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Test Subject
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#1 Old 22nd Jun 2011 at 3:50 PM
Behind the mask.
Kinda noob-ish since I'm new at poetry.

Wear that mask
go on, weak girl, keep lying
smile, grin, and laugh
While you're slowly dying

And if someone asks?
You're just tired
use a better excuse
If you feel insipred

When they see you
You have this special spark
But as soon as they turn around
It's all gloomy and dark

Your dear friends,
You don't want to harm,
So you sigh, smile,
and hide behind your charm

You're the girl
Who can reach the sky
but instead of standing up
You shrink and begin to cry

With an inependent spirit,
You want to walk alone
You push away those beside you
and sit on your dark throne

In the dark
You shed your tears
For you already have
Met your greatest fears

Now you realise
that your biggest foe
was that mask you put on
before you go

But now it's too late
You were too loud
you lost your mind
You scared the crowd

You turned into a disgrace
lazy,small, with a feeble soul
all because of the emotions
That you couldn't control

think about it,

You are living inside a bubble
You hide from others
Just to avoid the trouble
Test Subject
#2 Old 22nd Jun 2012 at 5:22 AM
I don't think that was noobish at all! I really liked it. It was honest and emotional. Really good poetry, my friend.
Test Subject
#3 Old 9th Jul 2012 at 12:40 AM
Wow! This is so good! xx
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