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Née whiterider
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#2 Old 24th Jan 2013 at 2:04 PM
Default Quality|1|Writing Quality
1:The career levels have little to no descriptive text and do not progress logically from level to level.

2:The career levels have a few key points that are interesting, however, they could use more descriptive text and reorganizing to make them stand out and progress logically through each level.

3:The career level descriptive texts have a good starting point, but could also use some fleshing out to make them more interesting, and/or some editing could be done for the career to advance logically from level to level.

4:This career has a really solid base in both descriptive text and logical order. Overall, the career is well thought out and seems to proceed logically through each career level.

5:This career advances logically and the descriptive text per level is not only well thought out but really captures the interest of the downloader. Fantastic job!

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