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I like the houses from the outside. For upload, you also need clear floor plan shots of each livable floor of each lot. I would suggest perhaps a tiny bit more garden and use terrain paint under plants, it adds realism and its free.
Is the park covered in tile? I would think about softening it by keeping tile to certain areas and perhaps grass, pine bark or sand in others. You need to include bathrooms and some way for sims to eat. A little BBQ area or some snack machines. Think also about landscaping, perhaps a pond or some flower beds and a tree, something to soften it up. Think about some shade either over the eating area from an awning, a table umbrella or from a tree. The hedge plants are sitting on concrete? I would remove that and add terrain paint dirt under them.
Just adding I notice toddler ride ons. If the park is meant for toddlers you might want to think about adding a changing table to the bathrooms.
I can't tell much about the clothing shop at all without a floor plan.
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