotten and that the vampire angle which you introduced has taken over, however the rich back story you created for the vampires and their rules is intresting and i like how you've woven your characters into this new reality. The relationship between brother and sister is what underpins this story and it flows well throughout your chapters, my only concern regarding flow is the abrupt way in which the angle of the story changed, i hope you will bring it back around to deal with aiden's ghostliness before the end.

I LOVE LA's chracterisation - she is so funny and her use of dialogue is excellent. I demand the right to give her 11 points for the Gnome. I NEVER saw that coming.

Ahaha, the Gnome, the gnome! Really great use of screenshots and lighting. The vamp is a hottie. I am really interested how this all plays together: the ghost, the vampires, King Mahon. Can't wait for the end.

Originality = 10	Excerpt = 10	Characters = 10	Events = 10	Creativity = 40	Pictures =10	Mood = 10	Staging = 10	Scene = 30	Flow = 20	Rules = 5	CC = 5	Total = 100	Bonus = 10	OVERALL TOTAL
7	10	7	7	31	10	7	10	27	16	5	5	84	10	94
8	10	8	9	35	10	8	9	27	16	5	5	88	10	98
11	8	8	8	35	10	8	10	28	16	5	5	89	10	99

Originality = 10	Excerpt = 10	Characters = 10	Events = 10	Creativity = 40	Pictures =10	Mood = 10	Staging = 10	Scene = 30	Flow = 20	Rules = 5	CC = 5	Total = 100	Bonus = 10	OVERALL TOTAL
9	8	9	8	34	10	9	10	29	18	5	5	91	10	101
9	9	10	9	37	10	10	8	28	19	5	5	94	10	104
8	9	9	9	35	10	9	10	29	20	5	5	94	8	102

Originality = 10	Excerpt = 10	Characters = 10	Events = 10	Creativity = 40	Pictures =10	Mood = 10	Staging = 10	Scene = 30	Flow = 20	Rules = 5	CC = 5	Total = 100	Bonus = 10	OVERALL TOTAL
7	10	8	8	33	10	8	10	28	17	5	5	88	10	98
8	10	8	9	35	10	9	10	29	17	5	5	91	10	101
10	10	10	10	40	10	10	10	30	20	5	5	100	10	110

Originality = 10	Excerpt = 10	Characters = 10	Events = 10	Creativity = 40	Pictures =10	Mood = 10	Staging = 10	Scene = 30	Flow = 20	Rules = 5	CC = 5	Total = 100	Bonus = 10	OVERALL TOTAL
10	10	9	10	39	10	8	10	28	17	5	5	94	10	104
9	9	9	10	37	10	8	9	27	17	5	5	91	10	101
10	10	9	8	37	10	10	10	30	17	5	5	94	7	101

Originality = 10	Excerpt = 10	Characters = 10	Events = 10	Creativity = 40	Pictures =10	Mood = 10	Staging = 10	Scene = 30	Flow = 20	Rules = 5	CC = 5	Total = 100	Bonus = 10	OVERALL TOTAL
7	10	7	7	31	10	7	10	27	16	5	5	84	10	94
8	10	8	9	35	10	8	9	27	16	5	5	88	10	98
11	8	8	8	35	10	8	10	28	16	5	5	89	10	99

Originality = 10	Excerpt = 10	Characters = 10	Events = 10	Creativity = 40	Pictures =10	Mood = 10	Staging = 10	Scene = 30	Flow = 20	Rules = 5	CC = 5	Total = 100	Bonus = 10	OVERALL TOTAL
9	8	9	8	34	10	9	10	29	18	5	5	91	10	101
9	9	10	9	37	10	10	8	28	19	5	5	94	10	104
8	9	9	9	35	10	9	10	29	20	5	5	94	8	102

Originality = 10	Excerpt = 10	Characters = 10	Events = 10	Creativity = 40	Pictures =10	Mood = 10	Staging = 10	Scene = 30	Flow = 20	Rules = 5	CC = 5	Total = 100	Bonus = 10	OVERALL TOTAL
7	10	8	8	33	10	8	10	28	17	5	5	88	10	98
8	10	8	9	35	10	9	10	29	17	5	5	91	10	101
10	10	10	10	40	10	10	10	30	20	5	5	100	10	110

Originality = 10	Excerpt = 10	Characters = 10	Events = 10	Creativity = 40	Pictures =10	Mood = 10	Staging = 10	Scene = 30	Flow = 20	Rules = 5	CC = 5	Total = 100	Bonus = 10	OVERALL TOTAL
10	10	9	10	39	10	8	10	28	17	5	5	94	10	104
9	9	9	10	37	10	8	9	27	17	5	5	91	10	101
10	10	9	8	37	10	10	10	30	17	5	5	94	7	101

View Single Post in: Story Time Contest - Round 5 Scores, Final Scores and BONUS!

Originality = 10	Excerpt = 10	Characters = 10	Events = 10	Creativity = 40	Pictures =10	Mood = 10	Staging = 10	Scene = 30	Flow = 20	Rules = 5	CC = 5	Total = 100	Bonus = 10	OVERALL TOTAL
7	10	7	7	31	10	7	10	27	16	5	5	84	10	94
8	10	8	9	35	10	8	9	27	16	5	5	88	10	98
11	8	8	8	35	10	8	10	28	16	5	5	89	10	99

Originality = 10	Excerpt = 10	Characters = 10	Events = 10	Creativity = 40	Pictures =10	Mood = 10	Staging = 10	Scene = 30	Flow = 20	Rules = 5	CC = 5	Total = 100	Bonus = 10	OVERALL TOTAL
9	8	9	8	34	10	9	10	29	18	5	5	91	10	101
9	9	10	9	37	10	10	8	28	19	5	5	94	10	104
8	9	9	9	35	10	9	10	29	20	5	5	94	8	102

Originality = 10	Excerpt = 10	Characters = 10	Events = 10	Creativity = 40	Pictures =10	Mood = 10	Staging = 10	Scene = 30	Flow = 20	Rules = 5	CC = 5	Total = 100	Bonus = 10	OVERALL TOTAL
7	10	8	8	33	10	8	10	28	17	5	5	88	10	98
8	10	8	9	35	10	9	10	29	17	5	5	91	10	101
10	10	10	10	40	10	10	10	30	20	5	5	100	10	110

Originality = 10	Excerpt = 10	Characters = 10	Events = 10	Creativity = 40	Pictures =10	Mood = 10	Staging = 10	Scene = 30	Flow = 20	Rules = 5	CC = 5	Total = 100	Bonus = 10	OVERALL TOTAL
10	10	9	10	39	10	8	10	28	17	5	5	94	10	104
9	9	9	10	37	10	8	9	27	17	5	5	91	10	101
10	10	9	8	37	10	10	10	30	17	5	5	94	7	101