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Your words paint a vivid mental image.
It also reminded me of this guy where I live, that stands at this intersection everyday during rush hour begging.
On a day before Christmas, lots of kind ladies were stopping to press money in his hands and handing him bags full of food and clothes.
I envy people who can evoke so many common emotions and memories with just a few small words.
Thanks! I appreciate your feedback. Oh and no need to envy me! You worte that beautiful poem about teen angst, that one, in my opinion is way better than mine! Yours speeks of more emotion.