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1:The career levels have little to no descriptive text and do not progress logically from level to level.
2:The career levels have a few key points that are interesting, however, they could use more descriptive text and reorganizing to make them stand out and progress logically through each level.
3:The career level descriptive texts have a good starting point, but could also use some fleshing out to make them more interesting, and/or some editing could be done for the career to advance logically from level to level.
4:This career has a really solid base in both descriptive text and logical order. Overall, the career is well thought out and seems to proceed logically through each career level.
5:This career advances logically and the descriptive text per level is not only well thought out but really captures the interest of the downloader. Fantastic job!
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