That's a nice park! But my advice to you is that to arrange things in a more "natural way" and not to arrange it too "planned out".Straight lines are usually are boring. Also, put some candles into the parks, as they help your sims to find inner peace. Continue building and never give up ! (Practice makes perfect) I'll give you advices on your buildings.

Thanks I'll prepare a new one following yours advise ! Thanks thanks !

thanks