I wasn't sure that I would like this story. I checked it out because of the "graphic novel style" not because I had a lot of faith in the style, but because I didn't feel like reading straight novel style. Wow. I'm so glad I did. I love this story. The dialogue, characters, plot are very well done and the style... most sims stories that I've read that claim this style are ok. They often don't give enough visual or dialogue to make sense or move the story forward (which is why I had reservations). But your story reads just like an actual graphic novel. The style is spot on. Every bit of dialogue and visual means something. Even the mature parts are so tastefully done it's like reading a well written romance novel (vs a bodice ripper or sim porn). I love the story! I love the characters! I can't wait for the next installment!