View Poll Results: Predict What Will Happen Next
Mortimer will reveal what's been bothering Him
2 40.00%
Mortimer will not reveal what's been bothering him
1 20.00%
Gunther will ask Mortimer if he wants to spend time with him
1 20.00%
Gunther will ignore Mortimer's problems
0 0%
Mortimer will throw a tantrum
1 20.00%
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#1 Old 12th Oct 2010 at 9:31 AM Last edited by ricardodesinor : 12th Oct 2010 at 6:46 PM. Reason: Fixing Some very noticeable errors.
Default Sims 3 Secrets Proluge: The Lost Boy

Young Mortimer, Lost Boy. In reality he is misunderstood and to others he's been proven insane by his peers. No one understands him. At The early age of 10 unlike most little boys around the neighborhood you would find him waking up early just to see the sunrise and set. It was around 4:00 and his mother was getting worried about him.

Cornelia made her way into the mansion's living room where she caught her husband reading a book."Gunther was so predictable."She thought. She took a quick glance at the wall clock, It read 4:00. At around this time Gunther was going to the office building for a meeting he had scheduled. Cornelia unaware of his plans decided to mention Mortimer to him. But at the same time Gunther shut his book close and properly placed it in the bookshelf.

Cornelia knowing that he was probably in a rush grabbed him by the shoulder anyways as he tried to run out the house."Gunther may I have a word with you."Cornelia asked."Sure make it quick."Gunther replied. Even though it didn't show Gunther was very excited about this meeting. He and Nancy Landgraab were going to meet some people from out of town who wanted them to sponsor them on a new business venture. If all went well Doos Corporate Company will fund the mayor campaign and the construction to many new buildings and homes. It was all to upgrade Sunset Valley into a new modern city. It would attract new citizens and they will finally be placed on the map.

A distracted Gunther was snapped out of his day dream."I'm sorry Cornelia can we perhaps schedule this for another time."Gunther asked."What kind of man schedules a time to speak to his wife."Cornelia asked. Naturally she was use to Gunther's workaholic habits she understood that Gunther felt trap under his parent's inheritance. But really Gunther felt like he didn't accomplish anything in life so he felt it was best to prove as his neighbors and friends that he wasn't just a millionaire playboy. Things got out of hand and he was left confuse on whether he married Cornelia just to prove rumors wrong. But this time it concerned the mental health of their son. She couldn't stand for this."Forget it Gunther you can go to work."Cornelia said. With out a reply Gunther made his way out the mansion and into his car.

Gunther and Cornelia had hit a rough spot in the marriage and it seemed as if any day they were willing to call it quits. Cornelia who loved Gunther very much also gave her many sleepless nights wondering if the next day he will announce it, So she decided to stop all the arguing with him. Ignoring her fears Cornelia walked outside of the mansion and decided that this was a perfect time to bond with Mortimer, really try to connect with him to see what's been bothering him. She walked to the stone hedges and noticed him still staring into the blank."Hey Morty, do you wanna go visit aunt Agnes with me."Cornelia asked. Mortimer hesitated to answer."Yes mother, I want to visit Aunt Agnes."Mortimer replied. It shocked Cornelia a little bit there was no emotion in his voice, lately Mortimer has been really distant. It was only a month ago when Mortimer's teacher called, Cornelia thought it was a call cause of Mortimer misbehaving, or maybe he failed a course. But she was surprised that it was a call from a Concern Teacher saying that he is sorry he gave Mortimer an F in participation and group work. He just keeps to himself in class, looks out the window during group work, and the teacher even tried a way to adjust his classroom functions for Mortimer, mostly because he knew Mortimer had potential and he was his Star student. The teacher even suggested Therapy.

The last thing Cornelia wanted was Mortimer going through Therapy, his condition wasn't really that intense. Cornelia went back to the mansion and grabbed her keys. The two took a lovely ride around Sunset Valley, there were so many beautiful parts in the young town. They made a sharp turn to Agnes street and they finally arrived. Mortimer kept his face toward the window ignoring Cornelia. This worried her more, They finally get some alone time and he didn't want to say anything.

When Cornelia arrived she let herself in. She recently was given a spare key to the house but never really used it. She hadn't seen much of Agnes recently. She immediately took advantage of the time to look around the very noticeable renovations. Agnes had upgraded the homes theme from colonial to modern. The furniture and wall paint and floor was all seen on the Designer Homes recent cover magazine. Cornelia was impressed it was like she stepped into the magazine herself. The latest appliances, granite white counter tops with black wood counters. The fridge screen was a very good size and had many options. For months Cornelia had asked Gunther to renovate the house. But she always received the same reply on how it was tradition, and the house would remain the same way his parent's left it. So Cornelia had to work with outdated furniture and appliances.

Mesmerized Cornelia snap back into reality. She went upstairs to Agnes's room and found her watching TV she looked stress free going about her business despite her recent loss. Things seemed a little perfect, New car, huge renovations. Cornelia felt it was best to find out what's really going on she seemed to be doing well after for someone who so often claim they are in mourning.

"Agnes you aren't well, you should be resting."Cornelia said approaching her sister."What are you talking about I'm fine."Agnes replied."Agnes this must be some joke, when Erik died I thought you'd be lost without him."Cornelia said."Erik would had wanted me to move on, and besides his huge inheritance cheered me up."Agnes replied."Admit it, then you didn't love him."Cornelia said."Cornelia how could you, Accuse me your baby sister of being a golddiger I love Erik, his death was a shock to me more than you think, I didn't want the past to be dragging me down, I'm way to young for that, I want you to leave."Agnes yelled.

An angry Cornelia walked out the house grabbing Mortimer. To make matter's worse she found Mortimer at the exact spot she left him staring out the window. Stress just piled up right on top of her shoulders. Things started filling her head as she drove she tried to hold back tears. Her concern for Mortimer's mental health had really strained her marriage. And to make things worse her sister, her best friend was now very angry with her and kicked her out of her house. She was embarrassed. She felt as if she was the sane one in the family. She never imagined that this was her fate, She always wanted a big family, and to keep in touch with relatives. Her parent's were dead, her sister's husband died, and Gunther doesn't even wanna get into the subject of kids. She only had three family members left and all of them kept their distances even her husband kept to himself from her. Was their something wrong with her. She wanted to fix it badly maybe even family therapy including Agnes.

She finally reached the mansion and it was getting dark. Another night in the scary mansion. Cornelia realized how much she's changed her lifestyle for Gunther, She never imagine herself living in a less insane version of the Adam's family mansion. Cornelia was afraid of the mansion and often begged Gunther to paint over the wood. Then she would hear another family tradition lecture. What scared her more was the graveyard behind the house and the even bigger one right next to them. She begged and begged for Gunther to remove it but got another lecture on how it's tradition and how someday they will be buried there. Cornelia was so scared of the mansion she turned on all the lights when she knew she was coming home late and she wouldn't leave her bedroom after midnight.

Cornelia was in the bathroom brushing her teeth. She had just made dinner for Mortimer they both ate without saying a word to each other. Gunther didn't make it home early that night and she really didn't notice. She took advantage of the time to keep to her self. She had to admit sometimes she was a bit of a loner but she still enjoyed company of others. At that time Cornelia tried to figure out a solution to her strained marriage. She then started thinking how she would sometimes find herself jealous when Nancy comes over and starts to brag about one of her famous adventures with Gunther. Or how she happens to know everything before Gunther even told Cornelia or if he even got around to telling her.

Then Cornelia remembered how they were once promised to each other but that was way before she met Gunther. Heck Cornelia never even saw his parent's. She started to feel special. She remembered how Gunther choose her. Although Gunther was a few years older than Cornelia he's had a pretty long history. Gunther had been engaged three times, The first to Nancy but it ended after they realized that one of them would have to give up their last names. Nancy eventually married Geoffry who gave up his last name. While Gunther was in college a one night-stand gone bad Lolita Goth nagged him into marrying her and Gunther gave in and married her he soon fell for her anyways but she died. Lolita was such a blur to Gunther her last name never really came to the light. And his final engagement which ended up being his last was to Cornelia Goth, their marriage manage to stay for more than 11 years. At the same time Cornelia found herself smiling through the tooth paste and that's when Gunther walked in.

Cornelia immediately cornered Gunther at the door."I'm not asking you again, Gunther please talk to your son."Cornelia said. Gunther saw that he had no choice. He wasn't really in the mood, Nancy got into a heated argument with Vita Alto the person giving the lecture for the business venture when she mention the mayor campaign. Nancy had accused Vita of trying to gain to much power over Sunset Valley. Gunther thought it was a good idea since they hadn't had a mayor since his father died and he was the mayor."Fine where is he."Gunther asked."He's upstairs in the attic."Cornelia responded

Mortimer over heard his parent's and decided to avoid the confrontation. So he decided to walk upstairs to the balcony. No one understood what was really going on with him. There was nothing wrong with him.

Gunther saw him heading upstairs. He started feeling sorry for Mortimer, why was he trying to avoid his own father. Had he did something wrong to upset him, was it the lack of time he had spent with him. Or was it payback when he felt that Gunther was trying to avoid him. Gunther was now more concerned. When he finally reached upstairs to the balcony he was caught of guard when he took a view at the town. If there was a telescope up here Sunset Valley would have no secrets you can see everything from up where they were now the question he longed to ask his parent's but never got the chance to get a reply was why they build their house here. It was cause of the Pleasant View places that were so faraway to walk to were so close even the beach looked as if you can touch it. Gunther thought. This was truly a Pleasant View TO BE CONTINUED
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Default Sims 3 Secrets Sunset Valley
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Default Sims 3 Secrets: Chapter 1 Sunset Valley's Last Sunset's

Driving into Sunset Valley an excited tourist took a picture of the first thing he saw. The picture was developed at the local store but never picked up so a copy was kept on the computers and was never deleted. Soon people started to recognize the picture and it was later brought to the light when a local recognize the picture as Nancy Landgraab who was speeding. Nancy never really had the time to look at the picture and it became more famous long after she was gone. Rumors where that she would sneak out at night and was having an affair. It was famous because none of the Landgraabs could describe the picture or remember that night. I guess no one really knows or remembers what happened that night.

It wasn't that big of deal to Nancy as it was to the locals and she wasn't to surprised. Being the talk about town Nancy's snobbish traits prevented her from shedding light on the subject. What happen that night was actually a big deal that night marked the date of the feud that changed Sunset Valley. Nancy had just been pulled apart from a very heated argument with Vita Alto. Nancy thought that she should think of retiring early. Working at Doo's Cooperate has really taken a toll on her marriage and she also created many enemies. It was only recent that she accused her husband of infidelity and it has made her marriage worse. Geoffry can barely look at Nancy anymore, he was still in shock of the accusations.

Nancy walked in the bathroom and noticed Geoffry getting ready to get to bed. She was more than willing to reconcile with him it's been more than two months since they slept in the same room. Things were getting pretty hectic between the two it was as they weren't even married anymore. The last thing Nancy wanted was a divorce how would it look like to the public.

Expecting herself to confront Geoffry he immediately came over to her."Nancy you haven't any clue what today was."He asked her. Nancy stared at him blankly in disbelief."I'm sorry, my job it's been keeping me very busy lately."Nancy replied."Your lucky Malcolm was raised right, or he would had thrown a fit, How do you think he felt that his mother missed his own birthday or didn't even buy him something."Geoffry said.

Nancy knew Geoffry was right and she decided it was best to go spoil him for the night, Which meant that Nancy would buy him what ever he wanted."I feel so stupid, I'll go talk to him now."Nancy said.

Nancy walked inside Malcolm's bedroom. She noticed how well kept Malcolm's bedroom was. His bookshelf was mixed with his video games in an ordinary fashion, his toys were kept clean and out of the way and out of sight.

Little Malcolm Landgraab was much more different than most of the other Landgraabs he spent most of his time in books. Over the summer he read so much books that when he went back to school he knew almost every book the teacher would assign the class. He was really into science. But he was doomed as the heir to the owner of countless businesses and real estate. Everything was handed down to him and he felt like he wanted to accomplish his own goals.

Nancy sat in the empty chair next to Malcolm's bed, she really never got a good look at her soon. He was growing up fast and signs of maturity was showing. She also notice that Malcolm was a little chubby. Showing her that Malcolm has been a little lazy the past year and excersizing was much needed this year."Malcolm, Happy Birthday sweety."Nancy said. Malcolm didn't answer."Honey what do you want for your birthday."Nancy asked."Malcolm!!!!"Nancy shouted."Oh sorry mother I didn't notice you come in."Malcolm said closing his book. Nancy decided to give up and go to sleep.

Nancy finished brushing her teeth and she went into her bedroom the moonlight give of a little bit of light through the door's window which she liked. She was about to get into bed when she noticed that Geoffry wasn't in bed.

Nancy looked all over the mansion for Geoffry not wanting to realize the truth she finally gave up and found him in the guest bedroom. It's the second month that night and Nancy never forgave herself for the accusations and was to scared to admit she was wrong.

Nancy decided to call it a night and went back to her room a little sadden that she had to sleep by herself again. Not as much as Malcolm but Nancy was a bit of a bookworm herself. She pulled out one of her romance novels from under the pillow and continue to read where she left off.

The next morning everyone was up early. It was Monday and Nancy was hoping for a very good week and she thought the way to start off a good day was to drink her Monday cup of coffee which was Dark Coffee. Nancy noticed Malcolm come downstairs and she was a little busy on her laptop."Mom can you make me breakfast."He called out."Dear you really do need to lose wait, cut back on this morning's breakfast."Nancy said."But mom I'm hungry."Malcolm said."Get daddy to do it for you."Nancy replied.

Geoffry walked in and noticed Malcolm pouting over the counter."Nancy make the boy his breakfast."He asked."I'm busy Geoffry you do it."Nancy said."I'm not asking for a traditional housewife but at least one that can feed her children."Geoffry replied. Nancy ignored Malcolm and continue Instant messing Thornton.

Nancy hopped into her vehicle and drove out of the mansion. She loved her new car she never felt more powerful behind the wheel Geoffry never allowed her to buy convertibles but she went against him and bought it anyways. She noticed a moving truck across the street at the recently built mansion. She had no clue on who was moving there and decided it was best to let them settle in and then visit maybe a week or two later.

The following night the Alto's finally settled in their home. The Alto's where new money. The Alto's got tired of their two bedroom Penthouse in Bridgeport and decided to move to Sunset Valley, where they came from they were one of the most famous families and they decided to rebuild their reputation in Sunset Valley. Nick spent his last to build the two story, three bedroom mansion. They were in their office and an angry Vita was typing furiously on the laptop.

"Dear, you shouldn't really start conflict with any of the leading families in this town."Nick said."I'm sorry dear but that Nancy, get's under my skin, I have big plans for this unknown town and that Nancy is in the way, does she have any idea who we are." Vita replied."That's the last thing we need is conflict honey, And apparently not and it doesn't take much for this town to know someone, so I don't think you running for mayor is really necessary."Nick said."I have every right to run for Mayor, and I wouldn't be asking Doo's Cooperate for funds for my campaign if you hadn't spend our last on this stupid mansion."Vita said."

"Please Vita, don't make me regret we moved here."Nick said."It's not your fault love, It's mine I didn't know that the people who lived here could be so powerful, after all I did hear that they were having their first mayor election in 10 years, when their first and only mayor had died."Vita explained."You mean they've been mayor less for 15 years."Nick added."Unlike you I did my research why did you think I wanted to move her so bad, But I didn't expect for the mayor to have descendants and very close friends."Vita said."Look our next meeting is this Saturday, I'm hoping this little feud ends by then. Until then we'll visit the Landgraabs to win there trust and pretty soon this town will be under our control."Nick explained."Brilliant idea honey."Vita replied.

Holly Alto was sitting outside the mansion reading a book. Where she was sitting she had a clear shot of the neighborhood and small town. Holly was very aware of her parent's plans but being more independent she decided to stay out of it as much as she can. She only had two more years of high school left and she would be gone.

Nick and Vita Alto decided to join their daughter out in the lanai."Imagine honey, night club over their, penthouses by the beach, high rises over looking the penthouses it's just what this town needs."Vita said."No mother this town is perfect just the way it is, I thought you move to the suburbs cause you guys wanted to get away from the city life."Holly said."I'm doing this town good, that means will have more money and the town will have plenty to build more modern homes, they will soon have a healthy economy, you'll all see."Nick said.

"Mom, dad just because you two move to a town that doesn't mean everyone has to suffer."Holly said."Holly, as much as your mother and I love you even though you go against everything we stand for we are looking pass your judgments and proceeding with our plans anyways."Nick said."Come on guys people move here to raise their kids in a healthy environment not some industrial wasteland."Holly said."That is not what your father and I plan to do, even though you grew up through it you ended up okay your father and I strongly disagree that an environment can effect someones childhood, They only end up bad if there parent's don't raise them right."Vita said."This is the last time we have a debate like this your father and I's intentions are good for this town no questions asked."Vita said. The couple embraced in a hug, while Holly sighed and look toward the town, She decided it was best to take a picture of the town before, after pictures one day she had never seen so much beauty from the tropical/country side area's before.
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